Leisure Fairy Travel

In short, I have read the text in the past few days and am ready to read it again 😌, I think the first fifty or so pictures are okay. There is no traditional cultivation method in the world of immortality. I think it is relatively new to find and disseminate available science and technology to assist in cultivating immortals (maybe because I have read few immortality novels, and only a few of them have been read carefully). I think the pace of the fifty or so pictures is quite good. I even think the protagonist's promotion is a bit fast (I watched Zhen Wen Changsheng). In the past, when I looked at those modern cultivating immortals, I was thinking, how are those modern cultivating instruments made, and what are their principles? At that time, I was thinking that spiritual power is probably like electricity, an energy body, and those monks' magic weapons are various machines that can move if they are given electricity. Thanks to the author for writing this novel, which allowed me to diverge my previous thoughts. Of course, this is also what interests me about this article. I hope the author will use more "science" to explain this world of immortality 😁😁😁 (It's time to lose my hair) In terms of characterization, I hope that Xiaoyu, the protagonist's friends and relatives, can grow up a bit, especially Xiaoyu. I hope he can grow up and become more alert. I feel that with his current personality, he will not survive long in the world of immortality 😥, and the key characters should not be too flat. Last auspicious words of the day: I wish the author's book will become popular as soon as possible and make a fortune!

The appearance of this female time traveler is really not good. Survival is the first priority. She directly threatens the survival of the protagonist without doing anything subjectively and deliberately. It might have been okay before, but now everyone is not able to accept it. The clay figurine is still a bit angry, but I feel very useless when the protagonist is treated like this and ends up being so nice. The opponent is indeed stronger than the protagonist, which makes sense logically, but I don't understand why she has to be introduced in this way. Wouldn't it be better to accept it in another way? Maybe to differentiate from Alchemist? But didn't you write well at that time? The core invention and creation were very interesting. Except for the final ending, which was a bit rushed, there was nothing wrong with it. How did it become like this? 😒

Can someone who writes something so cowardly be called Gou? Several waves of people have sneaked into your door, but you still haven't stepped up your guard. You've been threatened by people, and you just made a non-aggression agreement with them peacefully without using your trump card. I really don't know whether you want to write about the cruelty or kindness of this world. The backstage you just found has no protective effect at all, so why do you show yourself to the backstage and follow the original trajectory? Doesn't it better reflect your morality?

To be honest, I really don't understand why the author made the protagonist so vulgar and the system girl so bitchy. Isn't this just to cause trouble for readers?

Brother, I want to ask, where do you take your time with this book? ? ? ?

It's not possible to write about a normal and well-developed woman. I have to write about this sick heroine with a stupid mind.

It was interesting at first, but it seemed like it started to feel less interesting after the heroine appeared. I don't know why.

A female-channeled novel, I wrote more than forty chapters and became a female time-traveler.

The first female time-traveler was so disgusting and a bitch that the protagonist didn't even kill her. It was so disgusting.

They don't even build a laboratory. They only move some modern products to strengthen themselves and force explanations. All I can say is that my expectations have been lowered a little bit. If we say that the strategy of spiritual practice is to unite all the great powers into one body. On the technology side, great power is returned to all. A person's wisdom is limited after all, open up knowledge and look for like-minded people. Study the anatomy of all things. Seek the essence of things. Use the laws of objects. Newton proposed gravity because an apple hit him on the head. Edison found a more suitable material and developed an incandescent lamp. The protagonist has traveled so long. If you have money and leisure, what is the nature of your spiritual power? What is the external performance? How to use spiritual power? Tongtong doesn't know, but the only thing written is that spiritual power has universal properties. But the essence of this property has not been written out either. It doesn't matter if you are poor, but you can rub all kinds of things with your hands. His status is no longer low. An inner disciple of a large sect. It can even create a submarine. You are not at all curious about the nature of spiritual power. , Don't you want to know the practical application of spiritual power? All the protagonist's experiments are based on necessary circumstances. There is essentially no difference between technology and immortality cultivation. They both require complete knowledge In the immortality cultivation system, you can learn from the predecessors. Where did you go to study the technology system? So you have to experiment on your own. Do your own research, exploration and application. Once the technological side breaks out, it is a very scary thing. After all, it only took less than 300 years from farming civilization to modern technology. Taking the right path is much better than meditating for thousands of years. There is also the supporting actress. The protagonist has no idea of ​​getting some top-notch products from him. She has a system in place. Casually exchange with him drawings about the manufacture of photolithography machines and the use of nuclear fusion reactions. At least it will save hundreds of years of detours. The essence of so many scoldings is unilateral demands, rather than use by both parties. Being oppressed can lead to frustration. But taking advantage of each other will only make you feel that you are missing a move. The highlights in the game are interesting only if they are evenly matched. Who wouldn't be unilaterally suppressed? Do you understand? Author. Anyone who has experienced how disgusting fried fish is knows. If the author is interested, you can read Taibai Shuijun's "Is there something wrong with you, your lord" at the starting point. Just read the first copy, don't waste money on the rest. This book perfectly describes my various thoughts on technology. I am quite looking forward to the author, otherwise I would have stopped pursuing it long ago. It won't waste your time talking about it. Come on, author!

It started well, but when Luo Tianxi appeared, he lost interest. This role was such a failure, it would be better not to have it at all!

How to say it? Everyone seems to be kind? Is it realistic?

There are not many novels about the Virgin among Virgins. The author probably read the novel written by The Wandering Earth.

The heroine is really annoying, with double standards, little fairy, and green tea.

That Jiang Xiaoyu is so disgusting, so domineering

It feels like Luo Tianxi is superfluous once he is added in, and feels out of place and nondescript.

Brothers, what's going on with the clone behind? I feel like it's a bit uncomfortable to have two consciousnesses in one person. If anything is wrong, just run away.

Well written, great book!

Looking at the comments section, many people are criticizing the heroine. I feel that the author's character creation is very real and three-dimensional. Isn't that what women in reality are like. But if you think about it carefully, you might be scolded for being too real. Perhaps what many people want to see is a perfect heroine, regardless of whether the character is three-dimensional and vivid or a paper figure. In the past, when I read the portrayal of female characters in anime novels, I always felt that the characters lacked personality and were difficult to impress. Now it seems that what people want to see may not be real people. People in the second dimension like paper people, but maybe they hate real people.

It seemed okay at first, but a systematic time-traveling woman suddenly appeared. What was the purpose of this? No interest anymore

I got to know Xiaoyu earlier, and later I was able to help his master break through, and then he was able to preside over the big formation at just a few levels during the Qi refining period. And when I put in the modern knowledge, I felt invincible. If you ask me to say that the system is different, it's not the best if it's not used at all. The dividing talisman paper can divide several times more than others. I think it's a bit unreasonable.

For online articles, double penetration is a taboo, and the author is really brave

Many readers have discovered that Shen Lang has the physique of a holy mother, and they can't understand that the ancient elder is a transaction, while Shen Lang responds to every request without expecting anything in return. Pay attention to your sense of proportion, being too ideal is like a holy mother who doesn't know the fireworks of the world!

Among all the novels I have read, this is the only one that can be called scientific spiritualism. The other is "Approaching Immortality". Although the underlying settings of the world are very different, this is a book that writes about scientific immortality in an attractive way. Although my personal understanding of cultivating immortals is more inclined to that of "The Wandering Immortal" by Xu Gongzi Shengzhi and Guibianquan. But when it comes to writing novels, this setting is more interesting, isn't it?

The writing is good, why are there so few recommendation votes?

Rt, similar to the "Andromeda Paradox". If someone can really transmit information at super-light speed, then there will be a situation where he already knows the outcome of the event before it occurs (and can also transmit information to other people).

Later, it was a pretty good novel similar to the road to immortality. The protagonist aims to find the lost heroine while traveling and researching.

The author has a very rich reserve of knowledge The three views are also correct

Can this cover be changed? It looks like a children's book, it's too funny

The setting of this time-traveling girl with a golden finger but not the protagonist is also quite novel. Against the background of the protagonist, Xiao Luo's sister looks like a waste. I hope that one day the protagonist can say that sentence in front of Xiao Luo. I, Shen Lang, have come to this day only because of my own talent and hard work to break her defense.