Martial Arts Ascend to the Gods

I have carefully read more than ten chapters of Lao Huo's new book. Although I still can't see much, here is a short review of the book, including one advantage, one disadvantage and some doubts: Advantages: Long-reading This is actually a very rare advantage. Lao Huo's book should be among the top three slowest in reading speed among the works I have read. And Lao Huo's Storytelling has made great progress, and he has tended to use stories to tell truths, rather than using truths to tell stories. Especially now, we still need to spare some effort to dig holes at the beginning. The climax of the plot is far from coming. A readable sentence is worth a thousand words. Regardless of the performance of such a book, at least the readers will definitely buy it 🤭 Disadvantages: Missing memory points The first one is the lack of memory points such as realm😵 There are many realms, big and small, many realms of skills, and many types of skills. Especially after reading, it is difficult to leave an impression on me. Of course, this is most likely due to the fact that there is no fighting plot yet. I hope that the characteristics of various skills and realms can be better highlighted during fighting, so that readers can have an impression and a sense of immersion. The second one is the small flaws in the portrayal of minor characters. This part is more like a suggestion, because people like Dahuang, Uncle Li, various martial saints, etc. Can already be portrayed quite well in just a few chapters. However, themes like Gaowu have an inherent problem: if the upgrade is not fast, readers will be unhappy; if the upgrade is fast, the previous characters will soon be left behind, which wastes the readers' memory. I have no impression of many of the students in this class. They might just be like a supporting cast, just say a name or say a few sentences and then lose their role. Of course, they may be just supporting casts themselves 😏 and the protagonist seems to stay in a martial arts school or martial arts gym near his hometown, and there may be subsequent intersections. No matter what, I still hope to increase the interaction with the main characters, or concentrate on telling the story of a minor character. Doubts: Writing style🤔 Lao Huo still has a meaningful writing style as always. To put it nicely, it is literary and literary. The funny thing is that it feels like it has been poisoned by knowledge 😃 This is undoubtedly a bonus in previous books, but this one is a ten-level Stitch Monster World with high martial arts, technology, systems, western fantasy, etc. At present, it seems to be relatively harmonious, but I hope that the writing style and content style will not be completely different in the future. This depends on Lao Huo's experienced writing style 😁 Finally First update of the new book, or Zhu Laohuo🔥🔥🔥, I am very optimistic about the top ten historical quality of Lao Huo's impact on this type of subject 🤓

1. Style: Lao Huo's previous three books, the practice system is based on the combination of strength and learning, focusing on learning (principles, principles, laws) to promote the development of strength, and the improvement of strength for further learning. Unlike normal fantasy books, this high martial arts system is an innovation in Lao Huo's writing type, but I think it should not be the same as that of Lao Huo. The previous style is completely different, but the relationship between reason and power may not be directly related 2. Source of Civilized Struggle: In the previous two novels, Lao Huo's view of the world is from disorder to order, and the unity of all living beings (I think so), then I guess that the Civilized Struggle produced in Zhou Leng's world may be a development Different factions in the strongest civilization have different views on civilization. It may also be that they died due to internal fighting after the integration of different civilizations. Therefore, they wanted to select a new civilization that could lead and correctly solve civilization problems, which resulted in the subsequent story 4. Ending: Zhou Leng should meet with other civilizations Kill a cancerous civilization that believes in disorder (similar to the Mei mentioned in Life Hunter) and then create a new orderly world Finally, I am a Diaos myself, I really know very little, and I don't know how to post comments. If you don't like me, please feel free to criticize me. If there is any problem with this book review, I will delete it in the future.

Is Zhou Leng the Holy Mother? Xihai Wuhan University is looking for trouble at any time. Don't you have the mentality of revenge? If others come to you, you will suffer. If this is the case, you will have to abandon the book. It will be boring to read it from the beginning to now.

I vaguely remember reading a book called "The Supreme Sage of Confucianism and Taoism" many years ago. At that time, I thought the author's writing style was exquisite, the book frame was novel, the characters were vividly described, and the story content was very interesting. However, I hesitated to update it too slowly, so I abandoned it before reading it. I haven't read a novel for many years. I have been free recently and suddenly wanted to read a novel. So I searched for the author's name and found it. I haven't had time to read several other novels, so I just read the latest serial novel. The writing style is as delicate as ever. I couldn't move my phone screen away at a glance. As my fingers kept sliding, my mood gradually became happy. This work has two words: great kindness

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In-depth analysis report of the whole book "Martial Arts Ascends to the Gods" 004 #dailyyiclassic #gouRixinyirixinririsin # ascends to the gods 004 # Eternal Fire Works Collection 014 Reader: Snowy God Lord Reading time: WeChat reading 129 hours · Qidian Chinese website 19 hours Work information: Eternal Fire Written, 2.51 Million words, completed Title: Lock in the legend of the superstar, be upright and just, strive for success | Joy and share the perfect power [Highlights of this article: An inventory of the top ten cool points - from "heart training to break the game" to "the east wind overwhelms people from all directions"] 3. A large inventory of classic cool points in the book The cool point design of "Martial Arts Ascending God" is carefully planned, and each climax has its own internal logical support. Let's take stock one by one: The first exciting point: the counterattack in the martial arts test at the beginning Zhou Leng's counterattack from an injured boy to an improved champion is the beginning of the book. The reason why this counterattack is exciting is that it has a solid foundation - half a year of mental training and thousands of deductions, which makes this victory seem natural but not without weight. When readers read this paragraph, they can fully feel the pleasure of "the joy comes after all the hardships". This is not the "adventure from the sky" type of excitement, but the "accumulation and accumulation" type of excitement. Zhou Leng lay on the hospital bed for half a year, not waiting for death, but rehearsing every detail of the Overlapping Waves Palm over and over in his mind. This "spiritual first" setting is very innovative in itself. The second cool point: the giant frost tree awakens its spirit Adventures in the ruins are often the most exciting scenes. Opportunities found in desperate situations, hope encountered in despair - this is one of the most classic and refreshing patterns in online literature. The setting of the giant frost tree not only provided Zhou Leng with help in his cultivation, but also added mystery to the entire world. The subtlety of this exciting point is that it is not simply "picking up a treasure", but "dialogue with life". Through communicating with the giant frost tree, Zhou Leng gained not only power, but also an understanding of the essence of life. This setting gives "Qiyu" a deeper connotation. The third cool point: Trial of the Furukawa Sect Extreme training and physical training are classic scenes in martial arts novels. The trial of the Furukawa Sect is not only a test of strength, but also a tempering of will. Zhou Leng completed his transformation from immature to mature here, laying the foundation for his future journey. The trial scene is beautiful because it satisfies readers' imagination of "becoming stronger" - as long as you work hard enough and are tenacious enough, you will be able to break through your limits and grow. This setting of "efforts will be rewarded" is one of the core charms of online writing. The fourth cool point: Shuizhou Demon City Facing the devil directly for the first time was an important turning point in Zhou Leng's life. Before that, the devil was just a concept; after that, the devil became a real threat that he had to face. The cruelty of this battle makes readers deeply feel the scars left by the "War of the Ten Realms". The battle at Shuizhou Magic City was Zhou Leng's first real "life and death fight". From this battle on, he was no longer the ignorant boy, but a true warrior. The fifth cool point: the struggle for hegemony in ten realms Cross-civilization combat is a wonderful presentation of the world view setting of this book. On the battlefield for hegemony in the ten realms, Zhou Leng is no longer a young boy confined to the Dragon Kingdom, but competes with other geniuses on the level of the entire universe's civilization. This expansion of horizons brings great reading pleasure. The furnace forging of the dwarf world, the bloodline inheritance of the giants, the divine spells of the demon world, the instinctive ancestral reversion of the ferocious beast world, the white mist of life in the treant world - every civilization has its own unique way of practice, and every battle is a collision of civilizations. The sixth cool point: Blood of Violence secretly trades with demigods This is the key scene of Zhou Leng's dual identity. The user underlined a large number of notes, indicating that this paragraph resonated strongly. The existence of the identity of "Blood of Violence" allows Zhou Leng to conduct various transactions in secret and contribute to the survival of human civilization. This "behind-the-scenes hero" setting greatly enriches the story's layering. "The Blood of Violence has been promoted to the number one scapegoat in the ten worlds. However, the junior brother of Blood of Violence believes in him." This sentence is one of the warmest lines in the book. When everyone misunderstood, cursed, and feared the violent blood, only his junior brother knew the truth, and only he chose to believe it. This bond of "The whole world is against you, but I'm still on your side" is more touching than any bloody battle. The seventh cool point: The Zhao family is wiped out "Kill them all, Oracle!... From the beginning to the end, Zhou Leng didn't even look at it." This is the most shocking scene in the book. Zhou Leng showed frightening decisiveness when facing his family's enemies. This massacre was not out of hatred, but out of justice - the very existence of the Zhao clan was a threat to human civilization. The God of Snowland left important notes in this section, which shows how much he attaches importance to this scene. The seven words "I didn't even look at it from beginning to end" contain too many emotions - not indifference, but transcendence; not ruthlessness, but seeing through. Zhou Leng has seen through the cycle of hatred, and he is just executing the necessary justice. The eighth cool point: The interrogation of King Jianzhan Zhou Leng carried the half-dead masked martial saint and said, "If you tell me honestly, there won't be so many things." This is the ultimate display of black humor. On the battlefield of life and death, this relaxed attitude not only did not destroy the tense atmosphere, but also made readers feel Zhou Leng's strength and calmness more deeply. The essence of this sentence lies in the "contrast" - it should be a tragic battlefield of life and death, but such "down-to-earth" lines appear. This contrast made Zhou Leng's image come alive instantly. Ninth cool point: The east wind overwhelms the people of the ten directions "It is not the east wind that overwhelms the west wind... It is the east wind itself that overwhelms the people of the ten directions." This is the ultimate famous scene in the book. The reason why this refreshing point is unforgettable is not only because of its drama, but also because it carries the core theme of the entire work: the real strong man does not suppress others, but transcends himself. "Dongfeng Self" - Strength does not come from the outside, but from the heart; it does not come from talent, but from day-to-day practice and persistence. When a person can transcend all his own limitations, he is already in an invincible position. The tenth cool point: The God-killing Battle Zhou Leng compared himself with the gods in a mortal body - this is the climax of the whole work. Killing gods is mankind's ultimate challenge to the laws of the universe. Zhou Leng proved with practical actions that even mortals have the right to defend their own existence. The battle of killing gods is not only a contest of strength, but also a contest of will. The god of disaster represents the cold rationality of the universe, while Zhou Leng represents the unyielding will of mankind. The victory of this battle is the victory of will over law, and the victory of civilization over fate. 4. In-depth analysis of plot layout design The plot layout of "Martial Arts Ascension to the Gods" reflects the professionalism of Eternal Fire as a mature online author. 🎍Double helix narrative structure: The bright line is Zhou Leng's personal martial arts advancement, and the dark line is the escalation of the crisis for the survival of human civilization. These two threads are intertwined and influence each other. Every breakthrough Zhou Leng makes is closely linked to the fate of human civilization - he is not only fighting for himself, but also for the entire human race. This double helix structure gives the story both the passion of personal heroism and the weight of a civilizational epic. 🌱Precise engagement of key nodes: Chapter 80 corresponds to the early warning of the magic city, Chapter 353 speeds up cultivation and synchronizes the mother tree crisis, Chapter 626 opens the ancient road and points directly to the True King Trial - the setting of these key nodes shows the author's precise control of the rhythm of the long narrative. Each plot point is not isolated, but is closely connected to the larger framework of the entire story. ☘️Three-act climax structure: The plot of the whole book can be clearly divided into three parts. The first part is Zhou Leng's growth stage, from a boy in Rucheng to a disciple of the Ancient River Sect; the second part is Zhou Leng's rise stage, from the trials of the ten realms to the fierce battle in the True King; the third part is Zhou Leng's breakthrough stage, from ascending to the False God to the battle of killing gods. Each stage has its core contradiction and solution, and the whole shows a clear three-act structure. Above.         · 20260604

Six Highlights of Book Review No. 011 Of "Martial Arts Ascends to the Gods" [Contents] 1. ​​The grand cross-civilization pattern 2. ​​The passionate and restrained "sacrifice of the ancestors - the rise of the younger generations" narrative 3. ​​The high-level martial arts showdown and the crisis of civilization go hand in hand 4. ​​The systematic yet imaginative training setting​​ 5. ​​Strong visual impact of scenes and creatures​​ 6. ​​The protagonist's growth line is clear and the group portraits are vivid The main highlights of "Martial Arts Ascension" can be summarized in the following aspects: 1. ​​The grand cross-civilization pattern​​ The novel juxtaposes Blue Star with multiple alien worlds, introduces settings such as "War of All Worlds" and "Asylum of Ancient Civilizations", allowing the survival of mankind to collide with cosmic-level forces, and the vision is far beyond ordinary high-level martial arts works. 2. ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ With the sacrifice of the ancestors and the rise of the younger generation, the narrative​​ The heroes of the ancestors used self-destruction to lure the enemy and strive for fifty years of life, and then the protagonist inherited the legacy and embarked on the road to slay demons. Traditional passion and new ideas coexist, and the emotional tension is strong. 3. ​​High-level martial arts showdowns and civilizational crises go hand in hand. The work not only includes the ultimate battle of personal martial arts, but also constantly creates group crises through events such as "the chaos of demon worshipers" and "raging monsters". The battle rhythm is fast and the density of conflicts is high. 4. ​​Systematized yet imaginative training settings​​ From martial arts perception and true energy circulation to exercises such as "Great Sun Magic" and "Dongfeng Fist", the naming of moves and exercises has a strong oriental fantasy atmosphere. At the same time, it can be linked with modern technology and otherworldly forces, giving readers a sense of freshness. 5. ​​Strong visual impact of scenes and creatures​​ For example, strange creatures such as the "ring-eyed cow mother" and "flesh and blood sun", as well as landscapes such as suspended castles, combine imagination and oppression, enhancing the sense of immersion in reading. 6. ​​​The protagonist's growth line is clear and the group portraits are vivid​​ Zhou Leng has gone from an ordinary boy all the way through the game. In the process, he interacted frequently with his teammates and teachers. It not only provided the excitement of personal upgrades, but also created an atmosphere of teamwork. Taken together, "Martial Arts Ascends the Gods", under the passionate shell of Gao Wu, incorporates elements of the survival of civilization, cross-border wars and Eastern fantasy elements. It is both igniting and innovative. It is a good choice for readers who are looking for "grand world view + refreshing fighting + continuous sense of crisis". (Source: WeChat Reading·Tencent Yuanbao·Yuanbao Master·Personal reading notes, edited.) (The Baidu Post Bar of "Martial Arts Ascends to the Gods" and "Hanmen Ghost General" has just been established. Book friends are invited to comment, point out the country, and inspire the text, thank you!) Let me encourage you all. Joy sharing, perfect power. Above. The God of the Snowy Land 20251124

There is a female protagonist chasing me 😍😍😍

From the introduction, I feel that a war breaks out in all realms, and Blue Star actually has the ability to participate. I'm afraid your so-called all realms don't even have the Milky Way. There are hundreds of billions of stars and tens of trillions of planets. How many orders of magnitude do you have to write to reach the level of the Milky Way?

More than 200 chapters have been ordered. The biggest disadvantage is that while the protagonist's contribution to the country is written in a very impressive way, the country basically does not support the protagonist. Is such a big country really short of resources to cultivate the protagonist? Since you have written about your great contribution to the country, it is not excessive to have corresponding rewards. In addition, The protagonist is not a waste, he is also a genius. There is no such thing as a waste of resources. Is it difficult to supply the protagonist with unlimited resources? The stronger the protagonist, the greater his contribution to the country. As a result, the protagonist spends all the elixirs he eats. He has no money to buy them, so he has to borrow money to buy elixirs to practice. It is so funny.

I am an old reader. I have been reading Lao Huo's books since Confucian sage. Didn't the author notice that his grades are getting worse and worse? After all, The Confucian Sage is really cool. The full text has been released, except for the later release due to copyright reasons. The previous plot links are remarkable. Now take a look and see what is written? Frustrated and brainless. Some Confucian sages also sacrificed their lives, and some sacrificed themselves for the sake of righteousness, but would it be like now? The Mesozoic era is full of death, the grandfather watched his grandson die, and the master watched his apprentice die. You can write it all to death. With so many people criticizing Lao Huo, do you really not read the comments? No change at all?

First of all, I was inspired by Chapter 240 and wrote it. I am a long-time fan of Lao Huo. Except for Xiaoyao Landlord, everyone has watched the finale and only rewatched it a few months ago. I should know Lao Huo well, hahaha Secondly, if Lao Huo has watched it, just watch it in your free time! Don't affect the coherence of your writing! (It's more about chatting, hahahaha, I talk a lot) In fact, I am also a creator, and I have also been very resistant to other people's "writing guidance". I was very entangled at first whether to write this long review, but I remembered Lao Huo's previous reply, and I thought: If my long review can help Lao Huo, it might be meaningful. After all, Lao Huo is different from many other authors. He is a person who pursues progress and writes books seriously. Some people may say, since you think it may not be good to say it, why do you say it? Then the contradiction lies in my own desire for expression and the feelings of the viewers. First of all, I am essentially self-interested. I think my own feelings are more important. Secondly, I also value the feelings of the viewers, so "how to say it so that the viewers can accept it more easily" is my goal. I think this is also a contradiction in expression when writing novels. At the very beginning, Lao Huo should have determined his original intention and ultimate goal of writing this book, right? Whether it is to improve one's writing skills, whether it is to cater to the public and write novels that everyone likes, whether it is to make money or something else, and the importance of readers' feedback... All need to be considered clearly. As the gods say, when the ultimate goal is clear, the subconscious mind will capture all factors that help achieve the final goal. But when I actually did it, I found that there should be one more thing, that is, it is best to set a higher goal than the goal you hope to achieve (because people can never do their best and often fail to achieve the original goal, so the initial goal and the actual goal they hope to achieve should be the difference between dreams and ideals (?) First of all, I know that Lao Huo wants to make progress in writing, but before pursuing progress in writing, I still hope that Lao Huo can clearly understand his own strengths. Because people are not perfect, then using strengths and avoiding weaknesses is definitely the first choice! Then I will start to praise Lao Huo! First, Lao Huo is very good at using dialogues to promote the plot, and many dialogues are very provocative (referring to emotions). As we all know, mobilizing emotions is a very important indicator for writing novels. Most of the time, reading novels is a recreational activity, which stimulates the production of dopamine. Must be the first factor, which is why Shuangwen has so many audiences. Second, the readability is definitely one of the best among the novels I have read. This is also very important, especially when writing long novels... How to guide and even seduce readers to read is a difficulty that every author must overcome. Tell me a very interesting thing. I once cut a chapter to a friend who has never read Lao Huo's novel and used dialogue to talk about the setting. After reading it, my friend was very surprised and said to me, "It's all about introducing the world." The world view setting is still a long dialogue, but I read it so smoothly, and I got into it." The third thing I must praise is that Lao Huo's world view setting is really cool! Each book is grand and interesting, and I have written one story after another. A wonderful and complete world, it is really attractive! (It would be better if it could be written in more depth 😭) Fourthly, Lao Huo's underlying logic is very reasonable and complete, and he can endure even small details. This is It is a place that reflects the cultural level (and the readers at the starting point are generally older, which means that the requirements for basic writing skills will be higher) Fifth, I feel that Lao Huo's books are a bit group portrait, which means that they will write many important supporting characters and give them highlights and their own stories, rather than simple supporting roles. In fact, this has surpassed some works, and I like this very much (so Lao Huo, should you consider trying to write group portraits 😏) Personally, Lao Huo's books are often thought-provoking and can give people a "sense of gain." This is more mysterious. Lao Huo's books often trigger my thinking, and they naturally make me think about myself, and then I feel like I have gained some kind of knowledge. Feeling. This "sense of gain" is different from fast food entertainment. It is a higher level of knowledge and ideological gain. (The following is my personal preference) Lao Huo, did you know that you are really good at writing about animals, and you write very cutely! ? It's really cute. It's a big regret for me that the protagonist of Life Hunter doesn't have a pet 😭 I really like the interaction between Zhou Leng and Dahuang Xiaoba. The cute thing is definitely killing both men and women (an exaggeration) And Lao Huo is so good at writing swords,,, I couldn't help crying several times 😭 And Lao Huo didn't just cut for the sake of cutting, nor did he deliberately trick readers into crying. They were all meaningful and logical. After reading it, it made people feel regretful but reasonable... (Off topic, I write story friends Friends say that I am the King of Swordsmen, and I learned it from Lao Huo 😏) Why do I have to be so serious and praise so much? Maybe some people think that this is not good and Lao Huo will drift away, but as a creator, I feel that at every stage? Support and recognition are very necessary. Enthusiasm will fade, inspiration will dry up, and energy will be exhausted, so every love is worth cherishing. Okay, the praise is over, let's give some advice~ As a reader and a newbie. The author of the writing hopes that his personal insights can give some inspiration to his favorite authors! Let's talk about what I feel is more profound recently... For example, the plot of the current novel is dull. In fact, the outline is definitely not dull, but I feel that Lao Huo has become "socialized", which means he has lost his enthusiasm... (Of course, it may also be due to the fact that my current job is very nourishing. XD) But this seems to be less common in the previous books. Personally, I feel that the atmosphere is not enough. Like many erotic comics, many of the plots are very ordinary, but they can be ignited because the atmosphere is there. As the saying goes, if the atmosphere is enough, you can write as much as you want, but you are afraid of forcing passion and excitement. Feeling in love and then being embarrassed That's the key point. In fact, starting from Confucianism and Taoism, there are several great knives of the gods, and Zhou Chunfeng has written very well. It feels like Lao Huoguang is struggling with the writing method, and the words presented are a bit too rational, but the emotional part is neglected (?) Literature Literature must have something that touches people and shocks the soul! 😆 (Some people may think that Internet articles are not literature, but as Su Ye said, "Only by demanding yourself to be a legend can you become a legend!" "Qi", in the same way, if you want to write excellent written works, you should try to demand yourself with higher standards - even if you can't do it) Then I noticed that Lao Huo seemed to have answered some people's doubts in the paragraph comments. Maybe Lao Huo also feels that in order to pursue an optimal writing method that is more easily accepted by everyone, feedback from readers is essential. Maybe Lao Huo has figured it out now, but I still want to say this - Lao Huo needs to distinguish between useful comments and useless comments! [F n=24] After all, human beings have species diversity, and those who read books seriously will definitely make mistakes on purpose... For example, if you are confident that you have written it clearly, then later readers will naturally help you answer it. If you look back and find that the expression is not very clear, then you can make improvements. Then, you can ignore those statements that are obviously not the target audience 🙂 Lao Huo is not originally a writer of fast-paced routines and cool articles, so those obvious ones are not. Those who like to read this kind of novels are destined not to like Lao Huo's books. I also saw that there is a lot of discussion about Xihai Wuhan University. Lao Huo's hints and foreshadowing have already pointed to the subsequent development and the overall layout. There is no problem! So why are there still so many people dissatisfied? I thought about it, except for those who are impatient, it is probably because it is too "hazy". Yes, it is not that it is not clear or buried too deep, but that it is in a state of uncertainty. It's so hazy. The heroic words of Confucianism, Daoism and Yizhou make it clear that the protagonist's goal is clear enough. The ingenuity of the gods and the last mouth shape of the life hunter are buried deep enough to make people unexpected. To sum up, either directly point out the long-term goal, so that readers know that the protagonist will definitely do it but it is not time; the time to reveal is relatively close, and then add a little foreshadowing to make it a logical conclusion. The climax; if the timing of the reveal is too far away, it's best to hide it so that many readers don't notice it, and it will be a shock when you put it back! 😁 I really like what Lao Huo said before, you must write what you like and want to write. This is also the source of the basic motivation and enthusiasm. Can you still find the passion and fun of writing? How much has changed in writing novels now... But no matter which stage it is, it is a precious experience in life, and there is no turning back. I remember that some authors said that to write a good novel, there must be something private. The only difference is whether the export of the private goods can be accepted by the readers. There are differences, but there is a saying that is well said and a well-written novel, even the controversial parts, will not make people uncomfortable to read (I have been pursuing this...) I also noticed that some people seem to say that the current plot of Lao Huo has fallen into a cliché, and everyone can guess the subsequent development. It's boring to watch. This is due to the lack of expectation. The reason why the counter-routine that was very popular in the past (and maybe even now) is because people want to see something different and are looking forward to how the author will "counter-routine". If I insist on it... Leave more suspense. More extensions and blank spaces? From time to time, some novel developments can catch the reader's eyes. To put it simply, just think of the readers as people who are intermittently fond of the new and dislike the old. 🙂 It is said that writing novels is to challenge the readers' habitual thinking, and it should not be too shocking and completely out of touch. The development is far from everyone's expectations, and it can't be exactly what everyone thinks without new ideas (Wow, it's really difficult to maintain at first glance jpg) I feel that a feasible way is that the general plot development should not be too biased (for example, the protagonist must take revenge), but there should be expectations in small areas. Other highlights (for example, this method of revenge is quite special) (Of course this is all theoretical talk, actual operation is another matter (eye movement)) As I write this, I realize that a lot has been said. As for other more advanced things such as rhythm and structure, I'm still thinking about it... I feel like it's hard to maintain a long novel. Maybe it would be better to break these into beads and connect them in series? It's "Don't think about being a baker when you are thirty-five, but think that you have not accomplished anything at the age of thirty-five, but you have become a baker." Finally, I wish Lao Huo can make progress and grow, become a better self, and successfully achieve his goals!

Come on, the new book feels pretty good. Although the subject matter is more classic and not as novel as the Life Hunter theme, it lacks a lot of rational narratives in the previous book. The narrative is coherent and the reading is much better. Keep up the good old flames and keep updating!

First of all, I admit that Lao Huo's book is indeed very good, and I am a fan of three books. This one fully demonstrates Lao Huo's writing skills. Then, I would like to share some of my own opinions on the latest chapter (I'm really not happy about it). First of all, the protagonist has been smeared by the entire Internet after being deposed. During this period, the Wu Mansion has not taken any action so far. If I remember correctly, Zhou Leng has entered a confidentiality sequence. They said that Zhou Leng's identity is kept secret to prevent assassination, but do we still need to worry about Zhou Leng since he has been deposed? Not to mention that he has already entered the assassination list of the Demon Realm, but your confidentiality sequence cannot only have the function of keeping secrets, not to mention that you can't publish some past achievements to help support him? For example, the Arrow Bearer from the Demon City Battle is already useless anyway. Others do not have the reader's perspective to know that Zhou Leng will definitely recover, and the announcement will not make Zhou Leng's situation more difficult, not to mention that it cannot be more difficult. There is also the device given by the Demon City Army. It is said that as long as you press it hard, a righteous warrior will come to help you. I am not talking about whether Zhou Leng has a chance to press it. It means that if there is no one around, you can only collect the corpse for Zhou Leng, right? Lao Huo, you repeatedly emphasized in your article how strong Zhou Leng's achievements were in the past, saying that he was the best in pronunciation of divine texts and so on. However, it seems that Wufu's reaction was average. You don't want to say that Wufu does not have the power to control public opinion, right? And Zhou Leng is the elder brother of the Furukawa Sect and the controller of the Starry Sky Ruins. Even if the Wu Mansion doesn't know how strong Zhou Leng's control is, can't he send a signal to the outside world? Or is it that the Starry Sky Ruins have not been registered with the Supreme Court. It seems that Wufu is still very strong. He was even willing to risk the ruins of the starry sky to vent the anger of sixteen families. There are also the title of the protagonist, the Giant Grand Duke, the Dwarf Grand Duke, and the Demon Master. I remember that the protagonist seems to have made great contributions to these races. Is it possible that it is so realistic that these races will turn against him when they see him useless? To take a step back, they didn't receive any news at all because of the occlusion of communication in the ten realms. What is the United Front Work Department of Wufu used for? If he died, how would you tell other races in the Humanoid Alliance that he committed suicide by jumping off a building after being raped by a female classmate online? Um? Are you saying that your race is not as good as a bunch of second-rate families in our country that you don't even know exist? Will this cause any dispute? Even if Zhou Leng has no real power, he is still a foreign duke. I remember that all the clans have reported it to the Wu Mansion. You are not even willing to warn those families for someone who has connections in the ten worlds and has made great contributions to the country and is still on the protection list. Why, you have to wait for someone to die before you post a fake condolence message, announce your identity, and then the whole network observes a moment of silence. In the end, the Wu Mansion is "furious" and vows to find out the truth and give everyone an explanation, right? I guess at that time, the Zhao family would say that people cannot be resurrected after death, so they should keep their lives to fight against foreign enemies, and then they would make a symbolic friendship, pretend to cry a few times, and then the matter would be over? The Zhao family might even cover up Zhou Leng's achievements for the sake of fame. The above are all my personal thoughts. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I'll save my life.

Ah! ! ! Old fire! ! ! I saw your book "The Supreme Sage of Confucianism and Taoism" two years ago, and I really thought it was very well written 😭😭😭 I kept re-reading it over and over again. Really, I think seven or eight times is enough. I like it very much 😭 Now that I see you publishing a new book, I came to support it. But I am still a student party and I really don't have much money to support it. I just wish you better and better!

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It's not like you've relapsed into an old habit. I really suggest you learn from Chen Dong next door. It's outrageous to have top-notch combat power to protect the protagonist and still be persecuted. Both Confucianism and Taoism have Wang Jinglong protecting the protagonist and being falsely accused and framed. The most outrageous thing is that Lao Huo also dismissed Wang Jinglong from his position as Dongsheng for the reason of recovering from his injuries. This one is a little better. There is no Martial Saint protecting him on the surface, but there must be Martial Saint protecting him secretly. Everyone can think that Lao Huo should not take these so-called institutional positions too seriously. According to your writing, the Martial Saint is so powerful. These institutions cannot restrain the Martial Saint at all. And do these so-called 16 major families have the support of the Martial Saint? If not, according to your way of writing, all the 16 families should have knelt down in front of Zhou Leng on the day Zhu Shiji took action. When it comes to Confucianism and Taoism, a bit of ancient style is acceptable, but this one is too outrageous. How does Lao Huo describe innate power in terms of tons? What is this concept? Then the Grandmaster can defeat Xiantian, and the Martial Saint can defeat the Grandmaster. Then the Martial Saint cannot have dozens or hundreds of tons of strength? What is the concept of a person with dozens or hundreds of tons of power? If the Martial Saint wanted to kill all the 16 big families without equal power, wouldn't it take a minute?

The prince is a complete tragedy, both to himself and to the people around him. The meaning of Leng Zige's practice is to change this miserable world so that the tragedies of Zhang Xiaoxiao and Rao Mingxian will never happen again. This kind of writing is actually quite rare in online articles. Many protagonists become stronger for no reason, or for some personal reasons: if you don't practice, you will be slapped to death by a passing powerful... I just like getting stronger. It feels so good... After becoming stronger, you can eat, drink, and gamble... What is different about Brother Leng Zi is: he cultivates not only for himself, but also for the entire nation, country, and even all mankind. There was Martial Ancestor before, there is Zhou Leng now, and there will definitely be such people in the future. We hope to see more protagonists like this in Qidian in the future. We believe that there is nobility in this world, and the ideal of liberating all mankind will definitely resonate with readers. ps: Against the background of the Ten World War, the background of this world is actually tragic and desperate. It can be seen that Lao Huo is deliberately writing some jokes to offset this heaviness. Dialect divine writing, the Ancient River Sect of Death, etc... It's really funny. It feels a bit like The Last Fire in the Night, where Cuiyu made the protagonist a psychopath to hedge against the apocalypse. 🙂 Brother Leng Zi is still a normal person and should really give Lao Huo a thumbs up.

After seeing more than 500 chapters, I am too lazy to order any more. Sz's writing is very enjoyable. It's so disgusting to be a virgin when it's all over. Anyone who deserves to be killed is still there in Haiboping. A group of warriors can't help reporters and news. This plot is too retarded. The power belongs to oneself, and then the right to speak belongs to others.

Why is Gao Wu always a student? Do they all follow the same template?

[Tai Sheng Qian Kun]: Thousands of sky areas, endless creatures Blue Star - Solar System - Milky Way - Local Galaxy Group - Virgo Galaxy Cluster - Laniakea Super Galaxy Cluster - Pisces and Whale Super Galaxy Cluster Complex - Observable Universe - Endless Sky Area. Another Universe A huge human body is placed in the starry sky. Countless vast areas of the sky gather together, like nebulae, orbiting around this body. (Chapter 143 Old Love) --------------------- (Wanhetian District) Hidden Dragon Forbidden Abyss: It is made up of thousands of galaxies stacked on top of each other, lying in the void. Looking from a distance, the stars and mountains are filled with fog and clouds. (Chapter 338 Ceremony) (Shenwei Tian District) Higher beings practice the higher power called Shenwei, whether it is a demon spirit or a spell, it is just a transition and a branch of Shenwei. (Chapter 437: Owe) (Xuanwei Sky Area) Huge spiral galaxy, I don't know how many billions there are. (Chapter 501: Observance)  …  Elementary (planet), intermediate (river system), advanced (plural supergalaxy clusters)  …  … [Elementary Civilization] The civilization on the planet only owns one planet. Most of the powerful creatures of the lower civilization are descendants of the gods of the higher civilization. (Chapter 108 One Arm) ... Ten realms: Blue Star, Beast World, Demon Prison, Demon World, Giant World, Dragon World, Tree Man World, Giant World, Siren World, Dwarf Orc World. …… [Battle of Elementary Civilizations] In the Battle of the Ten Realms, the loser, if you are lucky, you will remain as you are, if you are not lucky, you will become a layer of the Demon Prison, and everyone will become a demon. (Chapter 210 Mural) (Magic City) An independent space formed by the overlapping of multiple worlds. It still looks as big from the outside, but inside, the actual area is expanded thousands of times. (Chapter 56: Magical Movement) Spiritual energy ripples, spiritual energy tides: Once all races are dispatched on a large scale, or fight on a large scale, the cosmic energy/spiritual energy of heaven and earth in the ten realms and the demon city will inevitably be triggered. Once these forces are dissipated, various treasures will inevitably be formed. (Chapter 62: Entering the Dharma Eyes) …… (Heavenly Steps) The essence of the Ten Realms War is a war of civilizations, a climb up the ladder of civilization. The so-called heavenly order is the core of the war of civilization, where the great power of civilization gathers. (Chapter 53: Capturing the Heavenly Order) With each additional level, the world will have more aura of heaven and earth. Those who obtain the Heavenly Order will also be blessed by the Heavenly Order and build statues in the "Heavenly Order Temple", which will be remembered for generations to come. Divide treasures, inheritance... (Chapter 80 Candle Arm) Inheritance heaven level: A place of inheritance will be nurtured and belong to the world. (Chapter 82: Inheritance) [Medium Civilization—Starry Sky Clan/Faction] Control a galaxy.  …                                                                                                                                                           Higher Civilization - State Not only can we get rid of natural selection at the planet level, but we can even get rid of natural selection at the galaxy level. (Chapter 230 Mountaineering) Master at least one of the "big deep fields". Each deep field in the starry sky is composed of multiple super giant galaxy clusters. (Chapter 547 Return of the Arrow) ... Star God Clan: recorded from the ancient books of the ten realms and the golden pages under the giant frost tree. (Chapter 105 One Arm) Ancient Void Beast: Ancestor of the Ferocious Beast Clan (Chapter 188 Medicinal Bath) Starry Sky Giant: Ancestor of the Giant Clan (Chapter 213 A Different Place) Poseidon: Ancestor of the Royal Siren (Chapter 280 Inside and Outside) Starry Sky Dragon (Chapter 290) Dragon Blood) The root of the original tree: the root of the star tree god's body, the origin of the tree man and giant insect clan. (Chapter 322: Falling Whale)  …

Briefly describe each situation Qi-nourishing period - break bricks into granules A small genius can lift half a ton with his physical body, and a great genius can lift one ton with his pure physical body. …… Blood supply period Physical weightlifting/punch half a ton, grip strength 0.3 Tons, use 2000 kilograms of infuriating energy, daily load-bearing 900 kilograms, 10m/s. ...... Physical training stage - turning bricks into powder In the initial stage, the physical body lifts 1 ton, and the protagonist weighs 4 tons. Zhenqi lifts 5 tons, the main character 10 tons, The basic weight is 17m/s, the main character 20m/s. …… Vigorous period The protagonist's grip strength is 3.5 Tons, and his true energy lift exceeds 90 tons, 100m/s. ...  Xiantian realm = holy realm  Muscle/upper level - can destroy concrete structure walls   Initial luck is 81m/s, genius can briefly supersonic speed ...  Grandmaster realm = legend   ≥125        ，300， …  Martial Saint = Demigod  Zhao Sheng's fist shattered the meteorite group …  Virtual God – Refining Star …  True God … The universe is endless, and different civilization systems have different paths to becoming gods… The types of martial arts training include pure physical training, pure Qi training, a combination of Qi training and physical training, and various methods such as bloodline and source energy. There is no absolute strength or weakness among all cultivation methods, only whether they are more suitable for the current environment. …… There are two core cultivation methods: internal training and external training. 1. Internal training is divided into Qi training and mind training. Practicing internal strength with Qi, and practicing Shentu with intention. Internal strength is the true energy, and the divine map is a scroll that condenses the breath of the great road. It may be formed naturally or drawn by a master, imprinted with powerful power. 2. External training is divided into playing methods and training methods. Various martial arts moves, fists, palms, legs and feet are all fighting styles, and their core purpose is offense and defense. Practicing techniques is not for offense and defense. Its purpose is to build a bridge of communication between the fighting techniques and the body, so that the fists, kicks and kicks and other fighting techniques are more powerful when combined with the body. Different cultivation routes require different training methods. (Chapter 26: Ten Inverse Beast Fists, Chapter 155: One Hundred) … [Combat Consciousness] It is necessary to 'observe the mind' and then 'observe the self'. Mind-Observation Method: A technique that involves observing every detail of the body during practice, with every detail being apparent and the subtleties being perceived. (Chapter 67: Visit) 1. It can be divided into combat intuition and combat experience 1. Combat intuition: accumulated bit by bit. 2. Combat experience: It is a person's instinctive choice. A very few geniuses are born with it, but for almost everyone, combat intuition must be constantly revised during the battle to make combat intuition stronger... The first realm, Cha Wei (Chapter 153 Drawing) ... [Martial Arts Will]: Spiritual God Realm The first realm, Rock The second realm King Kong The Third Realm Nahai: Even some martial saints and demigods cannot defeat him. (Chapter 257 Nahai) ... There are nine core cultivation methods for the complete cultivation of qi, blood and physical strength 1. Four strange bodies: once selected, it cannot be changed The best for elementary civilization, the blood of the dragon, the body of the giant, and the power of the ferocious beast. (Chapter 108 One Arm) Qi: The strange power born in the Dantian can enhance the true energy. Once you practice to the extreme, you can become one with the true energy. Prior to this, Qi Qi Shen and Zhen Qi existed independently of each other. Qi Qi Shen usually does not move through the meridians, but only exists in the Dantian. By controlling the true energy in the Dantian, you can control the energy to be released from the body. (Chapter 79, Cycle 36) … Blue Star humans use scientific methods to study and have a very deep understanding of the physical aspects of martial arts. Belongs to the most solid orthodox martial arts, practicing Qi, body, and mind together It has already figured out a barely complete training system. However, the current training method is very demanding on the body. If you are not careful, you will damage your body. Therefore, the state stipulates that you can only practice the training method during the physical training period. But if you have the guidance of an innate master around you, you can secretly use training methods from an early age to strengthen your body faster than your peers. The research on martial arts will and combat consciousness is still in its early stages, which requires a lot of time and resources. There is no shortcut. (Chapter 63, page 3) … [Qi and Blood Realm] [Divided into: nourishing Qi, transporting blood, refining body, and generating force] Using Qi to transport blood, using blood to generate force, and using the body to generate force, this is the foundation of martial arts civilization. (Chapter 5 Remember) … Qi-nourishing period To cultivate internal and external skills, the first two realms are divided into: entry, proficiency, mastery, small success, great success, perfection, ultimate state, and spiritual enlightenment …… The entry level to Dacheng is subdivided into ten heavens Perfection is a transitional realm The extreme realm can double the total amount of infuriating energy, but there are too few people who have reached it, and only super geniuses can achieve it. Tongshen is the ultimate limit of all skills, which can greatly improve combat effectiveness and future martial arts abilities. (Chapter 14 Divine Text Page, Chapter 86 Extreme Realm, Chapter 151 Confidential, Chapter 259 Exposed) ... (Xiao Cheng): Qi close to the skin (Chapter 1 Zhou Leng) (Dacheng): Inhale for ten seconds, Qi reaches the skin, with a palm, the red bricks are broken into small pieces the size of broad beans, even and orderly. (Perfection): Inhale for more than ten seconds, the force comes out of the skin, covering the body in a round shape, the whole body is like exhaling, flying blood all over the body, blasting the whole room... (Chapter 1 Zhou Leng, Chapter 7 A Qi Nourishing Pill) "Covering the body in a round shape, the inner Qi is overflowing": Once the true Qi circulates, it will spread throughout the body, including the roots of the hair and nails. The elixir can directly impact blood circulation when it is fully produced. Normal cultivation must reach this level before it is suitable for impact. (Chapter 51: Exploding Mist with Qi) Using Qi to run continuously can last for 5 minutes, and the limit is 5 minutes and 30 seconds. (Chapter 45, 5 minutes and 31 seconds) A great genius can lift more than 900 kilograms without true energy (Chapter 34 Soft persimmon) ... [Blood transport period] Blood transport secret: "Qi rises from the Dantian, transports it to the various meridians... Gathers in the atrium, converges the new meridians... Melts Qi into the blood, and reaches all directions... Qi and blood are rushing, in an orderly manner..." ... It is extremely dangerous to enter the blood transport period for the first time. If you are not careful, either the blood vessels will burst or the Qi and blood will flow backwards. It is best to have an innate realm protector. A red network of qi and blood appears in the body, and the true qi completes ninety-nine and eighty-one cycles in the blood vessels, transforming the meridians and removing dirt. (Early stage): The fusion of true energy and energy and blood is shallow, and the skin will form strong purple lines along the energy and blood. For the 5,000-meter no-luck run, the passing line for the top 100 affiliated martial arts schools is 12 minutes, and the full score is less than 9 minutes. (Chapter 33 What I Want) Those who have achieved perfection in Dan Gang Breakthrough: pure physical weight lifting of more than 500 kilograms, Zhenqi weight lifting of more than 2000 kilograms, boxing strength of more than 500 kilograms (Chapter 35 Intensity Meter) The standard length of the luck run is eight minutes. (Chapter 53: Seizing the Heaven Level) (Mid stage): The further integration of Qi and blood will form a large-scale purple network. (Later stage): Qi and blood are completely integrated, and purple patches will form where the Qi is concentrated. (Chapter 52 Blood Transport Period) Before the physical training, the daily weight-bearing of 800 to 900 kilograms without true energy is the limit. (Chapter 123 All are clear) The grip strength is about 300 kilograms (Chapter 144 Solving the case) ... [Physical Refining Period] The so-called body refining technique: "The so-called body refining technique: "The so-called body refining method uses people to accumulate Qi, uses Qi to transport blood, uses blood to refine the body, the flesh solidifies its blood, the skull solidifies its spirit, the chest and abdomen solidify its body..." (Chapter 155) Full hundred) ... After eating 100 Bu Yuan Pills and 3 Strengthening Pills, as long as the Qi and blood are sufficient, it is enough to be promoted. After promotion, quickly take the Flesh and Flesh Magic Potion, the Great Return Pill and the Tongqiao Pill to lay a solid foundation. The blood containing strong Qi enters the muscles and slowly integrates with the muscles, fundamentally transforming the muscles and integrating them into one body. It is extremely dangerous. If the body is too weak, it will be destroyed by the true energy and blood. Even if you are promoted to body training, it will be difficult to make any progress in the future. (Chapter 156: Body Training) The body strength begins to make a qualitative leap. Before the body training period, there are many ways to test the body strength. The most famous one is the one-arm pull-up without luck. In the era of technological civilization, the world record for one-handed pull-ups without interruption is 30. In the martial arts era, he was almost a master. (Chapter 27: Test at the beginning of the school year) … When you have perfected a set of external skills, you can move your Qi and move your fists, and change the speed of your fists. Only then can you be considered a true fighting expert. (Chapter 68: Muli) The core elixir is body-building pills, with a theoretical upper limit of 100 pills. (Chapter 49: Exchange) Using true energy can withstand more than one hundred degrees below zero. (Chapter 202 Plateau) … (Early Stage) Lifting a weight of one thousand kilograms without true energy. (Chapter 111 Unraveling the Monument) Lifting more than 5,000 kilograms with true energy (Chapter 159 Pai Brick) 17 meters per second without true energy (Chapter 177 Three Tests) (Mid-term) The body is heavier, and the energy and blood can be attached to the bones. Slowly strengthen bones. The muscles contract slightly, but the lines are clearer (Chapter 184 Blue) (Later): The body is subtle and under control, like hammers, and the muscles are like drums. (Chapter 156 Body Refining) … Vigorous Period Vigorous Technique: "The Qi generates the ocean and the abyss, and the shape turns around the sky; the blood enters the Qi and boils into the river tide; the turbid flesh and tendons are purified, and the strong bones are connected... The dragon shape has nine shocks, the phoenix rises through nine refinements... The spirit and body are in harmony, the heaven and earth are in harmony... Qi, blood, flesh and bones, full of synthetic force..." ... The essence of generating force is to fine-tune the body's tissue structure to make the body more suitable for mana, especially for the movement of Qi and blood. It is like forging pig iron into a sword. This change is extremely destructive. (Chapter 232 Steel Sound) By twisting force, blood, body, and strength into a rope, the increase in pure strength slows down, but the destructive power and intensity of destruction increase significantly. (Chapter 143 Old Love, Chapter 184 Azure) … (Later Period) Exhale into an arrow, and the breath will penetrate the glass. (Chapter 218 Treasure Mine) The upper limit for lifting weights without true energy is 30 tons (Chapter 221 Upper Limit) A full kick is far more than 100,000 kilograms. (Chapter 60: Hold on tight) The true energy is condensed to the extreme, and you can exhale three feet. (Chapter 214 Ancestral Mausoleum) ... Innate War Path: Essentially, it is a sudden change at the spiritual level and will level, making oneself believe that one is capable and qualified to break through to the next big realm. Once you complete the battle path, you will gain unimaginable confidence and your chances of breakthrough will be ten times greater than before. There are usually multiple routes to war. There are usually two or three innate battle paths. 1. The natural battle path It seems simple, but in fact it contains an extremely profound path. By constantly moving forward in nature, getting close to nature, feeling nature, understanding nature, enduring hardships, and ultimately transcending nature. Beasts and lower life forms are naturally selected and evolve aimlessly. They can only adapt to the environment through natural selection. But humans, intelligence, and warriors will gradually transcend natural selection and be able to carry out a certain degree of self-determined evolution. If you cannot surpass natural selection step by step, you cannot become a strong person. The truly great natural battle path is not in the Blue Star or the Ten Realms, but in the vast and endless universe. 2. The battle path of heart knots Also called the battle path of inner demons, find a knot in your heart that martial arts can solve, and then solve it. You don't need to solve all the knots in your heart, you just need to find the ones you can solve at the moment. 3. Pain Battle Path Bear pure pain and increase your ability to the limit. The higher the limit of pain endured, the greater the possibility of breaking through innateness. (Chapter 231 Mountain Climbing) --------------------- [Xiantian Realm] [Divided into: True Liquid, Blood Shock, Bone Forging and Muscle Stages] There are only three common promotion methods: Body Refining Breakthrough, True Qi Breakthrough and Will Breakthrough, commonly known as "Three Breaks of Innateness". A few people can go hand in hand, but most people can only break through their innateness with one extreme. (Chapter 163 Jinbu) Before innateness, every time the Qi and blood are excessively circulated, it will cause subtle damage to the blood vessels or blood. (Chapter 74 Bronze Man) … When the Qi and Blood realm impacts the innate, various situations will occur and various accidents will occur. It is normal for the impact to fail. Too weak, insufficient strength, leading to failure. Too strong, the body and Dantian are too strong, which will increase the difficulty of the impact and lead to failure. People who are too weak or too strong will have to attack several times before succeeding. Once the impact fails, it will consume strength at least, or it will be injured at worst. It will take a long time before the next impact can be made. And the Protective Pill can withstand the damage caused by failure. If it is too weak, it will only serve to avoid damage. If the impact fails because it is too strong, the Protective Pill will absorb the power during the impact and directly convert it into the Jin Bu Pill, which will be integrated into the body to enhance the innate strength. (Chapter 250: Protecting your glasses) If you protect your glasses seven times, you will definitely become a master and have a chance to ascend to the Martial Saint level. Nine times of goggle protection is a historical record of mankind, and the chance of impacting the Martial Saint is greatly increased. (Chapter 329 Dragon and Tiger) …… [True Liquid Stage] An innate warrior can breathe through his skin and can control weight and weight freely. (Chapter 346 Huang Li) You need to take 100 Yuan Bao Dan to help compress the true energy and turn it into liquid. (Chapter 284: Potency of Medicine, Chapter 337: Strength) The punch breaks through the air, surpasses the speed of sound, and generates a sonic boom. (Chapter 8 Chen Shouhu) The damage range was more than ten meters. (Chapter 190 Escort) The true energy lifts eighty tons as a base. (Chapter 324 Farewell) … [Blood Shock Period] The total amount and flow rate of Qi increases sharply, so you need to take 100 Gumai Pills and Iron Wall Pills each to enhance the strength of the meridians and blood vessels. The higher the blood vessel strength, the stronger the sustained combat effectiveness. Bone Forging Stage Without a strange body and no extra strength, the Zhenqi weightlifting is 120 tons. (Chapter 337 Strength) Muscle Stage Without a strange body, no extra strength, and without true energy, the weight can be 25 tons. (Chapter 337 Power) Great Innate The pinnacle of innateness above the innateness of muscles and muscles. (Chapter 351: Catacombs) The better the technique practiced in the Xiantian realm, the better the effect. (Chapter 261 Purple Bamboo) The destruction range is several kilometers, reaching supersonic speed (Chapter 190 Escort) The eyesight seems to be able to see the smallest details of muscles. (Chapter 232 Steel Sound) As long as the martial arts will and fighting consciousness reach a very high level, you are qualified to create a new martial arts. (Chapter 97: Killing Move) Body: The pure physical body is only slightly weaker than the giant of the same level. With the combination of Zhenqi and body-refining techniques, a very few can even overtake him. (Chapter 44: Strange Body) The strongest is the one with steel skin, and there are no more than ten of them in the entire human race. (Chapter 72 Martial Arts Director) …… (Grand Master) Opportunity to step into the Martial Saint (Chapter 347 Zhao He) --------------------- [Martial Saint] Martial Saint, Demigod, Great Demon, Ancient King, the same level Can ignore many mechanical restrictions and essentially use the power of martial arts to adapt to mechanics. (Chapter 337 Power) ... The son of a demigod, under the master, is naturally able to cross a small realm. (Chapter 254 Insect Beast) ... Even if it dies, the holy skeleton still retains its power. Especially, the complete sacred skeleton with a head will even fight back against the enemy once attacked. One blow from the holy skeleton destroyed the heaven and the earth. Only by cutting off the head can the power of counterattack be abolished. The body is then divided into six components including the chest, abdomen, legs and arms. After tempering, each component becomes a powerful weapon. Headless God. (Chapter 192 Orcs) There are headless gods in the innate realm who can cross a small realm (Chapter 243 Pinewood) --------------------- [Virtual God] It can change the laws of heaven and earth to a certain extent Even if a strong man in this realm dies, his power will remain for thousands of years. (Chapter 208: Destiny) The heart of the peak virtual god is far stronger than the sun. (Chapter 278 Nine Sufferings) -------------------------- Martial God

Isn't it a metaphor for the power of the people of that era? The question is, the author, do you have this awareness yourself? The power of the masses is just consumables in your book. The most elite batch of fire, equivalent to the 20,000 people left behind by the Long March, died in Zhao Palace. You have the nerve to write about the power of the masses. What is even more outrageous is that in the next picture, the protagonist comes out of seclusion and crushes the villain with his bare hands. Also, when someone was writing about the world of gods, he would write about his philosophy, thoughts, and thinking methods every now and then. Why would his whole life be clear and clear from then on? Can I really still find my original intention of writing and regain the bragging rights of my youth?

As a high school student, every day, it's not my intention to be granted a title? ? Do you know what a title is? Have you ever experienced the slightest bit of being a feudal lord? Just like a loser says every day, hundreds of millions of properties are like floating clouds to me. It sounds nice to say that you are ambitious, but the essence is that a toad yawns and your tone is loud.

The light of God is ready! ! ! When will a new fan title be opened?

Ethnic magical powers; ——Qi seeds allow innate realm masters to directly plant the power of Qi for each human being, allowing people to quickly enter the Qi nourishing period. (Chapter 2: Martial Arts Perception) A total of seventeen levels of heaven were obtained (Chapter 80: Main Arm)  …  1. History 1. The era of science and technology decades ago Blue Star overlapped with the other nine worlds, forming a large number of new spaces, named the Demon City, and the Ten Realms War. At the same time, a power appeared between heaven and earth that allowed people to practice, and it was named spiritual energy by humans. 2. The last year of the technological era ① The first battle: Martial Ancestor Yu Zhimin led the warriors, with the mighty power of thousands of nuclear explosions, as if they were carrying the sun, perished with all the enemies, and won the top spot in the battle of the ten realms. The golden crystal is a trophy. After opening it, humans will gain the magical power of the group - the seed of true energy, as well as the only complete set of martial arts skills. (Chapter 2 Martial Arts Perception, Chapter 297 Revealed) ② The decisive battle: The Demon Prison World unites some worlds to attack Blue Star, and the Demon World unites other worlds to help Blue Star. Because the demons control the orcs to switch sides, and the Demon Worship Cult controls the forces of the Eagle Alliance, in the end Blue Star and other humanoid races are defeated. 3. The Age of Martial Arts Begins In times of crisis, the "Arbiter of Civilization" arrives. Due to the existing ancient civilization ruins in the Dragon Kingdom, Blue Star is given fifty years of "ancient civilization asylum", erasing and locking many technologies. After a long debate, the United Nations finally decided to bet on the Dragon Kingdom and start a new direction, martial arts civilization. Martial arts began to be practiced all over the world. (Chapter 9: Asylum of Ancient Civilizations) 4. After the Martial Arts Era The Kingdom of Dragon has martial arts to maintain the relative security of the policies of the old era. Most countries are in chaos, and at least half of the countries are controlled by capital, insurgents, religion, and evil forces. (Chapter 29 Quota Certificate) 5. The appearance of demonized items Because many technological items cannot be used, human beings and demon spirits cooperate to speed up. Demonic weapons are affected by Blue Star technology, and demonized items activated by magic crystals appear. (Chapter 10 Monitoring List, Chapter 49 Exchange) … 2. Forces 1. The Ministry of Armed Forces Formerly known as the armed police, it is mainly responsible for the internal security of Blue Star. Mainly targeting demon worshipers, monsters infiltrating from the demon city and hostile countries. Each city is a military health bureau. …… 2. Demonic City Army The collective name of the military, because mankind has no longer established an organization to fight against other countries in name. (Chapter 104 Hospital) Divided into ordinary, special warfare, and martial arts. A martial arts brigade can defeat ten times more than an ordinary brigade and several martial arts masters. Its status is second only to Yunhua and Jinjing, and is ahead of other martial arts universities by a cliff. (Chapter 25 Principal Lu's plea) … 3. Wufu Manage the departments of various countries, nine elders Civilian position: associate professor Full professor: treatment = major/innate warrior (Chapter 171 Presumptuous) Lifelong professor Author of Yangtze River: almost equivalent to a brigadier general (Chapter 333 Old school) Chief scholar, alternate academician, academician …… 4. Develop a company: a businessman who hunts and trades monsters. ① Develop branch offices: Behind more than 90% of the branches in Blue Star are either Martial Saints or Grandmasters. (Chapter 18 Chen Shouhu, Chapter 28 Extreme Martial Arts, Chapter 38 Beasts) ① Pioneer Army: Temporarily formed that year (Chapter 93 Nobles) ③ Pioneer Team: Generally, pioneers need a blood supply period. (Chapter 13: Martial Arts Research) … 5. Demon Worship Cult: The general name for the forces of various races that seek refuge in foreign demons, and there are many factions among them. ①Huang Meng Sect: Only kill rich people, not ordinary people. ②Rust Temple Rust Priests: The backbone of the force, all possess strange powers. They are top Qi and Blood Realm monks, at least equivalent to the vitality stage, and can almost crush warriors of the same realm. (Chapter 20 Tong Tianxia) ③The Murloc Sect: The bloody formations and patterns are mainly composed of star blood trees and flesh tree roots. The most notorious one, he likes to cause trouble to the world in secret. It is said that he has existed for thousands of years. He later joined the Demon Worship Cult and took refuge in demons and sea monsters. (Chapter 84 Aura) ④Poison Island: The main symbols of the formation pattern are twisted carps and white volcanoes, supplemented by a large number of cracked black and white lines. (Chapter 57: Endless Candle Snake) ⑥Hell Knights (Chapter 102 Poison Light) ... 3. Currency and Rankings 1. Currency: currencies and military merits of each country Military Merits: Obtained through fighting Warcraft, related to promotion to military rank Achievement Points: When the combat merits reach a certain level, the merits of killing low-level monsters will be converted into achievement points. Actual value 1: 1,000 yuan Contribution value: Income earned by civilian personnel for meritorious service. The value ratio is the same as the achievement points: 1:1000 Dragon Country Coins. (Chapter 13 Martial Arts Research, Chapter 92 Leech, Chapter 171 Presumptuous) 2. List Divided into freshmen list, Qi and blood list, innate list and master list Each list is divided into local list, national list, human race list World martial arts list: The body refining realm can be opened, and only the best innate martial arts students in the world can be on the list. (Chapter 28: Extreme Martial Arts, Chapter 178: All-Superior) … Four. Country 1. Dragon Kingdom There is a martial government that maintains the policies of the old era and is relatively safe. (Chapter 29 Quota Certificate) Martial Temple, the Supreme Court (Chapter 314 Tushan) Xiongcheng: New Capital (Chapter 38 Beasts) ... The movement of true energy, changes in the body, breakthroughs in bottlenecks, etc. Can all be sensed. (Chapter 2 Martial Arts Perception) ——Inheritance Sustainability It can enhance the power of all inheritance, culture, civilization and other properties. (Chapter 82 inheritance) Sue death) ——Medicine tonic As long as you don't take medicine randomly, erysipelas will not accumulate, and the efficacy of the medicine will increase to a certain extent. (Chapter 52: Late stage of blood circulation) ——Tough body: opened by Zhou Leng The body of an ordinary person is directly doubled. As the realm continues to improve, the body will continue to strengthen. (Chapter 316 Supernatural Power) …… ①Important historical figures Martial Ancestor Yu Zhimin The Three Saints of Mount Tai: Wu Duanxiong, Wan Yumin, Zhao Dongjun Martial Saint Huang Xuange: Born in the Navy, he is now the Grand Marshal of the Demon City Army of the Dragon Kingdom. (Chapter 164 Extreme Killing) Zhu Shiji: Born as a commoner, relatively idle (Chapter 226 Tenth Gear, Chapter 331 Apprenticeship) …… Bubble Shooting) Martial Arts City app: Everything related to warriors is concentrated in it and bound for life. (Chapter 23 Martial Arts City) … ③Education: Martial Arts University>Military School>Affiliated Martial Arts School (Martial Arts University) Top ten in the country: Yunhua Martial Arts University, Jinjing Martial Arts University Zhejiang Martial Arts University: third (Chapter 174 Picking leaves) Xihai Wuhan University (first in Rucheng, tenth in the country) Top 100: Rucheng Wuhan University: third in Rucheng (Chapter 12 Compensation) East China Wuhan University: second in Rucheng (Chapter 31 Admission) Ordinary Wuhan University: Heyin Wuhan University (Chapter 84 Emmanuel) Zhejiang Wuhan University, Jiangwu University, Shanwu University (Chapter 90 Fang University) (Military Academy) (Affiliated martial arts schools of various martial arts universities) It is under the jurisdiction of the Ministry of Armed Forces and Health and is considered a smaller military academy. Day school system, usually only has classes in the morning, and only teaches martial arts. (Chapter 12 Compensation) The top ten affiliated martial arts schools are not much worse than the martial arts university. (Chapter 15: Celebrating with flowers and eagles striking the sky) (Non-Martial Arts University) Based on the calculation of 750 points in liberal arts, the future direction is to be a civil servant in the martial arts. (Chapter 14 Shenwen Sutra Page) … ④Martial Clan Zhao Clan: The family of the martial sage Zhao Dongjun. Zhao Sheng has been in seclusion for many years, and the contemporary head of the family is at the peak of his master. (Chapter 39 Invitation from the Zhao Clan) Li Clan … ⑤Army Zhen Haijun: Responsible for the East China region centered on the West Sea Magic City. The seventh division is responsible for Shuizhou Magic City. (Chapter 104 Hospital) Second Lieutenant: Normally promotion is during the body refining period. (Chapter 56: Magical Movement) Lieutenant: Normal promotion is in the vitality period, and the promotion condition is to kill more than ten enemies in the vitality period (Chapter 189: Trenches) …… (Chapter 109 Awards) (Xiongcheng) Huahong Development Company: quite powerful, founded by a master. (Chapter 129 Lou Family) Wan Li Tuo Company (Chapter 243 Pinewood) (Rucheng) Because Xihai City was swallowed up by the Demon City, many people moved here, and it was promoted from a county-level city to a top-ranked large city in East China. (Chapter 56: Magical Movement) The Rao family: The great master family has spread its branches in Rucheng and has a great reputation. When Zhao Sheng came to Rucheng, it was also the Rao family who received him. (Chapter 67 Visit, Chapter 170 Linglong) Ruda Affiliated Martial Arts School: Hall owner Wang Boxiong: Zhao Sheng's disciple, Rucheng's top three Xiantian Chief Instructor Huang Jingqiu: Early Xiantian Ordinary Instructor: Vital Period (Chapter 30 Forgot) Bada Development Branch (Chapter 54 Selling Bones) … (Shuizhou Magic City) Across the Yangtze River, close to a large area of Taihu Lake, connecting the eight worlds of the Demon Prison World, the Demon World, the Dwarf World, the Giant World, the Dragon World, the Tree Man World and the Siren World. In order to prevent the spread of monsters, a Shuizhou development base was established where the space barrier was most vulnerable, and was guarded by the Seventh Lion of the Navy. (Chapter 17 Water State Demonic City) Space fluctuation level one: Qi and blood realm monsters, the number will not exceed one thousand. (Chapter 18 Chen Shouhu) Level 5 alert: Either a large number of innate demons or master demons. (Chapter 21 Level 5 Alert) … (Xihai City/Xihai Magic City) Was swallowed by the Xihai Magic City, which is located at the intersection of the Blue Star and Siren worlds. (Chapter 56: Magic) Jinling (Chapter 220: Permissions) --------------------- 2. Eagle Alliance Back then, the Eagle Kingdom split into a loose Eagle Alliance under the influence of the Demon Worship Cult, and the north and the south are still in opposition. (Chapter 28 Extreme Martial Arts) National Magical Power ——Stimulant Mastery Through stimulants, you can obtain a powerful increase in a short period of time. Once you are fully prepared, it will be extremely difficult to deal with. (Chapter 84 Emmanuel) … ①Ten Gates Spencer-Trupp: In the era of science and technology, there were people who served as great commanders and developed vigorously during the alternating period of science and technology and martial arts. ②Education Plinwu University: First in Yingmeng, third in the world Hafwu University: Third in Eagle League, nineteen in the world (Chapter 84 Emmanuel)  …… ③Development Company Shuangjiao Company: Top large-scale development company (Chapter 166 Order) --------------------- 3. Oll Alliance (Chapter 93: Nobles) Decades ago, things went smoothly. Later, the three foreign countries of Dragon, Eagle, and Bear, plus the Demon Worship Cult, began to suck blood and cut flesh. Their right to speak is no longer what it used to be, and they have lost their confidence in the past. (Chapter 281 Advantages)  … ）        …… ，，，，'' The fifty best ones belong to the inner gate, and the fifty worse ones belong to the outer gate. (Chapter 281 Constraints) -------------------------- [Demon Prison World] Origin: The unlucky losers of the Ten Worlds War will become one of the layers of the Demon Prison, and all members will become demons. 1. Eighteen levels of demon prison Almost equivalent to eighteen worlds and more than eighty levels of heaven. (Chapter 72 Candle Arm) Devil Crystal Coin (Chapter 295 Destruction) Temple of Despair Priest of Despair: A unique demon in the Temple of Despair, it looks like a human and does not like to eat people directly. Branches: Heretic Temple, Controller, Supreme Saint (Chapter 57: The Boundless Serpent) 9. Boundless City Endless candlesticks intertwined into giant trees, and candlestick trees surrounded the boundless city, shining with white light, as bright as stars in the sky. ①Lord: The Boundless Candle Snake The owner of the Boundless City, the giant snake that occupies the void, the king of the candle-melting army, the Lord of Longevity, the undefeated king, the ancient one. According to legend, it has dark gold scales all over its body and carries endless rusty bronze candlesticks on its back. The candlesticks are filled with burning white candles. Countless candlesticks are connected together, layer upon layer, like countless fortresses gathered together, embedded in his back, stretching into a mountain, as long as his body. In fact, no one has ever seen his true form. His figure only appears in the chapter on demons and is described as a giant soaring among the stars. There are rumors that the Endless Candle Snake is a god of a higher civilization. What appears on the ninth floor of the Demon Prison is just one of his candlesticks or even just the flame of a candle. ①Lord: Book of All Evils ②Exclusive Demon: Blasphemous Book Boy (Chapter 292 Sold Well) Unless there is an order from the big demon, demons who understand tactics and strategies such as Negi and the Duke of Four Sides are the real commanders. (Chapter 312 Three Choices) ③Legion: Legion of Profane Bachelors (Chapter 292 Good Sell) 12. Hanging Moon Mountains ①Lord: Pale Queen (Chapter 62 Entering the Eye of Dharma) ③Legion: Hanging Moon Legion. (Chapter 292 Sold well) 14. ①Lord: Disaster Prophet ②Exclusive Demon ③Legion: 'Send Death to the Legion (Chapter 101 Glimmer) 15. ①Lord: Lava Dragon Queen of Joy: Enemy of the Temple of Despair …… 2. Demon System [Blood Devouring Realm] Translated is the Qi and Blood Realm, which is divided into lower, middle and upper levels. (Chapter 81 Heavenly Level) [Lower Demon] It is equivalent to the blood circulation period of the human race, which is divided into early, middle and late stages. Even the weakest lower demon requires more than ten people of the same level to have any hope of defeating it. (Chapter 13: Martial Arts Research, Chapter 86: Extreme Realm) [Devil General] Corresponding to the human innate realm (Chapter 25 Principal Lu's plea) ... Starry sky spine-headed demon dragon Starry sky bloodline, lost inheritance, most promoted to a great demon Appearance during the vitality period: other parts of the body are similar to ordinary dragons, with more spikes and more demonic energy. On the spine, there is a second dragon head, its eyes are closed, and in its mouth is a black fireball full of terrifying power. (Chapter 280 Inside and Out) According to legend, the Starry Spine-headed Demonic Dragon has a body length of tens of thousands of kilometers, and its back is covered with spine-headed dragon heads. (Chapter 292 Sell well) Become a master of nature after adulthood (Chapter 298 Borrow) If there is a complete inheritance, you can become a demigod at the age of six and travel among the stars. (Chapter 306 Lobbying) ... 3. Hell Spell Mental shock, mental whipping, place of pain, candlelight (Chapter 102 Poison Light) Poison Light of Consciousness: Ignoring the body, only poisoning the consciousness and soul, the innate and even the master will be severely damaged in martial arts consciousness, and the path to martial arts will be cut off. (Chapter 103 Comfort) Sealing device: can release powerful spells (Chapter 169 Angle) Fear spell, chaos spell, darkness descending, slow curse, wound deepening, heart of sorrow, light of plague, poison totem... (Chapter 207 Cowardice) Summoning disaster: It is necessary to collect massive blood beads, pay a huge price, and invite a real god to come, generally called the god of disaster. The God of Disaster cannot come in his true form, and can only instill power into a demon, whose strength is equivalent to that of a virtual god. (Chapter 323 Old School) ……

First of all, I haven't seen the finale yet. I won't comment on the ending until about 700 chapters, and the ending is definitely not the ending it should have been. * Let me first talk about my feelings as a reader: After reading all the way, the perception is actually very complicated. I read the first few dozen chapters and I was actually very confused before I started to read them. However, out of my trust in Lao Huo, I still saw it getting better intermittently. There are still exciting parts in the early and middle stages. It can be seen that Lao Huo is very good at writing dungeons and upgrades. Many supporting characters are also flesh and blood. I like it very much. But just like Lao Huo said, this is an exploration to improve his writing. He can see some amazing places, but he also discovered many shortcomings. In the later period, especially the part about ascending to the gods, I fell into this kind of "dyslexia" again and couldn't stand it anymore. Not only was it too painful and painful, but the most important thing was that it was unacceptable, but this was the climax of the main plot, written in large strokes by Lao Huahua. Even the time when I was framed in the middle period, it passed quickly anyway, and the reversal of the plot can make up for the previous grievances. It can barely be regarded as suppressing first and then rising. Speaking of this, I have to say that Lao Huo really likes to suppress first and then rise (sigh)! From Confucianism to Martial Arts, the progress in plot arrangement in this aspect cannot be said to be non-existent, but it is not significant. As for the ending, I guess I will still read it intermittently. After all, I have ordered it all. If Lao Huo opens a new book, I will still choose to support it, half out of sentiment and half out of approval. Although Lao Huo's writing depends on his status and inspiration, it is precisely because of some of Lao Huo's characteristics that I like to read it. I hope that the next book will bring better and more exciting works, waiting for you! *Okay, since the first long comment in the essence post is to praise the veteran, let's "criticize" this time 😏 (maybe it is a suggestion?) First of all, the biggest impression and feeling is actually the description of the battle scenes - it is too repetitive and monotonous, as if it is a hard-written description, and this feeling becomes more obvious as you go later. Either it is like a fighting machine that keeps killing and killing, or it is an extreme stream of consciousness, with no description of magnificent scenes and no changing fighting skills. Although martial arts is indeed not as good as magic and can create all kinds of gorgeous special effects, does Lao Huo really not feel that his follow-up is weak and his writing is dry? I think as the author himself, he should know better than us. In fact, battles can also have plot twists and turns. For example, the battle with the monster alliance outside the city can barely be counted. The part where the sea monster infiltrates is quite interesting, but it is still like forcing the twist to be written according to the outline, forcing the climax to be concave, and forcing the protagonist's record and reputation to be promoted. ——I did not deeply resonate with the protagonist's greatness or contrasting ease. It's like an invincible version, but the protagonist is really working hard, and is in an embarrassing state of not being talented enough or accumulated enough. And there is too little feedback from the outside world, and it cannot create a sense of contrast. It is like the author forcefully shows us the character labels and titles, and then tells us that it is reasonable for the protagonist to obtain this achievement. But Lao Huo, you forgot to shape it, a more three-dimensional and more realistic shape. Most of the time, we can't see the protagonist's voice, and we don't know the protagonist's thoughts and motivations, which will make us lack some sense of empathy for the protagonist. But at the same time, there is not enough description of the reactions of the masses. Those supporting characters can only be regarded as examples at best, drawn out as representatives. It is not as good as in Confucianism and Taoism. Readers will follow the perspective of others to witness Fang Yun's destiny for the country and the people, and recognize the deeds of this protagonist together with the people. When we look at novels, we don't look at documentary accounts, nor do we look at the author's private views on sensitive topics. What we see are the protagonists in the book, the world in the book, and all the stories presented in the book - whether they are good or bad. Secondly, it doesn't mean that you can't write about knives, nor that you can't have twists and turns, but the arrangement of plot and rhythm is very important. The same plot, written by authors of different ranks, has completely different feelings. This is the difference in writing power. You can write an important character to death, and his death must be meaningful and not hasty. Death can even add the most important color to the character, making it more charming or impressive. The existence of a character must have a certain effect on the plot. It can be to shape the protagonist's behavior, it can be to promote the development of the plot, it can be to enrich the customs and customs in the background, or it can simply be to spice up the atmosphere and amuse the readers... But it cannot just be because the readers or the author want to see it. Since he occupies a certain space, he must make the best use of it and conform to the logic running in the novel. For example, the scene where Li Shenkong killed Zhao Cong left a deep impression on me. I spent a lot of pen and ink writing about the chat between the two, but there is no mention of how Li Shenkong discovered Zhao Cong's abnormality or psychological changes. Of course, I know that many authors don't save manuscripts very much, so when they are in a bad state, they don't know how to write and just skip it. However, Lao Huo did not add any explanation at the end, which would make it seem like there is a missing piece of the plot, and the readers would seem unable to turn around. As for the subsequent dialogue when killing Zhao Cong, it was indeed barely made up, but this would highlight another problem - the dialogue that should have been a long conversation or interspersed in the daily life of the two previous people seemed particularly inconsistent at this moment of battle and this intense and exciting stage. Spending so much words in a battle is, at best, like a hot-blooded comic, but at worst, it's just a drag on the plot. It can be seen that during that time, Lao Huo was in a state of wanting to "fast forward" the plot, omitting a lot of things and cutting a lot of things. One is, should readers listen to everything they say? The other is, if the plot at this stage is not good, should I fast forward and skip the plot or should I continue writing? It's actually very simple. You can listen but you don't need to listen completely. After all, there are still a lot of silent majority. Some people may not like it while others may like it. As a creator, it is impossible to satisfy everyone's taste. So should we turn a deaf ear and keep writing? There are so many examples of people who insist on going their own way and end up with a bloody head, so there is no need to give examples. How to find a compromise solution? This is a difficult question, but it is also a very simple question - that is, it depends on the author's own level and ability. If you can temporarily change the outline and details and bring it back together, and if you can re-adjust the plot to the point where most readers are basically satisfied, then of course you should change it. If you can do it, why not try it? But if you can't change it all, then there is no problem if you can make it more natural by skipping it. If you don't have the confidence to make this unpopular plot more natural by skipping it, then you might as well continue writing according to the original outline - of course, continuing to write does not mean being too confident in your own way, but that after absorbing everyone's opinions, you will consciously adjust and improve the subsequent plot, and try to make up for it later. The integrity of the story is much more important than the flaws, and the author's attitude is more important than the flaws. Then the plot can be suppressed first and then raised, but the amplitude of the "raise" must be greater than the amplitude of the "suppression". It can also be suppressed to the end and finally explode, but the point of explosion must also be large enough - in short, the readers' emotions accumulated in the early stage must be vented. Otherwise, if you keep holding it back, you will definitely have trouble with the author, right? (Spread your hands) To put it bluntly, rhythm means knowing when to skip, when to write in detail, when to sublimate, and when to relax. It is considered a success if it can smooth down the entire emotion and allow readers to read the story smoothly without getting to the end of the story. Yes, I don't think rhythm refers to when the plot should climax and when it should be foreshadowing. In fact, I thought so at the beginning, but compared with that, being able to restrain one's untimely desire for expression is actually more important. Of course, it doesn't mean that you can't express it. In fact, as a creator, you will definitely have something you want to express—but the key is how to make what you want to express blend into your story without any sense of contradiction, and even add color to the entire story. This is something that should be considered in plot design. In short, if you want to express something, you must put in the effort to "sew" it in. Otherwise, it would be better not to express it at all. The plot design must be considered when setting the outline and details. Some major nodes and foreshadowings must be well known. Only in this way can the story be written smoothly and completely, and there will be no inconsistency and left-brain conflict. How to design the plot? Isn't it the point of online novels to level up and kill monsters and fight in a fun way? Of course not. Internet articles that can achieve certain achievements either have the author's awareness and control, or they accidentally hit it and conformed to this rule. Therefore, breaking down books actually has a certain use. If Lao Huo feels that he has encountered shackles in this regard, he may try to read how other good books are written, analyze and learn their essence. For example, if I want to design a plot in which the protagonist Shanmen is destroyed, then to highlight the tragedy of this climax, I must first write about the entire sect, and write down the details and joy of getting along day and night, so that the readers will have the same feeling of disbelief and sadness as the protagonist. But at the same time, I am not here to deliberately torture the readers, so the climax is best controlled within a certain length, and focus on the psychological and ideological changes of the protagonist, rather than "torture" these lovely supporting characters. Then the question comes again. If we don't write the scene of the mountain gate being destroyed, wouldn't it look light and hasty? Then I have two choices, either barely writing or not writing at all, and then profiling the scene from other angles "in hindsight" and outlining the entire event with a non-existent hand; I can also write the whole process vigorously, bringing out the brilliance and shining points of humanity, so that readers can feel that the supporting characters died with honor, and this scene also sublimates and enriches the image of the characters. Okay, is this plot over? No. An important past that left a deep impression on the protagonist will definitely be mentioned again and play a role in promoting the subsequent plot. It could be a change in mood, it could be some kind of conspiracy hidden behind it, it could be a motivation that prompts the protagonist to pursue a certain goal. All in all, don't let the plot that has been written in large parts be inconsistent with the overall story. Because this is a coherent, long-term story. In addition, Lao Huo should also pay more attention to his health. It shouldn't be necessary for us to say more that physical discomfort will affect his writing state, right? This is also a responsibility to your readers and those who support you. I think I have said it before, I feel that this book has a strong "social animal flavor", and it feels like I am writing a customized article instead of the story I want to write - of course, the jz part must be what Lao Huo wants to write, there is no need to doubt 🙂 Since many readers choose to read it, it means that they can accept a certain degree of private content - provided that this private content will not make people feel uncomfortable, will not affect the normal development of the main plot, and will not cause any sudden logical errors. To put it bluntly, our first need is to read novels and stories, and the second is to seek recognition in concepts. If the author can write well and integrate it perfectly into the storyline, then these personal items can be sublimated themes and have depth. On the contrary, it is pure "private opinion output", just like being suddenly stuffed with shit by someone passing by in the library. Don't worry about whether the shit tastes good or not. First of all, I came to the library to find books and not to eat. Secondly, why would someone bring shit into the library? This does not follow normal logic. Finally, there are no people who really think shit tastes good. . . Okay, back to the "social animal flavor", I don't know if any readers are like me. They feel that the inspiration and enthusiasm of Lao Huo are not as good as the previous books. Even the unfinished Life Hunter that many people criticized, the first and middle stages are very exciting and interesting. It can be seen that Lao Huo likes this setting very much and is writing these stories seriously. There is a passionate driving force in it. But martial arts is much less. I know that Lao Huo chose a subject that he was not good at at the beginning and came here in order to improve his writing skills. But the question is, do you really want to write it? How many of these did you enjoy writing? If it is just torturing myself and the readers, then I think it is indeed a better choice to finish this book early and start a new one early. There are many chapters that can be seen at a glance, like a desperate middle school student's composition - that's the kind. There should be a twist here, so I wrote a twist. It's time to give the protagonist a halo, so I thought about it. Anyway, the characters in the book accept it naturally. As for readers who find it strange, then let it be strange. Writing online articles is also a kind of creation, an expression that is continuously output and can be fed back in real time. Isn't this what makes online articles special? It can be updated in real time and modified in real time, otherwise why not write a physical book? These real-time feedbacks can be advantages or disadvantages. Some authors will be affected by bad comments, but some authors can also use comments to correct their fallacies in time. Netizens come in all kinds of weird ways, and how they view them is actually their own business. So should I write the plot that everyone likes more, or the plot that I like more? This is an eternal topic, but it can also be a very practical problem. Writing plots that people like more may increase subscriptions and fame. To put it bluntly, it means that you have needs in this area, and you think this need is more important than your desire for expression - then just write it, and it is not shabby to make money. Since someone buys it, it means someone likes it. It is normal for people to pay for what they like. Lao Huo should be almost middle-aged now. He should know whether there is any pressure on his family, finances, etc. The present life will always be more important and closer to your reality. If you write a plot that you like more, many people may not be able to accept it, because preference is actually a very personal thing, and it is normal for disagreements to arise. So at this time, it is best to calm down and not get entangled in comments that are different from your own. Instead, pay more attention to whether you have expressed what you want to express and whether you have used "this dish of jealousy". In fact, it is to satisfy one's high-level psychological needs within the legal scope and seek "similar interests" online. At the same time, if someone is willing to buy your account, you can also have an income. The income you get from doing something you like is definitely different. What's more, Lao Huo actually has a big advantage, that is, as a great author, he already has a base of book fans. No matter what, the fault tolerance rate will be higher, and there will always be people willing to buy your book and read your book, which will give you greater confidence to write what you want to write. It seems that this long review is not as long as last time hahaha 😁 But as I write it here, it seems that there is nothing more to say. Then I hope Lao Huo still has the confidence and courage to present a better story! I still remember the ten years you mentioned, and I hope you can encourage us 🙏

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On the road to ascending to the gods, divine writings are very important. Without understanding the divine writings, it is difficult to ascend to the gods. However, the more powerful the divine writings, the more power they contain and the stronger they are. Only if you can withstand it can you read and understand it... (Chapter 141 Fun) ... Hexagonal divine writings The common language of higher civilizations is like six Chinese characters spelled out into a regular hexagon. You can only read them one by one. Only after you understand the first one can you understand the second one. (Chapter 14 Golden Page of Divine Inscriptions) Each six-sided cube of divine inscriptions is composed of six different 'side characters'. Each face text can be oriented in four directions: up, down, left, and right, and each direction represents a different meaning. The six-sided text can be distributed on different sides of the hexahedron and in different positions, representing different grammars. The rotation of an equirectangular cube is divided into counterclockwise rotation, clockwise rotation, up and down rotation, and bottom and up rotation. It is also divided into ordinary rotation, vertical rotation and oblique rotation (Chapter 26 Ten Inverse Beast Fist) ... Plane Divine Inscriptions Plane Divine Inscriptions are often carved from multiple angles, and then readers piece them together from multiple angles, making it more difficult to read than three-dimensional Divine Inscriptions. There are also some sacred texts that were originally three-dimensional and dynamic, but as time passed, they lost their power and became static at a certain moment, imprinted into a flat surface, making it more difficult to interpret. (Chapter 111: Unraveling the Monument) … Divine dialogue: High civilization is suitable for children. Ordinary divine texts: Random creation is fine. Cultivation of divine inscriptions: lasting, even eternal, requires advanced cultivation and powerful basic divine inscription skills, which is difficult for ordinary virtual gods. The true cultivation of divine literature must at least use a star as the 'base'. (Chapter 274 Aura) Chaos God Movement: The power formed by powerful divine words (Chapter 141 Movement)

Internal Strength: [Xuan Tide Jue] Due to the continuous flow and layer-by-layer superposition of the skills, the total amount of true energy is 10% higher than that of warriors of the same realm, and practicing under the giant frost tree will increase it by an additional 5%. (Chapter 9: Asylum of Ancient Civilization) [Zhenhai Map] I learned from the inheritance of the heavenly level, covering the Xuan Tide Art, the layering and reversion characteristics are retained, and can be recovered in battle, which is equivalent to three more levels of true energy. The destructive power is more than twice that of before. (Chapter 86: Extreme Realm, Chapter 99: After the Break) After studying the Zhenhai Remnant Monument, I visualized the 3-minute cosmic tsunami, and a surge of pride arose in my heart. This body is like a tsunami, and one hand can hold stars. (Chapter 201 Tsunami) Psychic: six steamed purple bamboos, each with thirty-three bamboo branches. (Chapter 261 Purple Bamboo) Shenxing Jue Practicing the general outline of Shenxing Jue and changing it according to the general outline of Shenxing Jue will increase the power by 50%. (Chapter 268, full text) Next chapter. (Chapter 270 Mine) The true energy is completely integrated (Chapter 330 Counterattack) ... Open the national magical power - Tough Body The improvement is four to five times that of others. (Chapter 316 Supernatural Power) …… Refining method: [Ten Beast Fist] The first picture, standing up the elephant (Chapter 26 Ten Nibeast Fist) …… Martial body: [Immortal Star] The will completely wraps up Ceres, the introduction to the technique (Chapter 279 Miller) ... External skills: (Chongshan Fist) The tenth style, rising from the moon (Chapter 48: Kingly Way of Warfare) - Mastering the third heaven (Chapter 4, Promotion) - Mastering the fifth heaven (Chapter 9, Shelter of Ancient Civilization) - Mastering the sixth heaven (Chapter 23, Martial Arts City) - Xiaocheng, the first heaven (Chapter 27) Test at the beginning of school) ——Xiaocheng Fifth Heaven ——Perfection (Chapter 190 Perfection) ——Extreme Realm (Chapter 277 Fingering) ——Tongshen (Chapter 321 Ancestral Land) …… (Dielang Palm) Ebb and flow: attack and defense integrated (Chapter 168) Surrounded) The sixth move, the river flows into the sea (Chapter 70: Taking the stage) The seventh move, Double Dragons coming out of the water (Chapter 48: Kingly Fighting Techniques) The wind rises and the tide rushes to the shore (Chapter 71: Collapse) The twelfth move: Water entangled tornado (Chapter 256: Unusual movement) The sixteenth move: Island falls into the sea (Chapter 20) Tong Tianxia) The waves rolled down and the Qiujiang River swept across the river (Chapter 174 excerpt) Hundreds of rivers returned to the sea: 300,000 times of practice, understanding to the limit, only twice as much power as ordinary tricks. (Chapter 192 Cherish) ——Xiao Cheng Tenth Level (Chapter 4 Promotion) ——Dacheng Third Level (Chapter 9 Ancient Civilization Asylum) ——Dacheng Fourth Level (Chapter 23 Martial Arts City) Extreme Realm) ——Extreme Realm ——To communicate with the gods (Chapter 277 Fingering) The ultimate move-Thousands of tides pour into the sea: Based on the creation of the rivers flowing into the sea and the hundreds of rivers returning to the sea, the four palms accumulated during the blood transport period are formed (Chapter 70 The ultimate move). It is a move in the middle of the body refining period (Chapter 184) Blue) It was successively integrated into the island falling into the sea, the storm hitting the sky and the two dragons coming out of the water, forming five killing moves, the first qualitative change. Five moves in one, Thousand Chaos Sea (Chapter 282 Blue Dragon) ... (Flying Cloud Legs) Seventh move, breaking through the sky and breaking clouds (Chapter 47 Breaking through the sky and breaking clouds) Asylum of ancient civilization) ——Mastery of the Eighth Heaven (Chapter 23 Martial Arts City) ——Xiaocheng First Heaven (Chapter 27 School Start Test) ——Xiaocheng Sixth Heaven ——Dacheng Tenth Heaven, Perfection (Chapter 180 Demonic Attack) ——Perfection (Chapter 190 Perfection) ——Taking God (Chapter 277) Fingering) ... (Bagua Step) Stepping on the Xunfeng (Chapter 48: Kingly Ways of War) ——Xiaocheng 9th Heaven (Chapter 4: Promotion) School opening test) ——Dacheng Sixth Heaven ——Dacheng Tenth Heaven, Perfection (Chapter 180 Demonic Attack) ——Taking God (Chapter 277 Finger Technique) …… (Wandering Cloud Body Technique) Lead Cloud Suddenly Falling (Chapter 48 Royal Tactics) ——Mastering the Seventh Heaven (Chapter 4) Improvement) ——Mastery of the Eighth Heaven (Chapter 9: The Protection of Ancient Civilization) ——Mastery of the Ninth Heaven (Chapter 23: Martial Arts City) ——Xiao Cheng First Heaven (Chapter 27, School Opening Test) —— Xiao Cheng 4th Heaven ——Dacheng is almost perfect (Chapter 182 Fight Again) Perfection) ——Extreme Realm (Chapter 277 Fingering) ——Connecting to the Gods (Chapter 321 Ancestral Land) …… (Stepping on the Clouds): 'Double Step' Lifting (Flying Crane) ——(Chapter 73 Lifting) ——Mastery (Chapter 117 Chase) ——Dacheng (Chapter 227 Tenth Gear) ——Extreme Realm (Chapter 277 Finger Technique) …… (Breaking Finger) The third style, star piercing, change of moves, big star piercing (Chapter 294 Impact) ——Getting Started: Release one centimeter of true energy from the fingertips (Chapter 305) Mountain top) …… Body protective clothing: Taiqing Haiyi (Chapter 310 Haiyi) …… Tactic method - mind splitting: ——Like choosing one from six (Chapter 97 Killing move) ——Like choosing one from ten (Chapter 189 Trench) ——Like twelve in one (Chapter 286) Three moves) ——The second stage, all changes follow the heart (Chapter 233: Fighting Tiger) … Divine text: One divine text (Chapter 14, Divine Text page) Two divine texts (Chapter 66, Third) Two and a half (Chapter 82, Inheritance) Twenty methods of pronunciation of divine texts (Chapter 138) Pronunciation) Write down the eight (Chapter 263: Passing on the Kung Fu) first four characters of the Shenxing Jue (Chapter 265: Old Man) Learn the twelve-character divine text of the general outline of the Shenxing Jue (Chapter 267, full text) ... [Four Strange Bodies] Qi: given by the giant frost tree Blood: obtained by drinking dragon marrow and blood bones (Chapter 139) Chasing Beasts) Body: Steel Skin: Retrieve the Eye of the Ancient God for the dwarves and participate in the protection of the ancestors. (Chapter 150: Roasted) Giant Body: Obtained by passing the Giant Trial, participating in the Ancestral Protection, and inspiring the King of Armor to repair it. (Chapter 216 Exploding Shirt) Power: Incomplete Mammoth Power (Chapter 107 Eight Teeth) …… Martial Arts Will: Mountain of Will (Chapter 92 Enlargement) First Realm Rock (Chapter 232) Steel Sound 7) ... [Qi and Blood Realm - Qi Nourishing Period] [Small Success in Zhenqi] Injured by the devil, the body can only mobilize seven points of Zhenqi, and luck can continue to run for 3 minutes and 9 seconds. Eating meat and medicinal food (stewed with scraps from the demon wolf in the Qi and Blood Realm) (Chapter 1 Zhou Leng) Luck run can last 3 minutes and 10 seconds. (Chapter 2 Martial Arts Sense) …… [Xiao Cheng Third Heaven] (Chapter 3 Frost Giant Tree) The luck run lasts for 4 minutes and 18 seconds, and then eat meat and medicinal food (Chapter 4 Improvement) … [Xiaocheng Fourth Heaven] (Chapter 8 Fairy Treasure Land) One Qi-nourishing pill) Practice under a giant frost tree with thirty to forty times the concentration of spiritual energy. Take two Qi-enhancing pills. Meat medicated diet, nourishing Qi pills, and high-concentration spiritual energy are added together. After practicing for 10 hours, the duration of the luck run reaches 4 minutes and 23 seconds. (Chapter 8 Immortal Treasure Land) Xiao Cheng Third Heaven (Chapter 3 Frost Giant Tree) …… [Xiao Cheng Nine Heavens] (Chapter 9 Protection of Ancient Civilization) …… [Zhen Qi Dacheng] The luck run can last for 4 minutes and 56 seconds. When photographed with one palm, the red bricks will turn into broad bean-sized stones. (Chapter 14 Shenwen Sutra Page) Take a Bu Yuan Pill and a Nourishing Qi Pill. (Chapter 17 Water Island Demonic City) …… [Dacheng Three Heavens] (Chapter 23 Martial Arts City) (The first form of the Lixiang chapter, eight cycles) Every time you practice, you have to take three marching pills to relieve hunger. (Chapter 26: Ten Inverse Beast Fist) …… [Dacheng Five Heavens] (Chapter 27: Test at the Beginning of School) No luck running 5000 meters at 9 minutes, 13 seconds and 05 seconds. (Chapter 32: What I Want) Purely physical weightlifting 496.5Kg, boxing strength 507.25Kg (Chapter 34: Soft Persimmon) Using true energy to lift 2054.35Kg. (Chapter 35 Intensity Meter) Twenty kilometers, thirty kilograms of weight-bearing running back and forth, taking a large tonic pill and meat medicated diet (Chapter 37 Zhao Clan's invitation) … [Dacheng Tenth Heaven] Without luck, you can do 61 one-arm pull-ups. (Chapter 40 Commendation Begins) After taking the second Bu Yuan Pill, Luck surpassed the limit of perfect Qi nourishment, reaching 5 minutes and 31 seconds. ``credious' sincerity. (Chapter 50: Perfect Qi nourishment) The body is covered with Hunyuan, and the inner Qi is overflowing: practicing under the giant frost tree for three days (Chapter 51: The Qi explodes in the fog) --------------------- [Blood circulation period] Chief instructor Huang Jingqiu protects the Dharma, and the true Qi circulates in the blood vessels for ninety-nine and eighty-one cycles. Take the Blood-Building Pill and the fourth Bu-Yuan Pill, and then take one Blood-Building Pill every day. (Chapter 52: Blood Transport Period) Lifting weight without Zhen Qi is 658.7 Kilograms, while lifting weight with Zhen Qi is 3029 kilograms. Daily weight-bearing of 400kg for four sets, luck running 9 minutes and 10 seconds. (Chapter 53: Seizing Heaven Level) ... (The first form of the Lixiang chapter, insist on 26 cycles) Practice once, the basic cost is one blood-tonifying pill, two big tonic pills, a meat and medicinal meal (+ one tonic pill) (Chapter 68: Nili) … Three meat-medicated meals in the cafeteria every day, one blood-tonifying pill, and three to five large tonic pills. With the blessing of Qinggong, the speed reaches 25 meters per second and 900 kilometers per hour. (Chapter 73: Qinggong) …… Rhubarb dug out the door to purgatory (Chapter 75: Door frame) To withstand 1791 times of war, eat a lower meat medicinal diet and a big tonic pill. (Chapter 76 Swordsman) Withstood 6104 knives (Chapter 155 Full Hundred) Withstood 9342 knives (Chapter 230 Smart) Passed through the first and second levels of the Insect Beast Valley a thousand times (Chapter 254 Insect Beast) The fourth level of Red Lotus Fire Hell: withstood 75 seconds (Chapter 122) Hell) …… 5 kilometers, 8 minutes and 15 seconds. (The test occurred in Chapter 77 Failure, the data comes from Chapter 177 Three Tests) (Lixiang chapter first form limit: 36 cycles) Take the eleventh Buyuan Pill, Ningshen Pill, ten Big Boosting Pills, twenty Marching Pills, and three servings of Meat Medicinal Diet. Can cook 30 plates of rice. (Chapter 79, Cycle 36) Thirteen Buyuan Pills have been taken. (Chapter 81 Heavenly Level) (Ten moves can kill, monsters in the early stage of blood transport) (Chapter 82 Inheritance) ... (Condensing the phantom of the mountain of martial arts) Taking the Red Spirit Fruit and Divine Marrow Blood Bone, strengthened the blood vessels and body. (Chapter 90 Enlargement) (One palm of the Overlapping Wave Palm can kill the lower-level early-stage demon) Take the Buyuan Pill and some other elixirs. (Chapter 92 Leeches) Eat 21 Bu Yuan Pills. (Chapter 93: Nobles) After taking 41 Bu Yuan Pills, it can be regarded as a "ten million body". (Chapter 107 Eight Teeth) Daily ingredients: one innate meat medicated diet, and three meals of ordinary meat medicated diet as a starting point. (Chapter 108 One Arm) … No luck lifting 987.5 Kg, Zhenqi lifting 4915.9 Kg, and daily dumbbell squats with a weight of 600 kg. (Chapter 111 Unraveling the Monument) Two hundred one-handed pull-ups without true energy, 1205.3 Kilograms of magic steel plate weightlifting, 700 kilograms of daily training, light kung fu maintained for 5 minutes and 52 seconds, 39 meters per second, and a speed of 140 kilometers per hour. (Chapter 123 All are clear) Open the ore to get six times the spiritual energy jade (Chapter 116 Step Packet) Take three Qi-nourishing pills (Chapter 117 Chase) Take one Bu Yuan pill, Bu Xue pill and Nourishing Qi pill. (Chapter 120 Broken Heart) Eaten 66 Buyuan Pills (Chapter 127 Map) ... (Second Form of the Lixiang Chapter, 17 cycles) Eaten Buyuan Pills and Nourishing Wei Leaves (Chapter 112 Fruit) The fruit of the original demon entered the body (Chapter 121) Note) …… [Late stage of blood circulation] Withstand seven 75-second Red Lotus Fire Hell, eliminate the demonic nature, and integrate all the power into the heart and blood vessels. (Chapter 123 All are clear) ... Eat the Dust Demon Fruit and strengthen your body (Chapter 141 Music) Absorb the remaining power of the Eye of the Ancient God, and your whole body will expand in a circle, full of power. The higher the realm, the faster it is released. One-finger handstand, one-finger squats 100 times (Chapter 143 Old Love) Grip strength 672 kilograms (Chapter 144 Solving the case) Absorbing the light of the ancient gods again (Chapter 146 Meeting) ... (Complete 36 cycles of the second pose, 24 cycles of the third pose) (Chapter 147 Compensation) … (Ti Qishen - Steel Skin): The strength of the skin is comparable to that of a master, more tough than steel, infused with true energy, and much stronger than thin steel armor. (Chapter 150: Roasting) A sense of combat is about to be formed, and the true energy is stronger than most mid-term training stages. He does squat training with a load of 1,000 kilograms without true energy. (Chapter 153: Drawing) (Complete the third pose of the Standing Elephant, 17 cycles of the fourth pose) Eat 100 Yuan Bu Yuan Pills, Ning Shen Dan, the third Yuan Bao Dan, and three Strengthening Pills. (Chapter 155 Difficulties) —— Physical Refining Period The three times of fusion of Qi, blood and flesh, the body is delicate and under control. Take elixirs such as the Three Promotion Pills and the Blood Replenishing Pills to solidify the foundation. (Chapter 156: Body Training) Lifting 4,312 kilograms without true energy, turning bricks into powder and scattering in the wind. (Chapter 159: Pai Brick) … The killer move is to sever the mid-stage body refining siren's arm with one palm. (Chapter 162 Siren) I took 6 body-building pills, one high-quality meat medicated meal and two ordinary medicated meals. (Chapter 163 Jin Supplement) …… (Complete the fourth form of the Standing Elephant Chapter, 35 cycles of the fifth form) The speed is 54 meters per second, and the speed is 194 kilometers per hour. (Chapter 167 Racing) Training without squats is 2 tons, and Qi squats are at least 5 tons. (Chapter 171 Presumptuous) Practice the Ten Ni Beast Fist once a day. 5 kilometers, 4 minutes and 06 seconds, weight lifting 4503.5 Kilograms without Zhenqi Three meals a day of ordinary meat medicated meals, one high-grade meat medicated meal, one blood-tonifying pill, one body-building pill, three large tonic pills, supplemented by high-energy supplements. I took 12 Xiangti pills. (Chapter 177 Three Tests) ... (Complete the fifth form of the Standing Elephant Chapter, 30 cycles of the sixth form) After eating a one centimeter section of the spirit kidney of a ferocious beast, I practiced the Standing Elephant Chapter for the second time, and the effect was remarkable. It slightly enhanced the strength of the true energy, and was infinitely close to the middle stage of body training. (Chapter 179 New Year) Take the blood-boosting pills (Chapter 181 Pearl) …