American Two-Face

Sorry, I gave up the book today. I really can't stand it anymore. There is no climax and no foreshadowing. The writing is too meaty and has no rhythm.

I thought about it today and read the author's new book. After reading it, I found that it was still new wine in an old bottle. It was not the wine of the first new book, but the content of the previous book that hit the market. It's still the same old problem, the more the subject matter is written, the more niche it becomes. Hong Kong comprehensive articles about undercover agents either kill decisively or solve crimes violently. I have never seen a successful online article about two-faced policemen and criminals. The purpose of the protagonist's time travel is unclear. It is unclear whether he is preparing to become the godfather of the American gangster, or whether he is an undercover police officer. Simply looking at the Internet article, after explaining the background earlier, I found that the protagonist is a fool and chose the worst path. Undercover, robbery, gunfight, I haven't seen Goldfinger, Time Traveler, White Skin and Yellow Heart, and I am not prepared for danger in times of crisis. It feels really brainless. No matter how many other backgrounds are written, it feels like an excuse. The protagonist does not seem to be a person with an online IQ. In the first Gunslinger, the main character traveled through time and had no identity, so he was at the mercy of others, which I think is somewhat understandable. The next two books, including the current one, feel like they were all written by the protagonist himself, and he had to try to make up for it. The key point is that it's okay if you have a hang-up bar. If you don't hang up, it will give people the feeling that the protagonist is about to start Long Aotian again. The forced adventure-style writing is really a bit retro (lucky and various noble people help), which is really not suitable for current Internet articles. To be honest, the author's writing style is still good, but whether it is the subject matter or the plot, it is really disappointing.

What's the point? It's just a gangster, no cheats, and it's so exciting. If you die, it's really all for nothing.

The gunslinger's book has a golden finger, and it's nice to be restrained and full of descriptions. The second book didn't have a golden finger for me, so I gave up immediately This book would have been difficult without a golden finger for three chapters.

When there is a cheat, cheat is the biggest unreasonable thing. When there is no golden finger, nothing makes sense!

What the hell is this book about? It's just for the gunslinger. It's completely different. I can't stand it at all. The main character's behavior makes people feel too stupid. I abandoned it before even seeing it on the shelves.

After reading a few chapters I just couldn't stand it, it was so gross and retarded. I thought it was my problem, but when I looked at the comments section, they were all scolding me.

Let's write the Gunslinger again. I really liked the North American police story you described in your last book. I often read American Iai on Bilibili and Douyin, and I especially like your book Shangbu. It is the best book about North American police in Qidian. The plot is very exciting, and I wouldn't say it's so exaggerated that it makes you feel less involved!

Is it really written by the author of The Gunslinger? It feels like an AI article from Selling Studio.

I'm going to finish it soon and start a new book. I'm going to write an urban police detective novel similar to the Gunslinger. I suggest you don't add the plot of another world. You can write it as a system or golden finger. I like novels about decisive killing and gun battles 🙏

After reading more than ten chapters, I still don't understand what the protagonist wants to do. There is no clear main plot, various suicide attempts, and no hang-ups. It all depends on the author's luck. Can't we sort out the pros and cons of the Gunslinger book and write a new book about the American police officer Iai? The readers will be happy reading it, and the author can make more income. It's a pity that I finally met an author who knows a lot about American Iai.

When an author says that he just wants to write what he wants to write, and the result depends on God's will, then I can only say that he is either the top-notch kind of person, or he can only be said to be a sour scholar. In the current market, unless you have a hit, otherwise you want to write your own stuff from the beginning.

I feel like this book of yours is also worth reading, and it's not much different from the one I cut. .

It is true that the writing is not as good as The Gunslinger, although The Gunslinger is also average. Anyway, I have finished reading this book, and I really have no desire to continue reading this book.

Why does time travel and rebirth require golden fingers? When the environment changes, you must solve the problem of information asymmetry. You naturally have less information reserves than the indigenous people. Let alone saying that you know the historical trend, it is useless without details? You know about the Nixon Watergate scandal, so what exactly was Watergate? The clairvoyance of the previous book is very good, and it is perfect for professional information acquisition. Otherwise, it really depends on your reasoning and logic?

As a protagonist, Tony has nothing outstanding. Currently no foundation for establishing oneself has been found. The individual's personal strength is average, and his mind can only be regarded as a normal person, higher than the bottom class who have not received education. Cognitive knowledge has the advantage of a time traveler, but in the setting of an undercover agent and a mafia, the advantage is not too great.

1-The core problem (no cheat), the protagonist's past life experience is considered the most common cheat, but he has not written it (he is an ordinary person). If you look at the articles written by Canghai (all of them are cheats in their past lives - all are strong men - passing through ordinary people and weak people - and then killing all around), your two books (except the gunslinger) do not have a cheat, they all start with ordinary people - ordinary people upgrade too slowly, and the pace is too slow. 2-Theme (Undercover Stream) The contrast between the two sides of the undercover is the core. The popular undercover Streams from Hong Kong TV series all started with both sides taking it all, winning big, that is, you use the FBI to check the gangsters and use the gangsters to eat the FBI. 3-Starting (not the beginning of the prison flow - there is no crisis at the beginning - or the danger is not strong enough) - Is the protagonist's robbery at the beginning considered a crisis? -Although there is a certain risk -introducing subsequent characters-but it is still too bland, a bit like an old movie, but too slow for a novel. Suggestions - 1. The protagonist can force the start. For example, at the beginning, he has already gathered this small gang with himself as the core, and has one core goal - to get out. This is the same as copying Hong Kong comprehensive routines. Add some American information checked by the author, and integrate and transform it. 2. Cheap Finger - Whether it is daily information - physical characteristics enhancement - team loyalty binding... Etc., There is a cheat that fits the subject matter. Only slow writing like yours can make readers have a sense of expectation. Otherwise, it will be over. You can play more GTA. . Games such as Mafia - experience it (adding game features to the novel is Goldfinger) 3. Style (the author checked a lot of information) - but the novel still needs to be a bit more joking and exaggerated. Similar movies (The Godfather/The Sopranos/Breaking Bad) are indeed very good to watch, but the movie and the novel are not the same. The novel needs to embody a sense of expectation - use words to replace the impact, and there must still be something that can retain people. A little insight🙏

I don't understand why this novel is attacked like this? I feel good after reading Chapter 400. There are shortcomings, but they are not serious. They are normal problems of not knowing much about American society. It is a problem that almost all authors who write about America have. I looked at the comment section, and it just said that the protagonist cannot activate Wushuang. It can be seen that the author of this book wants to write it based on reality, which is not difficult 😅 There is no big breakdown in the character logic. It even feels like the author has started to advance the protagonist abnormally under the influence of the comment section. Why are you still not satisfied? From an unparalleled novel with a weak logical basis to a change that is consistent with logic, character, and historical background, this should be a praiseworthy progress 😥 If this book had not been affected and changed and hastily done, it would have ranked very well among American online articles like mine. What a pity!

Too bland, not as good-looking as The Gunslinger

Add a golden finger, otherwise it will be really hard to watch. The audience for realistic urban novels is too small. Those who really want to read them will probably read realistic literary works. . .

I like Jimmy the Butcher, I really can't stand this.

Write about American dramas. There will be meat to eat.

Haha, achieved 12 consecutive shots

What about the new book? It's time to give birth to a baby

Overall, the story is pretty good, well, it's worth confirming.

Didn't the author say it would end around 1 million words? Why do I feel like I can still write? It's so beautiful. In the end, will the protagonist go into politics or business? Also, the author shouldn't end it suddenly! ! !

The writing style seems similar, the routines are similar, and the names are similar. Could it be that the big account has completely gone out of business and opened a trumpet account? Or maybe it's his son? Takegami Inozu seemed to have been married when she became popular about 20 years ago.

The story is well written, quite real, and realistic. The author continues to write the story in his heart according to his own ideas. It doesn't matter what other people say.

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