Cyberpunk: Night City's Cosmic Corporations

It's good to watch. Now that I've seen 286, there are indeed bugs in the plot development at the beginning. But later on, when I break away from the original timeline of 2077 and start the original Hafko plot, it starts to get much better. It reaches a small plot climax in Kozaburo. The plot includes development, farming, meme, harem, pure family, normal male and female subordinates, most characters have their own role, personal force, collective force, the protagonist knows what he is doing. The plot design is similar to I Have a Suite in the End of the World. The shortcomings are that the integration with the original 2077 settings is not very good, and there are quite a few bugs.

👐🏼Supplement: The author has modified this poisonous point. I personally feel that the effect after the modification is acceptable. If you are interested in what it looked like before the modification, you can continue reading👐🏼 After reading the first few chapters, I feel that everything is good, but there is one poisonous point that I think it is necessary to modify. The following content contains spoilers, please do not read if you mind. The protagonist has never played 2077. When he first arrived in Night City, he was injured and went to see Lao Wei for medical treatment. Before meeting Lao Wei, he met Misty. After the treatment, he came out and saw Misty and Jack. The protagonist shows considerable trust when meeting Misty for the first time. Facing Jack, whom he also met for the first time, the protagonist showed great vigilance. It seems logical at first glance. After all, Misty is indeed more approachable, and Jack does look more fierce and tall, but the way the protagonist expresses trust and friendliness really confuses me. How would a normal person react to this situation? He trusted Misty, who was good-looking and friendly, but reminded himself in his heart that he should still be more vigilant; he was more vigilant when facing Jack, put his hand on the gun, and exchanged a few words with Jack to get to know each other briefly... But what did the protagonist do? Seeing Jack and Misty standing together, he came up and protected Misty behind him. Misty said that Jack was a good person. The protagonist in turn advised Misty to "know people but not hearts" and be wary of Jack... Please, you have only met Misty twice, how do you know that her kindness is not a disguise? Isn't this pure double standards? And even if you haven't played 2077, based on what they said to Misty when they stood together, it is not difficult to tell that these two people know each other, at least they must be more familiar with you. Maybe they are friends (actually they are). You came up and advised others to be wary of Jack. Are you too self-aware? Even V has the option of saying kind words for players to choose when going through the plot. You have such a temper when you first get up, and being wary of Jack doesn't mean you should talk to him properly. Just like you are a male college student. If you see your crush interacting with people outside the school, you can follow and take a look to ensure the other person's safety. I can also praise you for being careful, vigilant and cautious. But if you go up and act as a "hero to save the beauty", prevent the two parties from contacting each other, and do not consider that the so-called people outside the school may be the woman's relatives or friends, then I will only think that you are a repressed, self-righteous, impulsive, reckless, and self-motivated licking dog.

It's normal, because cyberpunk is mainly a world view, not a complete set of stories with a beginning, development, climax and ending. Whether it is Edge Walker or 2077, the protagonist is too short-lived, resulting in the author having no story to write in the later period, and writing about the game with the enterprise is not interesting, which greatly tests the author's imagination and creative ability.

It's getting worse and worse. Let me have a little brother talk about the situation. I'll find a character who praises Hafu Ke. The protagonist comes out and says some bad words. There's no update. The head maid should mention this. I haven't finished it for a few days, and it looks like I have to write a lot of things for her to revise her thoughts and clear her name. To put it bluntly, it's impossible that she hasn't killed people before, so she might as well save the people who are being persecuted by drugs. To put it bluntly, after being cleansed, you can't pretend to save White Lotus without atonement.

Just like a native, I gave Lao Wei 20,000 euros for a 300-yuan operation. If you know the plot, forget it. I gave you 20,000 euros for the meeting. I can't evaluate this operation. I don't know if you believe it or not. I am Qin Shihuang.

The writing is quite good, although the writing style is a bit immature and the details are not very detailed, but the short, fast and refreshing style of writing is fully utilized. If you can't grasp the depth of the plot, then boldly write the emotional catharsis that you are good at, and it is good to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. The same is true for the protagonist in the book. He travels to the start of cyberpunk with a collapse, but develops at the speed of light with a plug-in, kills enemies, obtains funds, and invests the funds in the plug-in. The plug-in makes the protagonist stronger, and the protagonist uses more cool technology and abilities to kill enemies. Just like when players play games, they keep iterating and growing in stronger and more enjoyable ways. What they show readers is a positive cycle of being more enjoyable. Although it is vulgar, it is still easy to use. Although the protagonist's behavior is simple and crude, the protagonist's behavior also has its own reasonableness. That is, in Coconut Juice City, the protagonist's life is the same as that of the "big guys". They both have only one life. The protagonist does not have any financial advantage, intelligence advantage, or numerical advantage. However, the protagonist is fast and ruthless, so he just uses plug-ins to fight the "big guys", just like in the game. A few months later, some Arasaka executives are still meeting on the tower to discuss how to deal with Saburo's death. The famous V Zhentian under the tower has already arrived at the door. His unexpected development speed and terrifying aggressiveness will close most of the gap. It depends on who has stronger hard power in the encounter. What's more, the protagonist's plug-in can also use technology from other games in Cyberpunk. This is also one of the highlights of the book. However, some technologies are best introduced in detail, so that readers who have not played those games can see it more clearly. To sum up, this is a cyberpunk novel where the protagonist is quite upset. It is not incomprehensible that the protagonist is upset. After all, it is a normal society that time travels into cyberpunk. It may be that the strong aggression triggers the instinctive self-protection mechanism of human beings in a strange environment. It may also be that the protagonist himself is relatively crazy, but he has lived a well-repressed life in a law-abiding society. It may also be that he simply traveled to cyberpunk and integrated into it and went crazy. Who can say for sure, after all, it is cyberpunk. I wish you better and better as you write!

The protagonist is so heavy on FPS that he doesn't even know the trauma team, a well-known element of Cyberpunk 2077? Did you grow up playing Tencent's CF and Codol?

This bunch of planet-level civilizations cannot even be rated as efficient when put together in the stars. They probably knew that the gap in combat power was too big and only wrote a war machine. Then you have pulled the stars out of the game and just brought this thing back?

After looking at the first dozen or so photos, I get the same feeling: Trevor bravely enters the Night City

You're not doing any bad work to collect CP, are you? If you don't want to accept it, don't describe who is with whom. Or is it the protagonist's initiative? Is there such a plot?

It's really well written. The main character is so cool that he starts off even when he doesn't agree with her. He's not too offended or too offended. It's exactly the same as when I play the game. It's one of the few cyberpunk fanfics that I can read in one sitting!

I feel like it doesn't have much of a cyber flavor, but it does have a Hong Kong variety flavor. The author used to write about Hong Kong variety, right?

Did the trauma team staff order something? The protagonist rotated three rounds of bullets and still didn't react.

Well, the book is okay and the pace is okay. But it is indeed poisonous, uh, let me just talk about the first few pictures, uh. You took the clothes off the scavenger and you killed him by slitting his throat. This will inevitably bleed a lot. I think the clothes should be stained with blood. So you should have shoes on your body, uh, when you enter this small shop, you hold two guns and point them in people's faces. You then describe people smiling at you. Is this too taken for granted? How about you just write this protagonist as someone who has played in 2077? Right? Otherwise, if you write that he has never played 2077, then I think a normal person has arrived in a strange place. Ah, he shouldn't integrate so quickly, he should feel isolated. As for the latter part, I would like to make a few comments about seeing a doctor with Lao Wei. If you are a stranger and you go to see a doctor, or you see him, and you think he will not harm you, I think you should see him as a legend, he is a legend, and you think he will not harm you. Ah, this thinking and brain circuit is normal. It does not mean that you believe him because you think he is kind. Uh, the plot progress is pretty good, uh, keep working hard, I'll make more decisions later, and I'll also read along.

So when the protagonist later develops weapons of mass destruction, he plans to restrain the company and prevent the company from hitting him with meteorites 🙂

This is starting from Night City. Has the author reincarnated into a trumpet? Is it true that there are global giants? I want to read this article about cyber giants again!

It feels very fragmented. I know all kinds of games, but I don't know 2077. There's nothing awesome about it. I can install a few prosthetics in Night City to achieve it...

After reading the introduction, are there any war machines in the stars that are used for land warfare? Why haven't I seen it?

Just read a few chapters. To be honest, I don't think the style of this novel matches up with cyberpunk. But if this thing were replaced with something like the Earth Martial God, it would be just right, emmm

Overall, I feel that the book is okay, but I always feel weirdly uncomfortable somewhere. I can't put my finger on it. Maybe it's because the killing is inexplicable? Or maybe it's too Long Aotian? I always feel like it is but it doesn't seem to be the case. I can't put my finger on it.

I don't understand why I have to write about summoning the Blue Eagle helicopter. Isn't this thing just the AH64? You can also summon a Pelican or the stealth high-speed helicopter from the Atlas next door.

After reading dozens of chapters, the conclusion is that it will be very pleasant to store your brain, especially in a shitty place like Night City. You don't have to worry about so many messy relationships. It's much more comfortable and you can just do it!

Great, this is killing and🌿, this is what I want to see 🙂

Brothers, I have never been very satisfied with Chapters 13 to 15 of Volume 2, so after get off work today, I will re-edit these three chapters. If updated, they will be posted around 11.40. Then, brothers, if you have any opinions, you can raise them downstairs! ——2025.7.22

When is the 3V party 😆

The sky belongs to Huffke! Long live the Decepticons

Well, a very classic male channel style, a must-have for male channels. (Is the protagonist a good boy?)

Recommend yourself as a cyberpunk Marvel fan. If you are interested, you can just nod your head and come in to curse.

By the way, will the future armaments include the equipment of the humans or gods in "StarCraft 2"? (The Zerg prefers genetic technology) Is there any progress with the Protoss' warping technology + human equipment?

Are there any groups? The tickets are all for you