Becoming a Daimyo in the Ninja World

Frankly, this system is too restrictive. It's not that its function is insignificant, but rather that its function is too outdated. As a seasoned reader, I found it a bit boring. If it allowed exchanges between other worlds, it would be much better. Of course, this would also require a higher level of writing skill from the author, as it needs to be both engaging and maintain a balance of power.

The first three chapters being all chicken necks is nonsense, and the Multiverse Mall can only buy things from the Naruto world, why don't you just call it the Naruto Mall?

I initially came for the title, thinking it was about becoming an emperor and developing a country and army using a multiverse system. However, after reading the first two or three chapters where the system created a Naruto limited edition, it lost its appeal and immediately turned me off. Basically, many fanfictions overuse and hype up the Naruto system, focusing on Sharingan and Wood Release, which gets really tiresome after a while.

Speaking of daimyo, I remember reading a book about the daimyo of the land of the ancestor a long time ago, and the heroine was Princess Kaguya. Oh no, it seems there's more than one. I vaguely remember that in one of the books, after he became a famous person, he lay dead in a coffin and has been lying there ever since.

I've read up to chapter 18. It's not bad, just that there's not much plot and a lot of narration, with phrases like "for example" and "say" appearing constantly.

First post, I'll start! 🤓🤓🤓

The cheat is too weak. In Naruto, the daimyo is equivalent to the Warring States period when the seven states vied for supremacy. Everyone acknowledges the Zhou emperor's status as the Son of Heaven and is very willing to accept the various honors bestowed by the Zhou emperor.

The opening is full of rambling nonsense, and the narration is incredibly awkward. The speaker only thinks but doesn't put ideas into practice, resulting in incomplete and unclear explanations.

Attracted by the title, I initially thought it would be a straightforward title, but it turns out to be just random stuff trying to fill in the plot. 😐

I couldn't stand seeing the task system and the task penalties. You're still writing like this in 2021 because you're afraid of having too many readers.