Start Traveling Westward from Liusha River

And using heaven, earth, humans, gods and ghosts as the realm? The five categories of Journey to the West are different paths, not realms!

I feel that the writing is messy and incomprehensible, wandering around aimlessly, like a lunatic. Since you wrote that there are many evil monks in the temples of Dazhou, then go kill and frame them. Damn it, you don't care if I write it, just write it. Monk Sha was able to compete with the big monsters all the way to the west, but now he has become a small character in Harami. Mortal Qi practitioners can torture Monk Sha. What the hell are you writing? I studied under Lu Ya. In the Taoist sect, he was the powerful Immortal. In ancient times, he was the prince of the demon clan. In Buddhism, he was the Great Sun Tathagata. He also said that he has great talent, so he taught you such a thing. The original version of Monk Sha even ate people from the Liusha Kingdom, and you were directly beaten by the Taoist priests of the Liusha Kingdom until you ran away. You're such a time traveler, you can actually eat living people alive, you're awesome Klass. What do you mean by setting the protagonist's position? Monk Sha is a rolling curtain general. He is a 50-50 opponent with Zhu Bajie, defeats Sun Monkey in a water battle, and a god who is a 50-50 opponent with the blue lion, white elephant and Dapeng, the top level demon. You set him up to be unable to defeat the Qi Master. Your setting is a 💩

It's pretty good, old man. But the plot is too fast, you have to fill in a little more content. Not to mention adding any plot, it also needs more description. Just like the first one, the second one, and the third one. You have to at least expand it to five chapters, whether it is watering down, psychological writing, location description, item description, strength enhancement description, etc. But it's okay, your way of writing is a bit like The Sims. It depends on your subsequent plot, old man. Well written. I have QQ, I have an account at any time, and I can subscribe to you (paint a big pie)