Guiyi Is Not the Tang Dynasty

About halfway through the writing process, the book changed from a historical one to a completely fictional one. The more I read the words written by the author, the more familiar they became. I thought, isn't this a copycat teacher? Later, the more I wrote, the more unreal it became. The Longyou Army looked like the Red Army. As for describing the plot of the subordinates forming gangs and splitting up mountains, it's not that it can't be written, but the author you write is very contradictory. As for the political ideas that appear in it, it's hard to say. Up to now, three disciplines and eight points of attention have appeared During the late Tang Dynasty, several chapters were used to repeatedly emphasize how good the military discipline of an army of tens of thousands of people was. No matter how great your personal prestige is, you cannot directly ignore historical limitations, and Gao Qianli claimed to be a certain talent. This is the chapter of Lord of Xichuan, which is even more difficult to evaluate. I can't stand it anymore. It's so shocking. If the quality of writing can be maintained at the beginning, this book may not get a good result. But in the middle, the author's writing is not enough and the plot is nonsense. It is really a pity that this setting

I saw today that some book friends are saying that the progress is too slow and seems to be delayed and hydrological. If you follow Shuangwen's logic and don't take into account food, marching speed, and the enemy's forced intelligence, it can indeed be quickly deduced. According to Li Shimin's script, it can be completed in seven or eight years. But this is a historical novel set in the late Tang Dynasty, so we must respect the background setting and historical process. The late Tang Dynasty, like the late Ming Dynasty, faced the influence of the cold current of the Little Ice Age, frequent natural disasters, and corruption in government, making uprisings inevitable. The protagonist's base has gone through years of war and foreign enslavement. It lacks enough people to grow food and develop the economy, so it needs to take root and accumulate strength. Of course, some book friends are making fun of Liu Bang and Li Shimin, saying that they conquered the world so quickly, why are the protagonists not as good as the ancients... You must know that individuals have different starting points, different encounters and ideas, and there are different paths. Liu Bang was also the head of the local pavilion, and there were hundreds of bandits in the mountains. When he launched an army to attack the county town, he also had Xiao He, a young boy, as his internal support, and he got the first pot of gold for starting a business. When Li Shimin followed Li Yuan to launch his army, he had a stable and wealthy rear area, and his status as a powerful figure was enough to attract a group of local powerful people to defect to him. The most important thing is that they all have many talents. Liu Bang has Xiao He, Zhang Liang, Han Xin, Chen Ping and other talents. Li Shimin himself is very capable of commanding troops, and the Li family's civil administration skills are also good. When encountering the civil strife in Wagang Village, he gave away a bunch of strong generals for nothing, which was really cool. Look at the protagonist again. He grew up under alien slavery. He started as a low-level soldier and had a group of warriors who were good at fighting. The author seems to follow history too much. Being able to step onto the historical stage requires both personal struggle and historical opportunities. The protagonist has already caused history to deviate, so it is reasonable to discover a few talents in the process of making a fortune, right? With so many officials trained, it is quite reasonable for some of them to stand out. As a dynamic emerging force, the protagonist camp always has someone who can seize the opportunity to stand out. But for now, the talents on the protagonist's side are mainly historical figures, and non-historical figures are named younger brothers. One has to wonder about the protagonist's internal promotion mechanism, or is it that the author just wants to write down history and dare not create a few original characters to avoid losing control. In fact, it is not difficult for the protagonist to unify the world in a short time. He can directly overdraw his war potential, roughly push it forward, and put a halo of intelligence on all enemies. Then, there was famine everywhere, the vitality of the Central Plains was severely damaged, foreign invasions, and a lot of mess. In the era of frequent natural disasters, warlords fighting, and frequent food shortages in various places, we not only want the protagonist from a humble background to quickly dominate the world with invincible resources, but also want the protagonist's army to conform to modern people's outlook on life and be a "king's army" with a bottom line and morality. How is it possible to divide the fields for production? Did the protagonist have his own portal, or did food fall from the sky? To put it bluntly, no matter what the author writes, readers can always find faults. It is suggested that the author should proceed step by step according to his own ideas.

Liu Jilong: How can I be a small soldier under the tent? How can I stand up on my own? Alas, it's so difficult.

Pictured, not sure where it comes from. I don't know which historical material the author checked.

The Guiyi Army, from the end of the Tang Dynasty through the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms to the end of the Song Dynasty, has supported the Western Regions alone for nearly 200 years, with very little support from the Central Plains. I hope we will not lose the feeling of being alone in the northwest.

Coming

This book started with two chapters combined into one, and the update time is getting slower and slower day by day. This book is hopeless. The smelly, long and long epilogue of the previous book made me sick. This book is a delayed update.

The protagonist is too true, kind and beautiful, too hypocritical and empty. How can a commoner in modern times get such a big heart? Don't treat readers as fools.

After the protagonist was promoted to captain, things started to go wrong when there were more soldiers and they were able to rush into the battle. Later, after choosing the land in Longnan, he did not know in advance that there was not much land for farming, so he rushed to the population, wishful thinking that he could lead a group of people in the situation of lack of food, and then put himself in trouble All the most loyal Shandan soldiers who have worked so hard to train are given away to others, leaving only 900 Tubo soldiers. These 900 people originally followed the protagonist just to have enough to eat. Why would they follow the protagonist when they were about to starve? The aura of the protagonist is too illogical, and the theory that dealing with bureaucrats is just to kill is really childish to the extreme.

Compulsory education is poor education. Consider Prussia, Japan, which just popularized compulsory education, and China in the 1960s and 1970s. You give out textbooks, pens, ink, paper and inkstones for free, and you take care of the food for free. Nowadays, China cannot offer free textbooks, pen and paper, or free meals. As long as the teacher has a textbook, it's fine. If it doesn't work, you can leave the previous class's textbook to the next class. When writing, use a sandbox or wood and dip it in water to practice calligraphy. The school directly used confiscated powerful houses as classrooms. It's just a way to save money and enable students to master basic common words and mathematics. As for students who are not well-paid and do not come, you can only recommend one or two in the village now. In this case, why not let parents who are willing to pay for education send their children. Besides, it was an authoritarian government that imposed a poll tax on children who were not sent to school.

Works that can become gods are just ignored by the author. In the future, new books will only become worse and worse. I have seen too many such authors.

It can be seen that the author must have a good understanding of farmers. If the wasteland grows, it will have a good harvest that year. Every rural village will become rich. There are still people who are not grass. The places that were damaged by the war suddenly grow again. There are also people who know how to govern the country after studying for a few years. They will be exiled. The Jinshi in the future has to win the imperial examination and study with the seniors for a few years, but they may not be able to do it.

Now more than half of each chapter of the plot is filled with various data. I am afraid that there will be no more to write as the plot progresses. Artillery has not been released after more than ten years of development. It took more than ten years to pacify the north with gunpowder but no gunpowder. The hundreds of thousands of soldiers in the army are not literate enough for you to become an official. You have to set up a university to train students little by little to delay time. During the war years, students were specially trained for five years to work at the grassroots level. In modern times, it is a luxury.

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He has the greatest kindness in his heart. He is extremely trusting and devoted to his former comrades and subordinates. He is easily fooled and does not remember the considerations of interests, power and people's hearts. In reality, there are also people who are confused like this. Everyone likes to be friends with him, but no matter who he starts a business with, he will definitely lose money.

But the writing in some places is too awkward and a bit imitative.

In fact, the writing is okay, but the last few pictures of pig feet are a bit disgusting. I labeled him as a fake high-minded and idealist. He is a good person, but good people cannot compete for hegemony in the Tang Dynasty. I understand that there is nothing wrong with relying on the Zhang family of the Guiyi Army to develop themselves, and there is nothing wrong with breaking away. There is nothing wrong with Zhang Yichao being a great hero, but since it is written in this era, you must be alive first. I really don't understand the practice of throwing away the army and the seeds of study that I have worked so hard to build to others. Of the thousands of troops, I would keep a few hundred for myself, but most of them are barbarians, and the basic base is gone. If in reality, it would be over at this time. Eat it and wipe it clean, you are too weak, who will mess with you. By the way, I feel that in the latest chapter, there is a very big virginity plot in the pig's trotters. She actually dislikes the enemy's beautiful concubine given to her by her subordinates. She is not a big wife, but a mistress. What does it matter? Could it be that monogamy was not allowed in the Tang Dynasty. Everything is good, but this book feels too pretentious, too fake and aloof.

Hey, I was seventeen at the beginning, and now I am thirty-five. It has been almost twenty years since I raised the army. This progress is really enough. Liu Bang unified the world in seven years, and Li Shimin made faster progress. Even Zhu Yuanzhang raised his army in the twenty-fifth year. At this age, he is almost dominating the world. This is a novel. I really don't understand why the progress is so slow.

The biggest failure is to reduce intelligence. People around the protagonist must be simple and loyal. What is especially embarrassing is that there is a chapter where the protagonist can dominate the hearts of the people with just one announcement. It is too embarrassing. The protagonist is already a bit weak in winning every battle, and then he does this again.

I totally can't understand why they deliberately slow down and wait for the enemy to capture Luoyang before taking action. While building a character who loves the people like a son, they sit back and watch the chaos in the world and the people are miserable. They can obviously push it through in one step, but they have to do some strange operations. People are angry about it. They suppress the protagonist's progress in various ways and make the enemy arrogant and domineering. , It's not refreshing at all. If anyone in history had this ability, he would have already done so, and if he still did this and that, the more people would die if he unified the world one day later, the smaller the population would be. If you don't have that ability to do so, I won't say anything. You can already do it easily, so why do you still do this? ? ?

It's really funny that 200,000 illiterate soldiers and thousands of officers can't come together. The money and food saved for literacy would have been bulldozed long ago.

You have been going around in circles for so long, but you finally made a fortune by relying on other people. How ridiculous. You are not so aggrieved when you start in a feudal town in the Han Dynasty or as a mountain king. You have done so many things just to be a saint. In the beginning, the Guiyi Army will eventually rely on Tubo people to conquer the world. Then you should not unify the Tang Dynasty. Unifying Tubo is more suitable for you. You have to do this, you have to do that. You might as well take down the Tang Dynasty and Tubo and leave them to the Guiyi Army before you leave. I think it would be better.

Can the pace be faster? The protagonist is now 35 years old, and it has been 18 years since he rose to prominence. Now the world is in chaos and people are living in dire straits. You always say that you are a recruit, but which of your opponents is not a recruit? Aren't we all noobs pecking each other? Moreover, your system is strong, and you, the same rookie, will become talented faster. I think it is absolutely fine to defeat Gao Pian first and capture the entire Sanchuan area, then capture the Central Guizhou Road, or even directly bulldoze Annan, Yunnan, and then go east? Why do we need to raise it for two years? If the protagonist's current strength is directly swept away, he will definitely dominate the world in five years. Does the protagonist have to be 45 or even 50 years old to dominate the world? Half of the body is buried in the ground, and it doesn't feel good at all. It's very speechless. You actually wrote it like this to add inexplicable difficulty to the protagonist. It's completely unnecessary to wait for some people in history to grow up. Why drag on when you can sweep through?

There is a huge gap between this book and the real historical masters. If this is not a historical novel, the shortcomings can be said to be past. But as a historical novel, let alone the siege war written based on history. After all, there are many historical authors who are bad at writing wars. But if the protagonist cannot even distinguish rewards and punishments, it is too bad. I read the beginning and saw that ten members of the protagonist's team boarded first, and most of them died. Then the leader gave out 600 guan as a bounty to the whole team. Then, since the army already had pensions, the protagonist directly gave away 500 guan as a pension without telling the survivors, and the remaining 100 guans were used as the team's collective capital, which is a practice of ancient tribal public property. The correct approach is to summon the living people and explain to them that the rewards are for the ten members of the team and they will be shared with the war dead. This is called a generous pension. What the protagonist does is extremely bad. Those who survive are indeed rewarded with promotions, but that is the kindness of the general. Does it have anything to do with the protagonist? What I see is that a group of people follow the protagonist through life and death, and all their kindness and kindness belong to the general, but they follow the protagonist desperately and get no benefits at all afterwards. In this case, why should others continue to mess with you? The protagonist can't even distinguish rewards and punishments. It's really embarrassing.

Why are you still so selfless, always kneeling and licking the Zhang family, and just being a tyrant with Tang's back? Is it the same as your brother Zhu Youxiao? Do you think this is logical? After struggling for so long to capture Liangzhou, all the troops were taken away and given to others. Is there such a fool? There is a saying that once you enter the world, you can't help yourself. I don't know how you understand this sentence. Hey, I just started jumping around again after reading this book. I'm leaving. I won't read your book next time.

The writing is okay, but there are so many minor flaws. I just said that I just watched it. I like to pretend to be a scholar. I think it's okay for you, a pig born as a slave, to write Journey to the West, but when you write Dream of Red Mansions, your character makes me pick my feet 😥

The fighting force was always suppressed by force. The soldiers and horses were well-trained, weapons and armors were sophisticated, food and treatment were much higher than those of the imperial court, honors and high pensions were given to those killed in battle, and grassroots organizations were well-organized. Explosives were still used to open the city walls when attacking the city. There were a large number of hungry Guizhou leaders in the Tang Dynasty, Wang, Pang and others rebelled, and there was an internal peasant uprising. If you tell me that it is like this, people who don't know will think that you are facing Li Shimin of the early Tang Dynasty.

Congratulations to the author for turning himself into a street

Is there any Shennong? Don't give a speech if you're a trainee.

Ganzhou-Zhangye County-Ganzhou Zhangye County in Sui Dynasty: led Zhangye, Xiedan and Fulu counties. In the first year of Yining in the late Sui Dynasty [Li Liang]: Fulu County was divided and Jiuquan County was established. In the first year of Wude: Jiuquan and Fulu counties were cut off and placed under the jurisdiction of Suzhou. In the second year of Wude: he returned to Tang Dynasty and was subordinate to [Liangzhou General Manager's Office]. The seventh year of Wude: Lili [Liangzhou Dudufu]. In the 13th year of Zhenguan: [Ganzhou] took over Zhangye and Xiedan counties and governed Zhangye. In the first year of Tianbao: it was renamed [Zhangye County] and subordinated to [Wuwei County Dudufu]. In the thirteenth year of Tianbao: [Zhangye County] took over Zhangye and Xedan counties and governed Zhangye. Zi Deyuan Zai: [Zhangye County] was subordinated to [Hexi Jiedushi] In the first year of Qianyuan: it was restored to [Ganzhou]. The second year of Yongtai: trapped in Tubo. Dazhong three years: Zhang Yichao has returned to Ganzhou. Five years of Dazhong: Zhang Yichao returned to the Tang Dynasty with the Ganzhou map; [Ganzhou] still took over the two counties of Zhangye and Xiedan, and governed Zhangye.                 [][] ：