Cultivation Begins in the Hundred Thousand Mountains

It's not that I can't stand it anymore, author, I remember reading a male-oriented novel, right? You've already written thirty chapters, and every single one of them has to include the main character's obscuration—what's going on?

Stop with the fancy stuff—the prehistoric era, Journey to the West, Investiture of the Gods. Just write it using the same techniques you used when you wrote *The Legend of the Heavenly Road*, broaden the scope a bit, go for a high-level *Daluo* novel, and you'll be able to make a living.

The Tianlu Star story was pretty good, but then he had to switch to writing primordial spirit fanfiction. How was he supposed to make a living?

For a mortal cultivator to engage in sexual intercourse with a Taiyi Golden Immortal, their physical strength and life essence are not even on the same level. So, how did the mortal cultivator manage to break through the opponent's defenses? Okay, even if the Taiyi Golden Immortal restrained all his power, his physical strength still remained unchanged!

Let alone Genshin Impact fanfiction, the audience is too small.

This book was passable at first, with its rambling narrative, but I never expected the author to be so careless with the magical martial arts manuals and prescriptions he obtained, giving them away so casually. Who could possibly read a book like this? It's so unrealistic! It's utterly toxic! Ask yourself, are you even one ten-thousandth as generous as the characters in the book in real life? So, don't be so hypocritical!

To be honest, some of the settings in this book are really rubbish. There are so many obvious things, but the author insists on writing all sorts of ridiculous and absurd things in a roundabout way, with reasons that make it impossible for the protagonist to realize or come up with the correct conclusion. The reader felt nauseous and wanted to abandon the book.

According to the authorities, cattle cannot be slaughtered. Even buying a piece of paper requires registration. This market economy is so underdeveloped, and this is supposed to be a political system in a fantasy world? And they look down on the healthcare system? Let's not even talk about what your small village can reflect; can the healthcare system of one village in China reflect the healthcare system of the entire world?

The author made typos, didn't you even bother to correct them? There were even many wrong character names, I pointed them out to you, but you still didn't fix them! With this kind of writing attitude, it's hard to believe you can write a long book.

Can non-criminal, low-quality books be uploaded for free?