Within and Beyond the Pass

The last update was a month ago. With such unstable updates, why are you still pushing it out?

The author's writing is really good, and the characters are very lifelike. However, your ensemble piece could be better if you focused on a single character, like Gui Ge, as the main focus, and published it in an urban setting. The current reality section has too little traffic. But your update schedule is a problem.

I have a question for the author. In my childhood memories, there was a checkpoint in Caopu. Back then, the subway line 3 only went as far as Caopu Station, around 2011 or 2012. Especially when you were on the subway, you could see the train tracks next to you. This photo was taken during the Universiade this National Day holiday.

I've heard of "inside and outside the pass," but which pass is this? Also, what about temporary residence permits? They used to be issued because they were required, but why are they issued now, and what are they used for?

It's well-written, but the updates are too slow. I feel like it would take at least half a year to finish reading your book.

It's written with a great sense of the era. I just gave you a small tip. Keep up the good work, author! I was originally writing a novel set in 1985, but after reading your writing, I don't even want to continue. If you were to write a period novel, set up a good main plot, and post it in an urban area, it would definitely be a masterpiece.

Your new book has been in the library for way too long, almost a month from the 23rd of last month to this month. And you've been frequently taking breaks from updating. 😰

I also found a newly released book a couple of days ago; it's alright, I'll see how it goes. Author, aren't you going to break it down into more detailed plot points? Does anyone know of any other books about Shenzhen in the 80s and 90s?

Has the hiatus for so long meant you're not going to write anymore?

An excellent work...? Huh?