Starships Online Across the Realms

The concept is first-rate, but the plot is third-rate. The content is too bland, lacking any twists or turns. It feels as if the author set up an outline and then filled it in like a game walkthrough, making it rather tedious. Another point is that in this fragmented and fast-paced era, I believe most readers would prefer to see the protagonist travel through time in a warship rather than do…

The idea is good, but the writing is extremely limited; it's purely a chronological account, with almost no descriptions that provide the reader with any enjoyment. This kind of writing should have been an outline, not a ready-made one.

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They've already run away. The first incident was the Resident Evil movie series, and then suddenly in Chapter 10, there's this T-virus affecting artificial intelligence?! I've never seen such an outrageous T-virus before. 🙂🙂🙂

Is the author starting to slack off? The latest chapters are full of grammatical errors, incoherent sentences, repetitions, and tons of typos. It's like reading a primary school student's essay. Please, these are paid chapters! Don't you have any sincerity at all?

How many times has this happened? Author, I've put up with you for so long! Every time you take more than ten days off before resuming updates, you idiot! 😡 And you only update one chapter each time. Who's going to read this book if not keep reading? Those who are following the story will probably forget about it, and those who are voting for monthly tickets will forget about voting for them.

One warship is constantly under repair, acting like it's so awesome, while another is a piece of junk, so bad it's impossible to fix even after the novel is finished.

This is a poorly written, rambling novel, a bait and switcheroo where the protagonist is the only one who transmigrates and goes it alone, using a warship as a gimmick.

The background introduction in the first three chapters was a bit verbose and could be simplified. The idea is great; the main world has aliens, it's not a system-based time travel, and it features futuristic technology. The setting should be an interstellar type! Besides, they already have spaceships, so why not travel through time together? Why not develop into an organized force?

The biggest flaw, in my opinion, is the introduction of a lizardman in the main world.