A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: From the Start, I Join the Falling Cloud Sect

I hope the author won't suppress the protagonist. Since you give the protagonist such a big deal, then write it like this! Among mortals, there is no mythical spiritual root. Heavenly spiritual root is not as good as taking medicine. Take Han Li, for example, he went through three reconstructions during the foundation building period and failed to form pills twice. The false spiritual root was less than 130 years old, while Song Yu, the natural spiritual root, was about 100 years old! I don't need to explain the difference here, right? Use the thousand-year-old elixir to refine the foundation-building elixir and eat it as a meal, and compete with the heavenly spirit root!? And what about the protagonist? Dual Spiritual Roots, the top skills do not need to be re-cultivated. They also use thousand-year-old elixirs to refine foundation-building elixirs and eat them as jelly beans. According to this logic, forming pills over the age of 80-90 is an insult to the readers' intelligence. Don't talk about the Heaven-Building Pills. The Heaven-Building Pills only come into play in the pill-forming stage. At most, Han Li's cultivation can catch up with the true spiritual roots, but it is still not as good as the double spiritual roots of the protagonist. The writing is okay now. It took 9 years to achieve a breakthrough while running around uncertainly. In the middle stage of foundation building, if you can stabilize your cultivation time and cut it in half, it is not too stressful. Return to Luoyun Sect and it will take about ten years to break through to the late stage of foundation building. The protagonist will be around 40 years old, and then it will take about another 10 years to reach the peak of foundation building. 20-30 Years will be spent preparing to form spiritual objects, continue to accumulate cultivation, and look for opportunities. At around 80 years old, he will form pills earlier than Song Yu. This is in line with the background of a mortal and the golden finger of the protagonist!

?? This introduction?? Don't dare to look?? Under what circumstances should I change the settings directly?? Bai Feng doesn't want male disciples? Is there any Shennong?

Finally, it's not five spiritual roots or four spiritual roots.

This book is average among ordinary people. Oh, by the way, not many ordinary people can read it.

The protagonist is so servile that he insists on rushing to become a disciple and even gives him the six-hundred-year-old elixir. Jin Dan spends his whole life collecting at most a few of the six-hundred-year-old elixir, and openly tells others that he has a golden finger. Han Li did not dare to refuse his apprenticeship.

The protagonist's double spiritual root has a plug-in that is stronger than Han Li's, but it behaves like a pseudo-spiritual root. The plot development is also the same as what Han Li and Huang Fenggu experienced. Especially when they took out two ancient treasures from the forbidden area, they only gave them foundation-building pills and some alchemy tips. What a shame. Then they inexplicably found the teleportation array and went to the Chaos Star Sea. Luoyun Sect is a relatively harmonious sect in the human world. If you have a cheat, the two Nascent Souls will not interfere as long as you are not exposed. Han Laomo's cautious character has been left there. The protagonist can practice at home with peace of mind. There is an alchemy master and he will not be targeted.

After giving two ancient treasures to the sect, I still have to go out and find the pill-forming spiritual objects myself.

What Yunmengzong wrote is the same as Huang Maple Valley, Xiang Zhili has to write it, he is invincible.

This author deleted paragraphs of comments in the book, so I can't criticize him 👍

I have so many secrets and yet I am rushing to become a disciple. Is it because I am afraid that I will not die quickly enough? And I always stick to the side of beautiful female cultivators. Why, my heart is tingling. If I don't write about these women, the author will not know how to write about them. Ordinary people are not the same, right? If you want to write about women, at least you have to wait until you are Nascent Soul before writing. Now self-protection is a problem. Still like this, haha