Black Myth: Starting from Saving Pansi Ridge

The first is the problem of original character creation. The author has a good grasp of the character of the original game character. I don't find it too OOC. I personally feel that Lingji is a bit OOC. Then there are two points that are frequently criticized in the book review section. For the camp issue, the protagonist is a staunch Pansidong camp. The author tends to blame the Dongtian Force Breeding Farm for the mountain of human bones in Pansidong. There is no need to complain about the protagonist being a crooked butt and inhumane. The protagonist's character problem is that he prefers the Asasi-style protagonist of light novels. It is very different from the regular decisive and decisive character of the site, and is also incompatible with it. The protagonist is often offended and threatened but can be calm, which is not very friendly to readers with a strong sense of substitution. Readers who don't like this type of article are advised to avoid the trap as soon as possible, and there is no need to spray it again in the comment area. The serious problem I personally feel is that the main plot of the book is not clear. The main character's goal is very general and there is no plan. The main plot of the original work is actually not long. I don't know how to complete it after writing it. 2. The similarities between conflicts are too strong. Other aspects are well written, but there is too little!

You shouldn't have written that the protagonist is a disciple of Bodhi from the beginning, because the protagonist in your plot is too incompetent. You, a junior disciple of Sun Wukong, are afraid of hundreds of eyes and Lingji. Moreover, the main character is too stupid to do what he does. The only advantage is that Pansi Dong was written from the beginning.

What crime did you commit? It's funny.

In your absence, I miss you every day. Little monkey, you really make me happy! Since you have found this place, you must have a lot of people and things that you have trouble getting through. It has to be you, the monkey! If this is not love🐵🐵🐵

You shouldn't write about a human being as the main character, it's just right to write about a bug spirit

Then Shituoling can also be washed, can it be saved? You save a Muggle. Anyway, there are no good things in the world view of Black Myth. They treat mortals as consumables in a physical sense, either to harvest faith or to harvest flesh and blood.

Can you not rely entirely on misunderstandings to advance the plot? The second and fourth sisters of Poison Enemy are all misunderstandings, right? You like writing about misunderstandings so much that you can't explain it clearly, right? Where did you learn the style of idol dramas with stomachaches like yours?

Bodhisattvas and demons are originally one thought. The meaning in the original text of Journey to the West is clearly that between good and evil, one is a Bodhisattva who does good, and one is a demon who does evil. Why did the introduction change and feel a bit empty?

Black mythology actually all depends on comparison. Some monsters look better, but it is the comparison with immortals and Buddhas that makes people feel that they are not clean and not good. There are four camps: humans, demons, immortals, and Buddhas. Humans support three camps with their own efforts.

Dear Destiny brothers, it is very important to read the new book issue. The humble author here begs you to collect it and read it every day. Thank you all Destiny people🙏

Author, you are insulting Fang Cunshan. You are still a eunuch. Stop writing.

It's too abstract My opinion is All the members have no brains and no ears Plot advancement depends entirely on saying the wrong thing, right? The latest poisonous enemy just likes to be a bitch, right? The second sister and the fourth sister will never understand words, right? You help them and they will still be bitchy, right? Your ability is only suitable for writing this kind of conflict point?

Huang Fengling has already written nearly 40 chapters. The first half of your previous book Pansi Dong plus various branches only totaled nearly 40 chapters. Isn't it true that the author wrote this paragraph? Where is my fourth sister, and where is my spider spirit? Let's not even mention this. What you wrote is also the most common conspiracy theory. The most common kind of writing is not exciting. This Bodhisattva villain has no character at all. Brother, author, please skip this paragraph. I really can't stand it anymore.

When it comes to cheating, the protagonist's strength is really mediocre at the moment. If you don't cheat, even if you have all the bosses in Chapter 4, they are just cannon fodder... And when writing fan fiction, you can't be as vague about your strength as in the game.

It's pretty good, and the main character is too soft. He only knows how to fight back every time he gets hit. It's okay once or twice, but it's like this every time.

To use a game metaphor, the protagonist is like a player who has taken on a bunch of serial tasks, and then each serial task goes hand in hand, that is, if you don't complete one serial task first, and then start a new serial task all the time.

After searching, the author is the only one who started writing after the game was released. The one I found is based on the plot of the game. It is better than those who wrote it earlier. I hope it can be written well and completed in the end. It will not be unfinished.

The main character is too noob. I learned a lot from Bodhi. I suggest you strengthen him. He is a weakling.

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The writing is okay, but there are too few, so I'll keep it for now. I originally wanted to see if there was any yellow-haired mouse written about black mythology, or some little monster as the protagonist, but I couldn't find it.

Wait, I'm still raising it and it's suddenly over?

If you add more updates, if you don't add more updates, the author will light up the sky lantern ✌️😅

Is this the end? Isn't this too anticlimactic? !

When will the author release the 20th chapter?

I forgot about the update. Did the second sister's name get mentioned in this book? What is your name Zhu? Only relying on a few clips from the game, the character of the second sister is still thin and not so full. The author has done a good job.

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