Wizard: Starting with Evolution Simulations

Don't make it like the white wizard wants to kill the protagonist and it's fine, but if the protagonist fights back and gets targeted or even killed, I won't watch it.

Why write a story where a formidable enemy suddenly appears, forcing the protagonist to become a savage and change maps? This is a wizarding novel; research and knowledge are key. Are you going to hide and research all by yourself? Or is it like a fantasy novel where the protagonist suddenly finds a treasure ruin and their strength skyrockets?

Let's combine the characteristics of twenty-two organisms to create a prototype.

Actually, it's not badly written, but the map switching is a bit awkward. It should be like giving someone a beating and then a treat. Readers don't necessarily dislike seeing the protagonist suffer setbacks, but it's better if the protagonist suffers setbacks due to the arrival of a mechanical deity.

I'm afraid he'll write another hundred thousand words and then run away.

It's inexplicable that someone is sick and refuses to see a doctor.

Wait, why did the protagonist suddenly get the short end of the stick?