Tokyo: You Don't Think of Hypnosis as a Superpower, Right?

It is relatively slow to catch on. The protagonist has not broken through the constraints of the rules. Most of the behaviors are still within the rules. For example, there is hypnosis and he is still looking for odd jobs to make money. There are also courses specially arranged by the upper management for people with super powers. Since the male protagonist has not been found to be a person with super powers, he does not know the truth about the course but is very suspicious of the course. However, other insiders only ask verbally. Maybe the author is afraid of directly conflicting with the person with super powers being questioned (the male protagonist does not know that she is a person with super powers. In fact, I do not know, and I do not say it clearly), so I did not use hypnosis to ask directly.

Hypnotize the whole world and bring mankind into the prosperous age of communism.

AI drawing, please understand the logic errors in the details of the picture. In addition, this is a character drawing, not an illustration. This costume does not appear in this article. I have to understand that it can be regarded as a private server.

Hypnosis reminds me of a movie about a group of bad girls who bullied their classmates and were hypnotized by their classmates to kill them 😌

Needless to say, the slow start has been criticized a lot. The plot is not clear, and the world view is slow to unfold. Those who can watch it will not mind this. Be patient and read about a hundred chapters. As the world view unfolds, the story begins to become more interesting. This is the only motivation for me to continue reading. Unfortunately, the plot structure is too weird... The first dungeon that failed to be played, inexplicably launched taunts, fought to the death, and even attracted people with super powers of the causal system to join the game... After ten or twenty chapters, it was a dead end. Is it okay if low-level new superpowers play bad games and no one cares about them? Superpowers can't take action against each other, but it's fine with ordinary people? Or is this a point where superpowers are about to be made public? The protagonist, with such a behind-the-scenes configuration, just went on stage and fought a few rounds of turn-based combat with bad guys, and even got his ass stolen by a passerby with superpowers using a simple pointer... It's hard to complain in every sense of the word. I can only say that it doesn't look like acting. The subsequent copy of the Kai family started a detective game for no apparent reason. It can be imagined that this was a point of large-scale dissuasion. The world of superpowers is still unfolding in the front. Just now, I was recruiting soldiers in Sharks. But now I am inexplicably trapped in a conspiracy. As the number one suspect, I am playing a detective game... No, you are talking about superpowers, right? Does detective reasoning in the conventional sense have any meaning? What evidence cannot be forged? Or are there too few superpowers that can be used to confuse people? What I fear most is that when reading a novel, I will suddenly engage in a battle of wits. It will either be nonsense or reverse wisdom, nine times out of ten. I couldn't survive this dungeon, so I regretfully lost.

Very well written. The logic is relatively clear now. I just hope that the author will not imitate the good-for-nothing male protagonists in Japanese light novels. Don't write the love line the same as * just for the sake of the harem. A love line is not necessary, as the starting point is that you can't eat meat in this environment. If you can't write well, it's better not to write at all.

There is no problem if you look carefully at the statement, but it reads a bit strange 😅

To be honest, I don't feel that I need so many messy abilities. Mesmerizing people is already strong enough, and they are not invincible. Setting up a hypnosis is contrary to common sense and will cause slight sensory abnormalities for a long time. It is also difficult to infect the consciousness of superpowers. I think it is also more interesting. I think there are still many interesting points in the golden finger of hypnosis. On the contrary, the miscellaneous abilities in this book make it seem interesting to be able to hypnotize people before they even meet their eyes.

Chapter 1: Traveling through welfare hypnosis power. Chapter 677: Soul Emperor VS World Alliance Army!

Whether it is the choice of words or sentences (some sentences are incorrect in the Chinese context, and some words are only found in the Chinese context), or the rhythm of the plot, there is a strong Japanese flavor.

I feel that the author should submit it to Japanese light novels (

1: Slow, so slow that you can just read the first three or two chapters and then read the chapter titles to understand the plot 2: Nonsense literature (forcing the truth), it is not really nonsense, but it is also true that large texts are dispensable 3: The worldview structure is precise and stable (Mediocre), but the writing is not concise enough and the settings are thrown away in a large space, which makes it even worse. 4: If you don't know how to write the fighting scenes, you don't have to write them. Either every action is precise, or the style is high-end and foggy. What's the point of talking so much? 5: The plot is not compact. I understand that the author wants to write a more classic light novel, but the plot of the light novel is coherent and clear at least. 6: The multi-perspective description causes the author to confuse the information for the readers. In the true sense, "Diao Chan is still on the way to the horse" The summary is that there is no big problem, but small problems pile up and become big problems.

I don't know if I didn't watch carefully or for some reason, but I was confused. There was a new guy in the store where the protagonist worked. The two of them had a discussion about how to reduce theft. Finally, the protagonist said to me that the butt determines the head. The method was good, but it increased the workload for myself, so I didn't tell the store manager. , Then why did you two talk so much earlier? What is the significance of this plot? And the school divides students into two categories, one special class and another ordinary class. The special class feels like a super power class, but why does the protagonist, a regular class, go to class with the super class, in order to increase the conflict? Aren't superpower classes generally held in universities? Even if a new place is opened in the university because of insufficient age, it would be just a preparatory class. Now this setting requires concealing the existence of superpowers without keeping them secret. How did you come up with it? Finally, I don't know what the relationship between the man named Araki and the protagonist is, but he draws his sword to help when there is injustice? You all know that the power on the other side is so powerful that you don't just squint and get in front of others. What on earth are you thinking? The author doesn't regard those big domestic companies as Japanese chaebols. It's as simple as drinking a glass of water for Japanese chaebols to want you to disappear.

Hypnotize the whole world, make everyone compassionate and empathetic, let everyone face oppression and have the courage to dare to resist, let human beings' need for dignity be higher than their need for survival, and then there is nothing to do. In less than 50 years, the Kingdom of Heaven on earth will be born.

If you don't develop your abilities, increase your power, or fall in love, is it interesting to write so many reasonings?

I remember that the cat hypnosis side has developed magnetic field rotation.

Anyone with a brain knows this super power, and it must be hidden so that no one can discover it. Otherwise, you would like to meet someone who can hypnotize you. Because no one likes someone with the superpower of hypnosis, no matter who they are. If you find out, try to kill him, because you don't know if you are hypnotized.

I have been watching it for a long time and I read it from the beginning. I really couldn't stand it when I saw the latest part. I kept stressing that the main character would be here in a few hours, but in the end, he didn't even have a role in chapters 2 and 30. I don't understand why I'm dragging. It's hard to imagine the mentality of those who follow the update (if there is any)

It feels a bit unrealistic. The main plot is that the protagonist wants to go to college, and the subplot is the awakening of super powers. However, it seems to be a bit confusing. It always feels that the protagonist does not know what he wants, and the plot also digs too many holes, giving people an incoherent feeling.

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Thank you for your support! This book will be well written, and there will be sufficient manuscripts and updates after it is put on the shelf. Everyone can collect with confidence during the free period. There are AI illustrations and all the heroines' characters. The character pictures will be updated on the character card in the future, and the illustrations may be in the comment area of ​​the corresponding chapter, or there are other better ways to post them that are still being studied. The other cover shows the image of a certain heroine, so the original image is posted here.

I don't know whether it's a cut off or a leave of absence. It's hard to read every time without updating.

After reading the beginning, there is a flaw in the beginning of this book, that is, while the author writes the story from the perspective of the protagonist, he makes the protagonist perceive the world faster than the audience, that is, the protagonist already understands something, but the reader is still confused, making it impossible for the reader to take the role of the protagonist. For example, the so-called Psychics, the protagonist has learned certain knowledge, but the reader has no idea what Psychics is. In the west, the reader's perspective and the perspective of the protagonist are staggered, and the trial reader cannot take the role of the protagonist. In normal novels, either the reader knows more than the protagonist, and the reader appreciates the protagonist's character from a God's perspective, or the reader is in sync with the protagonist, and the reader appreciates the protagonist's pleasure in solving problems. The beginning of this book is that the reader is suppressed by the perspective of the author and the protagonist, and the reader cannot appreciate all the settings in the author's thoughts.

The pictures are very nice, please let the author know.