The Ghost-Catching Method in the Supernatural Movie Made Me Become a Heavenly Master

It's not that good. It's not good at writing about ghosts. It also writes about Feng Shui. Does the author know what wind, wealth and water luck are? It's also awesome to bury people by the river.

Poor writing, a good idea wasted

The author can't find the key point, the center, and the writing is rather messy, like a headless fly, scurrying here and there. I don't know what will happen next.

Not pretty. First of all, the protagonist's character and various performances are not only unlikable, but also disgusting. Then the author's design of the storyline, as well as the choice of words and sentences, gave me the feeling of traveling through time 10 years ago. The pacing is very unpleasant. I want to be imaginative or the writing is attractive, but the author obviously doesn't have that ability. Overall, this book needs some time to settle, but I still want to say that I hope the author will not stop updating it, just practice writing, and keep learning by the way.

It's a good idea. The ringtone at the beginning is weird and well-interpreted. He pulls his hips after dawn and goes to help inexplicably. There are a lot of characters who appear and their characters are not established. The reactions and behaviors of each character are also inexplicable. The plot is quite stiff and incoherent.

Hijikata, magic, and dharma. The protagonist now only has Hijikata and the unique ghost weapon system of this world. It's too big, can you add some more?

To be honest, the idea is really good, but how about the novel? It's so messy. To be honest, the story written by the author is quite good, but in one sentence, it was so confusing that I didn't know where to start. The whole novel was full of ramblings, which gave me a headache. Here we are still catching ghosts and fighting with them, and over there we are talking about irrelevant things. The most important thing is that these irrelevant things have no effect in the future. The entire novel is a mess of words.

The first ghost thing has been around since the appearance of human beings. It may not have been called ghost before, but the concept is the same. Death is a phenomenon, so there are bound to be people who imagine what will happen after death. And ghosts basically appear based on this situation. As a result, you are now in modern times and you don't even have the concept of ghosts? Isn't this nonsense? Unless there are immortals in the world you live in? Or jump directly from primitive society to modern society? Only then can there be no concept of ghosts

In fact, when encountering this kind of situation, it scares the timid to death and overwhelms the bold. For example, there is an urban novel in which the gods have all been reincarnated to welcome the catastrophe of the end of law and directly usurp the position of the Emperor of Heaven.