Starships Online Across the Realms

The creativity is first-rate, the plot is third-rate, the content is too bland, and there are no ups and downs. It seems as if the author has set an outline and then fills it in like a game guide, which is rather boring Another point is that in the fragmented and fast-paced era, I believe most readers would rather watch the protagonist drive a battleship across the world than complete the mission alone. "Other novels are also single-player time travel. If you have a battleship, you still have a single person time travel. Then the battleship is not in vain 🙂" Although it is foreseeable that warship time travel will happen in the future, but it is not too late to start now There is a doomsday train driver. Although the plot is a bit taken for granted, the escape at the beginning is to use the superpower to drive the train. The plot along the way is about escaping, encountering enemies, repairing and upgrading the train. It is quite interesting and the author can learn from it.

The creativity is okay, but the writing style can only be said to be very limited. It is a pure running account with almost no description that makes the readers feel happy. This kind of text should be an outline, why is it served directly?

Punishment Number

Already running away, the first event was the Resident Evil movie series, and then in Chapter 10, a T virus suddenly came and affected artificial intelligence? ? ? ? ? I have never seen such an outrageous T-virus 🙂🙂🙂

Is the author starting to mess up? The latest few chapters are full of bad sentences, the sentences don't make sense, they are repeated up and down, and there are a lot of typos. It's like watching a primary school student write an essay. Please, those are paid chapters, don't they have any sincerity at all?

How many times has it been, author, I have tolerated you for a long time, every time you stop updating for more than ten days before updating again, you are **😡, and you update a chapter every time. No one will read your book if you don't support it. Those who follow it will probably forget to read it, and those who vote monthly will forget to vote.

A battleship that has been repaired and repaired seems so awesome. Yes, a garbage battleship cannot be repaired after the novel is finished.

A novice's chronicle of poisonous stories, selling dog meat over sheep's heads, with the main character traveling alone and doing a battleship gimmick

The background introduction in the first three chapters is a bit long-winded. It can be revised briefly. The idea is very good. There are aliens in the main world. It is not a system travel. There is future technology. The setting should be interstellar type! There are also space battleships, so why not travel together? To develop towards the type of organizational power? The author should pay attention to avoid poisonous points, and don't follow the plot without thinking. After all, you are not a system streamer, so you don't need to destroy the plot and participate in the plot to get rewards! If you are behind the scenes of an organizational force, don't be a nanny. After all, the purpose of developing power is to strengthen yourself, not to allow yourself to support the power.

I think the biggest poisonous point is the emergence of a lizard man in the main world.