My Ninjutsu Seems Off

I came in for the sake of imagination, but the main character is like a child. He loses his mind when others say he is tall. I can't stand it 😅

Read the comment section and reply to the author. Why do so many fan fictions appear with various secondary settings? Will there be various textual research parties? Will there be an original party? It is because the original work has obvious setting loopholes and the setting of the original work cannot win the trust of everyone. You mentioned this book because you cannot accept many Naruto novels with too many secondary settings. However, the problem is that Naruto itself, as a work with an immature setting and later changed to a full-length novel, has inherent loopholes. To put it bluntly, when I started watching Naruto fandoms a few years ago, the early fandoms were still very violent. Basically, they could surpass the kage level in their teens. But there were also many high-quality works with good results at that time, which shows that early readers actually didn't care about the so-called setting. It has been 24 years now, and readers' tastes have improved and they have become picky. Many so-called second designs are basically making up for the loopholes in the original work. Because everyone thinks that copying the settings of the original work is a very bad behavior. This is not to say that copying the original work is not okay, and we are not saying that you pick up the bowl to eat and put it down to curse, but the setting of the original work is inherently unbalanced in the eyes of Chinese readers. In this case, the early second hypothesis no longer exists. It is the author's imagination. It is more about one person trying to figure out the shortcomings and everyone trying to figure out the strengths. Furthermore, Naruto fan fiction is a popular category among light novel fan fiction, which itself means that many fan fiction settings have been widely accepted by the readership group. When you write a novel at Qidian, what you need to face is not the Japanese readers of Weekly Shōnen Jump, but the light novel category readers of Qidian Chinese website. If your setting cannot be accepted by readers through description, choose to debate the scriptures with others in the comment area. I can only say that if you don't write for love, you will have a hard time writing. In addition, if you choose to believe that the so-called ninja school is an elite system, then you have to face a problem. If there are only about 30 graduates in one class, then why are the scale of the second and third battles tens of thousands? Why do the Ninja Alliance have tens of thousands? You must write about other ninja training systems. Isn't this your second creation? Then why do you say you cannot accept other second-generation novels?

The Rasengan directly changes into the spiral force 🤓 Let the country bumpkin Otsutsuki see the drill bit that breaks through the sky

Since you want to cleanse three generations, don't let "conspiracy theories" enter your mind. Then please explain, why did Konoha White Fang commit suicide? Why was Naruto ostracized as a child? (Don't use the excuse that it's to protect the Yondaime's son, the Jinchuuriki. That won't have any protective effect.) The Uzumaki clan was destroyed, why didn't they support it? He was indeed a figure when he was young, but later he had the strength to cripple Orochimaru. Some people always talk about "the strongest Hokage". So why was Konoha so often beaten during the Third Generation's reign?

Starting from the resurrection of the second generation, the plot started to go wrong. After the resurrection of the ginseng doll, it was completely separated from the previous article; It felt like the author used the first 230 chapters to build a huge palace with strict laws, and then suddenly destroyed the previous foreshadowing with a few chapters of the plot. Broken; Other readers said that the book collapsed, and the author replied that he planned to write one million words and end it before the collapse. But what you, the author, could not predict is that the book collapsed not at the first word, but at a certain point. It came very quickly and was completely beyond your expectation... It's a pity 😐

It's outrageous. The graduation exam is only limited to the Three Body Techniques. You have to release ninjutsu before you can enter the school. Do you think it's reasonable?

First of all, a large number of people have always thought that there is such a thing as chakra talent, but I have not found any relevant content in the comics or setting books. I have not even found other translations or the original Japanese text of chakra talent. Therefore, in my book, there is no so-called "chakra talent" for the entrance examination. If anyone thinks that the original work is the "chakra talent" for the entrance examination, please post the setting source. Thank you. Secondly, many people think that the Ninja School graduation exam requires the ability to release Ninjutsu for the entrance exam, but the fact is that the graduation exam is for the successful release of Ninjutsu, and the admission requirements are to be able to release Ninjutsu, that is, "refining Chakra" and "having a certain ability to control Chakra." For details, see Metkai and Rock Lee because they cannot release Ninjutsu, failed the entrance exam, and entered the school because of their physical talent. Sasuke, Kakashi, Metkai and other ninjas have received ninja training even before entering school. Then, there are a lot of things to learn in the setting of the Ninja School. Some people think that it is just about learning the Three Body Technique. In fact, I wrote in detail in the book the content taught in the setting book and comic memories. I won't go into details. Many people think it is verbose, but the reality is that even if I posted the content of the setting book, some people still think, "Why should I enter the ninja school if I can release ninjutsu?" Then, the ninja school is an out-and-out elite education. All the ninja school characters appearing in the comics are all related to ninjas, because it is written in the setting book that "the residents of Konoha Ninja Village are mainly ninjas." There is no saying that civilians who are not exposed to chakra refining and three body techniques feel unfair because they cannot enroll. In Sasuke's memory, there are 30 people in a class of ninja school, and in Kakashi's mouth, it is 27 people. It is illogical to spend several years training twenty or thirty cannon fodder. Finally, I was too lazy to continue replying. I felt like I had replied to countless people who thought that entrance examinations required chakra talent and that ninja schools were for training cannon fodder or that civilians had no access to chakra or ninjutsu, so I posted this post. People in the Naruto world do not have to become ninjas to have access to chakra, but to become ninjas they need to learn to use chakra. Naruto is a long, serialized comic with many loopholes. Fans will naturally have more or less secondary settings, and this book is no exception. If there is a conflict between the settings in the book and the original settings, please let us know and post the original settings. I will make modifications as soon as possible and express my gratitude. If you have any questions or want to say, you can also say it in this post. Thank you for your support.

Baidu searched for the Eight Gate Dunjia. It said that the Eight Gate Dunjia has more than a thousand applications, including creating a world in the palm of your hand, knowing the past and the future, modifying cause and effect, and controlling space and time.

When I reached Chapter 330, I really couldn't stand it any longer. I couldn't rely on reading inertia anymore. I had no idea what I was reading. How did you come up with such a stupid thing about the parallel world? Even DC Marvel can't handle that stuff. How dare you. The parallel world directly leads to the fact that it doesn't matter whether the boss is defeated or not, it doesn't matter whether people die or not, and it doesn't matter whether the world is destroyed or not. So the fun points and explosive points are gone, and I can't look forward to the following plot at all.

One chapter: one-third inner drama, one-third explanation and setting, one-third nonsense or practical information