
When the World of Anime Descends, My Character Pool Has No Limit?
二次元降临,我的角色池没上限?
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 696k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original ACG Fantasy
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- English
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304Chapters
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I quite like the subject matter, and the setting seems pretty good, but the writing style has a major problem, as detailed below: 1. Misuse of exclamation marks! You've used way too many exclamation marks! Everyone can try searching and see how many results a single chapter can bring up! 2. Excessive use of psychological language descriptions and a lack of other descriptive methods.
The premise of your book is not bad, it's just a bit too weak. Your protagonist is constantly eating gold!
Invincible characters often lose due to plot-driven defeats or poor synergy. Even if they aren't truly invincible, having a top-tier skill set doesn't mean you can just pick Sakamoto and say it doesn't matter who you choose. Invincible characters rely on development and some kind of "trolling" ability. Choosing a character with no future prospects without understanding how to strengthen them later is pointless.
To be honest, it left me completely confused. It was just a passage, but I couldn't conjure up any scene in my mind. It was really frustrating.
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The premise is alright, and has some appeal, but the content... Well, it's not exactly a complete mess. The plot is incredibly chaotic, and some anime have practically no viewers. I have to learn about the anime plot just to read the novel... I suggest the author start over, completely reorganizing the outline and plot.
Many settings and plot points that should have been clearly explained were glossed over. Furthermore, the characters' behavioral logic is quite strange. For example, choosing a character requires that character's power, yet the character is chosen based on their established traits, personality, and eventual fate—this is very odd.
The concept was eye-catching, and then it went dark.
The premise is good. However, the plot development is too disjointed. To be honest, I've had this problem before when writing. The author's ideas weren't expressed in detail. I knew how the plot would develop and change while writing, but the readers didn't. The result was a plot that was too disjointed and lacked proper explanation, making it difficult for readers to follow the pace.
It's all so confusing and makes my head spin.
The concept is alright, but it's a bit tiring to watch.