Tokyo: Players Behind the Scenes

The advantage is that you can see that the author is carefully designing every game, including the latest Holy Grail game. It is really amazing to come up with this game that gives me a headache👍🏻, but it is too brain-burning. It can be said that the author has really put in the effort. But the disadvantage is that the process of this game is too complicated, and it is too difficult for those who follow it. One chapter is updated every day intermittently, and you will forget what you read today. In summary, there are too few updates every day, but I guess the author can't change it. After all, he is not a full-time person, which I understand. So my suggestion is that there is no need to write too long about the subsequent game process. Write more about the real-life content of the player or protagonist. The game content introduces the background and the player's general actions to elicit the impact on reality. My brain refuses to accept the game rules and processes that are too complex 😒. After reading it, I forget it. For example, I have almost forgotten the game process of Subway and Demon Sword. There are only a few updates originally, so we have to pay attention to controlling the focus of the story. That's it, there's a lot of nonsense. If the author wants to read it, just read it. Personal opinion, don't complain 😢

This plot has been dragging on too long lately and is getting boring.

Based on the normal world view of mankind, no one wants to see the massacre of unjust trials. The most popular among players is Nobi. The protagonist is currently chaotic and neutral. His goal is to become stronger, but he goes behind the scenes and does not have the satisfaction of killing the enemy himself. The feeling of defeating monsters and upgrading is gone. There are very few descriptions of the player protagonist pretending to be cool. There is even no high-level feeling of feeling of doing good deeds and for the sake of justice. I don't know what the purpose of setting up such a protagonist is. Is it convenient for the author to substitute himself? He controls the whole situation behind the scenes. In order to highlight the character's image, he must write bad things and villains, and create various plots to create excitement. It is a neutral chaos, so the protagonist simply writes the behind-the-scenes flow and becomes the author's own vest, allowing the author to take the role of himself.

So far, the writing is very good. As a reader, I really want to see the main perspective being on the game, and the ripples caused by the game in reality, and the interaction between players. In the author's subsequent thoughts, have you ever thought about letting the protagonist occasionally enter the game?

The book is very interesting. I read it in one sitting. The author followed his own ideas. I prefer Demon Sword among these copies, maybe because I have played Obi Muramasa. Bai Hong Guan Ri is also pretty good.

This kind of spiritual revival, the secrets of history are gradually revealed, which I like very much. The author also carefully researched the information.

The first one could have been okay. The second book was very broken, and I finished it in a hurry. The subsequent world view evaluation is probably a little more positive than the comic city, but I don't like reading it anyway. Then the plug-in is too powerful, although the protagonist is quite leisurely in the development process. Finally, in the later timeline, the characters cut back and forth a bit frequently, and I also don't like the writing perspective to shift away from the protagonist. Overall evaluation: Moyu book, you can listen to it as a BGM when you have nothing to do and run and exercise.

If you come in with the expectation of watching the traditional behind-the-scenes flow, you will be disappointed. The traditional behind-the-scenes flow that I understand is that the protagonist has the ability to give others extraordinary abilities, and then choose characters who suffer great hatred to avenge them. But I don't know how to describe this one. The protagonist does have this ability, but it is not given directly. Instead, like the Lord God, he allows others to become game players, and then clears the game to receive rewards and become extraordinary (it has not been written yet, but it must be the case). The biggest difference from traditional behind-the-scenes streaming is that this game copy is based on the real past. Therefore, players should realize that the game is a real event, and then use the abilities gained from the game to compete for opportunities and find out the truth. This is the plot that I am most looking forward to. This copy of the game feels like it has a lot of potential. For example, it is like having endless fun in a small world, turning what will happen in the future into a game. You can also play online games to pit player camps against each other, which is fun just thinking about it. The problem is that the pace is very slow and completely different from the author's previous book. The reasoning part is well drawn, but there is still a suspicion of playing tricks on the police. However, in the face of Chaofan, the police will be completely crushed and transparent if they don't play tricks. But it must not be found on the protagonist, otherwise it will definitely be a poison point. It is acceptable to find out that there may be such a mysterious person. That's all for now, I look forward to writing a different behind-the-scenes flow. Don't imitate your father-in-law!

The biggest role of the protagonist in this novel is to obtain this game plug-in, and then work part-time as a thug. At other times, Meimei is invisible and acts as a background board. The analogy is like Pangu's role in the ancient novels. Normally, there is no difference between being dead. Occasionally, the Twelve Ancestral Witches and Three Pure Ones will pop up to tell you that this background board is there. A group of people here are talking about behind-the-scenes and behind-the-scenes cleaning. Please, the protagonist of the behind-the-scenes at least has a clear purpose to push the outside world to develop in the direction he wants. What about the protagonist? What does he want to do when he gets the power? What is his significance to the main plot? Is he controlling the development of the world? No! He just hangs up there. The advancement of the plot and the meaning of the game all depend on his game system and the players. Then I also want to tell readers that I didn't do nothing, I acted like a capitalist and sucked the blood of players, haha.       ， Then, after playing with two or three kittens for a long time, the players were hung up and whipped one by one by the supermodel boss. They are quite good at dealing with humans, cutting them off like leeks. The protagonist is like a personal computer. Japan where he lives is about to be blown up by playing, and he is playing daily romance dramas there. I want to say that you designed the protagonist to be like the early main god. The big light ball has more than twice the senses than now. You can save the explanation of the black-hearted middleman setting. You can also delete the daily plot that the protagonist does not have to make the plot of the players more coherent, a win-win situation!

The second copy, anyway, I personally felt bored and criticized. The supernatural version of the subway gas case, a subject that originally made me have no interest in the subject, was inexplicably and procrastinated. It was in sharp contrast to the simplicity of the novel in the first copy. The level of ink makes it feel like a person with no talent but a sense of self. Good people suffer from a certain form of literary youth disease. They want to express some unclear design sense and try to show some internal accumulation, but they are so empty that I can only give a smelly and long feeling about these things. On the contrary, the daily plot advancement is quite interesting, at least not boring.

A group of players fought for several days, but no one died in the end. So what's the point? ! A group of Notre Dame players rushed to other countries to organize revenge or group fights, and in the end everyone was seriously injured. It's not because Park is too weak and easy to bully that he can suppress him and demand justice. These players are like clowns🤡. If you are really so compassionate, you might as well stop the wars in several war-torn countries, which can save more innocent people. The total number of people Park killed was not as many as the number of people who died in one battlefield.

Behind the scenes, stay behind the scenes, don't be like last time when you stitched up Cthulhu

There is something wrong with the family setup. Having a younger brother will dissuade many people. Nowadays, many people cannot accept having a younger sister, let alone a younger brother.

This type of novel is a failure if it has a female protagonist

A true group portrait. . No one would like to give a supporting role to a Japs to watch him pretend to compete. The end of self-pleasure is to be thrown into the street

Behind the scenes? I can't tell. The pace is too slow. It would be better to write about an orphan's life experience. Why write about a younger brother?

Don't let the pig-footed heroine show up, this book's scores are a notch higher

This book collapsed again, there is no main plot, the characters are as scattered as the previous book, the characters cannot stand up, the supporting characters are forgettable, and even the protagonist is the same. You don't know what the protagonist is doing? You can't even guess what you want. Do you want powerful power, immortality, or just a fun person who wants to watch extraordinary battles? You can't even guess. Furthermore, there is no power system at all. You don't have a systematic thing in a book about extraordinary things. What are you doing? 70% Of why Mystery is so popular is because that system is really awesome. Even if you copy it or add a little Naruto, the Pirates system will not be so thin. I really want to spend all my energy on the storyline. Mainly one or two good storylines are of no use. It is such a pity. I have followed most of the author's last book and it was the same situation. The result is also broken. This book is still the same, nothing has changed. The author's writing style is quite good. It is really a pity.

Everyone loves to watch plots where the protagonist is showing off. Isn't it just for watching the behind-the-scenes scenes? It's disappointing that there is so little description.

The author is not a newbie. The subway chapter at the beginning of the story is too long. I feel like I have too many ideas to write about: poisonous gas, cults, social animals, and a little anti-war? It's like using Krypton to go from one small level to another abruptly, with no connection in between. All this hodgepodge of yours added to any game will only get an incomprehensible and shitty review. The feeling given to readers is that why is this shabby novice mission so long?

To write a protagonist behind the scenes, not to mention setting the world on fire, at least you have to have some initiative. How about taking the initiative to create some recovery events to test the system? I pretend to be an ordinary person every day, playing house with my brother and girlfriend, but I don't know what it has to do with the main plot. Deleting the main character would make no difference, so why create such a system of jinchuriki that would be an eyesore?

Is it really weird? A small copy is so difficult? So many chapters? It's so much fun to just go and see the small world. I'm really speechless. The delay is so slow. Why are you the one behind this? It's too procrastinating. You know, I was originally very interested in it, but after dragging out so many pictures at once, I really lost interest. Say goodbye.

When I opened the book, I debated whether to open this one or another one, similar to My Lilliputian and American Fabricated Myths. I planned to imitate the opening of the old book The Big Case, and use a fast pace and confrontational game to attract readers. However, considering that the original book was written like this and would fall apart before the middle stage, after careful consideration, I decided to use a similar dungeon flow + behind the scenes, and slow down the pace, so that the protagonist is no longer completely invisible. Let's talk about the setting first and see if readers can accept it. Although he is not the only one, the protagonist's strength is always ahead of the world. The player's power comes from the protagonist's game and can be withdrawn at any time. He is an invincible existence. He just doesn't like to meddle in other people's business. He is neutral and kind, and pays more attention to interests. Unless the yin ghosts take the initiative to provoke the protagonist or it is profitable, the protagonist will not take action. It is more for the players to explore and solve them. As the title of the book suggests, the players behind the scenes. Only when there is a catastrophic disaster, and the players are completely unable to deal with it, will he set up a vest force to suppress it. (It's an old trick of showing off one's saints in front of others, laughs The pace of this book will indeed be relatively slow, but I still shamelessly begged to read it. I'm already prepared to have 500,000 words to achieve results. Now I've almost 100,000 words and haven't made it to the first round of recommendations 😭 If If you have any opinions, you can leave them here, but things like pacing and character design are difficult to change. For example, if there are many people who don't like a character, I will try to reduce their role as much as possible. I will also collect interesting game rewards.

The writing is okay, the characters are well developed, and the plot is smooth. It's a pity that the new author has the old problem of not distinguishing the priorities. On the bright side, the text can be published if it is more refined. On the other hand, the rhythm is humorous and the foreshadowing is good, but it's all just foreshadowing.

It's a smelly and long copy, and it's basically not fun at all. It's a bunch of supporting characters that are watered down, and it's actually placed before it's put on the shelf. I'm looking forward to your next book.

This book is not actually behind the scenes, but the author just thinks that he is behind the scenes. The protagonist's identity is close to the group leader of the chat group, and he relies on the privileges of the group leader to deceive the group members. He has changed the form of presentation and is not behind the scenes.

It's so boring, why write so much about daily love affairs? Do you want to write a behind-the-scenes article, a group portrait article, or a daily light article? Write a four-character article. However, the writing style is indeed okay, but the outline structure is too messy and procrastinating.

The protagonist has no role at all, and the group portrait is complete, but I dare not write the players to death... So this book is very bland to read... The copy basically only depends on the endings of the last few chapters. Anyway, there will be a few explanations in the middle of the strategy process at the end... There won't be any ups and downs anyway...

Korean women's rights haven't been finished yet, and the whole world is in a mess. South Korea's chaebol government and senior officials still have to keep the banner of women's rights, and keep fighting against the only extraordinary person in the country. It's really difficult for them. He couldn't even openly deflect public opinion, as if he had been stamped with ideological stamps.

It's not for nothing that I jumped on the street. People write about the golden three chapters. The first twenty chapters don't even get into the topic. I don't know what I'm writing.