Apocalyptic Natural Disasters: Building a Bunker in Advance

This woman looks disgusting, so I won't watch it. It's so fucking rubbish. If you don't like it, just reject it. Why, are you afraid of retaliation? Would anyone with any sense get angry and retaliate because of being rejected? Still want to refuse or welcome? It's also a big comparison. Two-thirds of the chapter explains the apocalypse and doesn't mention anything serious.

I will spend 100 points specifically to give you a bad review. There are a lot of introductions and a lot of nonsense. Many of the introductions have already been written before. Just give an explanation of the results, and I still need to write them again. When I saw Chapter 27, we were still building a shelter in the early stages of the water apocalypse, and a female protagonist fell from the sky (high probability). I seriously doubted that the author created a female protagonist just for the sake of water word count. This is to say that there is still one year before the end of the world truly begins.

1. This looks a bit like a running account. Author, you'd better change it. 2. There is a bit of indifference - the supporting actor Li Yuanzhou has too many scenes. It is recommended to change the plot. 3. Reduce the description of the international background and generally use three to four hundred words at the beginning. 4. There are too many emotional scenes, I hope there will be less. 5. We should get to the point as soon as possible. According to the current progress book, one year is not enough. 6. There are problems with resource preparation - no books, no plant seeds, no breeding animals, and no diversified energy supply. 7. Armed forces are lacking, and hot and cold weapons should be arranged as soon as possible. 8. Personal physical fitness and personal force should be addressed. Hope the author can arrange it as soon as possible. The following are recommendations for several books of the same type, which the author can learn from: 1 "My Black Technology Shelter" 2 "I Can Upgrade the Shelter" 3 "Doomsday Disaster: Start by Building a Shelter" 4 "They and I Are All from the Doomsday"

I hope to write less emotional scenes. It is easy to write too embarrassing and not like the end of the world. You can write about the various kinds of human emotions in the end of the world. It is not just the evil of human nature. Don't be evil for the sake of evil. It will be richer if you write about all kinds of things.

After chasing more than half of it, I gave up. The author is really writing blindly. Those who have seen water have never seen such water. For example, in this chapter: the shelter's resources/firepower/materials/population, etc. Are many/very strong/very good, but the official version of Daxiahun is not bad either. Similar to this kind of writing, I read almost every chapter of 500,000 words. You can't do this in every chapter, right? There are also various self-questions and answers, rhetorical questions, sarcasm, statements, and examples. It's not that you can't write them. It's too much to write them in the same way in every chapter. Farewell

This book is really unreadable. There is no content at all. Every day is just water news, with women, no development or plot. I thought it would be better in the future, but after several days, there is no change at all, it is just water. The content every day is about international news. What happened today? What happened the day after tomorrow?

The last two are not very well written. You haven't finished writing them at home, so why should you write about them abroad? If you write about foreign countries, no one will read it. How about your home game in the country? A domestic author is enough for you to finish the novel. Later, if you continue to write foreign plots as you do now, then your novel will definitely fail. You haven't even laid out the domestic scenes yet.

It feels like it's written with a hammer in one thing and a stick in the other. There's no logic. It's written by a robot?

This Lin Yu can't be the heroine, right? Dog licking is annoying for both men and women, especially this kind of shameless dog who can't get rid of him and can't do anything to him.

It's all booked. How can I say it? The first part is quite interesting, but the second part is all about the protagonist going out to save people. The protagonist is the boss of a large base, not the firefighting captain. The boss runs around the base every day to let the people below think what he thinks. Forget about the previous questions, when I saw this, I couldn't stand it anymore. I was afraid that they had not been attacked by monsters enough times, so I used the loudspeaker to ask them if they wanted it.