A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Have a Cave Abode of Immortal Spirits

Pig's feet are actually indigenous? Swallowed time travel? It's very uninspiring when a fan writes like this.

1. Aboriginals are boring 2. Goldfinger has no sense of existence

Fan, you write a native of Hammer who abandons the masses for a small group of people?

Ouch, this time travel is really embarrassing. The souls are being stripped and eaten by the natives. Tsk, tsk, tsk, I can't stand it anymore.

If the author wants a female protagonist, she must be effective. The fused Linglong of Xiang Xin Ruyin and Ge Yiyue are relatively effective. Although it is said that after entering the spirit world, she will be targeted by the wolf king of the monster clan, but by then the strength of the trump card should be almost increased. And I think these two are already very good compared to the other female cultivators. Later, writing the spirit world chapter will still need some foundation, and naturally, I will leave a writing pen. These two are already very suitable to be the female protagonists.

Mortals Cultivation to Immortality, Purple Mansion Immortal Fate, Hundreds of Refinements to Become an Immortal, Three Immortals in One, Cultivation of Immortals Invincible 😁, these three are all fairy novels that I liked to read at the beginning.

I don't understand what you think about writing about indigenous people in fan fiction (the memory of the time traveler hasn't been retrieved yet, so I'm even more speechless). If you write about indigenous people, it's better to just reopen a new background. I might as well just read normal novels about cultivating immortals.

Writing fan fiction is mainly about showing off in front of the protagonist and popular supporting characters. Why do so many authors put the cart before the horse? . . Can't figure it out

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Mrs. Wen, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Han Zhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Xiao Cuier, Nie Ying, Yan Ruyan, Bingpo Fairy, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Holy Ancestor Yuancha, Holy Ancestor Baohua, Dai'er, Fairy Heifeng, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Leer, Bai Suyuan, Mo Caihuan, Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, the four ladies of the Mo family (Yan, Li, Liu, Wang)

Personally, I feel that the natives have nothing to see. Secondly, it is not clear whether the golden finger has any sense of existence. These are the core issues. Updates are slow. I estimate that I will be able to become a eunuch in about fifty chapters at most.