Rebirth of Hong Kong Island: Unlicensed

Boss, I hope this book won't be like the warlord who is a reborn killer after dozens of chapters and still stays in the struggling plot where his legs are broken twice, his fingers are chopped off and the woman can't be saved. The writing is too deliberate. In this book, you should learn from Canghai and make the protagonist smarter 🌹

There is nothing wrong with you, the author, if you want to write a protagonist who is affectionate, righteous, and has a happy family, but you don't want the protagonist to become a master or a successful person. You have to know that according to the plot of the novel, every case the protagonist encounters must be won. Then his reputation and status will definitely increase, and his circle of contact will become wider and wider. But you are suppressing the protagonist, and when the time comes to encounter a major case, When the power at the top is suppressed, what do you rely on to investigate the case and how do you win? Also, if you win the case, you should improve your family's financial situation. Then you can find a way to get the license and fight an upright lawsuit to show us. (The most important thing in life is to be happy) is a good attitude towards life, but the premise is that this kind of people have no worries. Do you know who speaks the most in Guangdong? Charterer! What's the current status of the protagonist? I can't understand the plot, it's a complete mess.

Both Huo'er and Canghai push you, don't imitate them, otherwise you will all be three street kids, but both of them are my favorite. They push you, chase them.

Director: Deng Texi (No. 1 Royal Court, Masterful Hands and Benevolence) The male protagonist Chen Yanzu: Tao Dayu (although he is not the most handsome, but he is the first one I think of, he is so cute) The male protagonist's mother: Zhu Mimi The male protagonist's father: Hu Feng The male protagonist's sister: Tang Ning Yan Shaofen: Chen Huishan Policewoman Guan Zishan: Xuan Xuan Female lawyer Luo Leer: Teng Liming Female doctor: Cai Shaofen Zhuang Tianjiu: Wei Junjie He Weilun: Wu Qihua Tong Jiaxian: Chen Kaitai Ling Shengnan: Meng Jiahui Li Xia: Liu Jiang To Chi Fai: Wei Jiaxiong 🤓To be continued...

Because the old author has collected this book, and after reading the testimonials on the shelf, I suddenly wanted to say a few words. I collected this book because of its title. I thought it was a book about a litigant fighting in Hong Kong against the rich and powerful British capital, becoming famous, making a lot of money, and marrying his mother's concubines. I didn't read it, but I felt happy just thinking about it. After all, that period of history really matched the heroes. But after looking at about twenty pictures, I felt something was wrong. After reading the real person's acceptance speech again, I realized. No wonder it feels awkward when I look at it. I can only say that times have changed. Real people should be happy in life. Talking about love, friendship, and family relationships are really not suitable for themes. Urban and Hong Kong variety themes can be used as embellishments, but money, power, fame, and sex can sustain them. Living in a book, the protagonist of TVB is not suitable for Qidian. Users of Qidian, whether old or novice, to put it bluntly, read novels to have fun. Even if you write that the protagonist throws money in people's faces and says arrogantly, "I'm sorry, you can really do whatever you want if you have money." Or maybe arrange for the protagonist to say to Mrs. Zhou in the opening chapter, I'm sorry, madam, you don't want your daughter to be homeless. Coercing, nurturing, and training are heinous things. As long as a little bit of warmth is added, this kind of brainless plot and character design will achieve better results than creating an orthodox TVB protagonist. Believe me, the moral bottom line of Qidian users is more flexible than you think. In short, feelings cannot be eaten as food.

Who on earth likes to watch this kind of low-level harem story? Isn't it okay to just write about judicial cases around law? Why can't the insert in the middle be a more in-depth character description of the previous woman to better draw out the main plot? I have read chapter 430 so far. Can you tell me what to expect from these more and more women? In particular, this extramarital adventure between Ma and Ma is completely divorced from the TVB legal drama model and is a complete starting point for a refreshing plot. The charm of harem novels lies in the special charm of different female characters. After reading the previous story of this Zhang Lina character, apart from an unforgettable first love and the background behind her, what kind of character description is there? ? Then Zhang Lina fell in love with her to death, and then the male protagonist blocked the gun, stepped forward, and investigated the case, which made Zhang Lina willingly become a member of the harem. Does this plot develop logically? Zhang Lina's role in the plot overlaps with the existing female characters. We already have female police officers, and we already have rich girls. Actually, there is more than just this one character. I think this TVB workplace drama only has about three female protagonists, which is a lot. The author obviously can't control it anymore. The addition of these female characters' stories will make the story become more and more divorced from the law. Yan Shaojun is the absolute heroine, closely following the theme of "law and politics", and also providing emotional support. A Ling Shengnan acts as the protagonist and gives money to others. A Lisa, a cute, rich girl, provides background support. Don't be the lover of other female characters, resolutely refuse long-term development, and then fall in love to death for a one-night stand, can't you just let the story character exit naturally? Must the entire law firm be filled with the protagonist's woman? The problem now is how more and more female characters make the stories closer to more and more outrageous adventure and gunfight stories. The characters are becoming more and more facial-shaped, and the stories are becoming more and more routine. The most critical lawsuit in your entire story is fought slowly and understandably. Aren't these "outlaw hero" plots just like the plots of the boss of the Black Society? Who is reading this book because of the non-legal plots at the end? This "outlaw hero" story is so outrageous!

I should write a short one myself. I would like to recommend a shorter one 😐

The author likes to be a bitch for women in several books, and treats all women as treasures

In two days, I read 158 chapters, three units of stories. Seeing this, I finally understand why this book has average results. I don't know what subscription is like, but judging from the ranking of more than 200 monthly tickets, it is definitely not there. I enjoyed reading the story in the first unit, and the second unit was also pretty good overall. The visuals of the story are quite good. I feel that when I watch the TVB drama again, I am still wondering why this book is ranked so low. It is not said to be a masterpiece, but it is still a very good work. Okay, actually, a problem started to appear from the second unit. The author always wanted to create some reversals, but the plot was dragged out. Ling Shengnan, a character who was originally a very lovable character, turned out to be inconsistent. I think the author wanted to make the character more three-dimensional, so the writing was very complicated. However, the plot is a little less exciting, and there are more plot lines, so it seems to be unsettling... But I can barely watch it, and it is not unacceptable to accept Ling Shengnan. But by the third unit of the plot, I really vomited. For the sake of the original TVB style, the plot must be 100% restored, right? There are all kinds of witty plots and small bugs, which makes me feel really uncomfortable... I feel that the author is capable of writing a good story, but it seems that he is trying to replicate the style and taste of TVB Hong Kong dramas. I also like the twists and turns of the script, and the plot rhythm is very draggy, as if you are not clearing your urine. When the pace of the plot slows down, the sense of urgency disappears. Now think about why I found the first unit so enjoyable to watch. It was full of urgency and full of internal and external pressure. From the second to the third unit, it felt like a family ethics soap opera, without that tense and exciting feeling. There is also a very big poisonous point in the plot, which is also a characteristic of Hong Kong dramas. As the saying goes, "The most important thing in life is to be happy." It's okay for a law firm to open in a slum area, and it's okay to litigate and make no money. But you have the opportunity to make money but you don't? Are you sick? If you don't want to make money by buying stocks, you just want to be poor... Wouldn't it be possible to help more people if you have money? You said you wanted to write a neighborhood hero. There's nothing wrong with that. But does it have anything to do with the fact that the hero is a billionaire? Why can't rich people live in slums and hide in the city? I owe a lot of foreign debt, so I am happy if my life is tight. It is really the original TVB, and the mentally retarded part is the same... This book gave me a feeling of love and hate, as if I was eating a meal, eating half of the insect carcasses pulled out by Zhengxiang... It was really disgusting.

After watching the two units, I feel that there is no prioritization. The main plot is more like the women than the case. Most importantly, none of the female protagonists are likable. . . It didn't show that he had reformed. I personally felt that the ending of the second case was quite blunt. The murderer was acquitted due to mental illness. When I read the book, it felt more like the protagonist used mental illness to exonerate him. The murderer's mental illness was not shown much. In other words, this level of mental illness cannot convince me as a reader to accept his acquittal of murder. The whole case was about a detective who blackmailed the murderer. . . It's quite confusing to watch, a bit like the Japanese drama "The winner is the right". In order to win, he will do anything to win, but in the end he has a reformed character. . .

I discovered that the bad guys can be lawless, but the protagonist can only restrain his hands. I hope the author can write the protagonist's parents to death to strengthen the plot conflict.

I really don't understand this plot. If the single heroine has all kinds of physical contact in the front, the relationship between men and women can develop normally, and the ex-husband rapes her. The daughter can't forget her ex-husband, and planning the future for me is true love. All kinds of disgusting things are coming... If there is a harem, this woman can be regarded as the first source of gold, and the male protagonist takes the opportunity to make a fuss. As a result, for the sake of Wushuang, the male and female protagonists were forcibly tied together. I used to say that the male protagonist was very ambitious before his rebirth, but now he has become a love brain for a person who cried at the funeral of his benefactor...

It's no fun to be a lifelong master without a license. Moreover, the heroine is ten years older than the protagonist and has a child. There is no need to tie them up like this. Such combinations are rare in reality, let alone novels.

I don't understand why I don't act like a boss and act like a dog to others.

See chapter 30 and wish a great fire. Seriously, you can take that woman. It's too disgusting to write like this. Quite poisonous.

It's really full of love and sense of sight in Sham Shui Po. Qin Huairu keeps hanging the silly column with the oil bottle. He only sucks blood without being touched. The silly column is determined to be a dog licker.

There may be spoilers, but they are all free chapters. The comments are not for any reason, they are just to help readers like me avoid lightning. After reading chapter 20, my heart sank to my stomach, and after reading about 40 chapters, I laughed out loud. After reading half of the free chapters, I started to feel uncomfortable, so I couldn't comment without paying. I just read the first chapter by subscribing. To sum up, as far as the free chapters are concerned, the protagonist, Yan Dazhuang, is like a text memorizing machine. When going to court, he only knows which chapter to memorize by tapping the acupoints of the protagonist. Qingmei is a little guy, except for having a teacher, I don't know what its use is. Originally, it was good for the protagonist to have parents, but as it turns out, his parents borrowed money from loan sharks and had an old feud with someone. It is estimated that the enemies of the society will come to cause trouble. With some effort, my sister got fucked without incident for the first time. There should be a next time. The opponent was Du at first, and then it was discovered that there was Xiaozhuang behind Du. This kind of long-term boss who always plays the protagonist is very disgusting. At present, it seems that the protagonist has little chance to win. Then the income of 200,000 from the first lawsuit was directly cut off by Xiaozhuang, which really made me laugh. The heroine still owed her 500. There is also a policewoman surnamed Guan, who is currently pretending to be close to the protagonist, but because people think that the protagonist's father was killed by the protagonist's parents, she holds back and arrests the entire protagonist's family. There are also disgusting things like Wang Dazhuang that advance the plot. Generally speaking, the protagonist is surrounded by plot-advancing machines that are behind him, and the enemies on the opposite side are big bosses who are more than a dozen levels higher than the protagonist. Without the author's cheating, the protagonist would have been drowned in the evening. After watching "The Key to Winning the Lawsuit", I still felt aggrieved. Later, the money for winning the lawsuit was cut off, which was too much. This book should be regarded as a frustrating story about the protagonist carrying a lot of burdens against the world. The society, the police, and the big boss are all the protagonist's opponents, and fellow lawyers are also not holding back. And I think the author of the review means that the protagonist will not have money or power, and it will probably be difficult to become a serious lawyer, because the title of the book is Unlicensed Lawyer. The protagonist should be a young master with no money, no power, and no helpers (everyone around him is holding him back), fighting against high-ranking police officials, club bosses, and wealthy bosses. And then you have to keep winning lawsuits, which ruins your career and money. Hard to comment

It's not about teaching authors how to write books. The writing is so good, I really hope something can change. How many times has your protagonist been threatened? I almost died in the latest chapter, but I relied on a woman to save my life! Although Uncle Kun is bound to die, can it relieve the reader's frustration? Just keep it for now, one plot at a time.

Author, I have no objection to you insisting on your own creative ideas and using your familiar creative techniques in your works. If you say that your book will not be on the shelves in the future, then you think what I say below is just air, and just ignore it I grew up in Shenzhen, and it can be said that I grew up watching TVB dramas, so I think I have a small say in the plot you write, but my own abilities are limited, so I dare not teach you how to write a book. If the content I wrote is beneficial to your creation, you may wish to refer to it; if it is harmful, discard it The "bridge" you used in chapters 41, 42 and 43 has not been used by TVB before, and your usage is not without lessons learned. I vaguely remember that most of the dramas you used were called to the TV station by angry viewers. To use this kind of "bridge", you have to prepare the characters of both men and women, but so far, it seems that you have not done it What did you do from the first chapter to the 40th chapter? Introduce the main characters and let them intersect on the stage (case) for the first time. Regardless of the rest, let's talk about your role. Have you established it? Who is the protagonist? If he is the prince of Kowloon City, he has picked up many girls and is led by an innocent young woman. Not only is he no better than Chu Ge in handling the relationship between men and women, but he is also unable to notice the emotional changes of his daughter, who is very important to the female protagonist. If it was a big lawyer in the past life, you can't explain the change in the protagonist's behavior. The big lawyer in the previous life would do whatever it takes to win the lawsuit. Is this the case with the protagonist you are writing now? So what is the character of the protagonist? As for the heroine, what kind of character is she? Innocent and good-natured, but she is an adult, right? Isn't she untouched? The protagonist wants to pick her up. She has a crush on the protagonist. She has to know it, right? Shouldn't a female character who is "innocent and innocent" and "willing to sacrifice for her lover regardless of gain or loss" tell the protagonist about her "thunder" first? Or are you afraid of love, so you reject the protagonist and provide space for the two people behind? You, a person like you who looks innocent and often "does your own thing" and does bad things with good intentions, would have been called and scolded by the "teacher's wife" back then. Did you know? TVB dramas include classics and bad ones; the same goes for "Bridge", there are good ones and "shit" ones. You can't just borrow them with your eyes closed, right? You can't be complacent after borrowing the "bridge" without looking at it, right? I didn't want to post about this, but after reading your single chapter, I feel like you have been wronged so much that I couldn't bear it any longer. I felt very uncomfortable when you fed me chapters 41, 42 and 43 for three consecutive days, okay? Normal TVB dramas use these "bridges" to lay the groundwork in one to two, or even three episodes in advance. How about you use one or two foreshadowings, one or two paragraphs to directly deal with it, and then tell me the "drama rules"? Why don't you go back and review the series that you used as a blueprint for your creation, and then think about it clearly before writing?

Many scenes can be played directly in the brain. The picture quality is the same as that of 20 or 30 years ago, and the dubbing is the voice of the old Chinese dubbing~~~

In fact, I watched very few Hong Kong fashion dramas when I was a child, and the ones I was most exposed to were Jin Yong's martial arts dramas. However, I recently watched Huang Zihua's My Sheng Lady on station b, and I have more feelings about this kind of daily Hong Kong drama. The author's writing really has the feel of this kind of Hong Kong drama. The protagonist solves the troubles he encounters for his family and friends, and finally returns to life.             ，，，， The only reason is that in order to adapt to the rhythm of online novels, the overall rhythm is much faster, and the short daily life of parents is reduced a lot. To be honest, it will somewhat destroy this sense of daily life, and make the protagonist's motivations not so convincing. But this is also a point where you have to compromise when writing online articles, so that people can understand. Sometimes I wonder if this article would be more suitable for this feeling if it were a daily romance article with a legal background of the Hong Kong Bureau, haha~~

Since the number of words in the reply is limited, I will post it separately As an author, my personal point of view is that the protagonist should not take the ordinary path. This is also the reason why I don't like many online articles nowadays. Many works try to construct a "guide-style" plot, that is, most people can succeed by following this path. This is more like a modular thinking, that is, most people can succeed in this path. It does not require high qualifications or strong personal abilities. It only requires vision, knowledge, ideas, etc., Which is the so-called optimal solution. But I personally think that this optimal solution is a bit like the guide in the stand-alone game era. You can basically pass the level with it, but it will lose a lot of interest from the story perspective. Compared to this conventional path, I prefer the protagonist to take his own path. That is to say, this road is specially customized and can only be walked by the protagonist and cannot be walked by others. It cannot be copied or learned. Only special people can take a special path. The protagonist should be an extraordinary person, not an ordinary person. This is just like the adventures in martial arts novels. He only has adventures because he is the protagonist. Not everyone can have such adventures, but it would not work for another person. Emotionally, it's the same. I personally don't like protagonists who are distant from the world they live in. I think the protagonist should love life, integrate into it, take the initiative to get to know people, make his interpersonal relationships complicated, and make his life full of variables instead of fixed numbers. Life is always full of unknowns, and it is possible to meet new people every day, or relationships may change. Only in this way can a life be exciting and interesting. He must love life, the place where he lives, and the people around him even more. He wants to interact with more and more people instead of fixing or even narrowing his circle. And this kind of interaction must be long-term, full of many exchanges, and it will inevitably have an impact on the protagonist's life, so that life is interesting. If you just go to get off work and make money to go home, I think this kind of life will be less interesting. When watching TVB fashion dramas, one of my favorite plots is when the protagonists have a HAPPY HOUR after get off work, or go to bars, nightclubs, or afternoon tea. If you can go out and play, don't stay at home. As for the protagonist, he should experience various adventures and live in events every day, so that it is interesting. The above opinions only represent personal creative attitudes, welcome to discuss.

Good news: the writing is very tvb, bad news: the plot is as stupid as tvb, it is really attractive at first, and then it becomes more and more tvb. Forget it if you don't go to college to take the card test. If you can make money, forget it, and if you like being poor, forget it. The most interesting one is the first heroine. Forget it, she brought a half-grown girl, forget it, and got fucked twice. Forget about the poor performance of this book.

The author's writing style is still good, but the background setting of the story is messy. Every time I open it and see the setting background, I can't read it. If you bring it into the real Hong Kong Island, the timeline will be blurred. If you bring it into a parallel world, it will be a reborn person and you can't write a copy of the story. The timeline is blurry. The problem is that you have to write about the movie, which is very awkward. It's better to write about a Hong Kong native.

I was bored today and suddenly thought that General Yuci was born with courage and had an Qiushui Yanfei sword on his waist. Then he searched for the name of the real person and found this book. How long ago was the warlord... And how long ago was the Hong Kong drama... I have not made much progress in these years. I can't help my family and can only write on the Internet. I want to buy some comfort... The longer I live, the more I miss the past, and the more I miss the past, the less I can keep it... My wife is snoring next to her, and she will get up in three hours to cook for the baby and send the baby to class... As for me... I feel tired after crying for a while, so I will read a few more chapters. The writing is quite nerve-wracking, and I don't know what real people are like in life.

Um... Isn't the protagonist's character description too dog-like and unmotivated? There are a lot of reasons, but I didn't see anything exciting No: the gangs and underworld are pulling back and forth, they are trying to reason with the protagonist and "convince people with virtue"

Write a historical article, please ask a real person

I just started reading. Does the protagonist have the qualification to become a strong man? If so, at what chapter does he get it?

It can be said that the average Internet reader has all the poisonous points. Although I can't stand it at all, I still couldn't stand it when I saw Zhang Yuhui died in the end. I skipped through a few chapters of Lu Zijun and Bai Wei, and I really couldn't stand it. I really feel sorry for myself that I missed such a book. I wanted to find a book with similar writing style and a slightly lighter tone, but I couldn't find a meal replacement at all. Alas.

I have caught up with the latest chapter again. In the last few chapters, Guan Zishan has appeared. There are very few scenes of Yan Dazhuang. One person wrote a blood letter and Yan Duoduo appeared in emotional scenes.