Me and My Countless Selves

The early chapters of Naruto were okay. You can jump to read it after it is released. The pirates were directly persuaded to quit. They wanted to fight but not fight, and they wanted plot but no plot. They skipped to eating fairy beans and waited for the climax. They took off their pants. Here, they said to the marines that they should get out or die, and then they all died. The marines died, the Celestial Dragons died, and the Death Note has no plot.

Come on! It's not easy to find a good-looking Zhu Tianwen 😭

It is always the woman who commits the crime who is forgiven, and the man who commits the crime will die.

I can't stand it anymore. Your writing is really good and I like to read it. Especially the first few chapters are very attractive. But don't blindly analyze Naruto's politics. The level of politics described in Naruto is just like that. You are forced to analyze many places. I only tried to become Hokage on the battlefield, and I was immediately embarrassed. Minato's dream since childhood was to be Hokage. Furthermore, Katsuyuki herself is a jinchuriki, and Konoha will not let her go to the battlefield. In the original book (only watched the anime), she is not seen in the three battles. After becoming a jinchuriki, a lot of Anbu people are staring at her, and basically she has not completed any tasks.

Not to mention that the bird in the cage will limit the angle of the eye roll, the control of life and death is completely unbearable! Even if the slave owners of the Somune family were kind enough to insist on not using it, they would not be able to accept it, because Hinata and Hinatsu are also elite jounin (some colleagues insist that he is a Kage level, but with this status, it is unlikely that he will be able to go to the battlefield and his combat power should be about that). If an illusion master controls him and uses the caged bird Hinata to divide the family, everyone will die, and all four generations of Mizukage will be mind-controlled, not to mention Hyuga and Hinatsu? It can be said that the life of the entire clan is in his hands. A few days ago, I read Fang Yuan's book and there was a sentence: How sad it would be if our life and death were not free and were controlled by others! Even if this person is our ancestor, it is absolutely not allowed! !

Pretending to be serious, one day is either thinking about the failure of this system or thinking about the righteousness of the world. I have been fighting for the rise of human beings for a long time. It doesn't matter if you write well, but it turns out that the actions are like a child's play. Just pretending to be compassionate and compassionate. If you are told that the reform is successful, it is not as good as the previous system. If you are told that the reform is successful, you will have to die again. You are really a living hell.

Building a government is not a problem, the problem is building a government and building a bad government, it all depends on thinking, and the buttocks are still like the little bourgeoisie.

I feel that the ununiformed analysis is a bit forced. Hashirama and Madara are not slightly stronger, but they are the strong ones who can destroy the country. Madara's illusion level can control a shadow for a long time without being discovered. Isn't it easy to control a big name? It may be more troublesome for other ninja villages to disperse, but it is easy to kill them when they gather together. It is really impossible to kill all the ninjas who are unwilling to join. There are only 100,000 ninjas in the ninja world.

To be honest... After so many years since I started, fanfics are still flowing endlessly to Tianwen. Anyone who writes about the plot of Xingyue is a piece of shit. Every time I encounter it, I can only skip or X books.

Marvel is so inconsistent. The protagonist has so many girlfriends who are so hypnotized that they abandon the protagonist to realize their ideals. This is clearly a sign that they are being controlled by something against their true will, and the protagonist does not want to solve it. Moreover, the main character is supposed to be a prodigal son, so it doesn't matter if he changes his girlfriend. But in the end, he is written as an innocent man who only wants to get married. This is not to make himself unhappy, but the setting is outrageous.

The author is the kind of literary youth who sits in a typical office for a long time, doesn't care about the environment, and just opens his mouth to speak.

He thinks a lot, talks a lot, and does very little... The protagonist of this book is like a thinker with a big head and a baby's body... He always does very little, and is basically thinking.

I understand that the biggest shortcoming of this book is that it thinks (analyzes) too much, the protagonist does too little action, and his performance is unreliable. I feel that all kinds of long-form analysis can be reduced to 1/3 or even 1/5. Then the author should not draw conclusions about various things, but directly write down his thoughts on the protagonist's actions. The protagonist's results are the conclusion of the matter.

Don't think about it, the author is not building a government, but splashing water. How many words can he save by outputting a lot of the same ideas in every chapter? He had to endure it if he wanted to eat it, it was in his own interest.

The bold author deserves to die. He opened several books in a row and started new ones before they were finished. This is not the point. The point is that this is the only point.

You just died in Jianzheng. You have written so many books at the starting point, all of which are testimonials. Even if you engage in sese, you are better than Jianzheng. Aren't the results of Teenage Dreams pretty good in the later period except for water? Is that the only book of yours that doesn't involve a lot of politics? The new book of Teenage Dreams is also published

I feel relieved when I see everyone criticizing the author.

Write the script well and write the fanfic well. If you don't know how to write after leaving Keyzheng, you will criticize the virtual system endlessly. If your level is not that good, at least you know how to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. Forget free chapters. You are still addicted after you put it on the shelf.

The front looks okay, but the back is just average. It doesn't feel like the front. It's getting more and more boring. And don't you know that there are a lot of fans of Genshin Impact? It's okay if you don't write it, but can you not post it to make people quarrel? If you can't stand it, go to the second game community to post it. I was watching it quietly. You have to disgust me. Why is mhy a Japanese company? 6

In the seed chapter, people I would like to call immortals are here, it's really outrageous First there is the protagonist Li Ke, a sports star who used to fight against adjusters. He posted an article that both derogates you as adjusters and sympathizes with adjusters. Brother, what do you want to do? Putting aside the fact that those adjusters will not recognize you just because of a tweet, to sympathize with the adjusters is to stab your fans in the back. Brother, have you figured out how to deal with your fans? Believe it or not, I will give you a big trouble on the board the next day Then the same political operation was done, leaving the connected Klein faction alone and trying to promote Orb as the peaceful leader of natural persons and adjusters. An island country in the Solomon Islands, a country that was wiped out by a wave of blue cosmos even though there was a group of protagonists in the original book who helped it, it's like talking about the Cold War between the United States and the Soviet Union. Don't you think it's funny that the Philippines wants to guide the United States and the Soviet Union to coexist peacefully? The best thing is that in the original work, Uzi Yura Asghar, known as the Orb Lion, actually agreed with the protagonist's idea. What a fuss.

After scanning the two chapters in front of me, there is no shared memory, which means there is no subject. It is essentially a chat group of friends with the same name. It is quite uncomfortable for people who come in for 99... Can Shen Nong tell me whether it is worth reading later?

Not writing historical articles would be a waste of my talent. Watching anime and time travel articles always write about politics and stuff. I can't stand it anymore when I see Xingyue. I'll see you again when I'm destined.

The author's writing is dull, but the normal novel is too wordy, too motherly, not powerful enough, not domineering enough, and does not use world-shattering wisdom to rub the world on the ground and severely insult it.

You are not capable of writing original works. What the primitive man wrote is really rubbish.

There are so many private goods and I don't understand them

The protagonist's life is too heavy. No matter what the story is, all the themes are to save the world. Even if the world is good, he still has to climb to the top and then save the world. The protagonist can be said to be a super heavy man.

It's a really hard-working protagonist. Damn it's been a long time since I've seen such a hard-working protagonist. He finally found a dog Ming, and then the second generation said that if his strength is exposed, he will be caught and made into a human weapon. The main character is surrounded by people who want to kill him.

After searching through search, almost every chapter of more than 900 chapters has the adjective "quick". In chapters with a lot of fighting, there may even be more than a dozen. With three comments per chapter, there must be at least more than 2,000 "quick".

I see that the writing is getting more and more excessive now, and I have become more and more disgusted since the Marvel world. Can you please stop accepting it all? It's not good to write about pure hobbies! You wrote about my mysophobia! Now that I see this kind of daughter-acquisition plot, I feel sick, especially the Inuyasha chapter! When I saw Platycodon grandiflorum, I really started to feel sick.

Why isn't the update date unlimited?