Nanshanyin

This book has changed since I left the mountain and opened a medical clinic, because the main focus is seclusion, farming, and natural flow. It turned out that it was fine in the past, and it was not bad to go out to travel in the mortal world occasionally, but now I live outside for a long time. I don't go into the woods anymore, and I don't go back to my home. I don't explore the flowers, plants, beasts, and forests anymore. I just started fighting for hegemony... Well, if you want hegemony, you can fight for hegemony. What the hell is the monk of Bukong Temple? Pretending to slap someone in the face to upgrade? As a result, you don't upgrade, you don't practice martial arts, you don't create Taoist or spiritual techniques, and you don't practice Kung Fu. After more than two hundred chapters, you are still just building a foundation. You haven't even left the novice village. Super powerful methods like health-preserving skills from previous lives are being spread everywhere. You start to say things that no one else can understand. How about you? , Taught him step by step, and after teaching, he encouraged Li Datou to carry it forward. He only had this one book of exercises as the foundation for a time traveler, and he didn't have any secrets at all. He didn't know where his confidence came from. He clearly relied on Mo Ling to support him, and he kept saying that there is a difference between a human and a monster. Are you your master? Why didn't you think about the difference between a human and a male when you were blocked at the door of your house and beaten for causing trouble? Why don't you think about the other person's horror when you go out all day long? Nausea……

The contemporary Confucius Saint——Mr. Shi Wen!

I think you are too blunt.

The plot is a bit broken. I feel like there is no outline. I just write whatever I think of. The leader of the cult organization just dies. It's a little too frivolous and unclear, like a passerby. . . Come out to get your lunch. . . . . Why is a cult organization like that, black or white, evil or good? According to the setting of this book, every character should be flesh and blood and impressive. If it is well written, maybe it can be adapted into a film and television. I still hope that the author will not feed poison🙂🙂. It is not easy to read and write.

The early part of the book is pretty good. When I read it, I really felt that it was a kind of life that people yearn for, but I can't write a lot of this kind of thing, so I still have to use fantasy to make up for it. How can I put it, the author's writing style is definitely better than more than 80% of the Qidian writers now, but there are still problems. As for the big snake turning into a girl, it gave me the feeling that it was the same routine that Qidian used to use a few years ago. But I can't criticize him because of this. I can only hope that the next book will not collapse. Updates don't matter. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It should be the most appetizing and best novel I have read in the past six months. No matter what. Maybe this book won't be so popular. Not surprisingly, Persistence is also an indispensable masterpiece this year.

This book gave me a new feeling. It was very interesting. I read it in one sitting.

The support is pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

What happened recently? Are you drifting off? Or am I unable to lift the knife? I started to stop updating.

Not bad, very good. Come on, author! I wish you to reach the next level!

I feel that the character created by the author is not an abnormal person.

I always want to keep it for a while before reading it. After all, the author is always so short and weak, but I can't help it... Damn it You think it's easy for me to finally come across a book that suits my appetite? I Well, and then, I confiscated the money

I tried to force myself to write about a feeling of being indifferent and independent from the world, but I always came up short. He obviously wanted to pretend that he was like a breeze blowing on his face, but he ended up turning purple. The author's writing is not strong enough, I feel it would be better to improve his writing style. After reading Chapter 90, I have forgotten the names of the first and second female characters who appeared. They lack a sense of presence, and every little story is not that interesting.

I haven't read it, but I found it embarrassing after reading the introduction.

Eunuch 😭

This book really suits my taste, I like this kind of unrestrained life

I like it, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง.

The writing is great, come on, don't care too much about other people's opinions and opinions.

Strength can be improved quickly, and the world must be explored slowly (exploring forests, identifying medicinal materials, understanding martial arts, etc.), Which is interesting. . The author writes very well, I like it👍👍👍

This kind of life is what I yearn for, haha!

If you keep writing in such a blunt way, be careful we will abandon the book! ! ! ! The early stage has been well prepared, so we are waiting to see the love between shemales and shemales, but in the end, there is a different path for shemales. Do you plan to have another real fragrance theorem after that? ! ! You said that relationships need to be cultivated, and that things like falling in love over time are fine, but it turns out that the individual monsters have different paths and races! The transfiguration is not an apparition! The structure has changed, where is the difference? ! ! ! Not being together is the real way to go! ! Xu Shilin, who was born to Bai Suzhen, is also a good person! ! ! Could there be a variant? Life is like a snake's tail? Then we can no longer be descendants of Nuwa!

If the author's book is too bad, no matter how good his next book is, I won't read it.

As an old bookworm, I am not good at expressing myself, but I still want to talk about what attracted me to this book. 1. The growth of the protagonist's mentality: In these short 60 chapters, the protagonist not only shows me the mentality of an adult or successful person who calmly faces reality after losing everything he has used, but also shows that a person cannot give up his desire to live no matter how difficult the environment is. There is also the change in the protagonist's mentality when building a home. It can be said that starting from Chapter 60, the protagonist truly has a sense of independence from the world. 2. The environment slowly changes with the growth of the protagonist: environmental description is one of the three elements of the novel. It can be said that an excellent environmental description technique is the soul of a novel. In these 60 chapters, the environmental description does not seem to be anything special, but it makes people feel very natural and refreshing. In fact, it is the effect of the protagonist's inner environment and the external environment that reflect each other, making the reader have a sense of substitution in the inner environment and yearning for the world where the protagonist lives. This is one of the most attractive aspects of this work for me. Interested book friends can comment below on what you like. You are also welcome to point out the shortcomings of this work 🙂.

I think Qidian should stipulate a clause when signing the contract. To ensure the interests of readers, Eunuch must return subscription income to readers after it is put on the shelves.

The ground is plowed, and the bees are ready to be used, right~

I haven't found a book with a similar artistic conception in more than a year. The content of Shan Ye Xianyun is similar but the number of words is just a few words to make up the plot. The beginning of this book is very good, and it has a fairy-like flavor, but at the end of the book, it recruits a disciple who may have a perverted personality, and spreads the skills throughout the world in preparation for changing the world. The book is useless at the beginning.

This book started really well, but it started to fall apart as soon as I went shopping. I visited a few places, unfolded a bunch of useless plots, and then the surrounding maps had no intention of expanding at all. Then new maps suddenly appeared later, until the black snake turned into a human. The protagonist's dog-like appearance was extremely disgusting. He called his neighbors, which was actually like seeing a ghost. I also keep emphasizing the separation between humans and monsters. I feel that the male protagonist dislikes others to death. Besides, it is possible to expand this new map in Lightning Strike Mountain, but the protagonist just avoids others to show himself how stupid I am and how I am. On the other hand, I don't mind showing others how strong I am. As a result, I can't show my skills or anything else. The same goes for people. Let's talk about the Five Poison Cult. The protagonist has already known that the Five Poison Cult is causing harm to women everywhere, but the inner thought of the protagonist in the original text is that I am here to live a peaceful life, so I won't cause trouble. The Five Poison Cult is none of my business. The protagonist knows that the leader of the Five Poison Cult is talented, and he also knows that he has the ability to solve such a tragic tragedy, but he doesn't care about it. He has no sense of justice in his heart, but the latest chapter turns around and writes that the protagonist pities the women who were captured. The plot of dealing with the Five Poison Cult really makes me laugh to death. It didn't matter when I first knew that the Five Poison Cult was a cancer in the human body. Even the leader of the Five Poison Cult was killed because he felt that the other party would come back to cause trouble for him. But now he has a sudden sense of justice? Isn't it just that you have to pretend to be a righteous person in front of others? Don't you feel hypocritical and disgusting? At the beginning, the protagonist is set as a big boss who has experienced great storms, but the way the protagonist handles problems is completely opposite. It is childish and terrifying. Whether it is killing the leader of the Five Poisons or his subsequent attitude towards the Five Poisons, he thinks the Five Poisons are rubbish but troublesome, so he teaches his disciples? Is this how the boss handles things? At the beginning, the protagonist is set as a person who just wants to live a peaceful life, as if Tao Yuanming returned to the countryside to live in the countryside. However, as the writing goes on, it gives the impression that the protagonist is conscious of being detached from the world. He goes to watch movies everywhere, opens a medical clinic, and returns home to farm several times. It is all just to compose new lyrics to express his sorrow. It is impossible to see that the protagonist wants to live a pastoral life. All in all, the character of the main character in this book is completely broken, completely broken.

I forced myself to write two or three chapters about gay love. . . Don't really good friends all want to be each other's dads?

I really want to lock you in a dark room and let you out after you finish your book.

I have been following it until now. As a loyal fan and reader, I have some things to say and feel unhappy about. After I came out of the mountain and interacted with people, I felt that the protagonist was a bit like a virgin, always doing thankless things. Of course, this is acceptable. Until later, the protagonist is powerful but has been looked down upon by others. Youbi can't pretend, and this kind of buff that forcibly lowers the IQ of the people around him is barely acceptable. Mo Ling's confession and forcing the protagonist to refuse on the grounds of being of different races was very blunt. I think most readers would not be able to accept it. However, the long-term inertia still made me unconsciously click on the latest chapter. Until the chapter about teaching Li Changan his skills, I really couldn't stand it. The portrayal of this character is really annoying, you know? I'm worried about trouble in the first place, so why would I accept such a troublesome little brother? Do you understand that it's really annoying?