Journey to the West: Begin with the Apprenticeship of Patriarch Bodhi

I was so hurt by Sese that I am so haggard. From today on, I will stop being astringent!

As title. This article has a profound charm and has the style of Journey to the West. Reward a thousand coins to show your sincerity.

It grows at the foothills of the southern mountains and lives at the end of the northern sea. Favors are as light as catkins, and guests dream of thin plum blossoms. The spring urn is used to make people happy, and the twilight teacup is blown and swallowed with sorrow. Why should I ask about the elixir formula and practice it? You describe the magnificent world of immortals and chivalrous people like "looking towards the blue sea and the sky at dusk, seeing the blue sky and climbing into the white sun." It makes me feel the same. There are spring flowers on the top, just like a bun. You have the courage and quality that a practitioner should have, and the lighter temperament and appearance are also lifelike. Xiao, I deeply agree; I have traveled to the Five Mountains and traveled to Kyushu, and you have changed the territory many times to reflect the grandeur of the world of immortals, and I agree with it; I have longed for it since I was a child, the fairy will support me on my head, and I will get the dream of immortality. I can also feel it in Jun's book. On the contrary, the truth and falsehood are illusory and elusive. There is the law, the law, the law, and the element are helpless. It is empty, empty, and not empty. Dreams are said to be useful but useless. But at this moment of joy, I made one or two remarks, Xijun created that kind of world: The feather coat is always smoky, but it does not stain the peach and plum blossoms in the world. The fairy's house is filled with fragrance, a piano, a sword and a cup of tea.

The book is good, please update it frequently.

The author's writing is really good, short and easy to understand. I recommend a novel of the same type. Please save it and take a look. It's really too busy now

Always looking forward to the author's update.

Someone in Tomato plagiarized this novel without any shame. The protagonist, name, and title were not changed

Quick, quick, quick

I am very curious as to how to write this book after Monk Tang finished studying the scriptures.

This is the floor she walked on

Argument with reason

It's too abstract. My only comment on this book and the author is: half a bottle of vinegar I want to use semi-vernacular language to distinguish the traditional cultivation model of modern immortal cultivation, fighting monsters and leveling, but the writing style is not enough and the research is not sophisticated enough, so I can only create a four-dimensional image I really can't stand it when I read the tenth chapter. He died too early) After death, he was considered by the underworld to be deceived by monstrous words. He created a medicine stone and had his menstruation removed and his skin peeled off and tortured. No, buddy, there are so many abstract places that I don't know where to start. First of all, where did you come from to learn about the wonderful little standards for evaluation in the underworld? Isn't this the same as the recent conspiracy theories? Isn't your style of traditional cultivation of immortality, a mix and match? According to this evaluation standard, the Three Sovereigns, Five Emperors, and hundreds of schools of thought have to go through it? Besides, what is "the sage of a hundred schools of thought, and there are no more schools of thought?" Why don't you first take a look at the junior high school history textbook and see what "Hundred Schools of Thoughts" is? Then Ta Ma is a school of thought, isn't it? For example: You are now saying that you have learned from the strengths of the materialist school and the idealist school, and are regarded as prophets by both schools; or you have served as pope in Buddhism and Hinduism at the same time Also, didn't Taishang Laojun just appear in the book, you are a mysterious person? The fantasy world view has Li Er. The original Journey to the West did not mention Li Shimin's recognition of Lao Tzu as his ancestor. Well, let's not mention it. But if you want to be the sage of hundreds of schools of thought, does that mean that you have to surpass Confucius and Li and exterminate Taoism and Confucianism at the academic level before you die in your thirties? How fantasy is this? PS: Taoism (Laozi) ≠ Taoism (Zhang Jiao)

1. There is no boundary. It is unclear. You can jump to read in the middle and cannot read the rest. 2. There are few things in the front, but most of the things in the middle are like helping monkeys. In the back, pure nosy is like a bad guy, and the back is like dung. The author is too arrogant, always thinking that regardless of realm, it is good. When things are too much, he starts to forget his roots. He forgets that he should be writing about people who don't mind other people's business and practice Taoism. In the end, it will be a bad book. In your words, the author, it means that you have a single mind.

The first few chapters are directly poisonous. The saying in Journey to the West that mortals cannot be brought back to life was said by Sun Wukong. The actual meaning is to tell Monk Tang that there are people watching along the way and not to think about cheating. In fact, monsters eating people are just carrying people back one by one... Determining cause and effect is more poisonous. Both words have been played badly by uneducated authors. Plants and trees have spirits. What you eat is cause and effect. There are microorganisms in the air, and what you breathe also has cause and effect.

I see that the protagonist now has a mount, the White Deer, and may later adopt the Magic Bull Demon King. I don't know if the author's handwriting is generous enough. In fact, he could directly arrange difficulties in Tang Monk's journey to obtain the scriptures, and replace the difficulties that Guanyin cleverly named in the original work. I have some ideas in my mind now, and I hope I can give some ideas to the author. It just so happens that the protagonist also has two wish-fulfilling magic weapons, one demon and the other. At that time, the white deer "stole" the lower realm of the protagonist's whisk (whisk), transformed into a white-browed old man, expanded the whisk, and spread out the white whisk hairs on the trees in the mountain forest, stretching for hundreds of miles, blocking the mountain road, and named it Cang Lang Forest. The Taoist incarnation of White Deer stopped people on the road to argue the Dharma (it happened that this guy gained enlightenment after eavesdropping on the protagonist, Guanyin and other great powers, so he was a professional counterpart). He would not let passers-by pass if they couldn't argue, until Tang Monk and his disciples came over and won the Dharma argument with him. You can give it a chapter name: [White Deer on the Westward Journey on Zen, Cangqulin Walker Debate] As for the Bull Demon King, you can take the heavyweight Yuding, which is a bit more difficult. As mentioned in the previous article, the protagonist has a relationship with Taishang Laojun, and Laojun also brings a life to the suffering sea of ​​Xiniu Hezhou. I don't know if it can be written here that the protagonist secretly sends the Bull Demon King to take Yuding's lower realm to Xiniu Hezhou to protect a ray of life. There may be Laojun's meaning in it. As for the location, the lower boundary of Yuding oscillated to form a continuous mountain range, named Chodie Ridge. There is a strange peak in the mountain range that looks like a tripod. It is really blocked by the sky and is called Shen Ding Peak. You can give it a chapter name: [Coudie Ling Xin Yuan Zhi Kan Yu Shen Ding Feng Niu Wang Dao Xin Mi] When the time comes, it will be difficult to dismantle the protagonist and have an impact, and five or six can be dismantled 😃

There are three poisons in the first three chapters. The first poison is dead tree planting flowers in clay, which is called dead tree grafting. The second poison is the main character's mortal body and defeating the Bodhi Patriarch in chess. The third poison is to cut off the cause and effect. It is necessary to trace the origin of the bloodline to the ancestor Yan Emperor. Only by opening a single genealogy can the cause and effect be solved. If you skip the first three chapters, this book is still readable, but if you don't skip it, it will be a mess.

He has not yet succeeded in cultivating an immortal. When he looks at ordinary people, he treats them as another species and studies them 😄. Others don't want to become immortals and value family, but he still criticizes others in his heart and calls them ignorant. (What's the difference between this and those who say, "This job is so great, why did you quit?"/"This man (woman) is so great, why did you break up?"/Etc.?!)

The writing style is still good, and it has the flavor of classical immortality, but the plot is bland, too bland. After finishing the article, the child begged the Patriarch to teach me. Patriarch: Come here. xx years later, Patriarch: Have you mastered the practice yet? Tong'er: Got it, I got it Grandmaster: Come here, here is xxx Tong'er: Teach me xx years later, Grandmaster: Tong'er: Have you got it?

Chapter 1: Those who can survive are also gods.

It's baffling to see... The cultivator even has to cut off the cause and effect of his surname, and the cause and effect is inexplicably broken when he plays a game of chess. Unable to complain

Drinking and sex actually hurt my body, I quit now

Why delete my post? You're so petty, it's against the sky, so I posted a post asking if there are any similar novels. You have too few updates. After reading them, I found something similar to read. Then everyone recommended a few books to each other, but you deleted them directly for me. Invincible

After reading dozens of chapters, I was embarrassed. You want to imitate ancient works, but you can't imitate them all. You must have read too much and made yourself stupid.

I haven't read it yet, but I just want to post a question Which path does this novel take? Is it the prehistoric journey or the original journey to the west, or the modern journey to the west, or the conspiracy theory journey to the west. First of all, although I prefer the original genre, I still can't deny it. It's just that this genre won't be popular at all, and it won't make any money.

Dog licking article, pig's feet have no personality of modern people, they are born slaves

You want to imitate the classical writing style of other great writers, but in the end you are completely different. You don't have the literary grace of classical Chinese, and you lose the smooth reading of vernacular Chinese. You don't have the advantages of both sides, but all the shortcomings are there. You don't have the classical literary grace, and the writing is obscure. You are also a talent.

Bodhi is talked about every day, and there is always the topic of Bodhi in Journey to the West. So, whose vest is Bodhi?

All 17 pictures are given to you🙂

This book becomes more and more boring as it goes on. The first part of the training was a bit interesting, but the second part is basically just a running account, the law is no longer practiced, and the Jiuding is no longer found. The people who can still go through a few moves with the protagonist Zheng'erba are all allies, and there is no trouble.

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