Longevity: I Set Sail to Seek Immortals

It disgusted me. Seven men and four women went to seek immortality, but none of the men had any spiritual roots, while the women all had extremely rare spiritual roots. It's utterly toxic.

The man has no spiritual roots and is doomed, while the woman has all sorts of top-tier spiritual roots. Hmm, this is a pretty erotic novel.

Why write this? I read that the author described the protagonist as a martial arts legend even before he began cultivating immortality—so incredibly talented. The moment he thought about cultivating, he became foolish! He has a cheat code—he can upgrade his cultivation techniques and items, even incomplete manuals. His status as a martial arts legend is entirely due to that cheat code.

Author, make the female lead more appealing! Arrange for her to be a reincarnation of a celestial being; such a trashy spiritual root doesn't deserve her. The protagonist should also give away his cheat ability, otherwise this book is doomed.

The cheat ability is amazing! But the characters are as stupid as pigs; I think they're bullying pigs!!! Pigs are so wronged!!!

This is too long-winded, bro. The first chapter should be at sea, the second should be about the conflict, and the third should be about the trials of the immortals. You've already written four or five chapters, which is more than 10,000 words, and you still haven't gotten to the point. How are you going to make money later?

There are no limits to courting death, and the danger is entirely due to luck. Testing spiritual roots, even if it's a useless spiritual root, it's fine. If there are no spiritual roots, that's one thing, but what's even more outrageous is that instead of staying away or changing their appearance, they actually went there on their own initiative. Are they trying to show off?

Honestly, when I was reading the beginning, I guessed that the protagonist might not have any spiritual roots, or if he did, they would be trash spiritual roots, because that's a classic way of writing. But I still held onto a sliver of hope, and I continued reading with the hope that the author wouldn't write it like that.

It was a waste of time and frustrating to watch. All the male protagonists had no spiritual roots, while all the female protagonists had top-grade or even superb spiritual roots. Don't tell me this is a trope from twenty years ago; twenty years ago, protagonists were all invincible.

What the hell is this? You, a martial arts legend, can't even beat a first-tier monster? Don't you think that's incredibly stupid?