Ancestral Immortal!

You're a time traveler, and a stranger in another world is your grandfather?? What's the connection between you two? How can you have feelings for someone like that?! I hate authors who write like this the most. They completely disregard logic and just like to follow trends. They see others writing like this, so they write like this too.

The book title can be changed to Where Have Our Ancestors Gone? "Digging up ancestral graves for eighteen generations" One Hundred Ways to Dig Up Your Ancestors' Skulls Ancestors above: Your unworthy descendants are here to be dug up! Others live off their parents, I live off my ancestors: Mmm, it's really good! Others become gods, I become ancestors.

It's not satisfying enough! I know you want to learn the "ordinary person" style, but even that style has moments of triumph and humiliation after successful cultivation. Otherwise, it's just a monotonous, repetitive narrative! Your writing is all about concealment from beginning to end, and you haven't captured the true sense of satisfaction! There's a reason why "satisfying" stories can succeed.

The beginning of this book is a bit toxic, the middle is okay, but it really drops to an idiotic level when it comes to Li Lingyue and her daughter.

I check the number of reviews before reading a book. This one has less than 100, so it's obviously garbage.

In classic fantasy novels, cultivators don't bow or shake hands when they meet, right? Are they going to pull out their phones the next moment?

The book has a great concept, but the author's writing is terrible. Especially the interactions with female characters—what kind of writing is that? Is the author trying to emulate an old-fashioned urban style? It's awkward and disgusting. Also, if you can't write the details well, don't force them.

Even with 500 chapters still at the Foundation Establishment stage, I can't even finish reading it during the limited-time free offer.

I looked at 220 pictures, and it was basically all about digging up ancestral graves and licking women. He would lick any toilet, like he had never seen a woman before!

Are you here to write a novel or to be funny? I'll write whatever I want, wherever my thoughts lead me. The main point is: read if you want, leave if you don't. The first few chapters are filled with bizarre scenes: the protagonist openly rummaging through his grandfather's grave in broad daylight, and then there's the bizarre "Heart-Questioning Trial" where he's eliminated from a sect selection.