Mercenary I Am the King

What can I say about this book? It's tasteless. . . The author's writing skills need to be improved. The details are too poor.

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After reading about 300 chapters, I just can't bear it any longer. Let me make a few comments. If the author wants to read it, just read it. If you don't want to, just think I'm talking nonsense. It is obvious that the mercenaries made a fortune and went to buy arms halfway, especially since the core team is only a small team. It can be said that there is no direct confidant. Whenever something happens, he goes alone. Those who want to sell arms have trouble with the CIA. According to the era in the book, the CIA will not act like a fool. There is no tracking of people, no phone monitoring, no drone surveillance. They rely on driving to follow, and then they are discovered by pig feet, and then slapped in the face. The head of the CIA's Middle East office is like a retard. People in the underground world are tough if they have many guns. There are mercenary teams who go to Africa to deliver goods. If they don't bring them, bring a tough one. Recruited newcomers who don't know their background are on the road, and then they are beaten to death by an unknown organization in Africa. Later, they will play Rambo's trick. By the way, it is outrageous to rescue Ivan. The entire team's future is entrusted to an unreliable drunkard introduced by a new friend who has a good impression. You Even if you go out for a job, you have to consider whether there will be someone to pick you up on the way back. You go to fight, say a few words and I will help you get revenge, and then you can let the drunkard steal the plane by himself, and then drive the stolen plane to pick you up in the war zone. Do you think it is reasonable for this kind of thinking to be allowed to mix in the Green Zone? Then the writing feels very old-fashioned. In fact, at the core, it is still the same as the old-fashioned special forces. Personal physical fitness, invincible strength, no high-tech skills, already broke up with the CIA, calls every day, chats about secrets with the company, buys war equipment on the spot, silencer, night vision goggles are sometimes not available, body armor is passed by. There is no advantage that can be established with technology. Let's go to the easy battles together. The tough guy (Lan) Jiao (Bo) gnaws alone. The more I read, the more boring I feel.

The author probably wants to give the protagonist a transformation process, but a retired soldier, whose parents are worshiping the gods, raising two oil bottles, and fighting for survival in a chaotic war zone, can still be so naive and childish in the previous article... Stop writing online articles, publish physical works, and become a serious writer... The key is that the pistol was given to him before delivery, which means that he was not even prepared to use a weapon to protect himself before... What a fucking fool, everyone knows that every family has a gun, why don't you prepare two peace doves for him, so that he can fly back to the motherland to send a message if he dies?

The protagonist resisted being forced to confess, which is bullshit. People have already become high-tech. They will give you an injection directly and keep you obedient. The injection is useless. It just increases the dose. The sequelae are intellectual impairment. Do people care about your sequelae?

No wonder it's not popular. The first story with the mercenary setting jumped out of the sky. Whether it was passively participating in the war at the beginning until the so-called breakout at the dam, or a group of reporters coming in to take pictures at the back... Do you know that you are a mercenary here? You are writing about a "fight of wits" at the level of urban young and Dangerous boys 😅

As the title states, the protagonist has his own team, but he is always a lone wolf when completing tasks. One person versus a team of hundreds of people on the opposite side. This is the real king of urban soldiers, an iron-clad mercenary.

The opening chapter of this book is full of bad reviews. I summarized it. The reason is that generally the protagonists in such books are decisive and ruthless, but the protagonist at the beginning of this book is too. . . Indecisive. . Therefore, there are many small logical loopholes (killing two people without picking up the gun. The author and the fans gave a reason: running with a gun can easily be regarded as an enemy... The problem is that you have killed two people, plus your racial skin, plus they are rebels, and you still hope that people will not kill you when they see you. It's funny). Generally, this kind of loophole is fine, but when paired with the character of the protagonist, it is a bit poisonous. . In addition, I guess the author has written a lot about military themes, and may want to write about the protagonist growing up slowly. . But you give the protagonist another battle at the beginning, and the contradiction between the two becomes toxic. . . Too many.

Most of the people in this book are from abroad, so the names need to be foreign names, and the race is determined by yourself. For example, women must match the character of a military-themed background before they can be arranged. Qiguan does not understand the harem. Format: Character name: Nickname: Character: Image: Professionals: (Military professions, arms and equipment, money laundering and finance, any expertise related to arms and mercenaries is fine, even military strategizing) Age: Gender: Preferences: Background story: (optional) I will come here from time to time to pick up new characters, first come first served. Write out your dream inner self and what you want to do, and let him or her grow in the book.

The first three hundred chapters are the most exciting. The length and rhythm of the chapters leading up to the climax are arranged very reasonably. The process from an individual to an organization and then to the development of an organization is full of ups and downs, and various supporting characters also have good roles. After the cooperation with the Persians ended, or after the cook left, or after the Iligo chapter ended, this book was basically meaningless. It was all a one-man show by the protagonist, and the plot was written in various infiltrations and escapes.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the author's writing is good, but it emphasizes the protagonist's personal heroism too much and weakens the team's coordinated operations. When encountering problems, the protagonist is basically alone, killing dozens or dozens of people by himself. Occasionally, he can use Wushuang, but it is very boring to watch Wushuang every battle. In addition, in order to highlight the protagonist's deliberate intelligence reduction of the supporting characters, he single-handedly singled out an entire systematic special operations team, really treating his opponents as noobs. Generally speaking, the weapons, equipment, techniques and tactics are relatively realistic. As for the writing style... It depends on the beholder.

Qiguan, you want a ticket or not, as long as you open the golden mouth, I will send it to you 😏😏😏😏😏

I used to really want to be a mercenary, but after watching the Russian-Ukrainian battlefield, forget it. As long as I don't become a god, it's all for nothing if I'm good at TM 😅

1. The author did not explain the military career of the protagonist at the beginning. Even at the beginning, it made people feel that the protagonist had never been a soldier at all, and was simply an ordinary person who went about his life. The subsequent explanations were also made bit by bit more uncomfortable than constipation. This makes me have the idea that the author didn't think about what kind of protagonist he wanted to write at the beginning. He wrote it this way just to patch it up later, so I personally feel that the protagonist is very inconsistent. 2. It's like the protagonist's personal one-man show. I don't see the improvement and growth of the team members. They are all led by the protagonist and the role of the team members is not seen 3. The writing is very natural, and the overall flow is smooth.

The protagonist of the novel is very frustrating. He has been bullied all the time and has no plan for revenge. There is no sense of satisfaction. Look at how the mercenary war is written. If it is too frustrating, it is garbage!

Let me start first Perfect

How could the author make such a stupid mistake? Could it be that someone ghostwrote it? A gun with a caliber of 20 mm or more is considered a gun.

I don't understand how I can rest on my laurels…

Don't read until you reach chapter 1200. The rest is full of water and money is wasted. All the protagonists experience life. In this case, if I were to fight against the protagonist, he would die countless times.

After reading it for a while, I found that some things were repetitive and the content was intellectually depressing, with no normal logic. I stayed up all night reading it for nothing.

The author didn't have a huge number of words, and he knew what kind of story he wanted to write, so he wrote it very smoothly, and it felt smooth to read. The flesh-and-blood characters also established their own protagonists, and there was nothing I didn't like about it.

I thought of a name for the mercenary company: Eagle Wing Joint Military Strategic Resources Company. Abbreviation: Eagle Wing Joint (EWJ), Eagle Wing Joint. The LOGO design is roughly like this: an eagle spreading its wings on the front, holding an AK47 rifle in each talon, and below it are three capital letters EWJ. The pattern adopts a vector composition and the overall color is black. The name refers to two famous mercenary companies, namely: MPRI-Military Professional Resources Incorporate, an American private military company. South African EO Company is translated as "South African Strategic Resources Company" (including articles in "World Military" are also translated this way). But in fact, EO Company is only one of the 32 subsidiaries of Strategic Resource Corporation (SRC). The name Eagle Wings United is inspired by "Falcon Spreads Wings" by military writer Fenwu Enchantress. What do you think of this name? 😁

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Come on, Fat 7, keep updating, it's not enough to watch, the military type is the only one you can watch.

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I like military stories like this, the characters are strong and reasonable. The most annoying thing is all kinds of time travel and rebirth. It feels like the author's story can't start without time travel and rebirth.

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It was uncomfortable to watch, and the plot had no ups and downs. The plot is pushed forward forcefully. The more I watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. I have already given up on going to Africa.