The Sword Emerges from the Primordial World

I have read Chapter 211 so far. Generally speaking, it is good food, but the fighting method is not well written. There are also some things that disfavor the readers that should be written clearly. For example, the protagonist knows that his wife was injured after stealing someone else's elixir for him. He should not mention murderous intentions. It should be that the elixir is indeed very useful for the protagonist and he uses it. However, if his wife was not injured by the emperor, the protagonist should give him an apology. , And has been injured, and will either end the relationship or settle the score (because the medicine is really useful for the protagonist). The reason why I say this is because the character of the protagonist has already been established. The protagonist comes up with murderous intent to help relatives and not help people. In fact, there is a strong sense of separation from the previous character. If you don't explain it clearly here, it will lose the readers' favor. If it is a demon, it is easy to say, but the protagonist is not

Are you writing your fortune? You're such a fucking skin-changer, Zhu Tianwen I don't distinguish between priorities I haven't finished writing so many chapters of one destiny. How much more should I write at this pace? Shouldn't this kind of literature be number one in the main world? The main character is just a brush, and he just borrows human bodies to work and make money. Why is he describing it in such detail?

Author, the content of your book does not match the name. It is clearly about classical cultivation of immortality, but it has chosen a vulgar name. In this way, relevant groups will not click to read it.

In the beginning, the method of cultivating the soul to drive cultivation was abandoned, and he took over the flow of Qi refining resources in the world. There is no big backstage package with outstanding results. Practical training requires precious resources, and a poisonous senior sister is arranged 😅. Later, it will return to the resource flow more and more, attracting the causal flow, and there is no time to develop the life-threatening flow.

I have listened to more than 20 chapters of the book, and I may have missed something. One thing I have never understood from the beginning is that Yuan Xiuxiu, a cultivator of immortals, would not be forced to marry the protagonist even if he was saved by the son of a carpenter from a mountain village, right? Why? Yuan Xiuxiu felt that her background was quite big, but she ended up marrying the son of a carpenter in a mountain village. She couldn't understand it.

It looked good before, but when the protagonist kills the Dao Lord and Emperor, it feels a little poisonous and disgusting. They didn't recruit you or mess with you. You stole their precious elixir and beat them to death with a magical weapon. How should I put it?

Why is the first avenue that the protagonist cultivates named the Innate Origin Avenue? The name sounds like the type of avenue. Why is it so named. Another point is that the author classifies the Great Way of Creation as one of destruction. The second avenue that the protagonist is currently practicing is the Avenue of Chaos. It actually corresponds to the Origin Avenue! According to the author, the Avenue of Innate Origin and the Avenue of Chaos correspond to each other. Why do you look so awkward!

This book is quite interesting. The only dissatisfaction is that instead of integrating me and me, I suppress myself and me. What if I am reincarnated into the same world for a long time? You're married, you're not being cheated on

The protagonist doesn't want to get involved in the affairs of the God of Star Mansion, so this guy should drag him to do this. The protagonist doesn't care when he is in danger. He has ulterior motives and is not a good bird.

The best thing about this book is that it does not overwhelm combat power (•̀ᴗ•́)و̑̑high-quality food and grass