I'm Working on Amazing Spider-Man in American Comics

This is the most Spider-Man I have ever seen 😍😍 The only flaw is the identity of the time traveler. I am not saying that time travelers cannot have good people and saints, but a living person who has traveled through time has no impact at all? Could it be that the protagonist's previous life was exactly the same as Parker in every aspect? 🤔 After reading the first 34 chapters, the identity of the time traveler is only used to provide information to the protagonist. The description of the time traveler is too confusing 🙂 It feels like a label or an object? 🤔 I wonder if this is the only way, can it be similar to Deadpool seeing through the fourth wall? (Of course, just an idea) 😰 After being bitten by a spider, Peter not only gained superpowers, but also saw through the fourth wall. He knew all the plots and knew that he might just be living in the script. In a double confusion, he talked to Uncle Ben (or something else) and was persuaded to wake up. He regarded the world behind the fourth wall as a parallel world or some other world. Instead of falling into a strange circle of nothingness, he cherished everything about himself more, and his thoughts were sublimated to another stage, making him even more saintly. But because he is still a teenager, his thoughts and behaviors are not mature enough, so it is understandable that he does things poorly. In this way, treating the protagonist as a native who is similar to a time-traveler who "prophet first" (all of whom know the plot) is more consistent with the omniscient plug-in that the author wants to give to the protagonist than the identity of "traveler" 🙂

I can save even a piece of shit. Is there anything I can't save? I'm already invincible

The comment section is so amazing. In Spider-Man fan fiction, writing like Spider-Man has become a poisonous point?

Old man, don't you dare continue writing like this It's really original, but it's too original This is a novel, not Spider-Man's new movie You restored it very well, but you also restored Spider-Man's original shortcomings, that kind of motherly heart that consumes itself due to excessive sense of responsibility. This is indeed Spider-Man's style, but you are a time traveler. If you still want to write Spider-Man's original qualities, why not just write it as Garfield's time travel? Really, listen to my advice. Think about it carefully. Do you like this kind of Marvel fandom that requires deflation to grow up, or does it not require self-inflicted internal consumption and philosophical thinking?

Just give it a try, author, it's either an indigenous Spider-Man or a time traveler. If you try to eat both, you'll end up in an ugly death. If you eat both, you won't be happy with either.

After reading it, I found that the author seems to have made a mistake. The reason why readers are unhappy is not that he is a time traveler but behaves like a native. It is that every time he encounters trouble, he can make the villain run away because of a trivial matter, and every time he will leave a little tail behind. This is very unsatisfactory. Meaning, the author should think about it. Every time the protagonist can solve them and imprison them in the police station or the Avengers' prison, and then escape by themselves, this is better. It cannot be said that it is just a little bit worse every time, and the villain just happens to escape, which makes people feel uncomfortable reading.

The protagonist is a time-traveler, but he still falls into meaningless mental internal friction. He is not like a real person, but the ideal "saint". I feel that the protagonist is a time-traveler just so that the protagonist can know the information about the villains.

The aborigines are not like the aborigines, and the time-travelers are not like the time-travelers. It looks really weird.

Damn, since I learned about the killing line, I realized that Spider-Man is really a noble person. If it were me, I have this power. In China, I may be a good person who does justice and courage, but in the United States, I will definitely become a villain with a bottom line 😭

To be honest, Peter doesn't feel tired. I feel tired for him. He directly tells me that he is tired. It's so weird. Is this frequency of killing monsters too frequent?

By the way, the protagonist is no different from the original Spider-Man, and there is no Goldfinger who becomes stronger in the main plot. Villains appear and fight against them every day. Is there anything new compared to the comics? (No malicious intent, just a question)

Why do I always feel that the author has marginalized Spider-Man recently, the Green Goblin chapter has been suppressed, and the Nimrod chapter has not been of any important help until now. He used to be the kind of person who came up with strange solutions at a whim, but now he keeps hitting it, and it feels like Peter's brain has been abandoned. There is also Spider-Man's emotional issues, which have been going on for a long time, but he is still submissive and dare not accept it. To be honest, he is a little tired of it. There was almost no shaping and growth of the protagonist during this period, it was so boring.

Have you ever been Spider-Man? Just scribble a bunch of things, taking it for granted

An unqualified time traveler, a real Peter Parker

The author wrote time travel in order to let the protagonist know the plot of the character, but what does it make me feel? Before the time travel, the protagonist looked like a child of a few years old, a child who loves Marvel, is innocent, just, and kind, and has slight Internet pollution. How can I put it, it just doesn't have the advantages of a time traveler (well, I can't tell you exactly 😂) Remove the time traveler label, then this is a perfect Spider-Man story!

I'm short of books, and suddenly I found a book I haven't read yet Questions: 1. Does this book still only describe the heroic life of Spider-Man and ignore the daily shaping of the protagonist? 2. Is there a stereotyped classic plot progression of frustration, asking for help, cooperation, success, and the villain's escape? 3. Has the protagonist been strengthened? Is it active or passive according to the plot? 4. Do the differences between time travelers exist? Stacked Armor: The main reason is that everyone who wants to be close to the writing method of comics will inevitably have plot-based operations (even time travellers), and then say that it is to pay tribute to the original work, but in fact it just repeats the classic process of the villain appearing, the villain is arrested, and the villain escapes. The original work is also deliberately reproduced in order not to interfere with the plot and to pay the same tribute.

Why are you always so frustrated? Comics are still coming and going.

I know that in the mode of online novels, if the rhythm is not written more compactly, readers will feel that it is too watery, but too frequent big events will make people who fell in love with this book because of the rich character descriptions feel tired. At least that's the case for me. Maybe this is the difficulty of writing online articles, just my humble opinion.

It's amazing. In 2026, we can still see the villain repeatedly escaping and causing trouble.

The important reason for the decline in performance during this period is that the combat level is too high, and not everyone is used to stream-of-consciousness battles.

This book does not feel like a time traveler becomes Spider-Man, but rather like the protagonist is Spider-Man. The author has written a multi-dimensional Spider-Man universe, which is like a fusion of various comics.

I haven't felt better in a long time. After reading hundreds of chapters, my mood is still the same. Spider-Man himself has not been greatly strengthened, and solving problems is still a matter of teamwork (except for the fact that he is more comfortable fighting the villains in the original Spider-Man comics). The villains are always locked up and escaped from prison, although it is a superhero feature. . Do you feel like writing a group portrait article?

I would like to ask the author weakly, will the female protagonist accept it? Currently, only Gwen and Cindy are stable. Phantom Cat is almost interesting, but MJ, Black Cat, Mysterio, Silver Sable... There is no sign at all. I feel that the author will write a long novel with millions of words.

I have read 300 chapters. Overall, it is very good among American comic novels, especially the author's Spider-Man is very vivid (the other characters are also very good), but I personally feel that the plot arrangement is too tight, one thing follows another, and there is no breathing space in between. It is just saving, saving, beating, saving, beating, beating, beating, which makes me a little tired.

Someone in the book club said that the book review area is full of chaos. Although I think it is okay, there are only a few comments that are not very friendly. I am indifferent to other controversies. However, writer assistants cannot see the reply area of ​​the comments, so I have recruited a few disciplinary assistants to close them down. As for the operation officer, I will not recruit them for the time being. If you are interested, you can reply below to register, and I will make an appointment based on the situation. The most important one is to prevent mutual attacks in the comment area. One is that they think that I or the protagonist I wrote is a banana man or something (I actually laughed, it is understandable that this book is an overly American comic, but in the case of banana man, I never saw where in my book it said that America is good). I personally have reservations about the rest of the controversial discussion.

To one of the world's greatest superheroes

I feel that Secret Wars is not good to watch, I want to watch Sweet Love

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The new Spider-Man 4 movie is great, and it looks like Peter has added a new harem

Have you ever been Spider-Man? Some things are scribbled out and taken for granted.