Don't Allow Weird Things to Evolve!

Overall, the plot is both refreshing and abstract. The supporting characters who should be smart are not smart enough, but I am still willing to continue watching. This symptom in the introduction feels a bit awkward. At present, it seems that its use is mainly to rationalize the protagonist's ability and personality, but even so, it is still a bit exaggerated. I don't know if it is a foreshadowing that has been buried for a long time, but for now it can be regarded as a background board. Although the protagonist looks like the more popular and cheap image of a smart lunatic, he has clear moral values ​​and bottom line, and his actions are very logical. ——With this understanding, you should be able to read the previous chapters (in my opinion) which are a bit awkward, and then immerse yourself in the world view.

There is a high probability that this book will be completed smoothly. This type of book has the same familiar taste and is beautiful.

The start was too rough for Weasel, but when he encountered a beautiful ghost and aphrodisiac mist, he couldn't get hard. The protagonist was simply the chosen one by Slaanesh.

I just watched Nurgle's Chosen a while ago, and here's another Slaanesh? Khorne caught a lot of them, that is, the blue-haired bird was too smart, otherwise it would be all together.

I feel like it's the opposite. Only when you have extreme happiness in whatever you do can you learn something. It's similar to how you enjoy learning mathematics and tutoring. Do you dream of learning every day? There is no reward mechanism here, you may only suffer from jade syndrome, and it is impossible to learn things for the sake of happiness and excitement.

The author is the reincarnation of Sun Xiaochuan. He has done too many bad things, so ordinary bad things cannot cause waves like the protagonist in the book. The starting point is to spread the curse of millet porridge while throwing Sun Xiaochuan away, so that everyone has to endure the pain of a single kill of rice porridge (Da Che Da Wu)

"Don't mess with the author, be careful of retaliation! He used to be a gangster, and he has tattoos on his thighs and lower abdomen. They seem to be written on a bunch of hearts and have open wings. There is also some kind of stick weapon hidden behind his drum. It's really scary!"

Point 1: 1. The novel has a big imagination, the exciting operation setting and the special protagonist are the attractive highlights. 2. Some copies are too lengthy and procrastinating (that Sand King). Some core creative points are good, but the process of revealing them is a bit cumbersome (lies and falsehoods) 3. The climax design of the copy is very good, but it is still the Sand King... Point 2: 1. The author is good at describing the special characteristics of the protagonist, but the description of the details of the battle is insufficient. 2. It is recommended to use strengths and avoid weaknesses, and give full play to the author's strengths. It can not only be about fighting, but also some small ideas can be added. Then when writing, first roughly hint at the strengths and weaknesses of both sides, and then introduce the protagonist's moves in a turn-based manner. Point 3: 1. The protagonist's personality has no obvious changes in Chapter 197. 2. Although the protagonist's particularity has been explained, there is a lack of description of growth and progress. 3. If the changes in the protagonist can be reflected, it will enhance the appeal of the story. To-do and remaining items: 1. Pay attention to the copy structure, simplify the process and avoid procrastination. 2. Improve the combat description and highlight the innovative points of the protagonist. 3. Deepen the protagonist's growth trajectory and increase character changes. Good medicine tastes bitter and is good for the disease. The author comes to drink the medicine

I couldn't stand it after just reading a few chapters😂. The protagonist, an ordinary person, relies on the limits that ordinary people can reach, and fools this bride with a love brain who has survived for tens of millions of years to pass the highest level of natural disaster. It feels like nonsense. It would be much better if the bride knew that she was being chosen and used the rules that restricted the protagonist to have an interaction instead of just a few dry words.

It's scary to think about it, the male protagonist must have tried men and women, men and women, men and women, men and women, women and men 🙂🙂🙂

Just like the title, after reading a few chapters, I suddenly realized that the protagonist is the Chosen One of Slaanesh, right? Continuously pursue greater stimulation.

The author is competing for the position in Sanjiang today, and it is not very stable. I hope that everyone who supports books will stop doing so and help the author by reading for two days. I will definitely repay the favor after it is released 😭😭

His writing style is like Jiang Bao's, and his birth is like Xu Shu's. It's hard to imagine that you can read about the two lost mountains in the world of birth in one book. I can't stand it anymore😅

I remembered, you are the author of Operations in the Underworld! ! !

The protagonist of his book, which was not allowed to engage in underworld operations in the upper world, was the chosen one of Slaanesh, with unique xp, but the author was banned for letting himself go too much later. The protagonist of this book is relatively restrained. The writing gives me a somewhat similar feeling

A broken reward system will only lead to depression and lack of motivation for anything. Xidu also destroys the reward mechanism of the human body. Just look at what poisonous insects look like.

The reward system collapsed, and my first reaction was that it was caused by drug use. And the main character is a drug addict, so forget it, there is no need to watch it.

After the old book was harmonized, this one has become much more restrained, but I still noticed it by smell. My mental state is yours. Update it faster and faster. I will give you the monthly pass in the future.

Too light The plot is too light, not enough polish, not enough conflict between plot characters, not enough pressure on the protagonist, and does not match the subject matter. It is like doing daily life in a post-apocalyptic world. It is too shallow The characters are too shallow. Except for the protagonist, everyone seems to be able to be treated with just a few strokes. It's like drawing a drop of water. You just drew a circle and put a dot on it. Their joy, anger, sorrow, and joy are not only present in the protagonist. You can draw them out. You should write more broadly, don't let the whole world just be a small fish pond revolving around the protagonist It's too smooth Are you playing some Japanese RRRPG? One task and one settlement point. It's too organized and divides the road into points one by one, and then completes it one game at a time. You can't see the setbacks, so just watch. It's not a problem, the main reason is that the villains you write are too mentally retarded. Even the intelligent villains in your writing are like ordinary people with supercomputers. The villains' own intelligence has been discarded, leaving only their abilities. So, keep reading, and I hope you will still update this book two years later.

How long does it take to write down such a game-breaking Gouba score? Gouba wrote a protagonist in several dungeons. Why would it affect the dungeons?

Bushgoers, you wrote this introduction. . . It's like the aftereffects of smoking ice.

Before it was put on the shelves, I still had some imagination to see it, but after it was put on the shelves, the gap was too big, and I didn't even want to read it due to the limited exemption.

It's very nice, but I'm afraid that if I watch too much, I'll turn into an abstract monster. Please update more, come on!

It has the feel of a horror paradise, but the writing and plot are still a bit lacking. The bump is okay, but not too biased. It can be seen that the author has his own ingenuity, but the plot and rhythm are almost unsatisfactory. Generally speaking, it can be given a grain-level evaluation, about 70 points.

God, the backstage hardness is even more powerful

I remember that before it was released, the plot was okay and the reading data was pretty good too. Why did I get exempted from the exemption? He is such a talented person that I no longer have the desire to continue reading 😰

What is written in reality is just a mess.

I originally saved about 100 chapters, and I thought it would be fun to read them. Now I haven't entered the competition for a long time, so how many chapters are there in advance?

This book feels like it's too restrictive and you have to restrain yourself, or you've lost all your spirituality. To be honest, it's a bit mediocre.

Five monthly tickets are presented