What Should I Do If I Become a Ghost?

After reading Chapter 39, I currently judge that food and grass will be good later. The characters all have their own characteristics, and the descriptions are quite good. The plot has a tight rhythm, and the events develop very quickly without any water. The setting seems to be a mysterious revival, with a little bit of traditional supernatural, foundation, and grammatical elements. It can be seen from the writing that the author is very greedy. Character characteristics, events, world unfolding, discussion of human nature, highlights of passers-by, interactions of supporting characters, plot rhythm, protagonist actions, clues and links, he wants it all in less than forty chapters. The writing is good, and I most likely like to show off my skills. I have transitioned the scene several times, but I don't use it very well. I am easily stunned if I have no experience. The horror is not too scary, the atmosphere is quite passionate. Moreover, this author is quite active and talks a lot.

The author's level is really high 😁. Most people can't write things like group portraits, but those who can write them in a wonderful and fluent way are masters. I wonder how long you drafted the outline before officially submitting it?

Have you ever been a ghost? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted🫵🏻

It turns out that the protagonist is a ghost who often loses control of his instinct and goes crazy. As a result, after the battle in the sea of ​​resurrection consciousness was over, the bloodthirsty instinct of "Gui Xiao" suddenly became a ghost, and the protagonist's original abilities also became those of a ghost. For example, if a person is crazy hungry and only wants to find something to eat, it turns out that hunger actually has its own consciousness. When a person is crazy hungry and just wants to eat, it is actually competing with you for the control of the brain. This is too strange

1. The protagonist did not kill the chairman when he went to the company, and did not go on a killing spree 2. The crime was committed by his father-in-law. The chairman should have killed everyone the first time. Anyway, he was not the one who committed the crime, so it is not a big deal ➽3. The protagonist was too restrained. The ultimate purpose of reading the novel It's fun (never mind that it's strategies, plots, and scheming that all serve the purpose of being happy, so there are restrictions but you can't be cowardly. For example, the protagonist can kill all the top managers of the company and kill the nine tribes. Only in this way can we feel happy. We are all modern Jia Xu, and we don't read the books of sages)

It was the best before resurrection. I feel like it has the potential to become my immortal grass. The male protagonist of the second dungeon made me a little nervous, but I still read it. In the third dungeon, I ran to see the priest. The priest's character was so abstract that I had a hard time criticizing him. Then he threw some kind of queen into the mix... I really don't know why. You supernatural authors have a hard time writing about people, but it's good to write about ghosts.

I haven't finished the free chapter yet, and I'm really not happy about it. In such a hopeless and cruel world view, no matter how serious and calm you are, you can at least be a little more serious. At present, your protagonist's character is incompatible with this world. Take a step back, even if you want to write about the protagonist's abstract and funny character, brother, it doesn't mean that you are just as abstract and funny as a primary school student who talks about bad internet memes. Have you read it before writing it? Do you really think this is funny? The first dialogue after resurrection made me vomit. Then when I entered the second area, the protagonist was very frivolous and acted like a gangster. I really couldn't complain. Originally, the sense of existence in the early stage is almost zero, but you still write the protagonist like this, alas.

Chapters 35, 36, 37, and 38 are recommended to be skipped. I feel so uncomfortable eating this shit. If you think it is acceptable and are curious, you can read Chapter 35 first to have a taste.

As for the many new books that have appeared on the suspense channel this year (this one has been moved to cities now, but I feel that it does not fit this positioning, and the traffic is still tepid as before), the quality is quite good, especially this seems to be the author's first book. It has been able to reach more than one million copies without falling apart. I have to say, it is a surprise. The author of this book has made many common mistakes among newcomers. He has also reflected on himself. There are reasons for the separation of themes, etc., But I feel that one of them is not satisfying enough. Actually, it's still a matter of subject matter. When I first read this book, I thought it was a Ben Invincible style, but later I found out that it wasn't, not exactly. This led to an unclear feeling of enjoyment. I thought the point of enjoyment was about to come, but it actually didn't. The first volume is a group portrait, and the second volume is the main perspective. The problem is that from the perspective of the first volume, we all thought that the protagonist was the ghost, but judging from the subsequent development and the current plot, this amount is actually doubtful. The protagonist does not seem to be "Chen Xiao", but a ghost who appears out of nowhere. He inherits Chen Xiao's self-awareness, squeezes the space of the original "Chen Xiao" (now Gui Xiao), and forcibly completes symbiosis with Gui Xiao, and can use its abilities. This setting is actually very interesting. It is obvious that the author buried a big hole in this life experience, but the problem is that it was revealed too late. Many people abandoned the book in the second volume. The reason is that they thought that the combination of "Tear" and "Swallow" should be the protagonist's abilities. In fact, they are not, they belong to Gui Xiao. If you understand this, you will find that this is a normal upgrade flow. What is Jiang in the first volume? It's a "loan". The protagonist has to retreat behind the scenes due to unstable cognition and leadership. He borrows Gui Xiao's ability and finally completes his resurrection. The protagonists of the first volume are actually Di Jie and Jiang Mingxuan. The good and the evil work together to resurrect the protagonist in order to survive and protect them. Many people say that the second volume is about the author forcibly suppressing the combat power, but it seems that it is obviously not the case at present (because even Gui Xiao can't keep up with the intensity and is constantly escalating.) What is the second volume about? The protagonist controls Wang Jianguo's [flesh and blood] and gives up [tear] for dominance, so many people feel that his combat power is suppressed. However, in the second volume, the protagonist's [flesh and flesh] actually comes in handy. I feel that the rhythm is okay. The two sides take over in the middle wave, and Gui Xiao is wise, which is also a good deal. The forgotten ghost at the end is also very interesting. I don't know if it will appear in the follow-up. If you can recognize this clearly, you will find that the protagonist has actually been enhanced. Although his combat power has declined compared to the first volume, his condition has stabilized. The third volume is about foreign countries, and it is also the most criticized volume. The author wrote some emotional dramas, laid out a lot of foreshadowing, and described foreign ecology, obviously in preparation for the fourth volume. But the emotional drama... Is this a common problem among supernatural writers? The second thing is that this author is obviously good at ending multiple lines in parallel, but the multiple endings in the third volume are a bit too strong. I am in the book club, and the author's explanation is ✍🏻 Hey, he made the Devouring Ghost too strong, but the Domain Ghost was suppressed in the event area. His writing exceeded the standard and he had to retract some points. He originally planned to write about a joint effort between internal and external forces, but later changed it to a one-sided internal story, and opened up three small sub-plots for the other people's roles, which was okay. Speaking of which, I read it back and found that there were hidden threads in the second and third volumes. At the end of the first volume, the forum describes two special states. One is that ghosts have complementary abilities. In fact, they are the maze ghost and the tree ghost in the second volume, right? The other is supernatural intrusion, isn't that the third volume? Looking at it this way, it's really thoughtful. The fourth volume is finally here. Oh my god, it took almost four months to write, right? I checked it out in the group and found that it has more than 600,000 words, which accounts for half of the scenes in this book! The fourth volume is divided into multiple copies. Daxia District, Germany District, Japan District, Britain, etc... There are really many ideas and the writing is quite good, but it has returned to the writing method of group portraits. Is this the author's comfort zone? In short, the quality is still very good, but I feel that it has declined in the Japanese area, but it is still good. Resurrection in the first volume, habitual ability in the second volume, entering the pseudo realm in the third volume, and entering the realm in the fourth volume. From this point of view, the author really has a clear outline, and then also laid more foreshadowings. I want to continue reading. If there are book friends who have seen this, I think it can be entered. Obviously, Guixiao's existence is necessary. The author probably intended to write about a pair of complementary fields, one controlling life and the other controlling death. (✧◡✧) Looking forward to the follow-up plot. But I still have to be patient with the emotional drama in the third volume. Fortunately, the author said I won't write it anymore, so that's okay. Ah ah ∠( °ω°)／, why did it become four or five thousand in the latest update? Isn't this an update? How can you tolerate being an author of your age? Stand up, deer! ! 😐😐😐😐

Have you ever been a ghost? What the hell, just scribbling. One heart and one condition? Wrong, which one is not your heart, that one is your life. The heart disappeared within three days. The whole city was dead, both humans and animals perished. What the hell is this? Condition? When you appear in front of me, it is already a great mercy that you are still alive. Do you still want to have evil thoughts? The Tao is ruthless, not because ghosts have abandoned themselves, but because they have become true to the Tao. I am the ghost, the ghost is not me. My understanding is too low, so I just write randomly, right?

Food and grass (even fairy grass that can be maintained forever) is very well written, I like it very much Modern urban background, strange recovery, the ghost realm will randomly cover a city for 30 days, and the ghosts will revive in it, either suppress the ghosts, or survive the 30 days The ghost realm dissipates and the ghosts disappear The key element of this book is the ghost mission. After the ghost is born, there will be three stages of tasks. If you don't complete the task, the ghost will be violent. If you complete the task, the ghost will become stronger The protagonist is a ghost born in the ghost domain. The ghost has its own rules and behavioral restrictions (weaknesses) on killing and killing, and the limitation of the protagonist ghost is the protagonist's humanity The beginning of the chapter is very good, but there are still a lot of worries, 1. What will happen to the protagonist after he is resurrected, 2. The relationship between the supernatural bureau and the protagonist (add or not) There are also many situations where you start high and go low, such as the corpse next door, but I still wish the author better and better as he writes

It is identified as food and grass, but there are some points that cannot be maintained. It is related to the safety of hundreds of thousands of people in a district. How can the government still rely on evidence when facing companies? The comment area also explained that there are only a few people dead now, so it is not serious, which is simply outrageous. Let's not talk about the attitude of the government of only a few people dying, but in the future, it can be seen with the naked eye that if the task is not completed, hundreds or thousands of people will die 😅 What kind of big taxpayer are you talking about at this time? I really don't understand what a violent institution is

Have you ever been a ghost? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The protagonist doesn't appear until Chapter 55, and is basically invisible during the entire episode. The sense of immersion as the protagonist is completely weakened to nothing. I think it's better if you make Jiang the protagonist this way, because Jiang has a distinct personality and a complete character arc. And I have no idea what the protagonist is. He is just a tragic little character. As a human being, he is weak. As a ghost, he never breaks out from the beginning to the end. He just feels like a roadside character. The author feels it is real, and we also feel it is true, but as a protagonist, he fails.

After reading a few chapters, I noticed that in book reviews, the author often explains the plot, the rationality of the settings, and his intentions to the readers. Some buildings even have a hundred floors. My opinion is to try to minimize this practice. From personal experience, this will most likely only have a negative impact on your writing.

Has the author ever read The Soul of Negri? If the [protagonist] dies, let's change the protagonist. Can't a ghost be the protagonist? The first part laid out so much, but in the end it returned to the basics. If you look at the current setting of the protagonist (a person with the ability of flesh and blood, who does not easily use the tearing of shadows in the body and the invasion of singing), the current setting is contrary to the title of your book and your original ghost setting. Open high and go low, ah ah ah ah.

Have you ever died? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted.

If it can cause a large-scale debate in Duan Commentary and make people who think it is toxic endure reading many chapters, it means that the book is not bad 🙂

The previous descriptions are all very good. The protagonist is the most special ghost and then expands his perspective. However, it fails later in the group portrait. However, the protagonist is rarely seen a few times. The perspective is basically on Jiang's body and the protagonist also changes from the most special ghost to a slightly special person. In a short time, he becomes an ordinary urban superpower.

The first part of this novel is really good, but it doesn't feel right as I finish it. The so-called Gui Xiao came out as Chun Chun's failure, and the plot started to go wrong. According to the previous description, the protagonist should be Gui Xiao, so where did Gui Xiao come from? The protagonist should fight against his instinct as a ghost, not against the so-called Ghost Night. This way of writing makes the protagonist not a ghost, but a character similar to a ghost controller. Especially Ghost Night can actually compete with the other two ghosts as a separate individual. This is so unreasonable. As a ghost born from the body of the protagonist, it becomes two individuals with the protagonist. Secondly, it can be said that the protagonist of the plot has no control at all. He inexplicably eats flesh and blood ghosts, and then has no back-up at all. It cannot affect the development of the plot at all. In the process, a lot of space is given to other supporting characters, and the priorities are reversed. The character design in the end is also a bit strange. It can be seen that the author wanted to create some special supporting characters, but it was a bit messed up.

I was searching for a book in the bookstore and found this one. Suddenly I remembered that I was following the book chapter by chapter. I deleted the book just because the foreign woman came out. I read the comments and said that she was the heroine. . .

A good book, the plot is interesting, and every character is unique. What to watch: The pros and cons are trying their best to complete the supernatural event mission, each with their own purposes. The advantage is that there are no messy settings and no blockbuster explanatory instructions. The plot is compact and very exciting when watching it. A rare serious suspense, without ambiguous female supporting characters, such as some beautiful policewoman, some wealthy lady, some bloody girlfriend.

In the later stage, I still pulled it, and overall it is still regarded as fairy grass. If you want a sense of immersion, don't bring in two-dimensional elements. Now the two-dimensional elements of the starting point have become that there must be a lolita, the lolita must like you, the protagonist must touch the lolita's hair, and must describe a certain woman's figure, skin, and small movements in detail. It is judged to be too depressing. 🙂

Very well written. But the protagonist disappears at every turn, and we can't see him for more than ten or dozens of chapters. There are too many characters. Personally, I don't like this kind of group portrait novel, but I can't stand it. The writing, conception, and logic are all good. I was chasing the fourth volume (the volume of the first global war), and it was very tiring. I bought all the chapters, but they were all scrolling through quickly, just waiting to see the protagonist, but I couldn't see him. So after the end of this volume, there was no more updates. This pause lasted for several months. Yesterday I saw the end of the fifth volume, and the sixth volume has more than 50 chapters. I thought that I should be able to read it, it should be very enjoyable, it should be very cool, after all, he has reached the field, right? The only domain level in the human camp. But unfortunately, I can't feel happy at all. The strength of the protagonist cannot be reflected at all. Strength and weakness need to be compared. The protagonist is either invisible for dozens of chapters, or appears but only he and the domain ghost exist. There is no comparison at all. He is now like a painting on the altar table, and has become a belief. He is only represented by the word "ace" in the occasional words when the characters meet. I won't read it anymore and will wait for the next book whose author is not a group portrait. When everyone reads Wei Li's novels, to put it bluntly, they just want to be happy and escape from reality, study, work and the troubles in life, which will inevitably bring the perspective of the protagonist. Naturally, (logically), the more enjoyable and awesome the novels are, the more people will resonate with it, or it will fit more people's psychology. It's good to occasionally switch to other people's perspective. The story will be fuller and more three-dimensional, and the side view will be more reasonable and real. The author's writing is also very good. Every character has flesh and blood, no repetition, more real. Each has its own perspective and small world, and through this big frame of the big world, everyone is closely connected. The world is full of different situations, and the story is very good. However, there are too many characters, and it's fine for those who follow the book. For someone like me who reads more than ten books at the same time, it's a bit hard to follow (but where can I get a monthly pass for only one or two books)? What's more, the protagonist is unhappy.

As title

I saw Chapter 68 of The Omen, and I was exhausted from reading it. 1. The chapter names in the first volume are normal, but the chapter names in the second volume are all two characters, and the chapter names in the third volume are three characters, which makes me uncomfortable. I am used to looking for motivation to read through the chapter names when I see uninteresting places, and force myself to read the chapters I am interested in. However, the chapter names in the third volume are just three characters, and I don't want to read them as soon as I see the chapter names. 2. A "female protagonist" appears out of nowhere, 3. It starts to favor group portraits, switching from the protagonist's side to other people, for a short period, and suddenly back to the protagonist's side. It feels like it is specially cut there to advance the plot. These three points made me unable to stand it. Normally I don't read discussion posts. After all, everyone's preferences are different. I was afraid of being affected by what was said in the discussion posts. But I couldn't stand it anymore and told me to look at the discussion posts to see if I could find anything that attracted me. As a result, I saw that the latter part was more of a group portrait, which made it even harder for me to read.

It looks really good when it's really good, and it's really boring when it's dull. I really can't keep up with the protagonist who is the same as invisible every day. . . After reading it day by day, I feel that it doesn't look like it. Every time I have to make dozens of chapters that turn into chapters of a group portrait. It's hard. Just keep it and stop pursuing it.

The front is okay. It immediately collapsed as soon as the time came out. Many masters write the plot of the timeline in one stroke. The author has written so much that it is just a mess.

It looks pretty good, but it feels like the progress is a little slow. There are more chapters in each chapter. The main character is not described very much. I don't know if I am planning to do a group portrait. To sum up, the writing is very good. Good luck, author.

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