Simultaneous Travel: All Abyss Difficulties

I've read a lot of similar-wear themes, and this one is considered top-notch. The mood foreshadowed by the author at the beginning is very good, and the strength has been steadily improved. I got into it immediately. I really want to see the story of the pirate protagonist escaping from prison, and the plot of the main god protagonist meeting the Zhongzhou team. There are also spell battles and one person to look forward to. It is commendable that this story is very smooth when switching perspectives. The protagonists in each world have different expectations. No one wants to skip it. At present, I feel that the role of the main protagonist is my favorite, and then the protagonist of Naruto. I want to see more of the role of the pirate protagonist in the future. I guess it will be a big deal. The writing style is very good. Another point is that the author is very good at illustrating pictures. Every picture found my heart. It is very attentive. This is worthy of praise. Personal evaluation between grass jelly and grain grass

Update

It can only be said that the hell difficulty is not enough. Don't add DT, Warhammer, and Stars? This protagonist is still alive and well.

I've read the latest chapter of Journey to the West, and I'm afraid I'll have to write about the journey of Dark Journey to the West. I had to slow down because I had read enough in the second semester of high school. After I listened to the literary interpretation of Journey to the West in college, I had no interest in the dark journey to the west, conspiracy theories about journey to the west, and revolutionary resistance in journey to the west. The Taoist interpretation of Under One Man was quite to my liking.

It is best to change the settings of your main god to someone else who uses the Z system, so that you can improve the settings as you write more. No. 4 Middle School was seriously injured and dying after being hit by an ordinary stone. A person with mental abilities who had already developed subtle mental abilities could not even use his own mental power to suppress the wound and simply stop the bleeding. His reaction speed was even worse. Minato could kill him unilaterally without turning on the black flame's automation. Minato killed him ten times and he didn't even react, and he died ten times.

The most annoying thing is jumping back and forth. One world doesn't say much, then jumps directly to another world and then jumps back after a certain plot. It's not like you do it when making a movie. It messes up the perception.

The police force under the full authority of Uchiha is the ultimate political monster integrating "legislation, law enforcement, justice, and inspection". But what has happened to Uchiha🤣 (The functions of the Guard and ANBU overlap, well... From a political point of view, it is similar to the relationship between the West Factory and the East Factory (theoretically, under normal development, the Guard is the "East Factory" and the ANBU is the "West Factory")

Overall, it's okay. I've at least read a few of them, and this one is relatively normal. That's what makes me most excited.

The story is well written, really, but, this line of writing is really uncomfortable to read, ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ Also, I feel that the author, Pirate Naruto, is not very knowledgeable. I suggest you read more fan fiction and improve your writing style. The biggest advantage is that it is updated, which is enough to cover up 80% of the shortcomings. Come on!

Pirate Im took action, she was such a scoundrel. I thought her contract required some conditions, but it turned out to be a no-brainer contract. You can sign it without the consent of others. After signing, you will be brainwashed and strengthened. This is not a big deal. Even the bosses of the two giant pirates can't resist it. I don't know if I can withstand Kaido-sensei's level of domineering.

This is not enough hell difficulty. Naruto directly enters the land of water. Marvel enters the zombie universe or leads Professor X. DC directly enters the metal event or directly enters Flashpoint.

The rest is okay, but the most unpleasant thing is that the transition is too sudden. At least write a short paragraph of the story of a certain world before jumping to the next world instead of mixing them together. The author does not regard this as a flaw, but as a way to show off his skills. Please write a novel that is enjoyable and not the previous book. Whether it's montage or magic or other writing techniques, at least one thing is to make people follow the plot of the book and understand it.

Why do you like writing about Naruto and Pirates so much?

I have read more than ten Tongchuanliu books at the same time. The writing here is indeed pretty good, but one problem is that the switching between worlds is too frequent and messy. Sometimes two or three worlds can be cut in one chapter, which seems a bit fragmented. It should be divided into stages as much as possible, with two or three chapters, or at most one world can be cut into one world. Some readers (such as me) who don't want to read a certain world can also skip chapters voluntarily by looking at the table of contents.

Although most people nowadays despise Long Aotian, most of the protagonists in novels nowadays are still too smooth. It is rare to see such protagonists who will die if they don't work hard. It feels pretty good.

The biggest problem with this book is that there is no differentiation between the various protagonists. They are all the same person. There is no difference in some abilities due to different world views. I don't know why it feels strange in 99.

You can write about the divine throne and all the phenomena, the fourth day, the third day, the second day, the fifth day, the first day, the zero day, all are the abyss within the abyss, the shit within the shit.

I don't know why, but the costume genre has become popular again recently. I have read eight books, and this one is the best. The rhythm is very good, and the roles given in each world are also very reasonable. A chaotic structure is a taboo in the costume genre. This book is very well controlled, second only to the books about anorectal doctors, and it can be ranked third or fourth. If you are not convinced, just recommend the one you think is good.

The gene lock can defeat three extraordinary people of the same level in one to three fights, and can escape against ten people. This is the setting of the ancestor version of the gene lock. Now the protagonist's gene lock is not reflected at all. The side effects of bloodline exchange in the main god space are also taken into consideration.

Did the protagonist teach Batman a lesson later? The most disgusting character for me among film and television characters is Batman. He puts himself on a high level and everyone is a potential criminal, waiting for him to punish him. With his capital, he can obviously improve the bad environment of Gotham and reduce the crime rate, but he chooses someone who seems to be great, but is actually self-righteous. Without him, Gotham will not be good or bad.

Your simultaneous time travel is really good, you must stick to it!

It looks really good for now, but I am afraid that I will become invincible after getting the power of Ultraman in the world of Tiga. The main reason is that I read a similar book and it collapsed. After getting the power of Ultraman, 99% of the world becomes invincible. The subsequent plots are similar to the invincible pictures, which makes people have no desire to watch it anymore.

Don't let yourself go because of poor grades. Everyone has a process of training. You can actually write this book, but the audience is too small. If you finish this book well, choose a better subject for the next book, and start with a more explosive start, it can become popular.

After a rare launch, 99-liu without eunuchs is indeed capable.

Is Naruto Kaguya's combat power explosive?

Looking at the catalogue, pirates are still attacking the Holy Land...

Where is Fang Yu? Dead? Haven't seen it for a long time.

This one ranks second among the same costumes besides Duke. One Piece, Naruto, Lord God T0 is good looking, Marvel Dragon Ball has T1, dc T2, Three Kingdoms Nezha is really hard to watch.

How many are these? I only see the main god Fang Yu rising and falling, when will I feel better?😢

Not bad, it's still pretty cool to watch.