Liaozhai: the Story of the Immortal Slaughter

There's nothing wrong with the plot of this book, and the various characters are normal, but it's too much like a Chinese fairy tale, and it feels like a story telling! Disadvantages: There is too little baggage in life stories, the various characters are a bit flat, and it does lack a bit of the ideas and writing techniques of modern authors. There are some pure ancient fairy tale novels, but the sense of substitution is much worse, and it is not suitable for the taste of today's readers.

The writing is good, the subject matter is interesting, and the writing style is elegant. Why are there so few votes? Because the values ​​​​are a bit different from those of today's people. The ancients valued righteousness over profit, and Liao Zhai did the same. If you see that you are pleasing to the eye, I will help you, and there will be no reward. At the same time, it is easy to meddle in other people's affairs when they are happy. Many things that seem inappropriate to get involved in now have to be discussed in Liaozhai. So many plots in this book have this problem. There are free apprentices and free thugs many times. This protagonist is a modern time traveler, so it is a bit embarrassing to be able to seamlessly integrate with the ancient values. In today's society, where helping the elderly and doing good deeds is a first-class and high-risk society, this style of conduct in the novel will definitely not be popular. But the novel must inherit the world view of Liaozhai. So this problem has no solution

The immortals in the book are at most in the Qi training stage of cultivation.

The daily guide is toxic. You have stopped for a month and you still recommend it to me? ? ?

So well written! Highly recommended by a twenty-year-old bookworm.

What matters when reading a book is the writing style. If the writing style is good, it can become popular even if it is not popular. Maybe the author is thinking of a new chapter! Some trolls should stop trolling. If they keep trolling, the author may lose his mentality! I won't write anymore if I can! Be patient and wait! The author's writing is pretty good (✪▽✪)

I think it's pretty good, come on!

Can the part about recruiting disciples be revised? It's too rigid. Ancient people, especially scholars and officials, paid attention to "not peeking into the dark room", and this is how they educate future generations. Taking martial arts novels as an example, it is unethical to spy on others practicing martial arts. Don't catch them and you will definitely be punished.

Oh, it turns out that the hell here refers to the hell of the human race. All aliens who have killed people will be punished when they enter hell. This is simply ridiculous.

Die, eunuch😡

The writing is not down to earth and has no sense of empathy 😅

When I first read the introduction, I thought it was a book about slaying demons and slaying demons on the journey of cultivation, and it was full of immersion, but I really didn't feel that in the chapters of The Immortal Queen. I originally thought that the protagonist would be connected with the people at the bottom of the story, so that under the ravages of demonic disasters and man-made disasters, the collective force developed some innovative plots. After reading a few chapters of Fairyland, I found that I have the bones of traditional cultivation. I don't know what kind of main plot the author wants to write around the protagonist. Anyway, I am tired of this kind of plot routines.

Me. . . I was just halfway through watching it when I found out about the eunuch. I was so depressed.

The protagonist's upgrade is too slow. It's okay in the early stage, but then it becomes boring and he's gone.

Are you now taking on a disciple? So careless? Is the IQ in this paragraph negative?

Is this daily guide sick? It's been a month since I stopped using it, and I still recommend it.

This apprentice came too quickly. The protagonist worked so hard to research it, so he has to teach him?

Judging from several details, the author's writing skills are acceptable. But accepting apprentices is too casual. The author did not do a good job in shaping the protagonist in the first few chapters. The latter part looks a bit confusing, a bit like the fairy novels of around 12 years old. It is uncomfortable to watch. In today's terms, it is a bit of a Madonna-type protagonist. As long as the idea is clear, he will give anything. . .

Well written and well written, I recommend it, it would be a shame not to read it!

The story and the protagonist are both primary and secondary. It is a typical Shushan-style novel of the Mingzhu School, which is better than the backstage novel.

Between the lines and the prose, the protagonist's nobility, selflessness, willingness to help others, and other virtues are all reflected. The protagonist written by the author is too perfect, like the ancient knights that everyone imagined when they were children. This kind of casting may have been very popular in magazines or newspapers in the past, but now, it is no longer suitable for today's Internet era.

I am very curious, what is the relationship between dragon energy and officials? If you can protect the emperor, can you still protect the officials? ? I prefer that officials have self-defense skills, or are completely powerless. Ghost revenge doesn't care whether you are an official, and monsters bully men and women, and it doesn't care whether you have a father who is an official.

Alas, there are some flaws. The heroine appears too early, and they form a strange couple. The plot arrangement is a bit too deliberate. And the heroine became invisible within a few chapters.

I am only a few years old, and I can still serve two female apprentices.

In this book, the wolf chapter is very well written. From the following, it is easy to see that the author is a novice who has no business in life, traveling all the way on a bitter smile... Traveling through ancient times, people like you would starve to death.

There are only a few people who can confer gods in one book. The eunuchs write slowly. The writing is not bad, and it will make people more popular.

The author is so short! 😁😁I can't see enough of the quick update.

The writing is good, but the background plot is still a bit small. It stands to reason that practicing "power" is also a must. In the main line, except for the protagonist's practice and elimination of demons, it has not risen to the level of the country or the collective level of the human race's extraordinary world. Moreover, the protagonist has never thought about cultivating power to raise money and support people, but the pattern is not big enough and the mentality is not strong enough. If the author has laid a foreshadowing in Novice Village, the protagonist's mortal power should now be able to start to move towards the extraordinary power (and it does not necessarily have to be To make the power clear, you can at least wait until the protagonist enters the accumulation period of cultivation, and there will be a lot of content to write in the middle and later stages,). I wonder if it will be possible to break out of the Liaozhai plot routine after the middle period, or invade some extraordinary worlds with weird types to ignite the glory of the human race.

I finally came across a book with online IQ, which is so rare.

There is something wrong with this book. The main character is willing to take advantage of others in the book and feels like a supporting character. The protagonist is written as a supporting role, and it really lasts a long time.