Starting from the Qi Family Army, They Conquered the Heavens

There will be pay on the campus tomorrow, no need to wear armor

There are too many explanations that affect the smooth reading. The story is too poor. It even interrupts the plot a bit. Taboos in writing books

I thought you were sweeping across the heavens with your army, and I thought you could travel across the world with your army.

It looks good. I wish I could stay in the military for a while longer.

Let me borrow from the comment section, how to block novels? Can anyone tell me? There are so many junk novels that I have been reading until I am very annoyed. They seem to be brainless and illogical, which is very uncomfortable. Thank you kind man. I really can't stand it anymore

There are too many narrations, and the sense of story is very low, and it feels like a series of stories.

It doesn't mean that if your martial arts skills are awesome, you will be really awesome. First. You have to be able to learn. If you can't understand. Let me give you an analogy. Let you take the exam to become an engineer. Can you pass the exam? Everyone knows that you can make a lot of money if you pass the engineer exam. Why only a few percent can pass the exam every year. Are you prohibited from reading those study materials? No. You can watch it anytime. Why can't I pass the exam? You are not the material. Make it simpler. You don't have that talent. You can't learn. You are just worse than others. I saw other readers saying which technique Zhu Bajie practiced was the most awesome. But he just can't. Didn't his master teach him well? No. How did Patriarch Bodhi teach Sun Wukong? There is no difference in the teaching method. Tiangang Law has been handed over to you. But you can't learn it yourself. If compared according to a multiplication. Zhu Bajie is like taking five and multiplying it by a thousand. Then it can only reach that number. That's where his talent ends. But Sun Wukong uses 10,000×. No matter what you learn, you can get it right. People are just different from ordinary people. It's like you step on a stick. That's where his foundation lies. It will break if it cannot bear your weight. But Sun Wukong's foundation was a steel pipe from the beginning. He can bear it no matter how much you step on him. It's not that people are inherently unequal. But if you don't say it, don't say it. Some people are born different. This world is so unfair

What can I say about the writing? It feels very choppy, the context doesn't match up well, and it doesn't read like a picture, and it's tasteless.

I read two or three chapters. . Why can the protagonist kill people instead of being killed after traveling through time?

The first part is very good, I stayed up late to read it, but the second part feels very average, I don't want to subscribe, it's my personal opinion, I hope the author can write better

The motivation is insufficient, the design is not enough, there is no continuity or connection, and the writing and plot rhythm are not major problems. However, in 130,000 words, not a single character, including the protagonist, has been established, and even half a heroine has been established.

In this era of martial arts promoted by the protagonist, everyone can unlock superior skills, making many dusty treasures shine. However, it is also the worst era for ordinary people. Never-ending careerists hide evil intentions, fake secrets, and collect evil spells. This is just the beginning.

I've traveled through time and space, and I'm still stuck in spiritual materialism.

There are also those who have conquered the heavens since the Ming Dynasty, and those who have conquered the heavens since Huang Feihong (what the hell)

Look at the introduction, what is this about? How many generations have Wudang been in Swordsman? You still let Zhang Junbao and Tianbao in? Isn't this just a piece of shit?

Forage! Come on, author! BTW, I guess the original title that the author wanted was definitely not the current one 🤭

The writing style is okay. Isn't it another eunuch's trumpet?

This reminds me of someone who traveled to Ryukyu and had a Pinduoduo system. If you can buy things on Pinduoduo, just buy those bows, arrows and armor on Pinduoduo. Armed villagers annihilated the Japanese samurai stationed in Ryukyu. Then he pushed back on Japan and found out later. Mainland China is still in the prosperous age of Qianlong ª ª ª ª

No, it's okay to write a more detailed description of the task when you write it for the first time, but don't keep writing it again and again. This will completely increase the number of words and ruin the reading experience. After all the tasks are completed, who cares about your task names, reward descriptions, etc. Keep writing again and again? Many authors open a chapter to update settings. Even in the main text, no one writes a description of each task. Just mention a few tasks and a few rewards. Who reads a book just to read the reward description several times? 🤔🤔🤔 Today's chapter is not the first time. You don't write everything again like this every time you write a task, right? Who can bear this?

Can you stop being so hellish every time you update?

The writing style is interesting, but too slow. Come on.

Damn, what a great book. I never thought I could find gold out of shit.

Vote for two monthly votes, updates are too slow