Two Worlds: I Studied at Hogwarts

In fact, everyone wants to see the magic collision between the two worlds, rather than being a "high priest" or "god envoy" in the original world. I feel that this is too cliché. And the protagonist is not that "strong" at Hogwarts. 😥

If there are too many, I won't read it. The author doesn't think that he spent a lot of time describing the characters, right? Hermione is cute when she writes annoying plots, and original characters are really annoying when they write annoying plots. Before, I wanted to defraud the protagonist of money every day, but I was not grateful when I received help. When I found out that the protagonist knew more, I suddenly knelt down and begged to become a disciple (he didn't even pay for the apprenticeship fee), and the protagonist "agreed without knowing why" How about you sign a contract to stipulate the other party's obligations? It's all for free, right? What's the point of posting such a scheming original character?

In this book, a war is about to begin in my hometown, and the protagonist is still tinkering with hand warmers. Instead of learning magic spells and healing spells, he is learning small evil spells.

The best HP in the same period. I hope the author's subsequent plots can be of similar quality to the previous ones. There were so many fan stories in the last HP issue that the later plots are obviously not as good as the previous ones. Keep up the good work and I will vote for it again after it is released.

There are two places that are not handled well. The readers reacted in the paragraphs and the author ignored them

It's very interesting, very comfortable to watch, and the rhythm is good. Many HP novels are very fast-paced and start to become invincible in the middle period. Although the last book I read was like this, the author cleverly moved the location after the end of HP to another dimension. Of course, it is not a way to start over. This is also another way to extend the life of the novel. And your novel defines travel between two worlds from the beginning, which can greatly extend the life of the novel.

Seeing 90 There is only one poisonous point before 88 so far. I can see the cat's magic bar but not the mouse's magic bar, and the pet reminds me repeatedly. Other than that, the writing is very good. I just don't understand why the protagonist and Snape are suddenly arranged to have a conflict after 88, and the cause of the conflict is very deliberate I will support the first order of 5 chapters when I do the task tomorrow and the day after tomorrow. I will comment after reading it.

The previous portrayal of the protagonist as miserable was a bit too much, and Professor McGonagall shouldn't be that unreliable. What is the concept of seeing bones on the hand from a wound? This hand is not useless. And Mag knows that this is a child, living on the streets and illiterate. Just left.

It's a very interesting book, but the author's brain circuit is different from that of ordinary people. The quality of the book keeps fluctuating up and down. It can be very lively and interesting at one time, and sometimes it can give you a whole lot of plot details, which is very strange.

The author very strictly designs the plot according to the character of the protagonist, which is good. The world of Harry Potter is well written. Although there are some minor flaws, it is overall very attractive. If the original world of the protagonist follows the western fantasy adventure flow, it will be much smoother, but he chooses to follow the route of power development. According to the character of the protagonist, it seems to be a disaster for readers. Think about it, the protagonist is an 11-year-old who has basically never received formal education. He has only started studying in the world of Harry Potter for less than a year, and most of his time is spent in the world. Supplementing the basics and researching magic, but within one year in the original world, he went from a child who was ridiculed and cared for to the core of a small team, and then quickly became the actual leader of a force. However, the protagonist in the medieval setting has a prophetic destiny, and the experienced old men under him will basically not question his methods because of superstitious prophecies. So the operations of the protagonist, who has basically no common sense in politics, military, and diplomacy, look very embarrassing, and completely lower the upper limit of this book.