Wasteland Survival: I Have a Dyson Sphere

The book's real title is "My Daily Life of Showing Off Among Humanoid Beings Who've Been Stupided by Nuclear Radiation: The Story of My Being Who Can Change All the Laws of Physics".

Unbelievable!! Ten pounds of scrap iron for one pound of iron!!! How did you come up with this premise???

The subject matter and writing style are both good, but the time freeze on the source planet is a major flaw. It's a classic case of wanting everything and ending up trapping itself in this limitation, giving readers a plot that's predictable from the start. Even if a good author doesn't leave readers with any unknown guesses, they shouldn't spoil the story from the very beginning.

You're wrong. The Dyson Sphere civilization is a level 4 or higher civilization. Their technology can be researched indefinitely, and flying out of the galaxy would be very easy for them.

The screen is full of exclamation marks, and commas are being used as line breaks? Can you please learn punctuation properly?

Nuclear radiation sounds terrifying, but the fundamental logical fallacy that it can't harm me as long as I wear protective clothing, along with a whole host of other toxic factors, is flawed.

I came here because of its reputation, and I'm wondering why there are comments about it being "more expensive with each pound".

I came here because of its reputation, and the comments section was hilarious.

I seriously doubt that this author ever passed a science subject.

A crater 50 meters in diameter appeared on the street of a small town, and incredibly, there was a car dealership right next to it, with intact battery-like materials inside. Do they even have a brain? The core area of ​​a typical small town is at most 100,000 square meters. For a crater 50 meters in diameter to form, the damaged area would be at least 0.25 Square kilometers.