Douluo: Ever-Changing

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Chapter 10: Persuading him to retreat, risking his own life and destroying his family to help someone he just met, poisonous

I can only say that the author is over fifteen years old and I ate my cell phone

The front is okay. After suddenly and inexplicably going to school, it was a brain-twitching plot.

See you again by fate

When you hand your life over to others, your secret is no longer a secret when it is handed over to the second person. The son who handed it over to his eldest uncle's family in the first case could barely bear it, but everyone in the back really wanted to show that he could do it, right?

It is clear that the end of the soul master is a strong attack. Why do so many people write about Blue Silver Grass? Perhaps Ah Yin himself didn't know that Bluesilver Grass could be so powerful. Can breastfeed, pump, and control. The vitality is still very strong. It's written like a super martial spirit. More powerful than the best among top martial arts spirits like the Seven Kills Sword

Why does the protagonist have to be named Lan Duoduo? Is this the author's real name? What an unpleasant name this is, I'm convinced

Found it, it comes from tomatoes

Martial Spirit Blue Silver Grass, why did you let Ah Yin out? I'm speechless.

Douluo is all about the evolution of martial arts and the author's imagination. It's a normal conversation between two girls, and famous scenes are all kinds of fun. As long as the writing is not too bad, you can watch it. I just can't figure it out. There are tens of thousands of Dou Luo fanfics, all of which contain various systems or awesome martial arts. The most brainless ones are mythical martial arts. They either have trouble beating anyone, or they are childish and pretend to do it for a second, but don't kill it in seconds, leaving it for the next appearance to challenge the protagonist. The process is like a brainless harem, and there is no idea of ​​​​clicking in. Except for readers whose brains are still growing, who really wants to read it.

It's so brainless, the protagonist's family has not been made

Are you rewriting Douluo: Blue Silver Family? The introduction is almost the same as that one, and the martial souls are all Blue Silver Grass, and the techniques are Changchun Jue.

The setting and plot are too toxic! No desire to watch!

There is a problem with your introduction of "Don't like it, don't spray it". How can a world where great power is attributed to itself be biased towards utopia? If there is a problem with the setting, it is impossible not to be criticized.

After reading less than ten chapters, I feel that some of the basic settings of the original work are not respected. First, the protagonist's father has two soul rings but a soul power of level 38. The correspondence between soul power levels and soul rings is a law of the world, right? Second, the protagonist's first soul ring is blue and gold. White, yellow, purple, black, red and gold are the colors of the soul ring. It feels like the author himself wanted to go into a martial arts evolution type of work, but ended up eating a lot of basic settings, resulting in a very fragmented work. Although there will be two settings in works related to the evolution of martial arts, the basic settings must be adhered to, otherwise you can just write mythical martial arts. The author can carefully check the settings of the original work.

Many authors today do not have character descriptions, environment descriptions, and psychological descriptions. How do they do this? It makes me so uncomfortable!

Why does this name always remind me of the interstellar elf Lan Duoduo?

The writing style is too general, there are many places that could be described in detail, but I'm such a novice!

I searched for a long time, it turned out to be here, and finally found it

Author, I am from Tomato, you can just upload all 50 photos at once

Not worth the money to read a novel by an author with a low IQ

No more writing? Four months old

Tang San doesn't have as many realms as you.