Hogwarts School Nurse

I saw No Heroine and No CP added to the bookshelf, but why is this Hermione getting more and more wrong? Let's wait and see.

I've been coding for more than a month, let's talk about the current problems and thoughts 1. This book will not end with Hermione becoming the heroine. (1) The age difference between the protagonist and Hermione is about sixteen years, so we cannot have fantasies about an 11-year-old girl from the beginning. (2) The scenes between the heroine and love may be a bit jarring and may appear in small amounts on others, but the protagonist will not do so for the time being. 2. If you have anything you want to say, you can write it in a book review or chapter. Generally, I can see it and most of it will be adopted. If you like it, you can add it to your bookshelf, or if you have the money, you can vote for recommendations and monthly votes. If you want to complain, you are welcome, after all, this is my first novel, there will always be omissions, but you can be a little merciful when speaking, hahaha~ In addition to telling the story in my heart, the most important thing in writing this novel is to exercise my ability to write long and fast stories. If you like it, please support it. This is my motivation on the way forward. I hope we can find the parts that we like in this book together. If you don't like it, you can complain. Of course, I can't stop myself just because of one or two words. I am too weak to withstand blows. Slytherin, focused, calm and persistent. Give it to you and give it to me.

Although it is translated as the Cruciatus Curse, the effect of this spell is that the entire body feels a bone-piercing pain. And the unforgivable should be aimed at the soul. The Death Curse directly annihilates the soul, the Imperius Curse controls the soul, and the Cruciatus Curse directly tortures the soul and feeds it back to the body. Instead of literally torturing the heart after translation, the protagonist's treatment of the Cruciatus Curse is only to resist by protecting the heart, which is too superficial and superficial.

Although Hermione is very powerful, I feel that it is a bit inappropriate to ask an 11-year-old child to participate in the development of new drugs.

Protagonist: Brayson Avery

It's weird that Hermione calls the protagonist by his first name. They are different in seniority and are not related to each other. In school, they need to add professional titles or honorifics. McGonagall is called Professor McGonagall, Dumbledore is called Principal Dumbledore, and a doctor or school nurse is added after the protagonist's name. Although Hermione is not the heroine, the only difference between her and the heroine is that her relationship is certain.

I have always said that the protagonist is very powerful, but he fainted after saving a unicorn and was in a coma for three days. Later, he could not defeat the remnant spirit of Voldemort, and his magic power was already nearly a hundred times that of a normal wizard. When fighting the remnant spirit of Voldemort, he collapsed again. It was said that he had the experience of traveling around the world and resisting the siege of dark wizards, but he was constantly stunned when they started fighting. I've read these fifty chapters in vain

Avery seems to be a good friend of Snape and one of the Death Eaters.

I just read Chapter 5, and I feel something strange. Pomfrey, as the school nurse, can't make potions. Although as a doctor, she doesn't know high-level potions, but she is not a potion master like Snape. As a school nurse in charge of the entire magic school, it is normal to make regular potions. From the original book, it can be seen that Pomfrey's potions are very effective, but have some minor side effects and taste terrible (personally, I feel that this is designed by the school doctor who does not want young wizards to be frequently injured and hospitalized). As a dean, Snape has to be responsible for the students of his own college every day. It is impossible for him to make all the potions in the school. What is the responsibility of the school doctor? With Dumbledore's connections, would he really recruit a school nurse who couldn't make potions to take charge of the entire school's students?

It feels good, nothing poisonous about it. I don't know what those people who say poison are really looking at, and they just like to pretend to be cool and slap in the face? Then look at this hp fan. The author feels good in handling Fudge's part about the protagonist, and uses Quirrell flexibly. If the three Arabs and the Auror really find the protagonist, then I will probably abandon the plot no matter how it develops. And hp itself is children's literature, so it must have many characters that look bad. Finally, my evaluation is that we can wait and see.

The author's medical knowledge is somewhat lacking. Vaccines cannot treat viruses. The function of vaccines is to activate the body's immune system and produce antibodies and memory cells. When encountering similar viruses later, through secondary immunity, a large number of memory cells can quickly differentiate into plasma cells and viral T cells to eliminate the virus.

The plot is a bit too retarded. In order to flatter Hermione, she is directly asked to participate in training and research and development. Finally, a few words about the protagonist. You praise it so much, where do you put the protagonist? Usually it is the protagonist who brings up the points and hides his merits and fame. It's pretending, but it's reasonable, it's flattering, but it's not that obvious. I think there is no distinction between priority and priority.

The protagonist I wrote about was very boring, and I thought it was very boring, but ended up being comatose for three days after saving a unicorn. Very disappointed 😞

One more comment: Death Eaters are not called Voldemort, but the Dark Lord or my master. The wizarding world generally only calls the mysterious person. I hope the author can change it.

I originally thought the subject matter was quite good, but I couldn't stand it and it was really poisonous. If it weren't for the fact that I really haven't read any books recently. The author is probably the one who said that the protagonist didn't understand the plot, but actually didn't understand it. Many details reveal that the author has not read the original work at all. You started writing after watching a few movies?

It was okay at first, but it got a little weird later on. The plot continuity was okay, but I felt that the writing style had changed to a different level, and then the description of the supporting characters became more like Long Aotian's supporting characters.

To be honest, author, your writing style and plot have started to go downhill. The plot is getting weirder and weirder. Author, please think about what the protagonist's goal is? The more I read, the less I understand. What is the direction of writing? The behavior of the protagonist gave me a feeling: "I was busy from 7 am to 12 pm, and when I saw my salary was only 2,500, I was still smiling happily." The few chapters updated in the past few days are not even a bit worse than the original article.

No, why do you have so few discussion posts? Isn't it because of deletion and control of comments?

Guys, please pay attention. I have subscribed to Chapter 173. There is a gap in the writing style before and after. It may be a ghostwriter. Although this ghostwriter continues to write well, the style is very different. In order to avoid spoilers, I will not disclose the plot, but I would like to remind many friends that there are several poisonous points in it They are forcibly arranging enemies, forcibly staggering enemies, forcibly pretending to be pretentious, and forcibly fighting for others. The protagonist's enemies can always escape under the protagonist. Through various coincidences, Voldemort is far-fetched and strengthened. The previous free chapters were okay, but the writing began to decline after it was released, and it was barely readable. However, around 173, it started to become addictive. Although it is a good book, it does not prevent me from writing a review saying that he may be a carefree ghostwriter with good writing skills.

The setting and story are quite predictable at the beginning, but although the growth path is quite strange, it can only be classified as luck (? The more you go, the more the story becomes more and more obvious, and the shortcomings of the original book, Harry and the Land of Monsters series, must not have been read carefully. The advantage of the second creation is that the world view and main setting have been perfected, which is less troublesome than the original novel, but if you don't study it carefully, you will definitely be caught by the original fans if you just read it casually.

Has the author of this book changed? The difference between front and back is so big. Where to buy? I'll give it a try and see if I can make some money.

It's worth a look, there's nothing toxic about it so far

Were there different writers in the first half and the second half? Did they write it after Malfoy?

Still not updated? I didn't tell him, and I wouldn't read it if it wasn't updated.

I thought of a scene before. Although there is no doubt that the protagonist is powerful, I don't know enough about the protagonist's character setting, so I'll wait for a while. Looking at it now, killing Malfoy Manor, this kind of resolute and explosive counterattack without suffering any disadvantage, made me think again. My thoughts have been brought up The protagonist's curse is final. Although it is not actually reflected in the plot, the protagonist once mentioned that he used this spell to make more than a dozen dark wizards who were chasing him helpless So let's change our thinking and make him become something like a leader. As for the territorial spell, if this is too outrageous, then, based on the advanced application of the Bird Curse when lighting candles, can other spells be also used? Imagine that the protagonist is facing a group of surging Death Eaters, facing the overwhelming spells, the hand holding the wand Lifting it up, the tip of the wand suddenly burst out with a dazzling magical light, and then dozens of rays of light were drawn from it, flying in front of the protagonist like meteors, clearing the field (Qing's Curse) Of course, if it can be made into a domain type, although it will be much more difficult, it will undoubtedly be very handsome. Just take the protagonist's performance of solving Umbridge's report with three snaps of his fingers. Think about it, facing the overwhelming magic, the protagonist snaps his fingers and clears the place (still Qing's curse) Looking at the protagonist, a supermodel who can even solve the Unforgivable Curse, it can really achieve the same effect as the "Forbidden Magic Realm". Within my attack range, only I can use magic, and you can't. Imagine, this is like apocalypse It is undoubtedly an overwhelming despair for the old demon to attack a Muggle who is defenseless and only holding a useless twig. Then to extend the "heart shock" mentioned in the article, can the effect be advanced to "heart arrest" or "heart overfrequency beating (overload)", coupled with the advanced application effect of the Bird Curse, the light from the tip of the staff draws a starlight and sinks into the enemy's body. Then, the enemy walks directly into the enemy's body. He fell straight to the ground, lifeless. Even if the cause of death was investigated, traces of magic were found at most. The specific cause of death and what kind of magic caused death are unknown. If you can add some "starlight" when the spell is emitted, that is, a trick with a trailing spell entity, on top of the effects just mentioned, then what will appear is that the tip of the protagonist's staff flashes, and then the enemy in front of him falls to the ground, lifeless, and I don't know. The cause of death When combined with the advanced version of All Curses mentioned above, it is the following scene Faced with the overwhelming curses of the aggressive Death Eaters, the tip of the protagonist's wand flashed, and then all the originally dense curses in front of the protagonist suddenly disappeared, and then all the Death Eaters fell to the ground, lifeless, and the cause of death was unknown Especially from the perspective of others, this kind of beyond cognition and unimaginable thing, the performance effect is full

Ah ah ah, update soon. It's so satisfying to watch it in one go. I'm still unfinished. It's not enough. I'm looking forward to a big update.

Book friends, I guess I put it in the book

The angle is good, but the writing and plot design are not very good.

Can we write Penelo as the main plot?