Cross-Border Surveillance

There's nothing wrong with the writing, but there's a lot of nonsense and a lot of complaints. I can't read it after chapter 30. It's a different world. I'm still practicing martial arts and playing with incense. I don't believe this and that. I still have to identify harmful ingredients. Then you might as well cancel the monitoring. You might as well write in the book to identify how many beneficial ingredients there are. At least readers won't feel uncomfortable after reading it.

I didn't feel anything else, I just felt that the author was very knowledgeable and could read ten lines at a glance without any influence at all.

I don't know if it's my problem. I personally feel that there are too many dialects used for communication in some places. I feel a little tired sometimes, and maybe because I'm not a local, I'm not only a little tired, but also not immersed in it (personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

Tao An, the male protagonist, an ordinary life begins to become extraordinary when something unexpected happens. The question is, in a harmonious society, what can I do with this little skill? 🙂 Yes? Where can the protagonist's skill be used? Chapter 20 reveals nothing at all🙂 Judging from popular conventions, either the protagonist is suffering from a disease and the seriously ill heroine needs treatment, or the spiritual energy is revived and aliens invade. The former can powerfully promote the development of the plot, but lacks innovation. The latter has a colorful plot, but requires superb writing skills. This book gives me a sense of tranquility and distance. The author pays great attention to some details and puts himself into the perspective of the protagonist to think about some psychology and perspectives. I think the author has a general blueprint for this book in his mind, so I will not make too many comments. If this book is calm and not entangled in the development of the plot, it is quite good to read it calmly.

For a book of 100,000 words, deleting 40,000 to 50,000 words will not affect it at all. You can imagine how frustrating it is.

Other people's books are all for Chinese people. This is the first time I see a book for a certain province.

The subject matter is quite good, but the main character is too naughty and thinks too much. If you want to keep a secret, you will keep it tight, and if you want to sell something, you will sell it quickly. The naughty attitude of looking forward and backward is no longer suitable for the current rhythm.

The author suffered a sudden illness and has been under treatment for more than 20 days. Updates cannot be made for the time being. Please look forward to it. Thanks!

The author writes very well, and I look forward to continuing to write. If there are any violations, just correct them and continue writing. Finding a good book is difficult.

95% Of it is nonsense. I don't know why there is so much nonsense.

In the past, those few books were only good at writing after they were put on the shelves, but now they are bad at the beginning?

After reading today's latest chapter, the author's writing is online, and the biggest drawback is water. Can you believe that there are entire articles of several thousand or ten thousand words consisting of a conversation between two people blowing shit! Or an everyday statement! After reading it, I don't even know what I have read... This is not just one or two chapters, but 80% of the chapters. I sincerely advise readers to subscribe selectively or wait for a date in the future. Many chapters are not worth the money spent. Moreover, one chapter is several thousand words long, and only a few chapters contain ups and downs of the plot. They are all full of water. Judging from the current chapters, those before today's latest chapter 111 are not worth spending the starting coins. I don't know about the latter.

It's been a month, just say it and don't pretend to be dead.

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The author was inexplicably fooled. To be honest, it was the first time in 10 years that Qidian supported the genuine version, but the author was inexplicably fooled.

Awesome. The front is really beautiful. I can give it full marks. . . But you suddenly have to charge a fee. Come on, oh my god, I was completely confused. What was going well suddenly came with time and space cause and effect. Oh my god, my sense of immersion exploded. I fell before the charge.

The protagonist has a low IQ and is crazy about watering down. If you can accept these two points, you can still read this book.

When I saw a piece of incense 16888, I had no desire to see it. It was unreasonable to ignore everything just for the sake of pleasure. If nothing else, would his parents be willing to use it at this price?

For a eunuch like this, will the paid chapter get the money back?

Everything else is fine except that it's too wordy.

After this, will anyone continue to read it?

It's well written, but one chapter is too big, so I divided it into two or three chapters, so I might be able to read more.

I have read Nanshan Yin by the author, and I really like the leisurely everyday feeling. This novel was quite good before about fifty chapters, but then it took a turn for the worse. It's really hard to describe.

It's very beautiful, why don't you write it down?

Is this the end of this book? , I have to read it every day to see if it has been updated. This book is really well written. It is much more beautiful than those systems that have been upgraded, and the sense of inclusion is also strong. Alas,