Journey to the West: the Second Master of Huaguo Mountain
西游：花果山二当家
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 264k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Mythic Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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What can I say? The writing is okay, but can you please unify the names? Outside, the main character is called Sun Wuqi. Then in the article, Lin Qi is named, and the real name is Lin Qi. It's really uncomfortable to read. I really want to make progress. Author, please listen to my advice and change it. Either all of them are called Lin Qi or all of them are Wu Qi. It's better to change them to Wu Qi. Otherwise, it's really uncomfortable to read.
Maybe a suggestion?
The author makes his own judgment when speaking of his thoughts, which may not be reliable. I feel that the protagonist is completely following the monkey. There is a little bit of going out to sea in the front, but it is more obvious in Fangcun Mountain. If you don't study the Fa well, you have to think that you can just teach a monkey and wait for something ready-made. But he is also a serious disciple. It's better to learn on your own. It's not a thoughtless plug-in. The plug-in is just a tool. You can't always lack subjective initiative. The Bodhi Patriarch has accepted you and still doesn't teach you. Besides, it doesn't have to be the same high-end product. It's not fun to go through the exact same Journey to the West in the end.
Okay, 10-year old bookworm appraisal
Having been short of books for a long time, I no longer expect to find eye-catching books in Dianniang. The author's book is quite acceptable. The author's positioning of the protagonist as a time traveler, the creation of the character, the depiction of the world view of Journey to the West, and the logic of the dialogue are all okay. It is not a masterpiece, but you can take a look and it doesn't smell like shit at the moment.
All the monthly recommendation votes are given to the author, come on!
If you want to practice, practice well. What about falling in love? It's painful to see
This protagonist looks so much like Sanjay, it's crazy
Can you please clean up the comment area? Most of them are posted by one person with older pictures. Most of the books that are flooding the comment area don't feel good.