Doomsday Convoy: I Can Upgrade Supplies

The world view of this book is quite satisfactory, but the sequence description is a bit unclear. The humorous text expression is a small highlight, which neutralizes the sense of horror brought by the weird style. In terms of characters, the author's skill in writing group portraits is not bad, and the creation of several teammates feels quite vivid and flesh-and-blood. The only flaw of this book is the protagonist. Looking at the overall situation, apart from the improvement in ability, the protagonist has almost no growth. The initial cold-blooded performance gave people a bright feeling, but as the plot develops, it becomes more and more mean and philistine. I think it is okay to be selfish and self-interested, but there must be a limit in everything. It doesn't matter that the protagonist doesn't care about ordinary people, and he can even go too far and exploit them at will. After all, it's not like he has never seen a villain or a villainous protagonist. But for several sequencers in the same team, who were comrades who died with the protagonist, the protagonist also behaves bitterly and unkindly. This is not self-interest, but a rejection of humanity. This kind of behavior directly makes the reader imagine a treacherous and wretched face, and disgust suddenly rises. As the protagonist of a book, if you can't even do the most basic things to like the readers, then the book will end here, sooner or later

The starting setting is pretty good, but after writing too much, it starts to fail. The various details reveal the author's writing skills, and he starts to patch up the character of the pig's feet, which makes it look awkward. After reading Chapter 150, it was withdrawn!😅

I have read Chapter 476 so far. Let me briefly talk about my own feelings. 1. I think the protagonist's character, which is widely criticized by some book friends, is fine in an apocalyptic environment. It is self-interest and continuing civilization as much as possible after oneself has the ability (but in fact, this is also self-interest in nature). Those who find the protagonist's character disgusting can go out. After all, you have never seen Gu Zhenren and Samsara Paradise. 2. I don't think this book has collapsed in terms of ability system. The protagonist's ability looks like a supermodel, but it is very weak in the early stage, which is also very reasonable. The author's design of progressive abilities is also good. Then the author himself should have written a complete outline of the entire book, so the holes dug are being filled. 3. However, it needs to be admitted that the author does not like to put the attributes of some items in this chapter. In fact, after the items are upgraded, it is enough to only introduce the new attributes. Putting the rest in this chapter will appear more sincere. 4. As for why I came here to write a book review, it is mainly because I have not seen another meal replacement for this book at the starting point, and now I feel like a withdrawal. 5. Finally, the author's update speed is too slow. One update a day is enough for anyone to read (see the picture below). I really put my heart into reviewing the book. When I read some bad reviews, I will also help the author to write back. I hope the author can update quickly, so as not to let down the few genuine readers like us who are waiting for support.

It's a very interesting post-apocalyptic novel that makes people want to read more. The protagonist is not a virgin at all, and his attacks are quick and accurate. He works in a small group, mobile carriers are upgraded, and he has highway survival + sequence capabilities. Although the book is not popular, it has a stable readership. The author also updates a lot. From time to time, some strange sacrifices appear, such as [Cat Blade Pig Killing Knife] and [Ningshen Brand Self-Benefit].

Support, update more

It's really addicting. You insist on using the points you earned so hard to upgrade your crappy bike. If the bike is difficult to handle, it's still reasonable. But in the first chapter, the bike is very easy to get. You fucking insist on upgrading your crappy bike. After upgrading, it's still crappy. Damn it. Can you use your brain when writing a book? You insist on modifying your own car. What, is your main occupation an auto repair? Then write about your dream of repairing and modifying cars. This private poison spot is real.

When I read Chapter 148, forget it if you don't save people. It's normal not to be a Holy Mother. It's okay to use survivors as a tail to save yourself. But in the end, you still hurt people. This is too dark. Forget it, just give up.

You can see, it's not bad, but the character of the protagonist needs to be moved to the middle. You still need people for this ability. It's OK to leave one or two hands, but it's really difficult to leave too many. I don't ask to protect everyone, but I don't need to kill someone and trap someone. Let me say two words about the cold character. Currently, I am still a support person. Now and in the future, I will be inseparable from people with various abilities.

That is to say, he is the protagonist of this book. Otherwise, there are so many people who follow him for reasons such as self-interest and self-interest. There is nothing wrong with that. It's just that he is petty and fussy. I don't mean to be generous, but I feel that the protagonist has a sense of inferiority.

I really can't watch it. The protagonist is not kind at all and kills people casually. It's disgusting to watch.

1. The characters are distinct, and each character has its own personality characteristics. Even some small characters have no witty moments. Everyone in the author's works is very flexible and there is no fool. 2. The plot design is also very good, the plot is coherent and there is no obvious sense of abruptness. Although the protagonist is a freshman, you can really see the progress after being educated in reality. It feels like the writing is very real, just like a living freshman.

It's uncomfortable to watch. The male protagonist's abilities are unique and he will be praised wherever he goes. He doesn't charge an exorbitant price for making sacrifices for his teammates. The reward is only one piece. He tricked the doctor and it was for the whole team. As a result, his teammates kept saying that he was born and emphasized that the male protagonist is not a human being. I really can't see that his teammates are much more noble than him. Isn't it just an acquiescence to ordinary people as tails? The male protagonist also made sacrifices to ordinary people. At least it gave him some hope. His teammates gave some food to people when they were about to starve to death. The purpose was to prevent ordinary people from dying and no one to take their back. What position do you have to keep saying that the male protagonist was born? I was so convinced that I felt so depressed. The teammates were so upright and upright. They were no better than the male protagonist. They used the sacrifices made by the male protagonist with peace of mind and enjoyed the doctor's treatment. The supplies stolen from other teams were also shared by everyone. They also accused the male protagonist of not being a human being and having no bottom line. What kind of paralysis 😅

This novel is wonderfully written. I don't have any other opinions. I simply don't like the character of the protagonist.

If you have any good sequence abilities or sacrifices, you can post them here or in the book review area. If you want a supporting role, I will try my best to arrange them~

It's a pretty good book, but I don't have a good grasp of the subject! In order to appear not to be the Holy Mother, many things I did were harmful to others and not beneficial to myself. Seeing the plot of the walled building, thousands of people were living well there, but out of curiosity, I had to turn around and have a look, which attracted the strange people following them all the way. The two sides are still capable of fighting together. In the end, the protagonist only knows how to reap benefits, paddle, and drive around in circles. He is said to be afraid of danger. The protagonist's car is almost like a turtle shell, and he really doesn't feel that there is any danger. Bringing the weirdness there, thousands of people were almost wiped out, and the protagonist only knew how to paddle and watch the fun. No matter if it is really dangerous, if the protagonist's car is placed there and can be attacked casually, it probably won't be able to break through the defense, and the protagonist can still sleep in it. But the protagonist behaves as timid as a mouse, pretending to be dangerous even though there is no danger, and running away immediately when there is any trouble. It's okay to write like this, but don't make the protagonist too powerful, and don't make the car too powerful. If you make it too powerful, it will be very inconsistent if you run away from something that is not even a threat.

This is the most uncomfortable thing I have ever seen. The author has been repeatedly emphasizing how pig's feet are born, and uses the plot to emphasize how pig's feet are born. So why are you like this? For the sake of his own life, Pig's Feet made several people die and it became a birth. Then he kept emphasizing over and over again that there are really enough people to scan the code. Then, the author, if you make money and don't donate money, aren't you just a birth?

Awkward protagonist, a bit disgusting

It looks good, but the protagonist's abilities are very useful. Don't make your reputation too bad, especially the transactions between sequencers. There is no need to engage in those things, just normal transactions.

It feels like the author is single-player. The content will not be corrected for typos and the like, and comments will not be replied to. Give people a kind of AI. Or just to entertain yourself

First of all, let's talk about it. I've ordered it all. I really enjoyed watching it, but it was a bit boring and I wanted to make a few comments about it. Team Hui prevented Ah Xin from getting rid of his anger and deliberately attracted the monster, but in the end there was an accident. Every time I think about it, it feels awkward. Although it is egoistic, it is also too harmful to others. It is a bit consequential, but it is not very good. When you do something, you have to keep it all. Inexplicably, I thought of what Fan Xian said to Zhuang Moxian during the Qing Dynasty. Maybe it's the reality of human nature's evil, let's look at it later. But I am an ordinary person, and I am more of a survivor. It is a bit difficult to accept the rules of survival in darkness and disorder...

The world view and the main plot feel like it has collapsed, and the author's writing skills are not good enough. Ever since the protagonist joined the team, he has been claiming more and more. 90% Of the materials are his, and then the rest of the team has not had any objections. From then on, I knew it would collapse. Now, according to the author's update speed, is it going to be completely unfinished?

Actually, the author should write about a normal person. Whether it is the Holy Mother who is willing to help others or the dark and extremely selfish evil ghost, they are both in the minority. The vast majority of people are just ordinary people with a set of bottom lines. And with the current popularity of knowledge, the vast majority of readers are normal people. How can they have mental problems? To be honest, it seems that the protagonist is a bit mentally ill.

If you want to cut it, cut it. Everyone is spending money to chase it. If you cut it, at least there will be something to say. Who will read the books written by the author with this attitude?

The cheating ability he was born with made Team Hui's life so good that even the reserve team next door was crying. After almost a thousand chapters, he was still beaten and fled in panic.

Seeing unlimited water resources is unbearable. The protagonist has unlimited water but still looks like a private person. He is not willing to take advantage of others. Even with unlimited water, he is still greedy. He wants ordinary people to exchange food for water. As a result, many ordinary people have to choose between either water or food. What is the purpose of killing these people? You have to rely on these people to delay time, and you don't care about the lives of these people. Who will take care of them if they die? A lot of materials can be made into weapons, and the survivors can be given on credit to recruit a group of young men to form a team. First of all, these people hunt for weird things, and in the end the materials will be collected to him. He will definitely make a profit, and he doesn't need them to kill at all. He only needs them to divide them up. The protagonist can finish the work directly at the end, and then the credit money for the materials will be returned to the protagonist, and the rest will be theirs in the future. Then if they want to upgrade the sacrifice, they can collect the combat materials themselves, and then Find the protagonist to fuse with, so that the protagonist doesn't have to do anything, materials and survival points can be continuously obtained, and even if they are forced to stay behind when running away, they will still have the power to resist, and the delay will be longer. A weapon that can damage the weird only costs a few hundred points. You have died several times and you are short of people. It is known that an ordinary person can kill at least a low-level weird with a weapon. Giving them weapons on credit is a snowballing process, isn't it?

There is no need to write the protagonist in such a crude way. Such a person can only be a lone wolf.

I think the author is the biggest critic of the protagonist, and he is also a hard-nosed kind. In my opinion, the protagonist is definitely a lawful and kind person. On the premise that his life is not threatened, he will almost never take the initiative to harm others. The technique is a bit extreme. Being a profiteer when trading tomatoes, and intentionally hurting others when being chased are a bit bad. The rest are all good points. The real lawful evil is Fangyuan. Above the most basic bottom line, as long as it can make a profit, there is no shame.

No matter what the work is, I think there must be a woman even if there is no heroine. Otherwise, what's the point of becoming an immortal or a god? That doesn't mean it's the work of a eunuch or a palace maid, it's just a monthly pass for free.

The night was dark, dark clouds were billowing, and a strange low groan could be heard in the distance, like countless nails scraping against metal. The convoy stopped at an abandoned gas station. The smell of gasoline and blood mixed in the air, making people's throats dry. An Xi sat on the hood of the armored vehicle, spinning the short blade given by the White Tiger sequence in her hand. There is a pale white texture floating faintly on the blade, like the breath of a beast. She squinted at Chu Sheng not far away - the man who always made her body itchy. Chu Sheng was talking to Xingzi. Kyoko was petite in a simple doctor's robe, squatting by the fire to keep warm. She doesn't speak loudly, but has a calming power. Chu Sheng bent down, keeping an almost intimate distance from her, his profile looking deep in the firelight. An Xi felt sour in her heart. The relationship between her and Chu Sheng was ambiguous and confusing. The memory of that night is still vivid, the breath, eyes and touches are intertwined, but I have never received a clear answer. She thought Chu Sheng would express his opinion, but this man was always calm and carefree, and instead he turned his attention to Xingzi. "An Xi." Chu Sheng suddenly turned around and his eyes fell on her. There was nothing strange about that look, but it made An Xi's heart beat slightly faster. "What's the matter?" Her tone was cold, but she couldn't help but hold the short blade tightly. Chu Sheng came over and whispered: "I will collect the supplies with you later. Xingzi will stay in the convoy, just in case." An Xi raised her eyebrows and said in a thorny tone: "Are you so protective of her because you are afraid that she will get hurt or that she will be scared?" Chu Sheng smiled and was noncommittal. He didn't explain, but instead raised his hand and patted her shoulder gently. The touch felt like tugging on a thin string. An Xi's heart tightened, but she gritted her teeth and suppressed it. The night patrol begins. The two of them walked on the desolate street, with a strange smell looming among the broken walls. Chu Sheng's body showed a pattern of heavenly craftsmanship, like gears and metal interlocking with each other, exuding a cold luster. An Xi is carrying the shadow of the white tiger on his back, with a heavy murderous intention. "What are you planning?" An Xi finally couldn't help but lowered her voice. Chu Sheng looked at her sideways, with a smile in his eyes: "What do you mean?" "Xingzi." An Xi spat out two words coldly, "You are not innocent when you approach her." Chu Sheng did not answer immediately. He stopped and stared at the black mist not far away. A strange low laugh came from the fog, and in the next moment, a monster that looked like a human but had twisted limbs sprang out. An Xi reacted very quickly, his spear cut through the night, golden light roared out, splitting the monster in two. Flesh and blood were scattered, and the black mist receded. Chu Sheng slowly clapped his hands: "The movement is faster than last time." "Don't change the subject." An Xi took a step closer to him in a cold voice, with sharp eyes, "I want to know what you want to get from Xingzi." Chu Sheng was silent for a long time, and then whispered: "Her sequence is very useful for the team. You and I both know it." An Xi was stunned for a moment, and then her heart became heavier. Yes, Chu Sheng's body has long been left with traces of strange corrosion. What's hidden under those metal lines is not only strength, but also corrosion. He needs Kyoko, not because of emotion, but because of survival. "So, you lied to her." An Xi's tone was filled with uncontrollable anger. Chu Sheng's eyes darkened, but he did not deny it. He just stretched out his hand, gently held An Xi's wrist, and said in a low voice: "An Xi, I'm here for the team." An Xi felt a sting in her heart. She understood Chu Sheng's cruelty and also understood his determination. The way he lives his life is that he never cares about the cost - even if he has to take advantage of a kind girl. When she returned to the convoy, Kyoko was sitting by the fire, bandaging an injured teenager. She raised her head and smiled at the two of them, with no suspicion or guard in her eyes. That purity made An Xi feel even more uncomfortable. She walked up to Xingzi and whispered: "Be careful Chu Sheng, he is not the kind of person you think." Xingzi was stunned, and doubts appeared in his eyes: "Sister An Xi, why did you say that? He has obviously been protecting everyone." An Xi wanted to speak again, but met Chu Sheng's eyes not far away. The eyes were calm, but as unpredictable as the deep sea. An Xi's heart sank. She knew that this dispute had just begun. The firelight flickered, and the strange low humming sound came from the distance again. The world is still dangerous and the nights are still long. And the relationship between the three of them will lead to an ending that no one can predict in this weird and bloody situation.

You're a zebra, and you take time off every month. You're not a woman, and you have your period every month?