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It's almost short and watery. It's 4,000 words in one day. You can write a small plot in two days. This copy is also smelly and long. Dude, are you seriously thinking about the plot when you take time off every now and then? The idea of changing bodies is okay, but your protagonist There is absolutely 0 growth, and the emotional line is also 0 development. Halfway through the writing, a monster is sent to make the protagonist show off. Oh, bro thought this part was so cool, right? What happened? This monster is here to deliver answers. I thought the protagonist could discover it on his own. Almost every picture has a long paragraph of character dialogue and psychological description, which are completely used to make up the word count. Furthermore, the performance of the protagonist's biggest cheat, "Death Rewind", is getting worse and worse. Next time you encounter a more awesome monster, you can just let the red line be so thick that it surrounds the earth. What's funny is that in the previous dungeons, the realm could only drag others into the spiritual space. Now, you can drag everyone into it and make a wish. Why don't you let her directly name it? Just describing a realm takes more than half a chapter

A very good book. There are no big logical holes. IQ is always online. The character interactions are not awkward. There are also some ideas. At least it counts as food. My fairy grass. The only shortcoming is that it is too slow to update.

This book is very well written and is a rare treasure. I can only say that the results are not worthy of the author's efforts. The beginning is a little bit toxic, it unfolds too fast and the settings are embarrassing. Later, the world view slowly unfolds and becomes more and more comfortable to watch. The advantage is that it has a great imagination, relatively clear wits and no forced intelligence, a great world view, and a tendency to develop group portraits. The disadvantage is that the author's writing style is a bit immature. Although it can be seen that the writing will get better with more chapters, the combat description does need to be improved. The harem is not too hard to open, and every heroine is very good. I look forward to the follow-up plot. The author works full-time and relies on this book to make a living, so he probably doesn't have to worry about eunuchs. And he is very obedient. He will see and reply to discussions in book circles. Welcome to join the group discussion, the author will share with everyone in the group. In the end, I am actually a sailor. Although I have fully subscribed, the author please update me as soon as possible to pay me for typing so many words😡

Skillful metaphors, unique contradictions, hidden plot advancement... Of course, there are also similar but extended skill sets, a heroine with almost the same style of painting, countless self-examinations and transformations... I can probably recognize who the author is, and it still sounds familiar. The plot of this work has not yet progressed to the point where the mystery is solved, but the completeness and completion of each plot is already very good. Goldfinger is limited by the mystery of the protagonist. The protagonist can only pry a brick of the treasure mountain from time to time, and the setting of floating and diving increases the sense of urgency... Before the reincarnation village, the plot was promoted in an orderly manner, but the part of Yueyin Village was slightly lacking. On the one hand, the decisive battle was a bit long. On the other hand, the reader is still in a God's perspective, and can directly see the problems of Ling Xiao and Yilong, while the solution provided by the protagonist is reasonable but a bit confusing. Of course, as other book reviews have said, this book is also one of the few that can see the existence of "tactics". Although some parts of the direction are slightly nonsensical, the setting and explanation of this kind of tactics can not only withstand the scrutiny of the characters in the book, but also the scrutiny of God (the reader). This is very good, it can directly remind people of the rules of Scarlet Words or Rules of the Hell Apartment series. It gives you preconditions for you to "decrypt", which is an effective interaction between the author and the reader. It is worth mentioning that the "solutions" provided by the author are basically unexpected and reasonable (after all, God's perspective can see more than the characters in the book), which is another surprise. All in all, in my opinion this is a great work. I hope that the author can gain linear growth in writing ability and rewards, and that more people can read this work.

The setting is rigorous and novel, the writing is interesting, many of the perspectives are refreshing, and many of the characters are impressive. Although I am not a die-hard fan, there is no doubt that I am your fan and will always support it. I look forward to your work.

There is a female protagonist, I entered first 😍😍😍

Did the author have a previous life and write so well for the first time?

Look at male Xia and female Su. Besides, the author ran away without saying a word, so he is not a man.

I haven't updated this book in the past two months because it's almost finished and I plan to save more copies to read again. But judging from the more than 2.5 Million words I have read before, I think the biggest shortcoming is the lack of scene description. There is a lack of description of the protagonist's journey from the starting point to the destination. The feeling is that no matter which new city you arrive in, whether it is Edinburgh or Vogt. There is no difference between them and the city where the administration was originally located. There is no descriptive point that can distinguish these cities. There are several places like that small space, and the author's descriptions are actually good. For example, the Blood Demon's House is very distinctive. First of all, he describes the upside-down furniture and different angles in detail. The walls and windows of the closed hospital are also detailed enough. The protagonist is in these different rooms. The movement between scenes is clearly written, but when it comes to outdoor scenes, it is a large open scene. It gives the impression that the protagonist is walking on flat ground whether he is fighting or doing anything. It is flat ground. Maybe there are some buildings like background panels around it. You can imagine buildings that are very close to real life, but they lack a sense of movement. You can't simply say that outdoor scenes are not good. There are some outdoor scenes that you described very well, like the Paradise Choir. Then, the scene in Blood Dynasty in The Hunting King was also distinctive and very good. But, when I hit the writer near the management office. It's very featureless, without any description or movement. The camera just jumps from point to point, jumping back and forth without any description of the scene. At the most serious time, I think the worst thing written was when I followed the captain to the time when the Split King was there. At that time, getting off the boat and going ashore really felt like I couldn't imagine any scene in my mind. I really went down to the flat ground, and walked out of the boat to a flat land, and then there was the Split King's palace on the flat ground.

After reading a thousand chapters in two days, I decided to subscribe to it in full and support it with a monthly pass. Although the author is obviously lacking in writing ability, which leads to problems in character creation, plot arrangement, and visual expression, etc., So much so that when he sees something bad, he will get very angry and want to click on the comment to curse (?). But it is undeniable that you can still see the effort he put into the setting and plot. The world view is well designed and the mythology is right. Although the plot is not expressive enough, the ideas are interesting. In addition, I can indeed see the author's progress. Overall, it is a work worth supporting.

I never expected it to be a harem article. It is rare to open a harem now. I made a mistake. Alas😮‍💨, I strayed into a precious place. Fellow Taoists, please continue (I forgot to read the comments. Damn it. It's uncomfortable. Tonight's fairy white repair is done)

The front row reminds me of the harem in this book 😏 and the late game

The emotional line of this book has always made me feel bored. Neither my sisters nor my boss liked it very much. Now I finally figured it out. What feels strange to me about the emotional scenes in this book is that they are all about daily life, all about going to bed, and they seem to have nothing to do with adventure or climax. Going to bed was a blur, the daily routine was brushed off, and the mood was extinguished before it even got up, and I had to repeat the phrase "you haven't watched it after watching it". The length of the emotional drama is not the key, the emotion is. All the emotional scenes in this book are taken for granted, step-by-step, and without passion. Just like the daily comparison between Shangguan and the protagonist in the book, the Red Duke's lineage fights against the Beast King. The story of the fight against the Beast King is obviously shorter in terms of length, but it attracts me more than everyday life, which is really dull and boring.                                                                                               It is all about having sex. To be honest, I just want to laugh. Whether it is Su's confession or the hotel, it is like a farce, writing about having sex in a fog. Rather than counter-cleansing, I care more about the author's writing style to avoid review, like an extra that has nothing to do with the main text. The summary is that the emotional drama in this book lacks a touching plot. Or to use the terminology of this book, there is no desire, there is the desire to go to bed, but there is no desire to fall in love. Su Weiyu is cautious, Su Yue is cautious, Xia Shou is cautious, Shangguan's daily life is leisurely, the logic is there, where is the desire? Whether those who are good at sensationalism are Ji Cha, Tingri, Fengyue or Jiangnan's classic dragon clan, the sensationalism is reflected in the climax of the plot. The emotional drama in this book has nothing to do with the plot points. This is probably the reason why I don't like it.

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I rarely write long reviews, but this book is worth it. I have fully ordered this book. To be honest, I like it very much. The emotional plot is a bit flat, but you can see that there is a lot of thinking by the author in it. On the one hand, it is about the world setting. The whole structure is quite good. On the other hand, it pays attention to some ingenuity, whether it is the recently published mark of measuring people or thinking about desire. As for the entire book, it is considered excellent. I hope people who read this comment can support the author more

Personal rating: 7.5-8/10 (non-spoilers) To summarize my feelings for readers who don't want to read a long story: the writing style generally makes some plots that should be sensational a bit awkward to watch, but the author can use his strengths and avoid weaknesses, and the plot and world view design are quite exciting. So far, there is no big problem with the self-consistency of the logic. This is better than most works, male and female. The character design of the main character is also very good, and I can feel the obvious arc of the character. In terms of emotional scenes, emmmm, I can only say that the writing is very similar to that of Little Chu Nan (pure praise). The pulling part is a bit rushed, but it is very sweet to taste. The psychological activities are quite good (it is really little Chu Nan, I admire the face). Unfortunately, it is limited by the world view, and there are very few daily parts. It is understandable, but I personally feel a little regretful. By the way, the author has said that there are many female protagonists, so don't enter if you don't like it (The following will involve spoilers, so be careful) Let's talk about the shortcomings first. They are quite obvious. The author even said it himself. The writing style is a disadvantage, but I think the author is still good at it. It's improved. There are a lot of plots in the past that I can tell the author wanted to write, but they actually look really awkward. When it comes to the recollection of the unknown hero, I think it has obviously improved. The simple words really convey the tragic feeling that I want, which is a section that impressed me deeply. Fortunately, I think the subject matter chosen by the author will require far more plot design than writing style. This is also a way to maximize strengths and avoid weaknesses. Once there are loopholes in the plot, the entire book will easily collapse, so I hope the author has a complete design. Now I can start boasting, there are still many advantages First, let's talk about the characters. My favorite in this book is probably the female protagonist. Because the male protagonist also has a large part of the mystery plot, I think the male protagonist is not as three-dimensional and complete as the female protagonist. This kind of shaping is multi-faceted, including Su Weiyu who wants to protect her sister (sister control), and Su Weiyu who is a transparent person who seems to be very happy (actually it is quite cool) But Su Weiyu is very strong and endures loneliness (Gouzi and 678 have made great contributions), and Su Weiyu is a girl who has just started to fall in love and is carefully pulled by the person she likes. Su Weiyu's character is very complete, and the charm value is full. I hope that I can see the sweet daily life of Xiao Su and Xia Shou in the future. It can be in a different timeline. Please, this is really important to me 😢😆. Then there are the three parts of "Wolong and Phoenix Girl". Brother Bai has more ink, but the effect of the revenge scene is really poor, so bad that I even think the author did it on purpose, otherwise there would be such a frustrating revenge (probably not because of poor writing skills), but Brother Bai's character design is still okay, and the design of the Rubik's Cube is also very handsome. I still recognize the author's creativity in abilities. I hope that the subsequent subplots of the supporting characters will be a little more interesting and refreshing. The other thing is that many people are a little disgusted with my sister, but I still like her very much. She is an "ordinary person" who is trying to keep up with Xia Shou. The process of my sister's transformation from the ordinary world to a finisher is actually not easy. Since the sister is mostly "fighting for men" with her sister, she seems a bit of a vase. In fact, she is as strong as her sister, which can be seen from her powers, including the few words she has revealed about the so-called "future". But at present, I think there is a lack of a "personal return" for her to shine, so she seems to be much less attractive than her sister. I am looking forward to the possible follow-up Shura Field plot. The sister who controls the sister wants to compete with the sister who can't see her sister. This kind of thing is great to think about. 😌 Okay, the character design is almost covered. Let me talk about the worldview and plot design that I think are the essence. The two are bound. An excellent plot is inseparable from a good worldview. The setting of this book obviously has a lot of elements related to esotericism. I don't know much about this aspect. I only know a little bit from the comments when I read the book. However, it does not affect my understanding at all. Instead, it makes me want to play related games. The plot can basically be divided into small dungeons. At the beginning, the Blood Demon dungeon was an introduction, leaving countless foreshadowings and leading to the heroine. My favorite later was the dungeon in Yuezhuo Village. The design was interlocking and the solution corresponded to the previous foreshadowing. I thought it was very clever and had an unexpected and reasonable feeling. It can be read as a separate short article. Others, like the movie chapter and the "One Hour" City chapter, all feel more or less incomplete. The former had too little space for the game with the "Butcher", Revenge was even more unpleasant to watch, and it ended very suddenly. The key setting of making a movie had no sense of existence after watching it. It's a pity that I lost my expectations before watching it. The latter is more interesting, and the actual perception also highlights the characteristic of "retaining one hour of memory". The process of solving this obstacle is well grasped, and it does not affect the progress of the main plot. However, the final ending of the main plot still feels too sudden for me. Although it makes sense, the perception is that the next step is a climax battle, and the villain suddenly appears, which is kind of beautiful. There is also a copy of Blood Dynasty, which is my favorite plot. At least it is very complete and it is very enjoyable to watch. The hallucination of the Beacon of Fear makes people come back. The writing is really great, and the inner activities are so delicately written. The copy of Underworld is also good. It has a feeling of getting better and better. The design of the time traveler who thought it was a game is also quite interesting. It is a very good profile description tool that can make the acquisition of some important information look less like deus ex machina. The other world line also looks very interesting. I wonder if I will have a chance to check it out. It's a pity that only the protagonist remembers the 15 years in the book (? I can't remember, probably that many). I hope my sister can remember it in the future, just like I hope my sister can see my sister one day. In general, the whole plot is logical and self-consistent. There are still many mysteries about the protagonist. I believe the author can handle them well. After all, the look and feel of this book is getting better and better. On a whim, I wrote whatever I thought of. I really like this book. I have recently been nominated for a masterpiece. I just hope that more people will read this book, and I also hope that the author will write better and better. Come on, author! 🤓

After reading too many books like this, I always want the protagonist to create an organization or force of his own, and I don't want the protagonist to join a national organization or other organizations. However, there is no book about the protagonist creating his own organization. Instead, they all join other people's organizations.

Su Weiyu was born with the greatest wealth in the world - the ability to rationalize everything she does without being noticed by anyone.        ，，，，，，，， Occasionally she feels lonely, but those are all minor flaws brought about by her abilities. They are the embellishments on the road to becoming a strong person. Human beings cannot share the same language with her, and weirdness keeps her company. She was born to stand above everyone. The way she walked was the way of heaven, and the people she punished were the punishment of heaven. Due to the nature of her abilities, she sees herself as the master of humans, simply because they cannot disobey her. Her goal is to transcend humans and monsters. She regards this as her birthright mission, or as an inevitable outcome. After she reached the top, the world continued as usual, and humans and weirdness continued to be entangled. They have no way of knowing that there is still a person named Su Weiyu in the world, and the fact that humans and weirdness will always exist is engraved in time, because she has become existence itself.              ，，，， Notice! Frequent use of the power of existence will also lead to the reduction of one's own existence. It is said that this is a ritual He uses to collect people to accompany Him in the eternal years, but no one can confirm it. Because so far, the phenomenon of frequent use of the power of existence being reduced and causing disappearance has not been recorded! ! !        （

My personal opinion is that there are more and more questions, and there is no explanation. The protagonist is very busy. The power system seems to be obvious at first, second and third levels, but the reality is not clear. For example, the professional titles and positions. The level division of the administration is only the professional titles, but the strength is divided by the position. This is not clear. The plot arrangement is too compact, and there is no smooth transition in the plot, causing the protagonist to be almost pushed along. In the previous plot, there is no "what should I do" by the protagonist, but only "what should you do". When reading, it feels too passive, which makes the whole plot too depressing and makes reading very tiring. Finally, there are too many riddles in the plot. Many of the questions at the beginning have not been solved after hundreds of chapters. These questions do not have simple and clear solutions like the revenge of the father's murder, such as Edward's life and death. It is obvious that the book cannot be answered in the early stage, Mermaid. I think this is a radio novel, and it's hard for me to get into a book with so many unsolved mysteries.

Before reading the book, do a two-way screening

Suweiyu

It is quite interesting to see this analysis of the concept of love at the beginning of Chapter 1479. By the way, I would like to talk about my personal experience of this book. Personally speaking, there are roughly four aspects to watch in this book: ① Occasionally stunning plot designs, such as Yuezhuo Village/Eternal Purgatory; ② Desire system settings, such as the current paragraph and the diary law, which may seem deviant at first glance but are inexplicably convincing; ③ Characters, thanks to long-term investment The accumulation of pen and ink and the desire system make it easier to highlight the characteristics of the characters. Many characters in the book are impressive, such as the protagonist team and Split; ④Emotional drama and daily scenes. Compared with the unstable copy, the author's daily plot quality has a higher limit. The emotional drama also has a performance above the standard due to the distinct character image and the desire system. Personally, the first thing that initially attracted me to this book was the first one, but as the consumption of ideas/inspiration continued to decline, the results of subsequent attempts were far from ideal; On the other hand, as the content accumulated, I gradually developed feelings for the characters, even if the story experience was not good enough. Jia Ye can continue to pursue; Later on, I gradually discovered that the seemingly rough abnormal system, but the author can give tricky interpretations and ideas from time to time, which is not a big surprise. Coupled with the emotional drama and daily life that are always online, the inertia of reading has regained a certain sense of expectation. The biggest problem in my personal experience with this book is that besides the above points, other contents are tasteless and the copy is a failure. In fact, I have always had the idea of ​​​​rereading it again to summarize and sort out the wild and wild ideas in the book, but it has also ended in regret many times due to the large amount of uninteresting content between the exciting sections. For readers who have been following updates, they are faced with unknown plot developments. Even if they are not satisfied at the moment, they still have certain expectations. In addition, the longer reading time allows these readers to have a deeper emotional accumulation of the characters, so they can persist in reading; The author seems to have chosen to focus on daily content for his next book. This decision can be regarded as exploiting strengths and avoiding weaknesses. However, I personally hope not to completely give up on imagining wonderful puzzle plot designs and unfettered ideas. After all, there are many authors who can write about daily life, and your unique advantage is that you can not only write about daily life. Readers like me are first attracted by wonderful puzzle solving and original ideas, and then gradually transform into daily readers as the story develops. I still remember the sudden introduction of two dummy characters during the preparation stage for the Yuezhuo Village dungeon. Quite a few readers were dissatisfied, but the author confidently stated that there was a reason for writing this way. I hope everyone can believe the author's plot design. Sure enough, the Yuezhuo Village dungeon became the most dazzling peak of the book. Maybe later Many failed attempts have affected the author's confidence. I have never seen the author confidently announce that a good show is about to take place. However, this experience has convinced me that the author has a clear understanding of the quality of his plot. I have seen the author say before that he thinks the ending of the book is well designed, and I am looking forward to the book having a stunning ending. Finally, I hope that the author of the next book can go further on the basis of this book, and don't give up on his core competitiveness because of some unsuccessful attempts in this book. Your writing skills and maturity of routines are not ranked high in the Internet literary circle, but your eye-catching inspiration and eccentric ideas are rare among the countless authors. Come on!

I see that there is no big problem with the logic now, and the heroine is also well designed.

Why have you been writing about those supporting characters lately? What I have been writing about in the past few days are guys like Wang Meng and King Tie Xing. I am not interested at all in small characters like this plotting here and there. Even the background has been laid out for too many days. I don't care if Wang Meng is Angang or Ampere. Even if he is Abe J3, I don't care. It's just a line on the roadside. Our update volume is already sluggish, and we have to take time off from time to time. I haven't seen the protagonist for many days. I want to see what Xia Shou is doing, and what will he do after he regains his body? Instead of looking at some dungeons that are only useful, where irrelevant little characters are plotting against each other. Forget about intrigues and intrigues, there is no protagonist group involved yet. After all, we are not a group portrait. We only need a few strokes. There is no need to spend so many days preparing them. He is the King of Iron Punishment, not the King of Splitting, so why give him so much pen and ink? Go over and chop him twice, then send him away and that's it. After all, this is a light novel. I have been reading this kind of boring supporting characters for several days. Let the protagonist kill everyone. I am really fed up with these red tapes.

Because Xia Shou is about to sign, and Mo Yusi allows mixed desires This article summarizes what desire characteristics Xia Shou has For reference only If there are any omissions, please add them Blood God·Life and Death: Second Self·Blood Demon Have used the scepter of blood and fire Have eaten the wrong forbidden consciousness that extinguished fire and turned it into blood in the divine law incident and used it Crane Moon·Secret Keeper: Xia Shou's [reaching the peak in no one's place] needs to be kept secret Knowing a lot but not saying it is to keep the secret Secretary Person·Secret Spreader: None yet Strange Secrets•Forgetting and Remembering: Delay Knife, derived from the power of forget-me-not (Tu Cao Cao For a moment, even though it is called forget-me-not, does it make people forget it? ) The Horse in the Forest·Drama and Possibility: To some extent, seeking death should be considered Thirsty Teeth·The thirsty person who drinks sea water: It should be the one with the least relationship with Xia Shou But I think the performance between him and "Yun Xiao" is a kind of thirst He wants Su Yue, but is worried about Wei Yu, in a state of wanting but not getting. And Yunxiao is his "sea water". The more he drinks, the more he wants more, and for this reason he drinks more and more. So I think Xia Shou also has a thirst for thirst I don't know if the author is aware of it Magic Poetry·Narration affects reality: One of Xia Shou's core abilities is "the killing of people in the book" Beheading across the narrative layer He himself basically affects the reality True narrative I guess the reason why he turned around and was killed by the Wandering Poet was also because of this ability Dream Picker·Dream: N/A Splitting Shear·Splitting: N/A Tinker·Sewing: Xia Shou's skill is often used to sew

"They migrate, they lay eggs, and they die." The residents of the old history who came to the present world from the upper reaches of the Seven Branches Tree and successfully replaced the current people. If they become pregnant in the present world, in rare cases they will migrate - they will long to return to their original cyclic history and give birth to children there. These people are called "salmon", and this will cause a problem. People in this world were born in old history. Their parents are already people in the present world, and the child is of course a human being in the present world, but this child is not in the present world but in the old history. Those in the old history who are eager to leave will hunt him who has no ability to fight back. His birth is a danger. In a history where people worshiped the birth of life, were full of fertility worship, and belonged to the blood god, a woman came to the present world, became pregnant, and then became a "salmon". She returned to history and gave birth to an heir. People of that era discovered this, so another woman killed the child and went to the present world. Using the magic of that era, she became pregnant with sextuplets. She took the initiative to migrate and brought back six places in the present world. They kept repeating, and the number of places in the present world increased. In the end, the people of the entire era broke away from history together, the divine food was shattered, and the Blood God was furious. ………………………………………… This is an idea of ​​mine. I originally wanted to post it in the fanfic category, but fanfics need to be related to chapters and characters, which I don't have, so I shared it.

I cast 5 recommendation votes, but I'm sorry I'm a poor person and don't have a monthly ticket 🙂

I ordered about three to four hundred chapters. I only read the copy of Yuezhuocun completely and read the rest while skipping. First of all, the setting, the classic Stitch Monster, is pretty good, I love watching these. But this book is setting up from the beginning. I understand the author's worldview very well. Some settings can only be known after the protagonist has reached a high level. This seems to be like squeezing the toothpaste Riddler in the early stage, but the decryption in the later stage brings new riddles 😂😂 Secondly, the plot foreshadowing, because it is closely related to the setting, requires the author to use characters, props, etc. To foreshadow the secrets in various ways. This results in some props in the early stage being the key to the decryption in the later stage. Some villains in the early stage can be evil repeatedly without dying. This is very picky for readers. Some people can't stand it, although I personally can accept it. Then there is the emotional drama, which I think is the most difficult part of the book😥😥Every female character has a good personality, and some of the plots are also lovable, but there is still the same problem. The advancement of the emotional drama relies heavily on the development of the setting and the foreshadowing of the plot. The development of the emotional drama is not for the author to make sweets, but to lead to new riddles and new plots. Is this relationship developed? Rufa😓😓 Finally, there is the setting of the protagonist. There is not much discussion about the character setting. Everyone has their own advantages. The main thing is about combat power. Although the protagonist is able to turn the tide every time, or rely on dungeon-limited teammates or props to turn defeat into victory. The author also repeatedly explains how strong the protagonist is through settings and comments from the protagonist's teammates. But I personally still feel that the protagonist is weak 😂😂 The reason I summarized is still related to the setting. The protagonist's combat power is made up of multiple settings, rather than a system developed with one skill as the core. Some people may say that the two bug skills of the protagonist are not core? In order to avoid spoilers, I won't mention the specific effects. In short, one brings high fault tolerance to the protagonist, and the other brings high explosiveness to the protagonist. The advantage is that it makes the protagonist's combat more flexible and the battle of wits and courage, but the disadvantage is that the protagonist's combat power is very unstable. I understand that the author's setting like this can make the battle more enjoyable, but after all, this is the online literature market. If you sacrifice some of the fun, you can only give up part of the audience. I personally am the type of online novel reader who is attracted by the setting, but also loves the feeling of excitement. The lack of excitement of the protagonist's combat power system is the core reason for me to quit. But there will always be audiences who prefer this type, and I hope this review can help some readers select the ones that suit them.

Man, I've been watching for half a year and cast almost 50 monthly votes.

How can I put it, the book is a good book, but I don't know why I feel tired after reading it. There are always big pitfalls and small pitfalls, and there are constant pitfalls. It often stretches out the plot that can be concluded quickly and adds a bunch of small stories in it, which drags on for a long time. Personally, it feels like it.