A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Have a Cave Abode of Immortal Spirits
凡人：我有一座仙灵洞府
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 666k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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175Chapters
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4.7kFans
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The protagonist is actually a native? Did he swallow the time traveler? This kind of fanfiction makes it hard to connect with the characters.
The problems with this book are as follows:
1. The natives are boring. 2. The cheat system is barely noticeable.
What kind of fanfiction is this, writing about indigenous people and abandoning the masses for a small group of people?
Oh dear, this time travel is so embarrassing. My soul is being slowly devoured by the natives. Tsk tsk tsk, I can't stand it anymore.
If the author wants a female lead, she must be useful. Both Xinruyin and Linglong (after merging with Yinyue) are quite useful. Although they will be targeted by the wolf king of the demon race after going to the Spirit Realm, by then their trump cards should be plentiful and their strength should have increased considerably.
"A Mortal's Journey to Immortality," "The Immortal's Destiny in the Purple Mansion," and "A Hundred Refinements to Immortality"—these three immortals combined make one invincible in cultivation 😁. These were the three Xianxia novels I liked to read back then.
I don't understand what the writers were thinking when they wrote about indigenous people in fanfiction (it's even more ridiculous that the transmigrator's memories haven't been extracted yet). If you're going to write about indigenous people, you might as well just start a new setting. I'd rather just read a normal cultivation novel.
The main point of writing fan fiction is to show off in front of the protagonist and popular supporting characters, so why do so many authors get it backwards? I just don't understand.
Multiple female leads are recommended. Suggested female characters to include: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiao Mei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her teacher Jiang Yun, Ni Chang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, and Fan Jingmei.
Multiple female leads are recommended. Suggested female characters to include: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiao Mei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Ni Chang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yan Li, Madam Wen, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yin Yue, Bing Feng, Han Zhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu…
Personally, I don't think the native characters are worth watching. Secondly, the "golden finger" (cheat code) is unclear and lacks presence; these are the core issues. Updates are also slow. I estimate it will be abandoned after about fifty chapters at most.