Apocalypse Across Two Worlds: Each Time I Transmigrate, I Get 60 Seconds in the Modern World

I read around chapter 160, which marks the end of the story in Luochuan City. Overall, I quite enjoyed the leisurely and relaxed plot, where the protagonist acts like an observer watching others survive in the apocalypse. However, the plot seems to be veering off course more and more, and I'll discuss my thoughts on this in the following points.

Practicing martial arts for physical fitness is acceptable, but having an invulnerable old man is really out of place in a zombie apocalypse. If you want to give the protagonist some abilities, I suggest using enhancement agents or evolution fluids.

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Wow, that's a classic story! Chapter 93, a bunch of guys are going to break the protagonist's legs! In an apocalyptic world, this situation is essentially tantamount to murder. The result is a classic example of a saintly, overly dramatic scenario: the protagonist's counterattack merely involves knocking down all the opponents, and even then, they have to carefully use the back of the knife to strike, precisely controlling the blows to avoid killing them. Goodbye, you idiot.

Since completing his mission at the Red Star Industrial Zone in Jiangcheng Shelter, the protagonist Xu Mo has essentially entered retirement mode! Both the overall environment and his personal life are incredibly comfortable! Thirteen chapters have passed, and he's either leisurely listening to neighbors chat or sleeping in a recliner. Where's the apocalypse? Where's his cheat ability?

To be honest, considering the more than 3,000 kilometers from Jiangcheng to Mingzhu Port and the dangers along the way, only the protagonist could possibly make it back alive. The intensity and danger are too high; level two mutants are very common. Even an average superhuman wouldn't have a chance of making it back alone.

The beginning was alright. I went through the door to the modern world to get supplies, then practiced skills and leveled up. Later, I entered the Jiangcheng Shelter, and the door became a decoration. I started practicing skills and doing quests. Finally, I had a long-distance quest. I had forgotten about practicing skills and leveling up. I was immersed in driving, killing people and monsters every day. I don't even know what I was writing.

This is a road trip story. The protagonist has no clear goal and just goes wherever the road takes him. I advise you to think carefully before reading it, and consider whether you like road trip stories.

The writing got progressively worse later on. Even with a cheat system, the writing became so petty. Without depicting minor crises, the author couldn't truly capture the post-apocalyptic atmosphere. And with a cheat system, they still had to compete with the people of the apocalypse for scraps.

Limited-time free offer; [Those who came in]... But that's all that's left—limited-time free offer. Almost all stories that explicitly set a time limit have authors who have no concept of time. They travel to the other side of the world for only one minute, resulting in all sorts of dawdling, internal monologues, and sighs.