Mortal: Return of Apprenticeship? BUG at the Beginning

I have said that the returned Heaven-Building Pill is just a person without spiritual roots turning into pseudo-spiritual roots. It is quite difficult for pseudo-spiritual roots to break through the foundation building. Isn't this a waste of resources? You have already established your foundation, and you still want to marry a mortal wife. This is too hungry.

No, author, I see that you have written more than one mortal fanfic. How long ago did you read the original work? Han Li is Mo Juren and Yu Tongzi who hide their cultivation to kill. Do you think Yu Tongzi can see through the protagonist's cultivation? Or the protagonist of the twelfth level of his fucking Qi Refining, who can see through it at a glance? ? ? Yu Tongzi didn't know Han Li's true cultivation. Han Li was killed after seizing his body. Is this an important part of the beginning of the original text? Can this all lead to an own goal? Aren't you reading fanfics written by fans? That's not right. Other fans wouldn't make such a low-level mistake, would they? Watch anime and fan fiction? ? ? Don't do it?

I skipped reading, but after seeing the protagonist refining his natal magic weapon, I felt that even the Yuanying monks couldn't do anything to him. From here on, I lost my desire to read. The combat power system of this book will collapse sooner or later! I don't understand why, out of ten mortal fanfics, nine of them are about harems! Forget about the harem, the most disgusting thing is that the protagonist has to provide the heroine with various resources and act as a nanny! This is no longer a spiritual companion, but it is clearly a burden on the spiritual path! There is no other way to learn the method of covering the sky and the method of eternal life in the mortal world. All kinds of elixir formation to kill Yuanying, Qi training to hurt the spirit! Emm... Just write it yourself and that's it. Readers don't care whether they read it or not😒

There is no problem with the golden finger, and there is no problem with the cut-in time, but it is very problematic to cut off the Hu Zhang Tian Bottle and reward it to Han Li! And he said the name of Zhang Tian Ping directly! Even if the protagonist pretends not to know the value of the Sky Palm Vase, it would be great to give it to Han Li as an antique art piece!

This novel should be called, Han Li: My golden finger is actually my master

Is the Palm Palm Bottle really just amplifying the ripening effect tenfold? No, brother, then why did you choose the ten-fold enhancement instead of the ten-piece Sky Palm Bottle? ? ? Don't you feel that its scope of application is narrower? One drop of your enhanced version only changes from a hundred years to a thousand years. Not to mention some elixirs, he has limited them to only a hundred years. Have you, a Qi practitioner, absorbed your thousand-year-old elixir? One that has been ripened for a hundred years can still be sold and resold, but after a thousand years, it will be eye-catching even if you take it out during the foundation building period. How can there be the flexibility and convenience of ten pieces of Zhangtian bottles and one drop for a hundred years? It's all one drop for seven days, but it's just changed from one drop to ripen for a hundred years to one drop to ripen for a thousand years. Later, Han Li can also directly absorb the spiritual liquid. Can you absorb it when it's ten times stronger? ? ? ? Did he just explode and die?

The poison is over. When Shuang Wen sees that you are still fighting, it's too bad.

The first time I watched the drug sales, I couldn't stand it anymore. What do you think of a mortal? Where is the brain? The first chapter also said that Han Li was a little bit conceited, but later on you were so upright and blatantly released the thousand-year-old elixir? Is this what is needed in the Nascent Soul stage? Can such a brain mix with mortals? Are you insulting your own intelligence or insulting the reader's intelligence?

I won't say much else about it, but the original is a top-grade spiritual stone, and it can automatically restore spiritual energy. How did it become a top-level spiritual stone 😅

The combat power began to collapse, and there were too few interactive plots between characters. Many plots were written in one stroke, and the writing was not detailed enough. It also felt that the male protagonist did not know how to use the system. If we directly occupy the Bloody Forbidden Land and Xutian Palace and then give them to the disciples, will we return a small portable world? There is no need to focus on the return of cultivation resources, just go back and forth, you should return it in all aspects and think about what is needed. For example, in the portable small world I just mentioned, when the male protagonist ascends to the spiritual world, he must bring his Taoist companion, concubine, and apprentice with him. The small world is just what is needed! Also, items returned by the system cannot be returned, so can the products of returned items be returned? For example, if ten times the thousand-year Towering Dew of Good Fortune produced by Little Green Bottle is given to a disciple, will it return more Towering Dew of Good Fortune, or return a higher level of Towering Dew of Good Fortune, breaking the shackles of the highest ten-thousand-year elixir in the world? And by giving his disciples the towering fortune dew, other disciples except Han Li can also cultivate the elixir themselves. The other thing is to return the exercises. Since you and Nangong Wan have practiced dual cultivation, can you return a top-level dual cultivation method to help Nangong Wan advance? If I return the Dayan Jue, can I get a more advanced divine consciousness technique? By returning the Brahma Saint's True Demonic Kung Fu, can I get more powerful body training techniques? The male protagonist should consider the three cultivation methods of Jing, Qi and Body, prepare more exercises in this area, and then absorb the essence of hundreds of schools of exercises to create a book of three cultivation methods, then pass it on to his disciples, and return a more advanced three cultivation methods. Another suggestion is that since there are so many female disciples, then create your own sect, similar to the Xiaoyao sect in "The Eight Tribes of the Dragon", which does not require many people, only seeks elites, focusing on a happy world, or building a separate mountain in the Yellow Maple Valley, and naming it Yaochi Peak, Xiaoyao Peak, Baihua Peak, Bliss Peak, etc., Focusing on a Nascent Soul with all members, and the male protagonist and Nangong Wan are the two saints of Tiannan. This is domineering. Finally, let Han Li go out and make a living. There is no need to keep a male disciple by his side. There are so many Taoist companions, concubines, disciples and other female relatives around him. Wouldn't it be awkward for Han Li to live together? On a whim, I asked my female apprentice to practice replenishing attack, and then replenish my own cultivation. Can I also return more cultivation?

Being poisoned by the exercises in Chapter 7, Marde, the immortal exercises are beyond your reach! Rubbish!

Why does the protagonist have to bring a few mortal women to drag him down? There are so many beauties in the world of immortal cultivators, so writing about the identity of immortal cultivators in this way is very unflattering.

The protagonist has completely forgotten about his Heavenly Palm Bottle!

If you don't like it, just go up there when you go to sell medicinal materials, right? Thousand-year-old medicinal materials are being sold at a grand sale. First, send a thousand-year-old medicinal material to Jiedan Qi. Some disciples have already seen it, and then they go to the Zongmen Market to sell five-hundred-year medicinal materials, and then immediately go to Wanbao Tower to sell thousand-year medicinal materials During this process, you don't wear a mask at all, and you don't hide your realm at all, for fear that others won't know that you are a child holding gold, right?

Ten times is too little, and other popular ones are only a hundred times, a thousand times, ten thousand times, etc. There are more than 10,000 comics published there. They focus on being mindless and cool, and they squander resources casually.

The more you use it, the cheaper it becomes! Personally, I think it's good to reach one realm only once! Also, going to the "Eternal Life World" would be too much!

The place where the core of the Forbidden Land was developed. In the end, the biggest benefit went to Xiang Lao Mo. Then you develop a dick.

I can't stand it until chapter 13, it's too toxic

Almost all the narration is about self-pity and self-pity, nagging, nagging

The purpose of giving Han Li something is to consume wool. Since there is a cooling-off period, why can't I give something a month? I want to pick up the wool, but also want to learn from the plot 😒😒😒😒😒 It feels like the writing is very impatient. It is based on such a rough novel. It is almost all narration, with occasional character dialogue, and most of it is as good as narration.