In Card Games, It's All About Your Background

The subject matter is quite appealing, and the content is decent. However, the writing style isn't very noticeable due to a lack of detailed descriptions and incomplete setting, requiring a lot of interpretation and making many parts incomprehensible. The historical background is also lacking; a general overview with some explanation would have been much better.

Although it feels good However, the writing style is still not good enough. I felt it was too rushed; the plot progressed too quickly. Then the tumor appeared so suddenly. It would be better if there were some foreshadowing before the revelation.

If I could save a few recommendation votes, that would be fantastic. 🌹 If you have the money and time, try to read the latest chapter. 🌹 Monthly passes... Are currently beyond my reach. If I were fortunate enough to obtain one, I would be unable to sleep at night and would only be able to write. 🌹

I quite like the world-building, but the writing style isn't my cup of tea.

The premise is novel, the word choice is good, and the pacing is average, but it lacks distinctive features and highlights. It tries to incorporate elements of battle, mystery, and humor, but the writing is not strong enough, resulting in a messy and bland writing style. Let's talk about the reasoning again.

The writing style is okay, but it suddenly changes its style whenever it's used to communicate with people, or rather, it adopts a nonsensical style similar to light novels. This is quite jarring, because while the story is fairly well-structured and the setup is relatively serious, the dialogue is very casual and humorous, creating a rather disjointed feel.

It's very interesting, and the ideas are great, but many things aren't explained, so something just doesn't feel quite right when you're reading the mystery.

The first 16 chapters seem pretty good; at least there aren't many typos. Keep writing and keep going!