Starting Boy Ma Kongqun

General outline: The yin and yang of heaven and earth join forces to conquer the Great Compassion Seven unique skills: Bare hand, strong strength: the sky and the earth split and the mysterious soldiers Transfer and dissolve: the heaven and the earth overthrow the great force of the universe Qinggong: the great movement of the sky and the earth Soft strength: the heaven and the earth destroy the great force Yin Thunder Palm Tempering the body and recovering injuries: Tianhui Diqian Dadie Transformation There are still two types left, one is probably about the spiritual arts (for example: the Heaven Tempering Earth Refining Great Condensing Divine Canon), and the other is about explosive life-fighting (such as: Heaven Lifts the Earth Abandoning the Great Sacrifice of the Body). Weapon: The eight potentials of the Heavenly Sword (similar to the seven limits of swallowing the sky and destroying the earth: swallowing the sky, destroying the earth, fire, hail, storm, landslide, breaking the sea, plus the protagonist added additionally, thunder and lightning?) Or should I say, the eight potentials correspond to the Bagua.

It's well written, but too short and has too few updates. It's not without reason that so many people killed Bai Tianyu. I always say it is a pity, as if he is a positive character, but what he did back then was actually quite damnable. I dare not talk about the novel, Di Lung's one, Ma Kongqun kills him. Very reasonable.

Personally, I don't like Ma Kongqun's character very much. He is a bit indecisive. There is a saying that goes well: Treat your comrades as warmly as spring, and treat your enemies as cruelly and ruthlessly as the harsh winter. The protagonist Ma Kongqun always holds back when it comes to dealing with enemies, and sooner or later he will be counterattacked.

Damn it, the updates are getting more and more stretched.

This author is no longer good, the updates are becoming more and more unstable, and he is probably going to become a eunuch.

The author updated this morning. He is probably preparing to become a eunuch and has a criminal record.

Can't restore the previous two consecutive updates?

Author, please stand up and give me more updates.

I feel like many book friends don't know who Ma Kongqun is. Ma Kongqun is the villain in Gu Long's novel (Border Town Prodigal Son). He established the Kanto Ten Thousand Horses Hall because he was jealous of Bai Baiyu and coveted the property of the Divine Sword Hall. And [Baiyun Fairy] Ding Baiyun designed an ambush to kill the sworn brother [Magic Sword Invincible] Bai Baiyu (Ye Kai's father) and Baibai Yong's family The plot of the TV series Tianya Mingyue Knife (Border Town Prodigal) and (Tianya. Mingyue. Knife) was renamed Yingying Tian

Bai Tianyu in Gu Long's works is just a beast. Even if he is number one in the world, he is still a beast.

This kind of fan fiction is most taboo with original female protagonists. Because they are harmonious and similar, it is nothing more than deeply rooted in people's hearts and has a strong sense of involvement. At the same time, when you have level 5 roots and understanding, you are already one of the best in the world! Why is it that at level 8, her basic skills and understanding are as good as those of an original heroine? Shouldn't it be that he is far ahead of his age, but his internal strength is slightly inferior to that of Shen Lang... Is the senior a genius? It should be noted that in the world of cologne, geniuses dominate the world at a young age. Such as Ye Gucheng, Ximen Chuixue, Yaoyue, Yan Nantian, Ye Xiaofeng...

The early writing is good, but the more I write, the less I want to read anymore. It's better to eat melon. In the cologne world, someone like you who competes with others all day long will not survive long 🤫

After killing Bai Baiyu, it became more and more boring. The previous protagonist developed on his own and strengthened Ten Thousand Horses Hall. It would be great to defeat Bai Baiyu. It's all over. Let's see if you become the great detective Ma Kongqun in the follow-up, in order to rely on the original story.

I feel that the biggest features of Gu Long's novels are Jianghu and beauties. Do you want to dominate the world? The entire original heroine is a failure.

It's well written. To be honest, it didn't feel right after Wang Qiong appeared on the scene. I didn't want to read it anymore.

Why do you like to write about war? To express your patriotism, you can write war-themed novels. Writing about fighting against Japanese pirates in martial arts is equivalent to frying a portion of egg-fried rice and adding mustard to it. I can't figure it out.

The first three chapters persuade you to quit. 1. The protagonist joins the army in the world of Gu Long and fights for hegemony in the court, which obviously deviates from the main line of the story. Gu Long's court can be said to be the least existential among all martial arts series, and the background panels are very blurry. The author wrote this as if he was acting in a palace fight in a gunfight movie, highlighting an inexplicable thing; 2. The revenge plot is too perfunctory. The author may have imagined that the climax will be the climax when he appears, so that the protagonist can show off. What is the result? Oh, the protagonist wears a breast shield, and the big enemy is Nani and then dies; a dozen tool men die, and then the whole family of the enemy is wiped out; it gives the impression that two groups of dragons are trapped in a running account. 3. Gu Long's novel emphasizes artistic conception over realism, accidents over logic. The protagonist has to use the system and the attributes of data flow are added, which is equivalent to a new reference system. The style of painting is really out of place. Even if you create a destiny or a halo, it will not work like this. The reader has to constantly switch between the weapon spectrum and the mobile game data. , Back and forth to check in; And the logic of the game is not practical in Gulong, otherwise it would be difficult to explain how top players are often knocked down by gangsters, how the low-level Li Xunhuan defeated the data monster Shangguan Jinhong and the Great Joy Bodhisattva, and how the super-class Chu Liuxiang defeated the top-notch Shi Guanyin and the jellyfish Yinji. If the opponent is killed and killed in the plot, what's the point of having the protagonist's data attributes stacked up high? There are so many mistakes in just one or two chapters. It can only be said that the author is a talented person and bold.

Shangguan Jinhong is a recognized hero in Gu Long's works, how could he lose to someone like Bai Baiyu?

Does Gu Long write about war in his novels? ? Really tough head. .

How about deleting both Zhan Zhan and Wang Qiong? I don't want to watch this at all.

If you are too holy, don't kill everyone, just kill everyone who deserves to be killed. Others are plotting against you all day long. Can you withstand your son? Can your friends withstand it?

Gu Long Timeline

Gu Long's fan fiction starts from the story of the struggle outside the Guan and the struggle outside the Guan. It is quite novel. The character creation is slightly flawed. To be successful outside the Guan, you must rely on fists/power, and you can only win over by profit. The protagonist's character is a bit indecisive, like a woman. A major failure in writing: involving war. Gu Long's novels are different from those of Jin Yong and Wen Ruian. The essence of his novels lies in the rivers and lakes, a real rivers and lakes, with intrigues and intrigues, and masters will fall under the poison of the waiter. It is real. Not much to say, maybe the author didn't even write an outline.

The writing is much better than the Pillow Blade. The Pillow Blade is just like a 2x5, holding an umbrella but not having the strength and equipment.

What a pity for a good book! Isn't it good to write about martial arts well? I insist on talking about cultivating immortals!

This article is baffling, a good person uses despicable means! Be a bad guy and make friends with the righteous! Whether it's right or wrong, there's no point in being a human being!

I've been busy recently, so I can write slowly when I'm not busy in the future. I must finish the book!

In fact, there is no need to change Bai Tianyu's setting in the original work. To put it bluntly, one mountain cannot accommodate two tigers, not to mention his domineering personality will conflict sooner or later. Even if the protagonist strikes first, it is understandable. If the master of one force is ruthless, that is not a shortcoming, but an advantage.

Has the author read Heroes Without Tears? Very few people write about this. I want to read a box.

The soft sword is almost domineering. The protagonist's subordinates all use Miao swords. What kind of style do you want to make a soft sword yourself?