Immortal in the Stone of Pindao

After reading about thirty chapters, this book is quite disappointing so far! The plot so far is that there is a dojo in a snail shell, which is too small, and the people who appear are too high in cultivation, and what the hell does a great sage from the demon clan like a woman who has just started to practice? Now that I see it, it feels like a martial arts novel disguised as a cultivator! It's not against the rules to be a martial artist at all! There is no pattern in the world of cultivating immortals at all!

It's inexplicable that he has such a high heel, eight-nine mystical skills and supreme telepathy, and has become an immortal. But here he cares about 300 acres of land, and what about the Dharma couple's property? What effect can these 300 acres of ordinary land in the human world have on the protagonist who is already an immortal? Can it grow fire dates or open a cave?

Wouldn't it be nice to have a good start in Xiaoyao Xian, leisurely and contentedly in the mountains, or travel around the world from time to time? The characters of those two women, especially the younger sister, are really disgusting. It can be said that this sister is a failure.

The protagonist is an unruly and so-called unscrupulous woman, and the protagonist doesn't mind being criticized by her. . . . Then the protagonist copied Journey to the West and Dream of Red Mansions as if he had written it himself. He probably plagiarized the next four famous works. How many years ago was this a routine?

Why do you have to create such a female character? He has an incompetent and angry nature, he wants to do anything and dares to say anything even if he learns a little bit. Is it because he wants to start a "misogynistic" rhythm? As a woman, I hate this kind of woman. Has the author ever encountered such a weirdo in real life? Anyway, I have never seen such a person. You can't say she is a bad person, but if you say she is good, she is so disrespectful to others. She is a bitch! I'm really annoyed by this kind of character, I can't seem to stand it anymore.

Talking about food, grass, jelly and the like is too arbitrary. I'll only cover the first few dozen chapters here, because I've only seen a few dozen chapters. First, there is no problem with the writing and plot advancement of this article, they are all above the standard. Second, if you read it yourself and add it in the comment area, you can say that it is similar to Jianlai in terms of the previous one. Many big boss characters appear in a small place, so what is in this place must depend on how the author round it up. Third, this is my point of defeat. My personal taste is that I don't like the protagonist to have a daughter or sister. The protagonist adopts a tree-like creature as his daughter. If you look at the foreshadowing, there is a background. But personally I really can't accept things like whether I am a good father or not, or whether my brother is the best. So retreat. Generally speaking, Propulsion is completely accessible to readers who have no personal discomfort and only care about writing.

The writing is too bland and cliche, as if I'm reading something from ten years ago. I have no desire to continue reading.

There should be more or less female characters in the book, as long as there are no forced emotional dramas. Women in the world of cultivating immortals have power when they have strength. Women with power can choose their own lives, whether they are beautiful, devoted to cultivating, or being wives and mothers. The existence of these characters will increase the three-dimensionality of the underlying structure of the world, but they do not necessarily have to be directly related to the protagonist. The author's writing style is smooth and there is a high possibility that the article will go further. These are the opinions of one family after reading the comment section and are for reference only.

Normally, the two women at the beginning are very off-putting. Come on, I feel like the protagonist is very hungry. Doesn't it matter what kind of women are as long as they are beautiful?

Good guy This introduction: Kill all the injustices in the world? I haven't read the content yet. It shouldn't be true 😥😥

That female supporting character who can be called mentally retarded is really hard to describe (¯¯crimin)

The more stitches there are, the uglier it becomes.

Isn't it normal to have a female protagonist? It's best to keep both sisters. What kind of monkey are you afraid of? Then what kind of immortality do you cultivate?

Too literary The writing is a bit delicate and artificial

He was beaten for no apparent reason and received no benefit.

It's still the same gourd fairy. The slaughtering immortal is good-looking, especially the slaughtering immortal has brains, and the enemy also has brains and emotions. There is no lag, there is no such thing as sister-in-law, brother-in-law, and shemale love bullshit. I didn't encounter any great ones in the first ten chapters. I kill the enemies cleanly. Did you change the author of this book? Or do you want to change the writing method or AI ghostwriting? But this kind of bullshit is really speechless.

When I saw Shi Jian, I thought of the old man Shi Jian from Uncle Jiu, and instantly I lost the desire to read any more 🙂

The writing is concise, and the flaws in the plot will be magnified.

Good looking, Immortal in the Stone, just like the Monkey King, endless changes! Long term vision! The only one in the world, don't have a female protagonist! ! Come on! !

It looks good so far. If I can continue to read it, more updates will be better.

The author's writing style is indeed okay. Although the plot is a bit old-fashioned, it is not poisonous. I can only call it retro. However, with the combat power and plot development, I always feel that the number of words in this book is not too many.

What's going on? Updates are intermittent this week?

I hope this book can be longer and completed

I think it's okay. Big cheers for the author