Misty Rain in the Old Days

This author probably has too many private goods. . . . . . . . . . . .

It was written carefully before it was put on the shelves, but after it was put on the shelves, The Master began to show off. If the characters and stories were poorly presented, it does not mean that the author also failed to present it! I'm glad I didn't subscribe because I was afraid something like this would happen.

The rhythm is steady, the writing skills are relatively high among online novels, and the plot logic is flawless. I hope the author will be patient and write it down, and it will definitely become a classic.

This book is actually very good to read slowly. Although it is really wordy in some places, I personally think it is very good overall. I especially like the character Zhao Qingyuan, but it is a pity that there are not many scenes 😁😁

Oops, the author has a lot of resentment. In the previous ten or twenty chapters, he said every now and then that it was better to be a dog or a slave in ancient times than to be a social animal in modern society. It's really interesting. I don't know where I thought the resentful woman came from 😁

The character development of the protagonist was a failure. Looking at the introduction, I thought he was a calm person, but when I walked in, he turned out to be a talkative person. The author makes it clear between the lines that the protagonist will not be shackled to the Gao family in the future, but the protagonist written by the author is really only qualified to be a servant.

😥 After reading it for a long time, it turned out to be a Virgin novel. The robbers want to rob women and kill men. The protagonist has incredible martial arts and just made a joke to let the robbers go away. What kind of plot?

The writing style is too childish, like youth literature. The description of the little princess is really like a junior high school romance novel.

What is extremely unreasonable about this book is that the host family attaches so much importance to a 5-year-old child of unknown origin, and the things given to him are seriously inconsistent with his age.

Black lives matter, political correctness in Europe and the United States. The heroine in this article is a black woman, and she is a black and ugly black woman. If you haven't read it, you can avoid it.

In the early stage, he was cautious and had a low IQ, but in the middle stage, he suddenly turned into a talkative and naughty kid. This book will definitely be written by Li Li.

This foreshadowing is perfect. It's appropriate to change the name to Travel Through the Daily Life of a Little Book Boy.

The style changes suddenly in the back, and the show becomes too showy and greasy. After watching the beginning, you can already guess how it will go at the end. It is a bit slow in the early stage, and those who like it will continue to watch it, but those who don't like it will give up early. In the later stage, I feel that the author thinks he is being stubborn, but in fact, he has used all kinds of tricks to show off his face, and the progress is obviously forced to speed up. Anyway, I feel that the plot is very torn, and both those who like the slow show and those who don't like the slow show are watching Silence.

After reading Chapter 90, is this plot arrangement reasonable? In the front, I wrote eloquently about being abducted and being a book boy. Martial arts is basically not mentioned. There is not much introduction to these cultivation systems at all. Suddenly, the martial arts master was involved, and he said that he was going to deal with the disaster. The martial arts master was a arrogant person. It's too out of line, too abrupt. It's really unlucky to see this guy eating a fly.

First let's talk about the author's writing style. Liu Shui Wen is a little above the level. In this fast-paced life, it's okay to watch it occasionally to pass the time. In the end, this is a pure online article without any depth of thought or meaning. Students cobble together some social suffering, but deliberately ignore the causes of these sufferings. Its purpose is simply to highlight the character of the protagonist. What a waste of nine-year compulsory education.

Is there really a book I can read in Qidian?

This book is suspected of selling dog meat to others. It looks like a classic fairy tale, but it is actually another copy of "The Best Servant" and can only be read as a daily novel. There is neither immortality nor chivalry, and most of them are just moaning.

After reading 40 chapters, to be honest, I didn't think it was a bad book. But it deserves to be exempted from the restriction. It's 40 chapters, and it's not fun at all. It's not a qualified commercial web article at all. But it's really not a bad book. So far there is no problem. But you deserve it, no one will see it

After reading more than 200 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The slow-paced writing in the early stage is a little bit toxic and not very enjoyable. I can still read it. When I saw old man Xiantian Liu was raped, I was confused. Before he was raped, the whole world thought he was just an ordinary river crossing man, and then he was arrested by the Yamen. After Wenzhan said that he is one of the few innate bosses, I can only say 666, it can still be written like this, and then Guigui gave the protagonist everything he has learned in his life. At that time, I thought it was too blunt and I didn't want to read it, but I persisted in reading it. But the slow pace of more than 200 chapters is not a slow pace, it is a real hydrology. There are countless flaws in it, and the battle of wits and courage scenes are too childish, so I abandoned it.

After reading Chapter 18, I didn't feel any pleasure. The writing is okay. It's too long-winded and detailed. It's boring to read. Except for the character of the protagonist, I can't tell anything else about it. The fairy tale is also history. The final evaluation is too slow. Of course, some people like it, but I don't like it 😰

This book is completely useless. Those updated later don't even have chapter names. The whole article is described in detail like a running account. Very discouraging. I feel like this limited exemption won't increase the average ordering much. This book was rewritten and more than 70% of the nonsense was deleted. Probably ok. But there are merits. In short, this book is not 💩

He is quite an old author, and his writing style is quite good. If it is placed in a relatively daily life, and the main line is peaceful, it is no problem. But I don't know why this one, why he chose a conflict story about being kidnapped at the beginning. The author is actually not good at it. He also chose a two-fool protagonist, and then integrated a lot of ancient routines. In addition, the author himself has some second-generation literati, which is somewhat similar. The pedantic writing style and many plots in which the protagonist talks about morality but does not actually do it well have resulted in a large number of bad reviews. These coupled with the entire main plot, have led to frequent problems in various aspects. In fact, if it were a book about living in seclusion in the world, or cultivating oneself outside the world, the problem would not be so big. For example, those in the end of the Dharma era, deep in the mountains Cultivation of immortality, showing miracles, or walking in the city, hiding in the city, meeting the destined person by chance, and being cool and unrestrained, On the contrary, the author can easily get a large number of subscriptions because of the author's writing style. Under these themes, even if you express some personal opinions on good and evil, have incorrect views or double standards, as long as there is no big pressure on the main line or too much plot conflict, it will not matter. It resulted in serious negative effects. After all, it was just talk, and no character died or was harmed by it. But I chose one with a lot of conflicts. The protagonist kept talking about the Virgin's words, but failed to save the children who were traveling with him. Later, when he gained strength, he ignored it. Then the negative comments it brought skyrocketed and was blown away. Although I don't eat "joys and sorrows" very much." But the whole generation of hot-tempered diodes seems to have no room for tolerance, which means that the author's old habits cannot control the current mainstream market at all -You must know that a few years ago there was a trend of bragging about Cao Cao, or Cao Liu divided the world, but now they are all scolding Cao, and no opinions are allowed, except for one sentence: "You don't like Liu Bei" "Then you go and become human meat." "What is it about Liu Bei that you don't like? He deserves to be made into military rations by Cao Cao." It can be seen that the market has changed a lot, and this change has been brought to other articles, which will lead to the protagonists being inconsistent or slightly hypocritical. Especially the author's old-fashioned writing style and plot development, it is very easy to be criticized. In fact, it's quite strange. They can accept a person who is double-dealing for fun, smiling and being nice to people one second, stabbing people to death the next, but they can't accept this. But they can handle it by changing their thinking. What they want is chaos, but only chaotic neutrality and chaotic good. Lawful evil and chaotic evil are not acceptable. Chaotic evil has a strong taste, and lawful evil It makes them feel hypocritical and will be resisted The protagonist of this article is lawful neutral, leaning towards lawful evil, and there are no jokes, and fun writing is basically not allowed, so there are many negative reviews. Finally, this book has too many poisonous points in the early stage. It is estimated that the author has not learned to avoid poisons for a long time, which is the last straw.

The logic of the story is a bit far-fetched, and the thinking is divorced from reality, which is too childish.

The old boatman, a human trafficker, became a martial arts master, and he also has a magic sword that can be summoned? ? ! Inexplicable plot, is this martial arts or immortality? This author's style is very strange. I have read a book about the world before. The opening chapter also describes the suffering of the world from a bottom perspective. The writing is okay, but then the style suddenly changes and becomes mindless, as if it was written by a different person.

Can the protagonist give me some talent? If you don't have bloodline talent, why don't you have a photographic memory? No, sixty chapters are just mediocre! Thank you!

The novels by the author of Shan Pao ✍🏻 are so funny. I write them one by one, hahaha

How much is the foot wrap filled with? Push once in a while. Push once in a while. How disgusting

The first few chapters are okay, but after a few dozen chapters you can feel that the author is young and his writing style is very immature. He has added a lot of unrealistic fantasies of his own. I think I will laugh when I read it in a few years.

The author can read Jin Yong's books when he has time. The writing is concise and concise, with very little nonsense. Only after the writing level improves, more people will pay.

6 monthly passes are given away, please improve, the pig's feet can release their own skills 😁😁😁