Two Worlds: I Studied at Hogwarts

The author skillfully uses the world view of Harry Potter and combines it with another magical world to form a story that is full of imagination. The characters in the Harry Potter world are not broken, which is quite consistent. The other magical world also has war, farming and other elements, which I find very interesting. I have now read the latest chapter of over 500,000 words, and I have given all my monthly tickets for this month. I feel like there is still a long paragraph to write. Come on, the update also comes with a 16-month ticket picture

If there are too many, I won't read it. The author doesn't think that he spent a lot of time describing the characters, right? Hermione is cute when she writes annoying plots, and original characters are really annoying when they write annoying plots. Before, I wanted to defraud the protagonist of money every day, but I was not grateful when I received help. When I found out that the protagonist knew more, I suddenly knelt down and begged to become a disciple (he didn't even pay for the apprenticeship fee), and the protagonist "agreed without knowing why" How about you sign a contract to stipulate the other party's obligations? It's all for free, right? What's the point of posting such a scheming original character?

In fact, everyone wants to see the magic collision between the two worlds, rather than being a "high priest" or "god envoy" in the original world. I feel that this is too cliché. And the protagonist is not that "strong" at Hogwarts. 😥

In this book, a war is about to begin in my hometown, and the protagonist is still tinkering with hand warmers. Instead of learning magic spells and healing spells, he is learning small evil spells.

There are two places that are not handled well. The readers reacted in the paragraphs and the author ignored them

The best HP in the same period. I hope the author's subsequent plots can be of similar quality to the previous ones. There were so many fan stories in the last HP issue that the later plots are obviously not as good as the previous ones. Keep up the good work and I will vote for it again after it is released.

Seeing 90 There is only one poisonous point before 88 so far. I can see the cat's magic bar but not the mouse's magic bar, and the pet reminds me repeatedly. Other than that, the writing is very good. I just don't understand why the protagonist and Snape are suddenly arranged to have a conflict after 88, and the cause of the conflict is very deliberate I will support the first order of 5 chapters when I do the task tomorrow and the day after tomorrow. I will comment after reading it.

The previous portrayal of the protagonist as miserable was a bit too much, and Professor McGonagall shouldn't be that unreliable. What is the concept of seeing bones on the hand from a wound? This hand is not useless. And Mag knows that this is a child, living on the streets and illiterate. Just left.

It's very interesting, very comfortable to watch, and the rhythm is good. Many HP novels are very fast-paced and start to become invincible in the middle period. Although the last book I read was like this, the author cleverly moved the location after the end of HP to another dimension. Of course, it is not a way to start over. This is also another way to extend the life of the novel. And your novel defines travel between two worlds from the beginning, which can greatly extend the life of the novel.

It's a very interesting book, but the author's brain circuit is different from that of ordinary people. The quality of the book keeps fluctuating up and down. It can be very lively and interesting at one time, and sometimes it can give you a whole lot of plot details, which is very strange.

The author very strictly designs the plot according to the character of the protagonist, which is good. The world of Harry Potter is well written. Although there are some minor flaws, it is overall very attractive. If the original world of the protagonist follows the western fantasy adventure flow, it will be much smoother, but he chooses to follow the route of power development. According to the character of the protagonist, it seems to be a disaster for readers. Think about it, the protagonist is an 11-year-old who has basically never received formal education. He has only started studying in the world of Harry Potter for less than a year, and most of his time is spent in the world. Supplementing the basics and researching magic, but within one year in the original world, he went from a child who was ridiculed and cared for to the core of a small team, and then quickly became the actual leader of a force. However, the protagonist in the medieval setting has a prophetic destiny, and the experienced old men under him will basically not question his methods because of superstitious prophecies. So the operations of the protagonist, who has basically no common sense in politics, military, and diplomacy, look very embarrassing, and completely lower the upper limit of this book.

I don't understand the significance of the plot of hand warmers

The writing is good and the settings are relatively good. But the content is super impressive, with 360 chapters and 1 million words, and the protagonist is not yet in third grade. You can often jump to 10 chapters in a row without affecting your viewing, because there is no real content. If you can accept it, watch it; if you can't, withdraw it. In addition, the combat power setting has begun to collapse a bit, and I don't know what will happen next. Another thing is that the author likes to suppress the combat power, and then let the protagonist cheat and rely on his talent to achieve mechanical deification.

The ideas are good and the plot is well thought out, so I won't say anything good about it. I think the only thing that doesn't work is that the plots of the two worlds are incoherent and smooth, making it feel like the plot is cut off. HP is just a freshman who has only been in school for a few months. He has gone from being a native of another world who knew nothing before, to a rookie first-year student who has mastered a few evil spells and can only modify a hand warmer. As a result, I ran to another world and felt like I suddenly became a boss. I destroyed whoever I met. I used the leg-locking spell like there was no CD, zero mana consumption, and automatic navigation. Seven blasts were emitted in an instant on that ship, which directly incapacitated seven adult male workers. Afterwards, they were able to cast the curse as if nothing had happened. Did the author forget that the protagonist is an 11-year-old first-grade child who has only been exposed to magic for a few months? I think this is the point where the plots of the two worlds separate! Is this still a low-demon world?

The writing was weird at first, but if you really do it like this, it would be fun to reveal a few obscurans who don't have money to go to school.

Can we not always emphasize the strength bar? This makes HP novels look like fantasy novels, fighting emperors, sects, lords and emperors. What's the point of this? It's like fighting monsters and upgrading.

I saw Chapter 255. The protagonist is still in the first grade and is only 11 years old. The protagonist is building a school and teaching magic in the original world. Moreover, the protagonist studies whatever he discovers, including making magic wands from magical plants, improving spells, studying ancient magic, and then studying alchemy. It's really a grind. . . I can't stand it anymore. 😒

Seeing that 70% of the people in the village have almost been killed before without finishing the last hit, but now they still don't kill anyone. Isn't it a little bit holy?

The senses are good, especially the emotional handling with the protagonists. It is very suitable, has a sense of boundaries, and is not overly helpful. I have already voted. The author has not added more, so what are you waiting for 😆

So far all I know about the other world is that there's a war going on, there are local magicians, and there's a new potion... Seriously. If there are no new settings in this world, then the entire work will be like that. The current pirate ship-stealing conflict and the magic riot-like floating spells created by the author are not interesting or interesting at all. They are very boring. Firstly, there is no in-depth exploration of the magic in Hogwarts or any very new settings (just a magic bar...). Secondly, there is no change in Hogwarts magic that affects another world. Finally, the characteristic magic of the other world is not seen. It can be considered warm in daily life, but it is like playing house... The lack of excitement and interestingness is the biggest problem of this work at present.

Are things so expensive? The items purchased in the first school year cost almost a hundred gold galleons, and Hogwarts doesn't offer bursaries to Muggle students? I see it in a lot of fanfics.

The characterization and storyline are very consistent with the original work, and you don't just have to have high abilities from the beginning, feel the magic, and grow up step by step. This is the story I like to read, come on! Author, I have voted!

The author has entered the palace? It seems that the writing has collapsed and I can't continue writing. To be honest, the beginning is really interesting, and the setting of traveling between two worlds is also quite good, but the author is too hasty and lets the protagonist study at Hogwarts for two years. In the end, it ends up leading the tribe to migrate, becoming the leader of a party, going to war with other forces, and fighting with big countries.

Which author's trumpet is it? Overall, it seems that the outline is there, the writing is smooth, and the story is well told, making people want to read on. If possible, read old books.

It's still interesting up front. In the middle and later stages, I started to have my own power. After engaging in the so-called magic war, it became very boring and separated from the identity of a fan. There are too many scenes in another world. It becomes a strange Western fantasy farming for hegemony.

I am currently reading Chapter 96, and the viewing experience is very good, and the writing is smooth. I predict that as long as there are no suffocating operations such as subverting intelligence for the sake of the story, the rhythm is maintained, and the writing style is maintained, the results of this book will be very good, I believe it! I hope the author can work hard and keep his own ideas. Come on!

It took more than 300 chapters to finish the first grade. It's so boring.

Author, if you are a eunuch, just say it and we won't wait.

Are you ready to enter the palace, hero? Why don't you rescue it?

There hasn't been an update for a few days. Is it a eunuch?