Everyone Transmigrates: Loading a Knight Template from the Start

The plot is actually quite good. Although there are many typos, it is still very interesting to read. However, the involvement with the royal family is extremely toxic, reflecting the author's strong sense of inferiority as a commoner and his humble yearning for royal life.

Could this be written by AI? So many plot points just popped up out of nowhere... It doesn't seem to follow human logic...

It had a decent foundation, but the author liked to throw in some bad stuff, perhaps worried about getting too good a score. It's probably around a 60 out of 100. It's creative but the writing is weak, and character data is frequently incorrect. There are a few flaws, but also some enjoyable moments. The protagonist's battles are exciting, but the author also likes to suppress him. In a time when Western fantasy works are generally poor, it's barely readable.

It has some bright spots, but too many bugs. First of all, the idea that breathing techniques can be infinitely stacked is absurd. If that were possible, no noble family would only have one or two sets passed down, nor would it be something rarely circulated. It's also unlikely that a highly talented and ambitious noble would be outmatched by the protagonist.

The "Everyone's Time Travel" series has roughly 200 million players? Chapter 12 seems to be missing a part; it abruptly switches to the exchange of transmigrator identities with strangers. Chapter Fourteen had a plot where a transmigrator inhabits a monster's body and betrays the enemy? The beginning was a werewolf game, which was boring.

The first problem is that there are so many typos, at least ten per chapter. It's not just typos, but also inexplicable extra or missing words. The second major flaw is the incredibly, incredibly, incredibly outdated plot. The constant boasting and face-slapping is pointless; leveling up and changing maps is commonplace; evil organizations are everywhere, and rival player groups are inexplicably…

It feels like the writing is getting more and more invincible. No one can beat someone one level above him, and he's too versatile. He's top-tier in terms of tankiness, damage output, and speed. He has no weaknesses. He's too invincible. There's no suspense in fighting anyone because it's a guaranteed win. I've never seen the protagonist run away. He's like a reckless brute. And people keep talking about the protagonist's calm expression. But look at what he does. Is he calm?

Having read up to chapter 13, it's just as the other readers said: the beginning doesn't match the end. This version is so well-written that it could easily replace the original and is even better. 🥱

There are so many typos, aren't you going to correct them? Do you even read the book you wrote yourself?

I've seen readers say that my plot is nonsensical and was written by AI. I want to clarify this point: it's definitely not AI; AI doesn't make that many typos... I'm just not skilled enough; some of my plot points were handled poorly. I'm already very happy with the results I've achieved so far, considering that my previous results weren't even mediocre. Finally, thank you again to all the readers who have supported us along the way!