American Exorcism Life

It's this kind of thing. The last book about being an undercover agent was so speechless.

Police? Gangster? Or some mysterious organization? It doesn't matter. I just want the protagonist to "Where to go? Who to kill? How many to kill?"

This book is the same as the previous one. The story is good, but not very exciting. In the first few chapters, the soul of the protagonist is a bit special, but the special point has never been made clear. Is it a gold finger? I haven't found it after writing more than 50 chapters. There is a high probability that there is no gold finger. The author has not learned any lessons from the previous book. I feel like he is an old-school author. If this book had been published more than ten years ago when the Internet was just emerging, it might have been very popular, but it is really not suitable for modern times! Most readers just want to read novels for fun, not for literary talent and writing! The setting of the author's first novel is very good, weak Goldfinger, but the description of the gun battle is really good, and it is very enjoyable to read. The author should play to his strengths. Since the inheritance of the protagonist's family in this book is broken, is it possible to give the protagonist an adventure and then switch to fighting with a gun as the main weapon? To be honest, fighting with a mirror really doesn't feel good at all. When I read The Gunslinger, the more I read, the more I wanted to read it. I couldn't even sleep. Now I fall asleep listening to this book every day 😅

It was different from what I imagined. I thought it was still an urban fantasy. I pretended to have a contrast between reality and fantasy, but it turned out that there was hell and a demon clone. The book directly became a magic or wizard book. Moreover, the family heir was at the beginning and he was still on a small island. The first plot was still in an inaccessible place. , It is difficult to have large-scale urban plots in the main theme later, and only a small amount of urban plots are involved in the plot. I feel that there is nothing I want to see. There are a few good writings about modern magic and wizards, but the main content conflicts. It is really disappointing to see that there are no new highlights now.

This looks like the rhythm of killing and killing, I like it, butcher

The mysterious line that the gunslinger couldn't develop can be the main line this time. We must inherit the tradition of butchering. Everyone likes to shed blood, so don't lose such a big piece of fun!

There are so many weird stories and anecdotes in North America, not just ghosts and demons, but also Wendigos, Mothmen, Bigfoot, New Jersey Mantis Mantises, non-deer in the Appalachian Mountains... You can write about all kinds of weird stories and UMA to enrich the novel.

I was looking through the American category and saw The Gunslinger. I suddenly remembered the author's new book and wanted to see what the results were. I discovered this book as soon as I started it, but I only saw Chapter 19 and lost interest in reading it. Now that I came here to look at it, I have been reading it for many days. The most fearful thing for new authors is to prove themselves, because often they can't do it even if they throw themselves into the street, but they have to keep pretending to be B even if they cry. If they return to the basics and start again, there is still a high chance of success again, but what is even more speechless is that the author is pretentious and does not want to be criticized for being ignored.

Also, arrange for the protagonist to go to the bathroom, look in the mirror, and give the protagonist a close-up so that the reader knows nothing about the protagonist except his name.

They say there are three golden chapters, but it turns out that the first three chapters written by the author can be deleted directly.

The author can follow the world background of the Gunslinger, but the plot focuses on the supernatural world. This makes it easier for the author to write.

It was purely self-inflicted. I had a lot of fun reading it in the early and middle stages of The Gunslinger, but then I continued to read it as it got worse and worse. As a result, the first book got good results but fell apart. What kind of rubbish undercover did I open? All the readers who accumulated subscriptions for the first book ran away. I heard that there is also a more exciting book hidden. With this one, it's 3 consecutive years. It's hopeless. Die and say goodbye!

How should I put it? It's a little bit cool, but overall it's too bland. The beginning is not attractive enough. People who read it quickly may not even understand what's written? It's fifty chapters, and I don't know anything about Goldfinger. This is simply an anomaly in today's fast-paced online novels. Let's see what the author writes next.

Go send a new book notification to The Gunslinger and Two-Face.

You might as well delete the first two chapters and condense the first two chapters from the end of the second chapter, or directly prompt new readers to start from the third chapter.

Oh my god, why didn't you say something about a new book?

I advise the author to change it. There are two main characters in Chapters 1 to 4, the protagonist and the housekeeper, but the author did not describe even one word about their appearance, clothing, and age. I still have no sense of images.

Brother, please update more, you have no motivation to continue reading.

I don't want to pick your brain before it's put on the shelves. Four thousand or six thousand is fine. Be more diligent after it's put on the shelves.

I like your gunslinger very much. Can you continue writing about that kind of subject?